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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after Twilight was rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed.

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[[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] Done]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after Twilight was rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed.




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!!Tropes for "Even As..." are:

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* HeroicBSOD: After her friends leave, Twilight is described as feeling hollow and empty.

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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
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After her friends leave, Twilight is described as feeling hollow and empty.


* JerkassRealization: Pinkie gets this (with the help of [[SplitPersonality Pinkamena]]) when she realizes that Twilight's never been in a fight with her friends and family, and doesn't know ''how'' to deal with it. But by the time she rushes back to the throne rooms, Twilight already left.

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* JerkassRealization: Pinkie gets this (with the help of [[SplitPersonality Pinkamena]]) when she realizes that Twilight's never been in a fight with her friends and family, and doesn't know ''how'' to deal with it. But by the time she rushes back to the throne rooms, [[YouAreTooLate Twilight already left.]]


---> '''Princess Celestia''': “Twilight Velvet. Your daughter is fine. I assure you. I know my student just as well as you know your daughter and we both know that she’s-“
---> '''Twilight Velvet''': “Most definitely '''not''' fine.”
---> '''Twilight Velvet''': “I do ever so apologize, Princess, but I must correct you on one little thing. Twilight may be your student, but she is my daughter. And she will always be my daughter. I know Twilight. I’ve known her for far longer than you have, and I know her far better than you ever can, because there are things she would never bare to you. I know her pain, I know her fears, things that you could never understand, because you are a goddess. A being above us. And I respect that. I honor you as my ruler, but I will never honor you as my sister, or as a fellow mother. Now, '''move aside''', so I can save the mare that you helped break.”

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---> '''Princess -->'''Princess Celestia''': “Twilight Twilight Velvet. Your daughter is fine. I assure you. I know my student just as well as you know your daughter and we both know that she’s-“
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she’s-\\
'''Twilight Velvet''': “Most Most definitely '''not''' fine.
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'''Twilight Velvet''': “I I do ever so apologize, Princess, but I must correct you on one little thing. Twilight may be your student, but she is my daughter. And she will always be my daughter. I know Twilight. I’ve known her for far longer than you have, and I know her far better than you ever can, because there are things she would never bare to you. I know her pain, I know her fears, things that you could never understand, because you are a goddess. A being above us. And I respect that. I honor you as my ruler, but I will never honor you as my sister, or as a fellow mother. Now, '''move aside''', so I can save the mare that you helped break.


* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony call out their bearers as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we only hear Loyalty's in full.]]

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:The The Mane 5 (sans Twilight) get this from [[spoiler:their own Elements of Harmony call out their bearers Harmony]], stating that [[WhatTheHellHero how they treated Twilight]] [[spoiler:means they are no longer worthy as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we bearers]]. Unfortunately(?), only hear Loyalty's the part [[spoiler:from Loyalty to Rainbow Dash]] is given in full.]]


* AccusationFic: Specifically, an accusation of Twilight's abandonment in [[Recap/MyLittleponyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25&26ACanterlotWedding the season 2 finale]].

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* AccusationFic: Specifically, an accusation of Twilight's abandonment in [[Recap/MyLittleponyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25&26ACanterlotWedding [[Recap/MyLittleponyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25ACanterlotWeddingPart1 the season ]][[Recap/MyLittleponyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 2 finale]].


* AccusationFic

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* AccusationFicAccusationFic: Specifically, an accusation of Twilight's abandonment in [[Recap/MyLittleponyFriendshipIsMagicS2E25&26ACanterlotWedding the season 2 finale]].



