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* MythologyGag: According to Chapter 10, Vice Principal Luna got jealous of Celestia because she didn't have much to do during the day, so she tried to force the students to take after-school activities. In response to this, Celestia sent Luna on a vacation to "Space Camp" for "1,000 hours". All of this is a clear parallel to Princess Celestia and Luna's relationship in Equestria, and Luna's banishment to the moon for 1,000 years.

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According to Chapter 10, Vice Principal Luna got jealous of Celestia because she didn't have much to do during the day, so she tried to force the students to take after-school activities. In response to this, Celestia sent Luna on a vacation to "Space Camp" for "1,000 hours". All of this is a clear parallel to Princess Celestia and Luna's relationship in Equestria, and Luna's banishment to the moon for 1,000 years.years.
** Principal Celestia asks Sunset to write a "friendship report" about what she learned from her new friends, which is an obvious reference to Twilight Sparkle's friendship reports she writes for Princess Celestia.
--> '''Sunset Shimmer''' (reaction to this): But that sounds so...so... 'after school special', or [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall some stupid plot from a TV show for little girls!]]

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Pinkie accidentally hits Fluttershy with a brick, giving the girl a concussion, while trying to help Sunset clean up the school entrance with the rest of the Humane Five. Naturally, the rumor mill thinks Sunset did it.


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* MythologyGag: According to Chapter 10, Vice Principal Luna got jealous of Celestia because she didn't have much to do during the day, so she tried to force the students to take after-school activities. In response to this, Celestia sent Luna on a vacation to "Space Camp" for "1,000 hours". All of this is a clear parallel to Princess Celestia and Luna's relationship in Equestria, and Luna's banishment to the moon for 1,000 years.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Pinkie accidentally hits Fluttershy with a brick, giving the girl a concussion, while trying to help Sunset clean up the school entrance with the rest of the Humane Five. Naturally, the rumor mill thinks Sunset did it.
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* MusicalisInterruptus: The Humane Five try to sing while helping Sunset rebuild the school entrance, but their musical number is interrupted when Pinkie accidentally hits Fluttershy with a brick.
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* BigEater: In Chapter 9, Pinkie Pie ordered ''three whole plates'' full of desserts. She drenched the food in hot sauce (because of a bet she had with Sunset), but she still easily devoured it all.
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* BigShutUp: Sunset has one in Chapter 3 while the Humane Five are in a huge argument.
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* CerebusRollercoaster: The story generally has a somewhat serious tone, with the narrative occasionally bouncing between the [[WidgetSeries bizarre comedy]] situations that makes up most of the writer's work and the angst of a character who is dealing with the aftermath of becoming a literal uncontrollable she-demon.

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* CerebusRollercoaster: The story generally has a somewhat serious tone, with the narrative occasionally bouncing between the [[WidgetSeries bizarre comedy]] comedy situations that makes up most of the writer's work and the angst of a character who is dealing with the aftermath of becoming a literal uncontrollable she-demon.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, like they did when cleaning up the gym... only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.

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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Though Sunset may have been EasilyForgiven by the Humane Five, the rest of the school still holds a bit of a grudge over the years of manipulation and bullying she's done, to say nothing of the attempted demonic mind control. Her first day back at school has her immediately attacked by Gilda in the bathroom.
** The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, like they did when cleaning up the gym... only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.
** When checking to see if Fluttershy has a concussion, Sunset mentions how the fingers trick isn't how you check for concussions, and that an athlete like Rainbow Dash should probably know that.
** When Sunset hears about how much sugar Pinkie eats, she tells Pinkie to remind her to show the party planner ''something'' about the dangers of Type-2 diabetes.
** Principal Celestia only made Sunset, Snips and Snails clean up the entrance after the climax of the film to make it clear to the other students that they were being punished, and that she'd arranged an actual team of contractors to handle the repairs. When questioned, she points out that teenagers aren't ''remotely'' qualified for the task, as construction work is a lot more difficult than cleaning up a trashed gym.
** When the Humane Five reveal that they found the human version of Twilight, Sunset points out that running up to someone and trying to become friends with them because you know an alternate version of them is both weird and a very bad idea.

