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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Unsubtlely,[[spoiler: the story cuts from the Nova Cat's talking about how a legend must die to Kai Allard-Liao powering up his mech, Legendkiller.]]
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Were Still Relevant Dammit is dewicked
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* WereStillRelevantDammit: [=ComStar=] is screaming this in a political sense. The Federated Commonwealth is hammering their BerserkButton by saying "No you're not." (See EarthIsTheCenterOfTheUniverse above.) Prince Hanse flat out states that 99 percent of [=ComStar=]'s actions are benevolent (their charity work, maintaining interstellar communications, being neutral arbiters). It's the one percent in which the leadership has tried to manipulate the Inner Sphere and assassinating and sabotaging technological progress that isn't in their hands that upsets the [=FedCom=].
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Sharilar Mori is killed after a JustBetweenYouAndMe moment with Primus Waterly after she is found out to be a [[TheMole Draconis Combine plant]].]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662737/1/Along-Came-A-Spider Along Came a Spider]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Creator/{{drakensis}} in 2015 for UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo. The story re-envisages the Clan Invasion with one key difference: the Federated Commonwealth has known about the Clans for twenty years and prepared accordingly. Kai Allard-Liao and Vladimir of the Wards provide main viewpoints from the frontlines while a broad cast of characters address the political and military developments across the Inner Sphere.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662737/1/Along-Came-A-Spider Along Came a Spider]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Creator/{{drakensis}} in 2015 for UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo. UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo.
The story re-envisages the Clan Invasion with one key difference: the Federated Commonwealth has known about the Clans for twenty years and prepared accordingly. Kai Allard-Liao and Vladimir of the Wards provide main viewpoints from the frontlines while a broad cast of characters address the political and military developments across the Inner Sphere.
The story re-envisages the Clan Invasion with one key difference: the Federated Commonwealth has known about the Clans for twenty years and prepared accordingly. Kai Allard-Liao and Vladimir of the Wards provide main viewpoints from the frontlines while a broad cast of characters address the political and military developments across the Inner Sphere.
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!!''Fanfic/Along Came A Spider'' provides examples of the next tropes:
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* HomeByChristmas: The majority of the Khans start the fic convinced that they'll conquer the Inner Sphere with ease.
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* HomeByChristmas: The majority of the Khans start the fic convinced that they'll conquer the Inner Sphere with ease. They made the same mistake in canon, ending in utter disaster; here they don't even have the element of surprise they did in canon.
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''Along Came A Spider'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Creator/{{drakensis}} in 2015 for Nanowrimo. The story re-envisages the Clan Invasion with one key difference: the Federated Commonwealth has known about the Clans for twenty years and prepared accordingly. Kai Allard-Liao and Vladimir of the Wards provide main viewpoints from the frontlines while a broad cast of characters address the political and military developments across the Inner Sphere.
You can find it on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662737/1/Along-Came-A-Spider here]].
You can find it on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662737/1/Along-Came-A-Spider here]].
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You can find it on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11662737/1/Along-Came-A-Spider here]].
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* AscendedExtra: Dave Jewell was a RedShirt in canon whose only significance was that Kai used his name and identification as an alias when he was left for dead on Alyina. He ends up SparedByTheAdaptation here, being Kai’s aide de camp when he isn’t recovering [[AnArmAndALeg from losing a leg during an ejection]].
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* RankUp: Kai and Doc both get promoted for their hard work. Above them, General Kimmel becomes a Marshal.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Katherine Steiner-Davion, who somehow avoided military service in canon, is noted to be training to join the AFFC Medical Corps.
** Her brother Victor serves as a military officer and diplomatic envoy.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Katherine Steiner-Davion, who somehow avoided military service in canon, is noted to be training to join the AFFC Medical Corps.
** Her brother Victor serves as a military officer and diplomatic envoy.
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* RankUp: Kai and Doc both get promoted for their hard work. Above them, General Kimmel becomes a Marshal.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Katherine Steiner-Davion, who somehow avoided military service in canon, is noted to be training to join the AFFC Medical Corps.
** Her brother Victor serves as a military officer and diplomatic envoy.
* SoldierVsWarrior: Even more so than in canon.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Katherine Steiner-Davion, who somehow avoided military service in canon, is noted to be training to join the AFFC Medical Corps.
** Her brother Victor serves as a military officer and diplomatic envoy.
* SoldierVsWarrior: Even more so than in canon.
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''Along Came A Spider'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' written by Creator/{{drakensis}} in 2015 for Nanowrimo. The story re-envisages the Clan Invasion with one key difference: the Federated Commonwealth has known about the Clans for twenty years and prepared accordingly. Kai Allard-Liao and Vladimir of the Wards provide main viewpoints from the frontlines while a broad cast of characters address the political and military developments across the Inner Sphere.
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''Along Came A Spider'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Creator/{{drakensis}} in 2015 for Nanowrimo. The story re-envisages the Clan Invasion with one key difference: the Federated Commonwealth has known about the Clans for twenty years and prepared accordingly. Kai Allard-Liao and Vladimir of the Wards provide main viewpoints from the frontlines while a broad cast of characters address the political and military developments across the Inner Sphere.
