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* KarmicTransformation: The Alicorn Amlet,which Trixie tries to use
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* KarmicTransformation: The Alicorn Amlet,which Trixie Trixie, an AttentionWhore, tries to use the Alicorn Amulet to regain her lost power and influence and become a greater magician; the Amulet ends up fusing with her body, resurrecting her as an undead abomination who inspires terror and revulsion in nearly all who see her, must avoid being seen in public, and -- worst of all -- must wear a [[RestrainingBolt magic-suppressing ring]] to prevent the Amulet's dark magic from fully corrupting her (preventing her from doing ''any'' magic).
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** One of the artifacts Trixie listed to Twilight, is the name of another FanFic: Hurricane’s Champron.
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** One of the artifacts Trixie listed to Twilight, is the name of another FanFic: Hurricane’s Champron.Champion.
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** At one point, Luna unironically says [[Franchise/EvilDead "Groovy"]]. (Seeing the mane six's reactions, she shrugs admits that she hasn't quite caught up on modern slang yet.)
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** At one point, Luna unironically says [[Franchise/EvilDead "Groovy"]]. (Seeing the mane six's reactions, she shrugs and admits that she hasn't quite caught up on modern slang yet.)
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* TraumaCongaLine: So far, Trixie has died, after she had become a laughing stock, brought back as an undead abomination that puts fear into anypony that sees her, [[spoiler: ''dies again'', this time brutally and then, just as it looks like she may at least be at peace, she is pulled back to the living as an even worse monster.]]
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* TraumaCongaLine: So far, Trixie has died, after she had become died (after becoming a laughing stock, laughingstock), brought back as an undead abomination that puts fear into anypony that sees her, [[spoiler: ''dies again'', this again'' (this time brutally brutally) and then, just as it looks like she may at least be at peace, she is pulled back to the living as an even worse ''worse'' monster.]]
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* BodyHorror: Trixie's body has basically been reduced to a still decaying corpse.
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* BodyHorror: Trixie's body has Trixie is basically been reduced to a still decaying trapped in her still-decaying corpse. Her muscles are wasting away (leaving her almost skeletally thin), her eyes have turned milky white, and her internal organs have all atrophied and no longer function. (In fact, it's stated that her stomach had to be pumped at the hospital because the last food she'd eaten before death was just laying in it and rotting.)
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* BrownNote: The Dark Forces laughter, is enough to physical harm and incapacitate The Mane Six (plus Lightning Dust), even leaving a couple of them temporarily deafened.
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* BrownNote: The Dark Forces laughter, is enough to physical harm and incapacitate The Mane Six (plus Lightning Dust), even leaving a couple of them temporarily deafened.,deafened.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: Lighting and Rainbow challenge each other to a friendly bout to resolve there deferences, and walk out on good terms with each other.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: Lighting and Rainbow challenge each other to a friendly bout to resolve there deferences, differences, and walk out on good terms with each other.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Trixie after her transformation is described as looking like the physical embodiment of death and scares anypony that saw her.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Trixie after her transformation is described as looking like the physical embodiment of death death, and scares anypony that saw her.sees her.
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* KarmicTransformation: The Alicorn Amlet,which Trixie tries to use
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** Celestia speculates that Trixie's existence violates the very laws of nature, which may signal the coming of [[EldritchAbomination something]] [[EndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt worse]] -- a situation she describes as, [[Film/Ghostbusters1984 "Pony sacrifices! Cats and dogs living together! Mass hysteria!"]]
** At one point, Luna unironically says [[Franchise/EvilDead "Groovy"]]. (Seeing the mane six's reactions, she shrugs admits that she hasn't quite caught up on modern slang yet.)
** At one point, Luna unironically says [[Franchise/EvilDead "Groovy"]]. (Seeing the mane six's reactions, she shrugs admits that she hasn't quite caught up on modern slang yet.)
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* CoolPet: Trixie's raven.
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* SharedUniverse: Of a sort; All of Wave Blaster's stories involving Trixie, use the same origin story.
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* ShoutOut: Many:
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* ShoutOut: Many:
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* JuryDuty: Unlike in the show, Rainbow and Lightning Dust's actions at the end of "Wonderbolts Academy" lead to them having to face trial for reckless endangerment and [[spoiler: accidentally causing Trixie's second death]]. And even after Spitfire takes the blame, they still have to face a military jury.
