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* AxCrazy: Silver Shield.
* AlternateUniverseFic: Sort of a given.
* TheBadGuyWins: "A world of eternal night", huh? ...[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon sound]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony familiar]]?
* CooldownHug: Fluttershy uses one of these to stop [[spoiler: Moonside Twilight's SuperPowerMeltdown.]]
* AlternateUniverseFic: Sort of a given.
* TheBadGuyWins: "A world of eternal night", huh? ...[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E1MareInTheMoon sound]] [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony familiar]]?
* CooldownHug: Fluttershy uses one of these to stop [[spoiler: Moonside Twilight's SuperPowerMeltdown.]]
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* CooldownHug: Fluttershy uses one of these to stop [[spoiler: Moonside Twilight's
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* ForWantOfANail: Oh dear, if it weren't for that rainboom...
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Twilight]], in the alternate universe.
* FacePalm:
** In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
--->"My turn!" ''the pink mare shouted excitedly.'' "I spy something rainbow-colored."\\
''Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes.'' "It's me, isn't it? Nothing else in this room is rainbow."\\
''Pinkie Pie gasped in surprise.'' "Fine then, Dashie. I've got a harder one. I spy something wearing a hat."\\
''Rainbow buried her forehead in her front hoof.''
** And later on in the same chapter.
--->''[Alternate Twilight] levitated a book off of one of the shelves and opened it, tearing out two pages.''\\
''Rarity gasped, and Twilight shifted her eyes toward her, concerned.''\\
"What?" ''Twilight said.'' "The book's already in terrible condition. It looks ancient. Really, how valuable can a book like that be?"\\
''Rainbow Dash facehoofed for a second time.''
* GhostMemory: [[spoiler: Caused by Alternate Twilight when swapping minds.]]
* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler: In order to travel to our world, alternate Twilight swaps her mind with our Twilight.]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler: Twilight]], in the alternate universe.
* FacePalm:
** In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
--->"My turn!" ''the pink mare shouted excitedly.'' "I spy something rainbow-colored."\\
''Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes.'' "It's me, isn't it? Nothing else in this room is rainbow."\\
''Pinkie Pie gasped in surprise.'' "Fine then, Dashie. I've got a harder one. I spy something wearing a hat."\\
''Rainbow buried her forehead in her front hoof.''
** And later on in the same chapter.
--->''[Alternate Twilight] levitated a book off of one of the shelves and opened it, tearing out two pages.''\\
''Rarity gasped, and Twilight shifted her eyes toward her, concerned.''\\
"What?" ''Twilight said.'' "The book's already in terrible condition. It looks ancient. Really, how valuable can a book like that be?"\\
''Rainbow Dash facehoofed for a second time.''
* GhostMemory: [[spoiler: Caused by Alternate Twilight when swapping minds.]]
* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler: In order to travel to our world, alternate Twilight swaps her mind with our Twilight.]]
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%%** In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler: In order to travel to
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** [[WordOfGod According to the author]], parts of the story, including the alternating universes throughout the first act, is inspired by Series/{{Fringe}} doing the same at the start of Season 3.
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** [[WordOfGod According to the author]], author, parts of the story, including the alternating universes throughout the first act, is are inspired by Series/{{Fringe}} doing the same at the start of Season 3.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Alternative Twilight]] has shades of this.
* ZeppelinsFromAnotherWorld: Our world has a hot air balloon. The other world has a ''freaking airship''.
* ZeppelinsFromAnotherWorld: Our world has a hot air balloon. The other world has a ''freaking airship''.
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* ZeppelinsFromAnotherWorld:
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''A World Without Rainbows'' can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html here]] and [[http://freedomandchaos.deviantart.com/journal/World-Without-Rainbows-Chapter-List-252985344 here]] and is currently in Act III.
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''A World Without Rainbows'' can be found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/92 here]], [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html here]] and [[http://freedomandchaos.deviantart.com/journal/World-Without-Rainbows-Chapter-List-252985344 here]] and is currently in Act III.