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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Though Sunset may have been EasilyForgiven by the Humane Five, the rest of the school still holds a bit of a grudge over the years of manipulation and bullying she's done, to say nothing of the attempted demonic mind control. Her first day back at school has her immediately attacked by Gilda in the bathroom.
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SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, like they did when cleaning up the gym... only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.
** When checking to see if Fluttershy has a concussion, Sunset mentions how the fingers trick isn't how you check for concussions, and that an athlete like Rainbow Dash should probably know that.
** When Sunset hears about how much sugar Pinkie eats, she tells Pinkie to remind her to show the party planner ''something'' about the dangers of Type-2 diabetes.
** Principal Celestia only made Sunset, Snips and Snails clean up the entrance after the climax of the film to make it clear to the other students that they were being punished, and that she'd arranged an actual team of contractors to handle the repairs. When questioned, she points out that teenagers aren't ''remotely'' qualified for the task, as construction work is a lot more difficult than cleaning up a trashed gym.
** When the Humane Five reveal that they found the human version of Twilight, Sunset points out that running up to someone and trying to become friends with them because you know an alternate version of them is both weird and a very bad idea.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 the first movie]].

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 net/user/132852/Justice3442 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 the first movie]].
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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Sunset’s [[SuperPoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head and constantly trying to convince her to embrace it.
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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Sunset’s Sunset's [[SuperPoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head and constantly trying to convince her to embrace it.
* RealityEnsues: SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:



*** When checking to see if Fluttershy has a concussion, Sunset mentions how the fingers trick isn't how you check for concussions, and that an athlete like Rainbow Dash should probably know that.

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* InTheBlood: Lampshaded. [[spoiler: When told that she's always been part-demon, Sunset suggests that all the horrible things she has ever done are a direct result of that. Gaaabooo immediately calls her out for trying to shirk responsibility for her own actions, saying it's just as likely she was simply an unpleasant person.]]


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* VillainousLineage: Lampshaded. [[spoiler: When told that she's always been part-demon, Sunset suggests that all the horrible things she has ever done are a direct result of that. Gaaabooo immediately calls her out for trying to shirk responsibility for her own actions, saying it's just as likely she was simply an unpleasant person.]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 the first movie]].

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 the first movie]].
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--> ''My name is Sunset Shimmer and welcome to my cruddy life.''

''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]]'' is a ''Franchise/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls the first movie]].

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--> ''My ->''My name is Sunset Shimmer and welcome to my cruddy life.''

''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]]'' is a ''Franchise/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 the first movie]].

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--> ''My name is Sunset Shimmer and welcome to my cruddy life.''



Sunset Shimmer is having a bad night. She turned into a demon, was forcefully turned back, and now has to deal with all the people she's wronged in the past. As luck would have it, it seems like her demon self isn't done with her, either.

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Sunset Shimmer is having a bad night. She turned into a demon, was forcefully turned back, and now has to deal with all the people she's wronged in the past. As luck would have it, [[FromBadToWorse it seems like her demon self isn't done with her, her]], either.



* DeadpanSnarker: Pretty much every thought Sunset Shimmer has whenever she isn't in the midst of panicking. Other demons display this in spades as well, with one deeming sarcasm as "the language of our people."



* DramaticIrony: Sunset assumes that Twilight Sparkle grew up with a lot of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. We all know that she couldn't be ''farther'' from the truth.
* ForTheEvulz: Ba'al wanted to sacrifice Human!Twilight and the Humane Five to find Sunset, but after Sunset comes to him, he decides to kill them for kicks.

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* DramaticIrony: Sunset assumes that Twilight Sparkle grew up with a lot of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. We all know that she couldn't be ''farther'' from the truth.
truth. She assumes the same of Human!Twilight, but recants on this when she first sees her.
* ForTheEvulz: Ba'al wanted to sacrifice Human!Twilight and the Humane Five to find Sunset, but after Sunset comes to him, him on her own, he decides to kill them for kicks.
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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Apparently Sunset’s [[SuperPoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head, and trying to take her over...

