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** [[spoiler:Batel's father]] is just short of explicitly abusive. After all, [[spoiler:he drove Batel to summoning Chaos just to try and get rid of him...]]
*** [[spoiler:Turned up to eleven in the chapter where he becomes a daemonhost and Batel is physically unable to move from the terror of facing him again.]]
*** [[spoiler:Turned up to eleven in the chapter where he becomes a daemonhost and Batel is physically unable to move from the terror of facing him again.]]
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** [[spoiler:Batel's father]] is just short of explicitly abusive. After all, [[spoiler:he drove Batel to summoning Chaos just to try and get rid of him...]]
***]] [[spoiler:Turned up to eleven in the chapter where he becomes a daemonhost and Batel is physically unable to move from the terror of facing him again.]]
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* ActionGirl: A given, considering their origins... [[spoiler:and most of the female cast, which is definitely not such a given]].
* ActionSurvivor: Michael, Vincent, Alice and Batel...which is rather funny considering that all 4 of them are literal giants (say, ''Anime/GunBuster''-scale) when compared to the miniatures.
* ActionSurvivor: Michael, Vincent, Alice and Batel...which is rather funny considering that all 4 of them are literal giants (say, ''Anime/GunBuster''-scale) when compared to the miniatures.
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** Michael, the KidWithTheLeash to at least four (miniaturized) [[BadassArmy Badass Armies]], including SpaceMarines, [[MachineWorship tech-priests]], {{Badass Normal}}s, and badasses in general. Oh, and a {{Tsundere}}. [[spoiler:He works as an exterminator.]]
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** Michael, the KidWithTheLeash to at least four (miniaturized) [[BadassArmy Badass Armies]], {{Badass Arm|y}}ies, including SpaceMarines, [[MachineWorship tech-priests]], {{Badass Normal}}s, and badasses in general. Oh, and a {{Tsundere}}. [[spoiler:He works as an exterminator.]]
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* ApocalypseMaiden: [[spoiler:The Cultist]] may be going this way.
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* TheAtoner: Comes with the job description of [[spoiler:being a Penitent Witch for Batel]].
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* AuthorAvatar: Vincent, per Word Of God.
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* BadassBookworm: Vincent kind of plays this straight, since he's a military otaku with lots of spare time and Website/{{Youtube}}. Averts IJustShotMarvinInTheFace because of this. However, Vincent then semi-subverts this since he's not at all fit (A quick run from one side of a parking lot to the other? Exhausting enough to get him mildly out of breath) and [[spoiler:gets his ass handed to him by the Daemonhost]].
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* BadassBookworm: Vincent kind of plays this straight, since he's a military otaku with lots of spare time and Website/{{Youtube}}.Platform/{{Youtube}}. Averts IJustShotMarvinInTheFace because of this. However, Vincent then semi-subverts this since he's not at all fit (A quick run from one side of a parking lot to the other? Exhausting enough to get him mildly out of breath) and [[spoiler:gets his ass handed to him by the Daemonhost]].
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** [[spoiler:Justicar Amadeus and Canoness Samisha]] are definitely headed this way. Their parting gesture when about to head into battle? A knuckle tap. Others are starting to form, but whether its an actual couple or not is up to debate.
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** [[spoiler:Justicar Amadeus and Canoness Samisha]] are definitely headed this way. Their parting gesture when about to head into battle? A knuckle tap. Others are starting to form, but whether its it's an actual couple or not is up to for debate.
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* BetaCouple: Several {{Token Romance}}s are the background.
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Emma]] during the battle with the forces of Chaos. [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Spectacularly so]].
* BlessedWithSuck / CursedWithAwesome: Turns out, [[spoiler:both Michael and his sister are psykers]].
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Emma]] during the battle with the forces of Chaos. [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Spectacularly so]].
* BlessedWithSuck / CursedWithAwesome: Turns out, [[spoiler:both Michael and his sister are psykers]].
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Batel vs Ryan. Ready... ''[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge FIGHT!]]''
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* ChunkySalsaRule: Used whenever bolt weapons are involved.