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* RealityEnsues: Unlike in the show, Rainbow and Lightning Dust's actions at the end of "Wonderbolts Academy" lead to them having to face trial for reckless endangerment and [[spoiler: accidentally causing Trixie's second death]]. And even after Spitfire takes the blame, they still have to face a military jury.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Trixie gives one to Rainbow Dash, after the latter refuses to leave her alone. Pointing out that they are NotSoDifferent and that one day, Rainbow will most likely have to deal with hecklers like herself. [[spoiler: This turns out to be a BatmanGambit on Rainbow's part, who had realized all this earlier and was trying to give Trixie her "fight" back.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Trixie gives one to Rainbow Dash, after the latter refuses to leave her alone. Pointing out that they are NotSoDifferent [[NotSoDifferentRemark aren't so different]] and that one day, Rainbow will most likely have to deal with hecklers like herself. [[spoiler: This turns out to be a BatmanGambit on Rainbow's part, who had realized all this earlier and was trying to give Trixie her "fight" back.]]
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* AuthorAppeal: Wave Blaster likes to give nods to other franchises he is into. Most notably, ''VideoGame/MortalKombat'' and various ComicBooks, mainly Creator/DCComics.
* BadassCrew: Trixie's mentors are made up of Pony versions of various characters, including, but not limited to [[VideoGame/MortalKombat Scorpion]], ComicBook/GreenArrow and a stallion named Hell's Blazer.
* BadassCrew: Trixie's mentors are made up of Pony versions of various characters, including, but not limited to [[VideoGame/MortalKombat Scorpion]], ComicBook/GreenArrow and a stallion named Hell's Blazer.
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* AuthorAppeal: Wave Blaster likes to give nods to other franchises he is into. Most notably, ''VideoGame/MortalKombat'' ''Franchise/MortalKombat'' and various ComicBooks, mainly Creator/DCComics.
* BadassCrew: Trixie's mentors are made up of Pony versions of various characters, including, but not limited to[[VideoGame/MortalKombat [[Franchise/MortalKombat Scorpion]], ComicBook/GreenArrow and a stallion named Hell's Blazer.
* BadassCrew: Trixie's mentors are made up of Pony versions of various characters, including, but not limited to
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** Trixie occasionally quotes [[Disney/ThePrincessAndTheFrog Dr. Facillier]].
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** Trixie occasionally quotes [[Disney/ThePrincessAndTheFrog [[WesternAnimation/ThePrincessAndTheFrog Dr. Facillier]].
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''Actually I'm Dead'' is ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Wave+Blaster Wave Blaster]] and co-written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/nightwalker Nightwalker]]. It takes place in alternate universe where the ending of the season three episode "Magic Duel" takes a '''much''' more tragic twist. After losing the duel and the Alicorn Amulet, Trixie collapses and apparently dies, due to an unforeseen influence. But instead of staying dead, the Amulet turns her into... something else.
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''Actually I'm Dead'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Wave+Blaster Wave Blaster]] and co-written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/nightwalker Nightwalker]]. It takes place in alternate universe where the ending of the season three episode "Magic Duel" takes a '''much''' more tragic twist. After losing the duel and the Alicorn Amulet, Trixie collapses and apparently dies, due to an unforeseen influence. But instead of staying dead, the Amulet turns her into... something else.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Twilight gives one to Applejack, after she drove Tixie off for just for talking to Apple Bloom.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Twilight gives one to Applejack, after she drove Tixie off for just for talking to Apple Bloom.
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''Actually I'm Dead'' is ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' FanFic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Wave+Blaster Wave Blaster]] and co-written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/nightwalker Nightwalker]]. It takes place in alternate universe where the ending of the season three episode "Magic Duel" takes a '''much''' more tragic twist. After losing the duel and the Alicorn Amulet, Trixie collapses and apparently dies, due to an unforeseen influence. But instead of staying dead, the Amulet turns her into... something else.
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''Actually I'm Dead'' is ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic, written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Wave+Blaster Wave Blaster]] and co-written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/nightwalker Nightwalker]]. It takes place in alternate universe where the ending of the season three episode "Magic Duel" takes a '''much''' more tragic twist. After losing the duel and the Alicorn Amulet, Trixie collapses and apparently dies, due to an unforeseen influence. But instead of staying dead, the Amulet turns her into... something else.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, The Mane Six a forced to both seal Trixie and re-seal Discord in stone, after the Trixie manages to just barley fight The Dark Force controlling her, while Discord holds her down, so the Mane Six have a clear shot.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, The Mane Six a are forced to both seal Trixie and re-seal Discord in stone, after the Trixie manages to just barley fight The Dark Force controlling her, while Discord holds her down, so the Mane Six have a clear shot.]]
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** The Canterlot Court House, bears a strong resemblance to [[WesternAnimation/TheJusticeFriends a certain other hall of justice]].
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** The Canterlot Court House, bears a strong resemblance to [[WesternAnimation/TheJusticeFriends [[WesternAnimation/SuperFriends a certain other hall of justice]].
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* ShipTease: We get one near the end, between [[CrackShipping Lightning Dust and Spike]] of all parings.
