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* AdaptationalVillainy: While Vernon was abusive towards Harry in canon, he was never as violent or cruel as he gets portrayed here.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:In the end, Harry dies after Vernon gives him a particularly terrible beating.]]
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: At first, a shotgun silencer seems like a HandWave to prevent the neighbors from hearing Vernon shooting Hedwig, but shotgun suppressors actually exist, and while the sound of the shotgun blast is still rather loud, it's safer for the shooter's hearing.
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* AbusiveParents: The entire premise depends on Unvle Vernon and one of his neighbours being this.
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* AbusiveParents: The entire premise depends on Unvle Uncle Vernon and one of his neighbours being this.this.
* AluminumChristmasTrees: At first, a shotgun silencer seems like a HandWave to prevent the neighbors from hearing Vernon shooting Hedwig, but shotgun suppressors actually exist, and while the sound of the shotgun blast is still rather loud, it's safer for the shooter's hearing.
* AluminumChristmasTrees: At first, a shotgun silencer seems like a HandWave to prevent the neighbors from hearing Vernon shooting Hedwig, but shotgun suppressors actually exist, and while the sound of the shotgun blast is still rather loud, it's safer for the shooter's hearing.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHer: Poor [[spoiler:Hedwig gets shot by Vernon early on]].
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* DroppedABridgeOnHer: Poor [[spoiler:Hedwig Hedwig gets shot by Vernon early on]].on.
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* LastNameBasis: Vernon calls Potter, his own nephew, by his surname.
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* TeenPregnancy: At the end, it's revealed that [[spoiler:Maria]] is pregnant with Harry's child.
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* TeenPregnancy: At the end, it's revealed that [[spoiler:Maria]] is pregnant with Harry's child. Both parties are presumably somewhere in their mid-teens.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Harry and Maria, naturally for [[ClicheStorm these kinds of stories]].
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Harry and Maria, naturally for [[ClicheStorm these kinds of stories]].Maria fall in love immediately upon meeting each other.
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%%* DroppedABridgeOnHer: Poor [[spoiler:Hedwig]].
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%%* {{Hammerspace}}: Where Uncle Vernon seems to keep his shotgun, and padlocks.
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%%-->He took her to the garden shed where he first laid eyes on her. Her face was bruised and bleeding, like the rest of her body. She was the most beautiful thing that Harry had ever seen.
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* SpoilerTitle: The title gives away how the story plays out with [[spoiler:Harry ultimately dying]].
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* SpoilerTitle: The title gives away how the story plays out out, with [[spoiler:Harry ultimately dying]].
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I just realized that this entry doesn’t elaborate on how old Harry and Maria are supposed to be. Commenting out until further notice.
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