* ClickHello: Tomas, using a Hell-Pistol.
* ClickHello: Tomas, using a Hell-Pistol.
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* CornerOfWoe: Alice spends Chapter 12 in one over the sheer insanity going on.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Silverite.
-->It was the strangled, near-panic cry of one of his men, “Brother Timmae“, and it was soon followed by the dakka dakka dakka of Silverite's [[GunsAkimbo twin bolters]]. Of course, that didn't last long until a roaring Ork stopped the firing. [[NoodleIncident A series of crunches and another dakka followed]]. The Ork's voice was next heard whimpering for mercy.
-->It was the strangled, near-panic cry of one of his men, “Brother Timmae“, and it was soon followed by the dakka dakka dakka of Silverite's [[GunsAkimbo twin bolters]]. Of course, that didn't last long until a roaring Ork stopped the firing. [[NoodleIncident A series of crunches and another dakka followed]]. The Ork's voice was next heard whimpering for mercy.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass:
** Silverite.
-->It --->It was the strangled, near-panic cry of one of his men, “Brother Timmae“, and it was soon followed by the dakka dakka dakka of Silverite's [[GunsAkimbo twin bolters]]. Of course, that didn't last long until a roaring Ork stopped the firing. [[NoodleIncident A series of crunches and another dakka followed]]. The Ork's voice was next heard whimpering for mercy.
** Silverite.
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** The named Grey Knights tend to be [=CMHBs=] or inverted; the three Grey Knights in Chapter 23 are more Crouching Badass Hidden Morons, since they are extremely badass but with a hint of moron (like feeding a normal human Space Marine-grade alcohol. For them its 'tipsy'. For [[spoiler:Michael]], its 'almost dead from alcohol poisoning'.)
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Batel vs the Daemonhost.]] Also a RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* CuteClumsyGirl: [[spoiler:Little!Zara]] and Ishabeth.
* CuteLittleFangs: Batel has either these or [[FangsAreEvil the not-so-cute variety]] depending on whether or not she's suffering from DemonicPossession.
* DarkActionGirl: [[spoiler:The Rose]] is a scarily competent one.
* [[spoiler:DemonicPossession]]: [[spoiler:Batel's step-father becomes a daemonhost.]]
** Although this may also [[spoiler:extend into MoreThanMindControl, if one listens to the Sorcerer's threats in Chapter 20]].
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Batel vs the Daemonhost.]] Also a RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* CuteClumsyGirl: [[spoiler:Little!Zara]] and Ishabeth.
* CuteLittleFangs: Batel has either these or [[FangsAreEvil the not-so-cute variety]] depending on whether or not she's suffering from DemonicPossession.
* DarkActionGirl: [[spoiler:The Rose]] is a scarily competent one.
* [[spoiler:DemonicPossession]]: [[spoiler:Batel's step-father becomes a daemonhost.]]
** Although this may also [[spoiler:extend into MoreThanMindControl, if one listens to the Sorcerer's threats in Chapter 20]].
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** The named Grey Knights tend to be [=CMHBs=] or inverted; the three Grey Knights in Chapter 23 are more Crouching Badass Hidden Morons, since they are extremely badass but with a hint of moron (like feeding a normal human Space Marine-grade alcohol. For them its it's 'tipsy'. For [[spoiler:Michael]], its it's 'almost dead from alcohol poisoning'.)
* %%* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Batel vs the Daemonhost.]] Also a RoaringRampageOfRevenge.
* %%* CuteClumsyGirl: [[spoiler:Little!Zara]] [[spoiler:Little Zara]] and Ishabeth.
* %%* CuteLittleFangs: Batel has either these or [[FangsAreEvil the not-so-cute variety]] depending on whether or not she's suffering from DemonicPossession.
* %%* DarkActionGirl: [[spoiler:The Rose]] is a scarily competent one.
*[[spoiler:DemonicPossession]]: DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Batel's step-father becomes a daemonhost.]]
**]] Although this may also [[spoiler:extend into MoreThanMindControl, if one listens to the Sorcerer's threats in Chapter 20]].