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* ShipTease: We get one near the end, between [[CrackShipping [[CrackPairing Lightning Dust and Spike]] of all parings.
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* CallForward: In the {{sequel hook}}, [[spoiler: Hell Blazer]] skims through a couple articles in the paper, both of which reference episodes from season five, including something about an [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E1TheCutieMapPart1 equalist]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E2TheCutieMapPart2 cult]] being formed in some out of the way area and [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E8TheLostTreasureOfGriffonstone the Griffons dealing with an economic collapse]], for reference, this story takes place throughout season three.
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** After [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] comes surprisingly close to taking out the Dark Force, said quotes the Music/LinkinPark song, ''In The End'', while taunting her.
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** After [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] comes surprisingly close to taking out the Dark Force, said dark force quotes the Music/LinkinPark song, ''In The End'', while taunting her.her.
--> '''Dark Force''' You tried so hard. You got so far. But in the end, it doesn't even matter.
--> '''Dark Force''' You tried so hard. You got so far. But in the end, it doesn't even matter.
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A sequel titled [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/364939/i-monster I, Monster]] has been started.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: The Dark force inside the Alicorn Amulet becomes this, later on in the story.]]
* BigDamnHeroes:
** When The Dark Force is about to kill the Mane Six, [[spoiler: Lightning Dust jumps in and knocks it into the sky.]]
** Just as The Dark Force is about to kill [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]], Pinkie Pie and Discord come in and blast it with the former's party canon, while Rainbow Dash sloops in the save the former, before her and Applejack jump in and join the fight alongside Pinkie Discord.
* BigDamnHeroes:
** When The Dark Force is about to kill the Mane Six, [[spoiler: Lightning Dust jumps in and knocks it into the sky.]]
** Just as The Dark Force is about to kill [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]], Pinkie Pie and Discord come in and blast it with the former's party canon, while Rainbow Dash sloops in the save the former, before her and Applejack jump in and join the fight alongside Pinkie Discord.
* BitterSweetEnding: Sadly ''much'' more on the bitter side of the trope: In the end [[spoiler: The Dark Force in The Alicorn Amulet takes over Trixie's body almost completely and The Mane Six had to seal her in stone with The Elements, while Trixie was just barley there enough to [[TearJerker tell them to do it.]] Not only that, but they also had to ''reseal'' [[HeelFaceTurn post-reformation]] Discord in the process, as [[HeroicSacrifice he was holding her down so they'd have an opening]]. Oh, and Lightning Dust was beat and mauled so badly, she needed a ''wheel chair'', to attend the memorial.]] About the only bright sides, are the fact that the [[spoiler: [[TakenForGranite the stone prison Trixie and Discord are in]] can be undone once the others have found a way to help her]] and WordOfGod confirming this story is only part one of a series, where these lingering problems can be resolved later in.
* BrownNote: The Dark Forces laughter, is enough to physical harm and incapacitate The Mane Six (plus Lightning Dust), even leaving a couple of them temporarily deafened.
* ColdBloodedTorture: The Darkness stabs [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] with its/Trixie's claws, where her wings connect to her body, in retaliation for her trying to attack it.
* DealWithTheDevil: The Dark Force tries to offer one to [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]].
* DemonicPossession: The Dark Force in the Alicorn Amulet, manages to fully take over Trixie's body during the climax.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Lightning Dust manages to tackle and fly The Dark Force into the air before ''ramming into the ground'' and slapping some magical restraints on it.]] While it doesn't last, keep in mind, this is a force that just previously knocked out '''Discord''', who was almost defeated by a lone pegasus.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Lightning Dust manages to tackle and fly The Dark Force into the air before ''ramming into the ground'' and slapping some magical restraints on it.]] While it doesn't last, keep in mind, this is a force that just previously knocked out '''Discord''', who was almost defeated by a lone pegasus.
** Later played for humor, after Trixie [[spoiler: spends her whole months supply of cash on wine and Twilight complains that it was supposed to last her the whole month, only for Trixie to point out that it ''is'' the end of the month.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, The Mane Six a forced to both seal Trixie and re-seal Discord in stone, after the Trixie manages to just barley fight The Dark Force controlling her, while Discord holds her down, so the Mane Six have a clear shot.]]
* HopeSpot:
** After dying a second time, it looks like Trixie will at least be able to rest in peace... cue The Dark Force in the Alicorn Amulet dragging her away.
** Near the end, after the dark force in the Amulet takes over Trixie's body completely, Discord is able to contain and identify it, before deciding to go in and deal with mano-a-mano, sure he can easily resolve things from here and the girls, for the first time in a long while, are able to relax and breathe a sigh of relief, thinking things will all work out. [[spoiler: Then the darkness defeats Discord and breaks out of his containment. Cue OhCrap moment.]]