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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Apparently Sunset’s [[SuperPoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head, head and constantly trying to take convince her over...to embrace it.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Princess Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect, she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably have just ended up fighting it out.

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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Apparently, Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Princess Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect, she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably have just ended up fighting it out.



* InTheBlood: Lampshaded. [[spoiler: When told that she's always been part-demon, Sunset suggests that all the horrible things she has done are a direct result of that. Gaaabooo immediately calls her out for trying to shirk responsibility for her own actions, saying it's just as likely she's simply an unpleasant person looking for excuses.]]

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* InTheBlood: Lampshaded. [[spoiler: When told that she's always been part-demon, Sunset suggests that all the horrible things she has ever done are a direct result of that. Gaaabooo immediately calls her out for trying to shirk responsibility for her own actions, saying it's just as likely she's she was simply an unpleasant person looking for excuses.person.]]

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* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was ''not'' enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la ''Film/AClockworkOrange''. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently liked the experience.
* TheAtoner: Sunset's working on being a better person.
* BigWhat: The Mane Five (minus Fluttershy) and Sunset react when they hear that there's a (false) rumor going around that says that Sunset threw a brick at Fluttershy.
* CerebusSyndrome: Once the Humane Five and Sunset arrive at the library looking for the human Twilight, the story quickly gets a ''lot'' darker.
* CharacterDevelopment: Sunset is trying to become a nicer person, and give friendship a shot.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably have just ended up fighting it out.
* DramaticIrony: At one point, Sunset assumes that Twilight had lots of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. WE all know that she couldn't be ''farther'' from the truth.

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* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was ''not'' enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la ''Film/AClockworkOrange''. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently liked the their experience.
* TheAtoner: Sunset's working on Sunset Shimmer is aiming for this, despite her demonic half being more interested in attempting world domination a better person.
second time.
* BigWhat: The Mane Humane Five (minus Fluttershy) and Sunset react when they hear that there's a (false) rumor going around that says that Sunset threw a brick at Fluttershy.
* CerebusSyndrome: Once the Humane Five and CassandraTruth: In Chapter 4, Sunset's demon half reacts to her threats by cheekily alerting her that getting rid of her would be like removing a vital organ. Sunset arrive at naturally doesn't believe this, to the library looking for the human Twilight, the demon's amusement. Fast-forward to Chapter 15 and...
* CerebusRollercoaster: The
story quickly gets generally has a ''lot'' darker.
somewhat serious tone, with the narrative occasionally bouncing between the [[WidgetSeries bizarre comedy]] situations that makes up most of the writer's work and the angst of a character who is dealing with the aftermath of becoming a literal uncontrollable she-demon.
* CharacterDevelopment: Sunset is trying to become a nicer person, person. When Sunset hangs out with Snips and give friendship Snails for the first time since the Fall Formal, they're confused by her current "scheme" (collecting research books) being so mundane and are partly convinced that [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness her apologizing for her actions and openly admitting she enjoys their company]] are signs of her being sick or replaced by a shot.
clone until she threatens to kill them like she usually does.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Princess Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect retrospect, she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably have just ended up fighting it out.
* DramaticIrony: At one point, Sunset assumes that Twilight had lots Sparkle grew up with a lot of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. WE We all know that she couldn't be ''farther'' from the truth.



* InTheBlood: Lampshaded. [[spoiler: When told that she's always been part-demon, Sunset suggests that all the horrible things she has done are a direct result of that. Gaaabooo immediately calls her out for trying to shirk responsibility for her own actions, saying it's just as likely she's simply an unpleasant person looking for excuses.]]



* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Sunset has dreamt up theoretical ways to do this to pretty much everyone. Apparently she thinks it goes hand in hand with being human.

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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Sunset has dreamt up theoretical ways to do this to pretty much everyone. Apparently she thinks everyone she's met. She assumes it goes hand in hand with being human.human, since she never had those thoughts before coming to the human world.