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* EvilCounterpart:
** A lot of the Imperials have these in the [[spoiler:Chaos forces]].
** [[spoiler:The Rose]] is played up as one for [[spoiler:Batel]].
* EvilLaugh: [[spoiler:The Chaos Sorcerer]] is ''not'' a nice man.
* EvilSoundsDeep:
** [[spoiler:The Daemonhost]] pulls this, along with VoiceOfTheLegion levels of distortion.
** Averted with [[spoiler:The Rose]], who has a very soft, seductive voice.
* EvilTwin: Although not an actual evil twin sibling, the [[spoiler:not!Zara]] comes real close. Comes with FalseCrucible.
** A lot of the Imperials have these in the [[spoiler:Chaos forces]].
** [[spoiler:The Rose]] is played up as one for [[spoiler:Batel]].
* EvilLaugh: [[spoiler:The Chaos Sorcerer]] is ''not'' a nice man.
* EvilSoundsDeep:
** [[spoiler:The Daemonhost]] pulls this, along with VoiceOfTheLegion levels of distortion.
** Averted with [[spoiler:The Rose]], who has a very soft, seductive voice.
* EvilTwin: Although not an actual evil twin sibling, the [[spoiler:not!Zara]] comes real close. Comes with FalseCrucible.
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* [[GratuitousJapanese Gratuitous Indonesian]]: Vincent commonly swears in Indonesian, [[JustifiedTrope since it's his native language]].
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Batel]], sort of, [[spoiler:since she wasn't quite a heel in the first place]].
* [[KnightOfCerebus Horde of Cerebus]]: [[spoiler:The Forces of Chaos, when summoned.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Batel]], sort of, [[spoiler:since she wasn't quite a heel in the first place]].
* [[KnightOfCerebus Horde of Cerebus]]: [[spoiler:The Forces of Chaos, when summoned.]]
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* [[GratuitousJapanese Gratuitous Indonesian]]: GratuitousJapanese: Vincent commonly swears in Indonesian, [[JustifiedTrope since it's his native language]].
* %%* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Batel]], sort of, [[spoiler:since she wasn't quite a heel in the first place]].
* [[KnightOfCerebus Horde of Cerebus]]: %%* KnightOfCerebus: [[spoiler:The Forces of Chaos, when summoned.]]
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* LargeHam: Any and all factions, as gloriously experienced back in the [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} source universe for this story]]. But [[spoiler:the Chaos Sorcerer seems to steal 40 minced-ham pies when he gets pissed off]]. Michael and Vincent also seem to be growing to enjoy the taste of scenery as well.
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* LargeHam: Any and all factions, as gloriously experienced back in the [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 source universe for this story]]. But [[spoiler:the Chaos Sorcerer seems to steal 40 minced-ham pies when he gets pissed off]]. Michael and Vincent also seem to be growing to enjoy the taste of scenery as well.
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* LighterAndSofter: Very much so in comparison to [[CrapsackWorld the]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality source]] [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} material]]. All the human, Eldar, Tau, and even ([[BloodKnight to some extent]]) Ork characters are decent people who actually care about their fellow soldiers and are even willing to ally with [[FantasticRacism xenos]] once they start getting adjusted to living in Michael's house.
* LittleMissSnarker: [[spoiler:Emma]], of all people. She apparently enjoys being this.
* LittleMissSnarker: [[spoiler:Emma]], of all people. She apparently enjoys being this.
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* LighterAndSofter: Very much so in comparison to [[CrapsackWorld the]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality source]] [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} [[TabletopGame/Warhammer40000 material]]. All the human, Eldar, Tau, and even ([[BloodKnight to some extent]]) Ork characters are decent people who actually care about their fellow soldiers and are even willing to ally with [[FantasticRacism xenos]] once they start getting adjusted to living in Michael's house.
* %%* LittleMissSnarker: [[spoiler:Emma]], of all people. She apparently enjoys being this.
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* {{Masquerade}}: [[spoiler:Michael tries to keep one up, but real people keep seeing through it.]]