** Later on, it looks like [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] actually got the better of The Dark Force and has it in magical restraints to block off it's magical powers... Cue it simply beating her down, before tearing off said restraints with brute force.
* HopeSpot:
** After dying a second time, it looks like Trixie will at least be able to rest in peace... cue The Dark Force in the Alicorn Amulet dragging her away.
** Near the end, after the dark force in the Amulet takes over Trixie's body completely, Discord is able to contain and identify it, before deciding to go in and deal with mano-a-mano, sure he can easily resolve things from here and the girls, for the first time in a long while, are able to relax and breathe a sigh of relief, thinking things will all work out. [[spoiler: Then the darkness defeats Discord and breaks out of his containment. Cue OhCrap moment.]]
** Later on, it looks like [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] actually got the better of The Dark Force and has it in magical restraints to block off it's magical powers... Cue it simply beating her down, before tearing off said restraints with brute force.
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* SharedUniverse: All of Wave Blaster's stories involving Trixie, use the same origin story.
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* SequelHook: [[spoiler: Hell Blazer, one of Trixie's mentors reading about her having to be TakenForGranite for the greater good. He is not pleased.]]
* SharedUniverse: Of a sort; All of Wave Blaster's stories involving Trixie, use the same originstory.story.
* ShipTease: We get one near the end, between [[CrackShipping Lightning Dust and Spike]] of all parings.
* SixthRanger:
** Trixie becoming this to The Mane Six, is a fairly big part of the first half of the story.
** Later on, Lightning Dust becomes this to the group, after resolving her previous issues with Trixie and Rainbow Dash.
* SharedUniverse: Of a sort; All of Wave Blaster's stories involving Trixie, use the same origin
* ShipTease: We get one near the end, between [[CrackShipping Lightning Dust and Spike]] of all parings.
* SixthRanger:
** Trixie becoming this to The Mane Six, is a fairly big part of the first half of the story.
** Later on, Lightning Dust becomes this to the group, after resolving her previous issues with Trixie and Rainbow Dash.
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** Trixie occasionally quotes [[Film/ThePrincessAndTheFrog Dr. Facillier]].
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** Trixie occasionally quotes [[Film/ThePrincessAndTheFrog [[Disney/ThePrincessAndTheFrog Dr. Facillier]].
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** According to the author, Trixie's BizarreAlienBiology is kinda sorta based on the Xenomorphs of ''Film/{{Alien}}'' fame.
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** According to the author, Trixie's BizarreAlienBiology dark green alien blood is kinda sorta based on the Xenomorphs of ''Film/{{Alien}}'' fame.
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* SuicidalOverconfidence: Lightning Dust tries to pick a fight with Trixie, because they "both wanted it", after what happened earlier. This is after [[spoiler: Trixie's second revival]] and she is now strong enough to take ''Luna'' on and hold her ground. It goes without saying, Lightning was cowering in fear before the fight even began. [[note]] The only reason she lived, was because Trixie stopped her super powered evil side in time. [[/note]]
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** After [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] comes surprisingly close to taking out the Dark Force, said quotes the Music/LinkinPark song, ''In The End'', while taunting her.
* ShutUpHannibal: After [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] briefly gets the better of The Dark Force, only to be beaten down, said force offers her a chance to [[WeCanRuleTogether join it]]. Her response?
--> '''[[spoiler: Lightning Dust]]:''' Up yours.
* SuicidalOverconfidence: Lightning Dust tries to pick a fight with Trixie, because they "both wanted it", after what happened earlier. This is after [[spoiler: Trixie's second revival]] and she is now strong enough to take ''Luna'' on and hold her ground. It goes without saying, Lightning was cowering in fear before the fight even began. [[note]] The only reason she lived, was because Trixie stopped her super powered evil side in time.[[/note]][[/note]]
* ShutUpHannibal: After [[spoiler: Lightning Dust]] briefly gets the better of The Dark Force, only to be beaten down, said force offers her a chance to [[WeCanRuleTogether join it]]. Her response?
--> '''[[spoiler: Lightning Dust]]:''' Up yours.
* SuicidalOverconfidence: Lightning Dust tries to pick a fight with Trixie, because they "both wanted it", after what happened earlier. This is after [[spoiler: Trixie's second revival]] and she is now strong enough to take ''Luna'' on and hold her ground. It goes without saying, Lightning was cowering in fear before the fight even began. [[note]] The only reason she lived, was because Trixie stopped her super powered evil side in time.
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* WasOnceAMan: Was Once A Pony: Trixie's attitude, after being brought back as something else.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[WasOnceAMan Was Once A Pony: Pony]]: Trixie's attitude, after being brought back as something else.