** Though Sunset may have been EasilyForgiven by the Humane Five, the rest of the school still holds a bit of a grudge, and she's actually attacked by Gilda in the bathroom.
** The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, like they did when cleaning up the gym, only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.
*** When checking to see if Fluttershy has a concussion, Sunset mentions how the fingers trick isn't how you check for concussions.
** When Sunset hears about how much sugar Pinkie eats, she tells Pinkie to remind her to show the party planner ''something'' about the dangers of type 2 diabetes.
** Celestia only made Sunset, Snips and Snails clean up the entrance after the climax of the film to make it clear that they were being punished. As what happened with Fluttershy shows, not only is the task potentially dangerous, they aren't ''remotely'' qualified for the task, as it's a lot more difficult than cleaning up a trashed gym.
** When the Mane Five reveal that they found the human version of Twilight, Sunset points out how weird it is.
* ShoutOut: Sunset is a fan of Film/AClockworkOrange, and describes being a demon as reminiscent of the film.
** Pinkie Pie keeps mentioning a [[Videogame/DiabloIII bonesaber]] in chapter 10.
** In the chapter where Sunset, Snips, and Snails go on a bus, Snips and Snails play [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonAdventuresHowISpentMyVacation Spot the Car]], and the dialogue is quite similar to that particular scene in the film.

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** Though Sunset may have been EasilyForgiven by the Humane Five, the rest of the school still holds a bit of a grudge, grudge over the years of manipulation and bullying she's actually done, to say nothing of the attempted demonic mind control. Her first day back at school has her immediately attacked by Gilda in the bathroom.
** The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, like they did when cleaning up the gym, gym... only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.
*** When checking to see if Fluttershy has a concussion, Sunset mentions how the fingers trick isn't how you check for concussions.concussions, and that an athlete like Rainbow Dash should probably know that.
** When Sunset hears about how much sugar Pinkie eats, she tells Pinkie to remind her to show the party planner ''something'' about the dangers of type 2 Type-2 diabetes.
** Principal Celestia only made Sunset, Snips and Snails clean up the entrance after the climax of the film to make it clear to the other students that they were being punished. As what happened with Fluttershy shows, not only is punished, and that she'd arranged an actual team of contractors to handle the task potentially dangerous, they repairs. When questioned, she points out that teenagers aren't ''remotely'' qualified for the task, as it's construction work is a lot more difficult than cleaning up a trashed gym.
** When the Mane Humane Five reveal that they found the human version of Twilight, Sunset points out how that running up to someone and trying to become friends with them because you know an alternate version of them is both weird it is.
and a very bad idea.
* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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Sunset is a fan of Film/AClockworkOrange, and describes her experience of being a demon as reminiscent of the film.
** Pinkie Pie keeps mentioning a [[Videogame/DiabloIII bonesaber]] in chapter 10.
film's Ludovico scene.
** In the chapter where Sunset, Snips, and Snails go on a bus, Chapter 6, Snips and Snails play [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonAdventuresHowISpentMyVacation Spot the Car]], Car]] (to Sunset's confusion and frustration), and the dialogue is quite similar to that particular scene in the film.



** In both Chapters 9 and 10, Pinkie Pie keeps mentioning a [[Videogame/DiabloIII bonesaber]].
* TarotTroubles: In Chapter 3, Pinkie Pie gives Sunset Shimmer a Tarot Card reading. Sunset is put off how accurate the "Tower, The Devil, Death" appears and is pessimistic about any sudden change in the future actually being positive. Both Pinkie and Sunset continue to do readings concerning the latter throughout the story, with each of them reflecting present and future plot developments.
--> '''Pinkie Pie''' (referring to the change implied by Death): Oh, well you see, you drew only Major Arcana, so that means your fortune is extra, super, special important! Maybe it’s the evil inside you that dies!
--> '''Sunset Shimmer''' (depressed): Yeah, or just me...