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* MrExposition: Vincent. Named as such in-universe.
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* [[spoiler:NotQuiteDead: Eizak, with an absolutely ''delicious'' one-liner; (Answering whether the Last Rites should be administered) "That will ''not'' be necessary."]]
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* [[spoiler:NotQuiteDead: Eizak, NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Eizak, with an absolutely ''delicious'' one-liner; (Answering whether the Last Rites should be administered) "That will ''not'' be necessary."]]
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* OhNoNotAgain: Michael, Urual [[spoiler:to blacking out]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: Used by Michael and Vincent.
* RapeAsBackstory: Heavily implied with [[spoiler:Batel]] and almost stated word to word in case of [[spoiler:Rose]].
* RealityWarper: [[spoiler:Michael, in the mindscape. Temporarily, though.]]
* RedOniBlueOni: Justicar Amadeus and Grey Knight Silverite. Also a BokeAndTsukkomiRoutine.
* RapeAsBackstory: Heavily implied with [[spoiler:Batel]] and almost stated word to word in case of [[spoiler:Rose]].
* RealityWarper: [[spoiler:Michael, in the mindscape. Temporarily, though.]]
* RedOniBlueOni: Justicar Amadeus and Grey Knight Silverite. Also a BokeAndTsukkomiRoutine.
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* Rule34: Mentioned.
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* SadClown: [[spoiler:Vincent]]'s coping mechanism when [[spoiler:he's being attacked by a Daemonhost and the forces of Chaos]].
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* SexySantaDress: Used in the Christmas Omake, [[Stripperiffic especially the one made entirely of red and white ribbons]].
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* SexySantaDress: Used in the Christmas Omake, [[Stripperiffic [[{{Stripperiffic}} especially the one made entirely of red and white ribbons]].
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* ShrinkingViolet:
** Meliya.
** [[spoiler:Little!Zara]].
** Alice started out as one, but isn't anymore.
*** [[spoiler:Batel]] is her replacement.
* SlasherSmile:
** [[spoiler:Batel the Chaos Cultist]] pulls a jagged-toothed version of this during [[spoiler:her desperate attack on Michael and co.]]
** [[spoiler:As does the False Zara.]]
** [[spoiler: The Daemonhost as well.]]
** Meliya.
** [[spoiler:Little!Zara]].
** Alice started out as one, but isn't anymore.
*** [[spoiler:Batel]] is her replacement.
* SlasherSmile:
** [[spoiler:Batel the Chaos Cultist]] pulls a jagged-toothed version of this during [[spoiler:her desperate attack on Michael and co.]]
** [[spoiler:As does the False Zara.]]
** [[spoiler: The Daemonhost as well.]]
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* SupportingLeader: [[spoiler:Vincent]] is becoming this, [[spoiler:with him 'commanding' the various armies when they get attacked in Chapter 19]].
* SureLetsGoWithThat: This line: "Yeah...a warning shot, right?"
* SureLetsGoWithThat: This line: "Yeah...a warning shot, right?"
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* [[ThisIsMySide This Is My Room]]: Each of the factions have claimed their own territory. The Sisters of Battle in the attic (inside of two old-school doll houses that are now abbeys). The Guard have a bedroom to share with the Adeptus Mechanicus and the Inquisition. The Space Marines have a bedroom too, with their own Adeptus Mechanicus forces as well as the majority of the vehicles. The Orks have the basement. The Tau are stuffed in a corner of the living room. [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments The Eldar have the downstairs bathroom, and have only just figured out what the 'convenient landing pad' was used for]].
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* [[ThisIsMySide This Is My Room]]: ThisIsMySide: Each of the factions have claimed their own territory. The Sisters of Battle in the attic (inside of two old-school doll houses that are now abbeys). The Guard have a bedroom to share with the Adeptus Mechanicus and the Inquisition. The Space Marines have a bedroom too, with their own Adeptus Mechanicus forces as well as the majority of the vehicles. The Orks have the basement. The Tau are stuffed in a corner of the living room. [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments The Eldar have the downstairs bathroom, and have only just figured out what the 'convenient landing pad' was used for]].