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* SuperPowerMeltdown: when challenged by Applejack, [[spoiler:Moonside Twilight]] loses control of her magic and almost destroys Ponyville.
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* SuperPowerMeltdown: when When challenged by Applejack, [[spoiler:Moonside Twilight]] loses control of her magic and almost destroys Ponyville.
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* ItsAWonderfulPlot
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* ItsAWonderfulPlotItsAWonderfulPlot: Twilight find herself sent to another world where the Rainboom never happened. Because Mane 6 never become friends, they weren’t there to stop Nightmare Moon.
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* AxeCrazy: Silver Shield.
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* AxeCrazy: AxCrazy: Silver Shield.
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* FacePalm: In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
--> "My turn!" ''the pink mare shouted excitedly.'' "I spy something rainbow-colored."
--> ''Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes.'' "It's me, isn't it? Nothing else in this room is rainbow."
--> ''Pinkie Pie gasped in surprise.'' "Fine then, Dashie. I've got a harder one. I spy something wearing a hat."
--> ''Rainbow buried her forehead in her front hoof.''
--> "My turn!" ''the pink mare shouted excitedly.'' "I spy something rainbow-colored."
--> ''Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes.'' "It's me, isn't it? Nothing else in this room is rainbow."
--> ''Pinkie Pie gasped in surprise.'' "Fine then, Dashie. I've got a harder one. I spy something wearing a hat."
--> ''Rainbow buried her forehead in her front hoof.''
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* FacePalm: FacePalm:
** In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
--> "My --->"My turn!" ''the pink mare shouted excitedly.'' "I spy something rainbow-colored."
-->"\\
''Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes.'' "It's me, isn't it? Nothing else in this room is rainbow."
-->"\\
''Pinkie Pie gasped in surprise.'' "Fine then, Dashie. I've got a harder one. I spy something wearing a hat."
-->"\\
''Rainbow buried her forehead in her front hoof.''
** In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
-->
''Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes.'' "It's me, isn't it? Nothing else in this room is rainbow.
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''Pinkie Pie gasped in surprise.'' "Fine then, Dashie. I've got a harder one. I spy something wearing a hat.
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''Rainbow buried her forehead in her front hoof.''
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--> ''[Alternate Twilight] levitated a book off of one of the shelves and opened it, tearing out two pages.''
--> ''Rarity gasped, and Twilight shifted her eyes toward her, concerned.''
--> "What?" ''Twilight said.'' "The book's already in terrible condition. It looks ancient. Really, how valuable can a book like that be?"
--> ''Rainbow Dash facehoofed for a second time.''
--> ''Rarity gasped, and Twilight shifted her eyes toward her, concerned.''
--> "What?" ''Twilight said.'' "The book's already in terrible condition. It looks ancient. Really, how valuable can a book like that be?"
--> ''Rainbow Dash facehoofed for a second time.''
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''Rarity gasped, and Twilight shifted her eyes toward her, concerned.
-->
"What?" ''Twilight said.'' "The book's already in terrible condition. It looks ancient. Really, how valuable can a book like that
-->
''Rainbow Dash facehoofed for a second time.''
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* SchizoTech: Okay, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E14SuitedForSuccess DJ tables]], and [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E21OverABarrel horse-drawn steam locomotives]] are understandable, but Madam Orange's [[BuffySpeak helicopter balloon thingy]] is a little harder to explain.
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Not anymore.]]
* ShoutOut: The author points out that in "Act II - Part 7: Loyalties", Pinkie's speech is based off of the Doctor's in the ''Series/DoctorWho'' episode "Bad Wolf". [[spoiler: Funny, considering how Doctor Whooves is involved with the plot.]]
** [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Not anymore.]]
* ShoutOut: The author points out that in "Act II - Part 7: Loyalties", Pinkie's speech is based off of the Doctor's in the ''Series/DoctorWho'' episode "Bad Wolf". [[spoiler: Funny, considering how Doctor Whooves is involved with the plot.]]