* TomatoInTheMirror: After trying to handle her demon dreams and violent urges for the past fifteen chapters, and nearly killing herself in the process, the end of Chapter 15 has the demon Gaaabooo explain to a confused Sunset that [[spoiler:she's always been a demon. The following chapter has him clarify that she's ''part''-demon like himself, with them sharing an archdemon ancestor somewhere on her family tree. Her current "split personality" problem is the result of the Element of Magic rushing the awakening of her demonic heritage, rather than being gradually eased into it.]]



* WhamEpisode: In Running the Other Direction, the group is at the library looking for Twilight's human version, only to find a room that has the windows ''completely'' covered by what looks like blood, and in the next chapter Rainbow Dash and AJ stay behind to keep what appear to be demons from following the others, and when the others get outside they find themselves in the same landscape Sunset's been facing her demonic self in.
** The next chapter has the demons capturing the rest of the Humane Five, and has Sunset relapse into demon mode and apparently kill their leader Ba'al, and then another demon appears at Sunset's home when she's trying to do a ritual to deal with her demon side.

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* WeirdnessMagnet: Sunset Shimmer. Her transformations into a she-demon have been causing spikes in magic energy that are beginning to attract of sorts of creatures to Canterlot, with a number being interested in Sunset directly.
* WhamEpisode: In Running the Other Direction, Chapter 12 starts off with the group is at the library library, looking for Twilight's human version, only to find counterpart and engaging in silly texting banter, while Sunset waits outside. The chapter ends with Sunset running inside when she sees all the library patrons start fleeing the building, the group discovering a meeting room that has the windows been ''completely'' covered by what looks like coated in human blood, and in the presence of demons. The next chapter Rainbow Dash and AJ stay behind two chapters build on this, leading up to keep what appear to be demons from following the others, and when the others get outside they find themselves in the same landscape Sunset entering her demon form once again.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"You’re not possessed by a demon. You ''are'' a demon."]]
* WhatHaveIBecome:
Sunset's been facing reaction after realizing she was about to murder Gilda and would have enjoyed doing so if Rainbow Dash hadn't walked in at that moment to stop their fight.
* WhatTheHellHero: In Chapter 18, Celestia admonishes Sunset for locking herself in
her demonic self in.
** The next chapter has
apartment, pointing out that she stopped trying to be a better person when she cut herself off from the demons capturing others and that she's actually becoming ''worse'' than she was when she actively wanted to take over the rest of world.
-->'''Principal Celestia''': You weren’t just trying to start a shouting match with Applejack in there. I saw the look in your eyes right before I asked for a cigarette. (...) You planned to ''hospitalize'' Applejack, if she was ''lucky''. Now, I know you’ve done some pretty unkind things, but I’ve never known you to physically injure another student.
* WithFriendsLikeThese: How
the Humane Five, and has Five behave at times, with the group tending to fall into petty arguments when all of them are together. During one such shouting match, Sunset relapse into demon mode and apparently kill privately muses that it's no wonder it was so easy to destroy their leader Ba'al, and then another demon appears at Sunset's home when she's trying to do a ritual to deal friendships with a few texts and emails, and how the old her demon side.would have reveled in watching them fight.

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls''.

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[[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]] Shimmers]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''Franchise/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls''.
[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls the first movie]].



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* CerberusSyndrome: Once the Humane Five and Sunset arrive at the library looking for the human Twilight, the story quickly gets a ''lot'' darker.

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** Sunset Shimmer compares Pinkie Pie's eating in one scene to eating habits associated with [[GarfieldAndFriends overweight cartoon cats]].

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** Sunset Shimmer compares Pinkie Pie's eating in one scene to eating habits associated with [[GarfieldAndFriends [[WesternAnimation/GarfieldAndFriends overweight cartoon cats]].

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* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was ''not'' enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la ''Film/AClockworkOrange''. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently liked it.

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* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was ''not'' enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la ''Film/AClockworkOrange''. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently liked it.the experience.



* ForTheEvulz: Ba'al wanted to sacrifice Human!Twilight and the Humane Five to find Sunset, but after Sunset comes to him, he decides to kill them for kicks.