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* {{Troperrific}}: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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* {{Troperrific}}: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, {{Shout Out}}s, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To omakes).
** To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
** To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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* {{Tsundere}}:
** [[spoiler:Zara]]. Oh so very much. Doesn't show her deredere side very much, though...but WhenSheSmiles...
** According to the author, the Howling Banshees are tsuntsun. [[OhCrap All.]][[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Of. Them.]]
* UnfazedEveryman: Michael, and also Vincent (his reaction to a 1/56 scale army capable of massive destruction? [[{{Squee}} Nerdgasm]].)
* [[spoiler:TheVamp]]: [[spoiler:The Rose]] tries to be one, but fails utterly when [[spoiler:she picked the [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments one flower that Michael was allergic to]] as her theme flower.]]
* WarriorPoet: The Grey Knights are fond of this.
** [[spoiler:Zara]]. Oh so very much. Doesn't show her deredere side very much, though...but WhenSheSmiles...
** According to the author, the Howling Banshees are tsuntsun. [[OhCrap All.]][[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Of. Them.]]
* UnfazedEveryman: Michael, and also Vincent (his reaction to a 1/56 scale army capable of massive destruction? [[{{Squee}} Nerdgasm]].)
* [[spoiler:TheVamp]]: [[spoiler:The Rose]] tries to be one, but fails utterly when [[spoiler:she picked the [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments one flower that Michael was allergic to]] as her theme flower.]]
* WarriorPoet: The Grey Knights are fond of this.
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* WhenSheSmiles:
** [[spoiler:Little!Zara, who combines it with SecurityCling.]]
** Any of the other traumatized girls and boys in the story.
* WithDueRespect
** [[spoiler:Little!Zara, who combines it with SecurityCling.]]
** Any of the other traumatized girls and boys in the story.
* WithDueRespect
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* {{Aesop}}: Do not touch tanks, or their gunners will ''shoot you''. This leads to...
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HilarityEnsues as Michael tries to cope with the miniature freeloaders in his home, and they try to cope with Michael and the concept (not to mention execution) of living peacefully with each other.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5474237/1/40k_ToyHammer ToyHammer]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' FanFic written by Rogue Psyker (aka Rogue Vector) (who also wrote ''Fanfic/ZerosShock'') which begins when Michael is dropped off at his home by his [[SelfInsert friend]], only to find that most of his house has been turned into a warzone between the various races of the 40K universe: multiple Space Marine chapters, [[RedShirtArmy Imperial Guard]] regiments, [[AmazonBrigade Sisters of Battle]], [[KnightTemplar Grey Knights]], and the attached elements of the [[MachineCult Adeptus Mechanicus]], as well as the major xenos factions: Eldar, Tau and Orks. The 'twist' in this is that, for reasons that have only been hinted at to date, all of the armies and their respective weaponry, mecha, and tanks have been shrunk to the size of the miniatures from the game...but their weapons still work just fine.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5474237/1/40k_ToyHammer ToyHammer]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' FanFic written by Rogue Psyker (aka Rogue Vector) (who also wrote ''Fanfic/ZerosShock'') which begins when Michael is dropped off at his home by his [[SelfInsert friend]], only to find that most of his house has been turned into a warzone between the various races of the 40K universe: multiple Space Marine chapters, [[RedShirtArmy Imperial Guard]] regiments, [[AmazonBrigade Sisters of Battle]], [[KnightTemplar Grey Knights]], and the attached elements of the [[MachineCult Adeptus Mechanicus]], as well as the major xenos factions: Eldar, Tau and Orks. The 'twist' in this is that, for reasons that have only been hinted at to date, all of the armies and their respective weaponry, mecha, and tanks have been shrunk to the size of the miniatures from the game...but their weapons still work just fine.
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* CornerOfWoe: Alice spends Chapter 12 in one over the sheer insanity going on.
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** Michael, Vincent and Alice play (and sometimes switch around) the roles of TheHero, TheSmartGuy and TheChick.