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* SchizoTech: Okay, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E14SuitedForSuccess DJ tables]], and [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E21OverABarrel horse-drawn steam locomotives]] are understandable, but Madam Orange's [[BuffySpeak helicopter balloon thingy]] is was a little harder to explain.
**explain (at least before [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite Not anymore.]]
"Sweet and Elite"]] aired in canon).
*ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The author points out that in "Act II - Part 7: Loyalties", Pinkie's speech is based off of the Doctor's in the ''Series/DoctorWho'' episode "Bad Wolf". [[spoiler: Funny, considering how Doctor Whooves is involved with the plot.]]
**
*
** The author points out that in "Act II - Part 7: Loyalties", Pinkie's speech is based off of the Doctor's in the ''Series/DoctorWho'' episode "Bad Wolf". [[spoiler: Funny, considering how Doctor Whooves is involved with the plot.]]
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* ZeppelinsFromAnotherWorld: Our world has a hot air balloon. The other world has a ''[[SoCoolItsAwesome freaking airship]]''.
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* ZeppelinsFromAnotherWorld: Our world has a hot air balloon. The other world has a ''[[SoCoolItsAwesome freaking airship]]''.''freaking airship''.
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* RunningGag: Everypony that gets stranded in the moonverse Ponyville ends up useing 'Trixie' as an alias.
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* RunningGag: Everypony Everyone that gets stranded in the moonverse Ponyville ends up useing 'Trixie' as an alias.
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* RunningGag: Every pony that gets stranded in the moonverse Ponyville ends up useing 'Trixie' as an alias.
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* RunningGag: Every pony Everypony that gets stranded in the moonverse Ponyville ends up useing 'Trixie' as an alias.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorldTrappedInAnotherWorld: Sunside Twilight initially, though once her friends catch up with her it become more a question fo chosing to stay until Nightmare Moon is defeated.
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* [[FacePalm Face Hoof]] In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
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* [[FacePalm Face Hoof]] FacePalm: In Chapter 10 (chapter 1 of Act II), Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie pass the time playing I Spy.
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* RunningGag: Everypony that gets stranded in the moonverse Ponyville ends up useing 'Trixie' as an alias.
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* RunningGag: Everypony Every pony that gets stranded in the moonverse Ponyville ends up useing 'Trixie' as an alias.
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* [[TrappedInAnotherWorld Trapped In an Alternate Dimension]]TrappedInAnotherWorld
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* PaintingTheMedium: Each chapter begins with a placard colored red or blue (or a gradient). The chapters with a red title are set entirely in the canon universe, while the blue chapters are set entirely in the alternate universe. The gradient chapters focus on both. [[{{Fringe}} Sound familiar?]]
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* PaintingTheMedium: Each chapter begins with a placard colored red or blue (or a gradient). The chapters with a red title are set entirely in the canon universe, while the blue chapters are set entirely in the alternate universe. The gradient chapters focus on both. [[{{Fringe}} [[Series/{{Fringe}} Sound familiar?]]
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** [[WordOfGod According to the author]], parts of the story, including the alternating universes throughout the first act, is inspired by {{Fringe}} doing the same at the start of Season 3.
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** [[WordOfGod According to the author]], parts of the story, including the alternating universes throughout the first act, is inspired by {{Fringe}} Series/{{Fringe}} doing the same at the start of Season 3.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Rarity delivers a truly scathing one to [[spoiler:Madame Orange]]. Surprisingly, [[BigBad Nightmare Moon]] of all ponies later agrees with her.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Rarity delivers a truly scathing one to [[spoiler:Madame Orange]]. Surprisingly, [[BigBad Nightmare Moon]] of all ponies later agrees with her.
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** A projected image of [[spoiler: Stone Wall]] says "[[StarWars Help me, Twilight Sparkle. You're my only hope.]]"
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** A projected image of [[spoiler: Stone Wall]] says "[[StarWars "[[Franchise/StarWars Help me, Twilight Sparkle. You're my only hope.]]"
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* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: It turns out the sonic rainboom helped prevent Fluttershy from ''cutting off her own wings''.]]