* AlternateUniverseFic



* WhatTheHellHero: Pinkie Pie gets this from ''Pinkamena'', her split personality, who calls her out for basically abandoning Twilight.
** [[spoiler: The Mane 6 get this from the ''Elements of Harmony'' themselves when they enter the chamber holding them, accusing them of betraying their element for leaving Twilight alone in despair. They finish by rejecting them as Bearers. It is especially hard on Pinkie when her Element now sounds like Pinkamena.]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Pinkie Pie gets this from ''Pinkamena'', her split personality, who calls her out for basically abandoning Twilight.
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Twilight. The Mane 6 get this from the ''Elements [[spoiler: ''the Elements of Harmony'' themselves Harmony themselves'' when they enter the chamber holding them, them]], accusing them of [[spoiler: betraying their element respective elements for leaving Twilight alone in despair. They The Elements finish by [[BrokenPedestal rejecting them as Bearers. Bearers]]]]. It is especially hard on Pinkie when [[spoiler:when her Element now sounds like Pinkamena.]]
Pinkamena]].

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** Celestia and the rest of the Mane Six are left like this after [[spoiler: the Elements rejected them]]. Fortunately, Velvet convinces them to not give up.


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* RousingSpeech: Velvet gives one to snap the rest of the Mane Six and Celestia out of their collective HeroicBSOD after [[spoiler: the Elements reject them]], telling them that while they made mistakes, they can make up for them, but only if they don't give up and keep fighting.


* AtLeastIAdmitIt: [[spoiler: Discord]] says that while he messes with ponies, at least he's upfront about it, as opposed to Celestia, who manipulates ponies for the greater good.



* EvilMentor: [[spoiler: Discord]] quickly takes Twilight under his wing and turning her against everything Celestia taught her.



* SympathyForTheDevil: Twilight in her depressed state gains some sympathy for [[spoiler: ''Discord'', thinking he was just another abandoned misunderstood creature like herself. She ends up freeing him from his stone prison]].

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* SympathyForTheDevil: Twilight in her depressed state gains some sympathy for [[spoiler: ''Discord'', thinking he was just another abandoned misunderstood creature like herself. She ends up freeing him from his stone prison]].prison]].
* UnreliableNarrator: The author is quick to admit to this about the perspective from the various characters.


* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech; [[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony call out their bearers as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we only hear Loyalty's in full.]]

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech; TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony call out their bearers as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we only hear Loyalty's in full.]]


[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after she rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed.

A sequel "Even As" has been posted and can be viewed [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179868/even-as here]]. Tropes for that story go on this page.

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after she Twilight was rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed.

A sequel sequel, "Even As" As...", has been posted and can be viewed [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179868/even-as here]]. Tropes for that story go on this page.
page as well.



* ActionMom: Twilight Velvet, who aside from the MamaBear moment, is highly trained in emphatic spells and uses them quite effectively against some changelings.

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* ActionMom: Twilight Velvet, who who, aside from the MamaBear moment, is highly trained in emphatic spells and uses them quite effectively against some changelings.



* DespairEventHorizon: Because Twilight wasn't imprisoned in the caves by Chrysalis, she crosses this when she thinks her friends and family have abandoned her. [[spoiler:She ends up freeing ''Discord'' now seeing him as another abandoned creature. When the Mane 6, Celestia, and Twilight's mom enter the safe containing the Elements of Harmony, her element has become ''pitch black'' and crying in despair.]]
* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: The fic ends with the Changelings overrunning Canterlot, Twilight missing, Discord free, and the Bearers being rejected by the Elements of Harmony.]]
* ForWantOfANail: Chrysalis doesn't imprison Twilight in the caverns, and is thus left by her in despair.

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* DespairEventHorizon: Because Twilight wasn't imprisoned in the caves by Chrysalis, she crosses this when she thinks her friends and family have abandoned her. [[spoiler:She ends up freeing ''Discord'' now seeing him as another abandoned creature. When the rest of the Mane 6, Celestia, and Twilight's mom enter the safe containing the Elements of Harmony, her element has become ''pitch black'' and crying in despair.]]
* [[spoiler: DownerEnding: [[spoiler: The fic ends with the Changelings overrunning Canterlot, Twilight missing, Discord free, and the Bearers being rejected by the Elements of Harmony.]]
* ForWantOfANail: Chrysalis doesn't imprison Twilight in the caverns, and is thus left by instead leaving her in despair.