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** Michael, Vincent and Alice play (and sometimes switch around) the roles of TheHero, TheSmartGuy and TheChick.TheHeart.
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* SturgeonsLaw : Mentioned.
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* CryCute: Of all people, [[spoiler:Little!Zara]].
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** [[spoiler:Little!Zara, who combines it with SecurityCling and CryCute.]]
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** [[spoiler:Little!Zara, who combines it with SecurityCling and CryCute.SecurityCling.]]
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* ThisIsGoingToSuck: A semi-reclusive artist (who had just had his legs sprayed by miniature machine guns) and a nerd run across a parking lot while being chased by an ApologeticAttacker with a daemonically possessed KnifeNut. They're out of breath by the time they've gone halfway. KnifeNut is just about at their heels.
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* ThisIsGoingToSuck: A semi-reclusive artist (who had just had his legs sprayed by miniature machine guns) and a nerd run across a parking lot while being chased by an ApologeticAttacker with a daemonically possessed KnifeNut.knife nut. They're out of breath by the time they've gone halfway. KnifeNut is just about at their heels.
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%%* GangstaStyle: Attempted, but [[RealityEnsues the pistol stovepiped]].
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%%* GangstaStyle: Attempted, but [[RealityEnsues the pistol stovepiped]].stovepiped.
* IJustShotMarvinInTheFace: Also, when the poser gangsta tries shooting his Colt .45 GangstaStyle and it 'jams' (it actually stovepipes), he tosses it away as useless. When the BadassBookworm gets a hold of it, guess what?
** While Michael agrees with the Orks that there is no such thing as "Enuff Dakka," there ''is'' such a thing as "Time and place for Dakka." Since they're living in the basement, if they decide to start shooting things, they could bring the entire house down on top of them. The Orks are forced to agree.
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* RealityEnsues:
** A semi-reclusive artist (who had just had his legs sprayed by miniature machine guns) and a nerd run across a parking lot while being chased by an ApologeticAttacker with a daemonically possessed KnifeNut. They're out of breath by the time they've gone halfway. KnifeNut is just about at their heels.
** Also, when the poser gangsta tries shooting his Colt .45 GangstaStyle and it 'jams' (it actually stovepipes), he tosses it away as useless. When the BadassBookworm gets a hold of it, guess what?
** While Michael agrees with the Orks that there is no such thing as "Enuff Dakka," there ''is'' such a thing as "Time and place for Dakka." Since they're living in the basement, if they decide to start shooting things, they could bring the entire house down on top of them. The Orks are forced to agree.
** A semi-reclusive artist (who had just had his legs sprayed by miniature machine guns) and a nerd run across a parking lot while being chased by an ApologeticAttacker with a daemonically possessed KnifeNut. They're out of breath by the time they've gone halfway. KnifeNut is just about at their heels.
** Also, when the poser gangsta tries shooting his Colt .45 GangstaStyle and it 'jams' (it actually stovepipes), he tosses it away as useless. When the BadassBookworm gets a hold of it, guess what?
** While Michael agrees with the Orks that there is no such thing as "Enuff Dakka," there ''is'' such a thing as "Time and place for Dakka." Since they're living in the basement, if they decide to start shooting things, they could bring the entire house down on top of them. The Orks are forced to agree.
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->"In the [[GrimDark grim darkness]] of the 21st century, there is only boredom."
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->"In the [[GrimDark grim darkness]] darkness of the 21st century, there is only boredom."
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* FangThpeak: Batel
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* FastballSpecial: Used by [[spoiler:Silverite and some Orks]].
* FemmeFatale: The Rose of Slaanesh. What, did you think her name was just for show?
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Every miniature in the story.
* FiveManBand:
** TheHero: Michael
** TheLancer: Alice, now Miles
** SupportingLeader: Vincent
** TheChick: Batel
** TheBigGuy: [[{{Irony}} The minis]]
* FunetikAksent: The Orks, obviously.
* FunSize: All the minis [[spoiler:and the Emperor as well.]]
* GangstaStyle: Attempted, but [[RealityEnsues the pistol stovepiped]].