* WhamEpisode: In Running the Other Direction, the group is at the library looking for Twilight's human version, only to find a room that has the windows ''completely'' covered by what looks like blood, and in the next chapter Rainbow Dash and AJ stay behind to keep what appear to be demons from following the others, and when the others get outside they find themselves in the same landscape Sunset's been facing her demonic self in.

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* WhamEpisode: In Running the Other Direction, the group is at the library looking for Twilight's human version, only to find a room that has the windows ''completely'' covered by what looks like blood, and in the next chapter Rainbow Dash and AJ stay behind to keep what appear to be demons from following the others, and when the others get outside they find themselves in the same landscape Sunset's been facing her demonic self in.in.
** The next chapter has the demons capturing the rest of the Humane Five, and has Sunset relapse into demon mode and apparently kill their leader Ba'al, and then another demon appears at Sunset's home when she's trying to do a ritual to deal with her demon side.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Gilda, who attacks Sunset despite ''not'' having been one of Sunset's victims from the dance, even pulling a ''knife'' on her!
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Sunset has dreamt up theoretical ways to do this to pretty much everyone.

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* {{Jerkass}}: Gilda, who attacks Sunset despite ''not'' having been one of Sunset's victims from the dance, and thus having no direct reason to attack her, even pulling a ''knife'' on her!
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Sunset has dreamt up theoretical ways to do this to pretty much everyone. Apparently she thinks it goes hand in hand with being human.



** The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.

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** The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, like they did when cleaning up the gym, only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.

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* CerberusSyndrome: Once the Humane Five and Sunset arrive at the library looking for the human Twilight, the story quickly gets a ''lot'' darker.



--> '''Sunset Shimmer''': [[LampshadeHanging You just]] ''[[LampshadeHanging had'' [[LampshadeHanging to tempt fate, didn't you?]]
* VillainProtagonist: Well, “villain on the path to becoming a better person” protagonist.

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--> '''Sunset Shimmer''': [[LampshadeHanging You just]] ''[[LampshadeHanging had'' had]]'' [[LampshadeHanging to tempt fate, didn't you?]]
* VillainProtagonist: Well, “villain on the path to becoming a better person” protagonist.protagonist.
* WhamEpisode: In Running the Other Direction, the group is at the library looking for Twilight's human version, only to find a room that has the windows ''completely'' covered by what looks like blood, and in the next chapter Rainbow Dash and AJ stay behind to keep what appear to be demons from following the others, and when the others get outside they find themselves in the same landscape Sunset's been facing her demonic self in.
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** Sunset Shimmer compares Pinkie Pie's eating in one scene to eating habits associated with [[Garfield and Friends overweight cartoon cats]].

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** Sunset Shimmer compares Pinkie Pie's eating in one scene to eating habits associated with [[Garfield and Friends [[GarfieldAndFriends overweight cartoon cats]].
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** In the chapter where Sunset, Snips, and Snails go on a bus, Snips and Snails play [[WesternAnimation/TinyToonAdventuresHowISpentMyVacation Spot the Car]], and the dialogue is quite similar to that particular scene in the film.
** Sunset Shimmer compares Pinkie Pie's eating in one scene to eating habits associated with [[Garfield and Friends overweight cartoon cats]].

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic.

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic.
''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Justice4243 Justice4243]], set immediately after the events of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls''.



* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was not enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la Film/AClockworkOrange. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently enjoyed it.

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* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was not ''not'' enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la Film/AClockworkOrange. ''Film/AClockworkOrange''. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently enjoyed liked it.



* BigWhat: The Mane Five (minus Fluttershy) and Sunset react when they hear that there's a (false) rumor going around that says that Sunset threw a brick at Fluttershy.



* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably end up fighting it out.
* DramaticIrony: At one point, Sunset assumes that Twilight had lots of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. WE all know that she couldn’t be farther from the truth.

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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably end have just ended up fighting it out.
* DramaticIrony: At one point, Sunset assumes that Twilight had lots of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. WE all know that she couldn’t couldn't be farther ''farther'' from the truth.truth.
* {{Jerkass}}: Gilda, who attacks Sunset despite ''not'' having been one of Sunset's victims from the dance, even pulling a ''knife'' on her!