* MamaBear: Twilight Velvet demonstrates this when Princess Celestia tries to block her from looking for Twilight, and ''orders'' her, not ''requests'' her to stand aside. Even the guards were impressed.

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* MamaBear: Twilight Velvet demonstrates this when Princess Celestia tries to block her from looking for Twilight, and ''orders'' her, not ''requests'' her her, to stand aside. Even the guards were impressed.



* NoEnding: The story ends quite abruptly after [[spoiler:the Elements of Harmony reject their Bearers]].



* PragmaticVillainy: Chrysalis does not imprison Twilight beneath the mines when she realizes she is too broken to be a threat to her.

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* PragmaticVillainy: Chrysalis does not imprison Twilight beneath the mines when she realizes she Twilight is too broken to be a threat to her.her.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech; [[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony call out their bearers as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we only hear Loyalty's in full.]]



* [[spoiler: TitleDrop: In the last line of the story, Velvet asks this question to the Bearers and Celestia when she sees the now black and inert Element of Magic.]]

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* [[spoiler: TitleDrop: In the last line of the story, Velvet asks this question to the Bearers and Celestia [[spoiler: when she sees the now black and inert Element of Magic.]]



* SympathyForTheDevil: Twilight in her depressed state gains some sympathy for [[spoiler: ''Discord'', thinking he was just another abandoned misunderstood creature like herself. She ends up freeing him from his stone prison.]]

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* SympathyForTheDevil: Twilight in her depressed state gains some sympathy for [[spoiler: ''Discord'', thinking he was just another abandoned misunderstood creature like herself. She ends up freeing him from his stone prison.]]prison]].

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* DrivenToSuicide: Twilight comes ''this'' close to stepping off a ledge after being abandoned by her friends. She only pulls back from it after [[spoiler: her epiphany about Discord]].
* EtTuBrute: Twilight takes all of her friends leaving her hard, but Spike's and Applejack's hit the hardest, because they're the only ones she can't rationalize.
* HearingVoices: Twilight starts to after her friends leave.
* HeroicBSOD: After her friends leave, Twilight is described as feeling hollow and empty.
* OnceMoreWithClarity: The first chapter revisits the first two from the previous story, showing Twilight's HeroicBSOD after her friends leave, and her [[spoiler: freeing Discord]], from her point of view.


A sequel "Even As" has been posted and can be viewed [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179868/even-as here]].

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A sequel "Even As" has been posted and can be viewed [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/179868/even-as here]].
here]]. Tropes for that story go on this page.


* Downer Beginning: The fic begins with Twilight in despair over her abandonment by her friends [[spoiler: and her freeing Discord.]]

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* Downer Beginning: CallBack: Twilight learned a stone reversal spell after her [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipISMagicS1E17StareMaster petrification by a cockatrice.]] [[spoiler: She uses this spell to free Discord.]]
* DownerBeginning:
The fic begins with Twilight in despair over her abandonment by her friends [[spoiler: and her freeing Discord.]]
* SympathyForTheDevil: Twilight in her depressed state gains some sympathy for [[spoiler: ''Discord'', thinking he was just another abandoned misunderstood creature like herself. She ends up freeing him from his stone prison.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after she rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed, with a sequel promised by the author.

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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after she rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed, with a sequel promised by the author.
completed.



** [[spoiler: The Mane 6 get this from the ''Elements of Harmony'' themselves when they enter the chamber holding them, accusing them of betraying their element for leaving Twilight alone in despair. They finish by rejecting them as Bearers. It is especially hard on Pinkie when her Element now sounds like Pinkamena.]]

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** [[spoiler: The Mane 6 get this from the ''Elements of Harmony'' themselves when they enter the chamber holding them, accusing them of betraying their element for leaving Twilight alone in despair. They finish by rejecting them as Bearers. It is especially hard on Pinkie when her Element now sounds like Pinkamena.]]

!!Tropes for "Even As..." are:

* Downer Beginning: The fic begins with Twilight in despair over her abandonment by her friends [[spoiler: and her freeing Discord.
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