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* {{Hammerspace}}: Jasmine and Myrddin both have one for their Focii. It apparently works by storing them in their soul.
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* {{Hammerspace}}: Jasmine and Myrddin both have one for their Focii.Foci. It apparently works by storing them in their soul.
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* YouAlreadyChangedThePast: In full effect, thanks to Jasmine's lack of knowledge in history. Because she doesn't know what she can and cannot change, she's comfortable just going with the flow, which allows her to maintain the StableTimeLoop.
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* YouAlreadyChangedThePast: In full effect, thanks to Jasmine's lack of knowledge in history. Because she doesn't know what she can and cannot change, she's comfortable just going with the flow, which allows her to maintain the StableTimeLoop. \n It does, however, mean that she's quite upset about falling in love with Myrddin, because she knows enough history to know that he's doomed.
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* TimeTravel: What kicked off the plot.
* TheAgeless: Jasmine
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* ThePowerOfHate: The unforgivables.
* TheSlowPath: Jasmine.
* TheSlowPath: Jasmine.
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->''"In one world, it was Harry Potter who defeated Voldemort. In another, it was Jasmine Potter instead. But her victory wasn't the end - her struggles continued long afterward. And began long, long before."''
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'''Official Summary''': In one world, it was Harry Potter who defeated Voldemort. In another, it was Jasmine Potter instead. But her victory wasn't the end - her struggles continued long afterward. And began long, long before.
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* YouHaveAlreadyChangedThePast: In full effect, thanks to Jasmine's lack of knowledge in history. Because she doesn't know what she can and cannot change, she's comfortable just going with the flow, which allows her to maintain the StableTimeLoop.
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* YouHaveAlreadyChangedThePast: YouAlreadyChangedThePast: In full effect, thanks to Jasmine's lack of knowledge in history. Because she doesn't know what she can and cannot change, she's comfortable just going with the flow, which allows her to maintain the StableTimeLoop.
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'''Official Summary''': In one world, it was Harry Potter who defeated Voldemort. In another, it was Jasmine Potter instead. But her victory wasn't the end - her struggles continued long afterward. And began long, long before. (fem!Harry, powerful!Harry, sporadic updates)
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'''Official Summary''': In one world, it was Harry Potter who defeated Voldemort. In another, it was Jasmine Potter instead. But her victory wasn't the end - her struggles continued long afterward. And began long, long before. (fem!Harry, powerful!Harry, sporadic updates)
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* AncientGreece: Jasmine resided here after the sinking of Atlantis. She fled to ImperialChina after the people in Greece started calling her a goddess.
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* ImperialChina: Jasmine fled here after the debacle in AncientGreece, right before the Shang Dynasty's collapse.
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* ImperialChina: Jasmine fled here after the debacle in AncientGreece, UsefulNotes/AncientGreece, right before the Shang Dynasty's collapse.
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* UnwantedFalseFaith: After the sinking of {{Atlantis}}, Jasmine spent several decades in AncientGreece, trying to cope with the grief by gardening. This led to the people to mistaking her as a goddess; when she finally found out, she was so embarrassed that she fled to ImperialChina.
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* UnwantedFalseFaith: After the sinking of {{Atlantis}}, Jasmine spent several decades in AncientGreece, UsefulNotes/AncientGreece, trying to cope with the grief by gardening. This led to the people to mistaking her as a goddess; when she finally found out, she was so embarrassed that she fled to ImperialChina.