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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Pinkie accidentally hits Fluttershy with a brick, giving the girl a concussion, while trying to help Sunset clean up the school entrance with the rest of the Humane Five. Naturally, the rumor mill thinks Sunset did it.


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* RealityEnsues:
** Though Sunset may have been EasilyForgiven by the Humane Five, the rest of the school still holds a bit of a grudge, and she's actually attacked by Gilda in the bathroom.
** The Humane Five try to help Sunset clean up the school entrance, bursting into song as they do so, only for Pinkie to accidentally hit Fluttershy with a brick, giving her a concussion and forcing the group to take her to the nurse's office.
*** When checking to see if Fluttershy has a concussion, Sunset mentions how the fingers trick isn't how you check for concussions.
** When Sunset hears about how much sugar Pinkie eats, she tells Pinkie to remind her to show the party planner ''something'' about the dangers of type 2 diabetes.
** Celestia only made Sunset, Snips and Snails clean up the entrance after the climax of the film to make it clear that they were being punished. As what happened with Fluttershy shows, not only is the task potentially dangerous, they aren't ''remotely'' qualified for the task, as it's a lot more difficult than cleaning up a trashed gym.
** When the Mane Five reveal that they found the human version of Twilight, Sunset points out how weird it is.


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** Pinkie Pie keeps mentioning a [[Videogame/DiabloIII bonesaber]] in chapter 10.
* TemptingFate: After the gang clears up what happened with Fluttershy for Vice-Principal Luna, Rarity says that at least Sunset is in the clear now, only for ''Celestia'' to come down the hall wanting to talk about it.
--> '''Sunset Shimmer''': [[LampshadeHanging You just]] ''[[LampshadeHanging had'' [[LampshadeHanging to tempt fate, didn't you?]]

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]].

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]].
Shimmers]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic.






* TheAtoner: Sunset's working on being a better person.



* Didn’tThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably end up fighting it out.

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* Didn’tThinkThisThrough: DidntThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably end up fighting it out.



* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Apparently Sunset’s [[SuperpoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head, and trying to take her over...
* Shout Out: Sunset is a fan of Film/AClockworkOrange, and describes being a demon as reminiscent of the film.

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* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Apparently Sunset’s [[SuperpoweredEvilSide [[SuperPoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head, and trying to take her over...
* Shout Out: ShoutOut: Sunset is a fan of Film/AClockworkOrange, and describes being a demon as reminiscent of the film.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/162159/all-that-shimmers All That Shimmers]].

Sunset Shimmer is having a bad night. She turned into a demon, was forcefully turned back, and now has to deal with all the people she's wronged in the past. As luck would have it, it seems like her demon self isn't done with her, either.
Can the power of friendship overcome this maniacal creature, or is Sunset Shimmer doomed to bring death and destruction to everyone she meets?

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* AndIMustScream: When Sunset was in her demon form, she was not enjoying it. She describes it as being forced to look at her worst moments, a la Film/AClockworkOrange. She’s rather miffed when she learns that Snips and Snails apparently enjoyed it.
* CharacterDevelopment: Sunset is trying to become a nicer person, and give friendship a shot.
* Didn’tThinkThisThrough: Apparently Sunset’s original plan was to try and use the crown to become an Alicorn Princess herself and return to Equestria in the hopes that Celestia would give her a kingdom of her own on the spot. In retrospect she’s forced to admit that she and her former mentor would probably end up fighting it out.
* DramaticIrony: At one point, Sunset assumes that Twilight had lots of friends, being Celestia’s student and all. WE all know that she couldn’t be farther from the truth.
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Sunset has dreamt up theoretical ways to do this to pretty much everyone.
* NotQuiteBackToNormal: Apparently Sunset’s [[SuperpoweredEvilSide demon self]] is still in her head, and trying to take her over...
* Shout Out: Sunset is a fan of Film/AClockworkOrange, and describes being a demon as reminiscent of the film.
* VillainProtagonist: Well, “villain on the path to becoming a better person” protagonist.

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