* FemmeFatale: The Rose of Slaanesh. What, did you think her name was just for show?
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Every miniature in the story.
* FiveManBand:
** TheHero: Michael
** TheLancer: Alice, now Miles
** SupportingLeader: Vincent
** TheChick: Batel
** TheBigGuy: [[{{Irony}} The minis]]
* FunetikAksent: The Orks, obviously.
* FunSize: All the minis [[spoiler:and the Emperor as well.]]
* GangstaStyle: Attempted, but [[RealityEnsues the pistol stovepiped]].
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** TheHero: Michael
** TheLancer: Alice, now Miles
** SupportingLeader: Vincent
** TheChick: Batel
** TheBigGuy: [[{{Irony}} The minis]]
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* GenreShift: From a whimsical GagSeries to a more serious and CrazyAwesome (but still funny) epic tale that twists the canon while still respecting it, showing us what happens when the more reasonable minds of the GrimDark future try to co-exist.
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* GenreShift: From a whimsical GagSeries to a more serious and CrazyAwesome (but still funny) epic tale that twists the canon while still respecting it, showing us what happens when the more reasonable minds of the GrimDark future try to co-exist.
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And then, the fun ends (and starts) with [[spoiler:Chaos making their rude entrance]]. The fic's last complete update on 5/21/2012; future updates will appear in pieces on Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom before being posted on FF.net, such as the 3/26/2013 update found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/40k-toyhammer.225408/ here.]]
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And then, the fun ends (and starts) with [[spoiler:Chaos making their rude entrance]]. The fic's last complete update on 5/21/2012; future updates will appear in pieces on Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom before being posted on FF.net, such as the 3/26/2013 update found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/40k-toyhammer.225408/ here.]]
]] However, the story hasn't been updated in over five years, making it a DeadFic.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5474237/1/40k_ToyHammer ToyHammer]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' FanFic written by Rogue Psyker (aka Rogue Vector) (who also wrote ''FanFic/ZeroShock'') which begins when Michael is dropped off at his home by his [[SelfInsert friend]], only to find that most of his house has been turned into a warzone between the various races of the 40K universe: multiple Space Marine chapters, [[RedShirtArmy Imperial Guard]] regiments, [[AmazonBrigade Sisters of Battle]], [[KnightTemplar Grey Knights]], and the attached elements of the [[MachineCult Adeptus Mechanicus]], as well as the major xenos factions: Eldar, Tau and Orks. The 'twist' in this is that, for reasons that have only been hinted at to date, all of the armies and their respective weaponry, mecha, and tanks have been shrunk to the size of the miniatures from the game...but their weapons still work just fine.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5474237/1/40k_ToyHammer ToyHammer]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' FanFic written by Rogue Psyker (aka Rogue Vector) (who also wrote ''FanFic/ZeroShock'') ''Fanfic/ZerosShock'') which begins when Michael is dropped off at his home by his [[SelfInsert friend]], only to find that most of his house has been turned into a warzone between the various races of the 40K universe: multiple Space Marine chapters, [[RedShirtArmy Imperial Guard]] regiments, [[AmazonBrigade Sisters of Battle]], [[KnightTemplar Grey Knights]], and the attached elements of the [[MachineCult Adeptus Mechanicus]], as well as the major xenos factions: Eldar, Tau and Orks. The 'twist' in this is that, for reasons that have only been hinted at to date, all of the armies and their respective weaponry, mecha, and tanks have been shrunk to the size of the miniatures from the game...but their weapons still work just fine.
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* AesopAmnesia: Vincent is shot by a tank gunner (with 'low setting' on their multi-las) for treating the tank like a toy. He forgets it by the next thought: "[[CrowningMomentOfFunny Cool]], [[CoolTank Land Raider]]."
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* AesopAmnesia: Vincent is shot by a tank gunner (with 'low setting' on their multi-las) for treating the tank like a toy. He forgets it by the next thought: "[[CrowningMomentOfFunny "[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Cool]], [[CoolTank Land Raider]]."
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Emma]] during the battle with the forces of Chaos. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Spectacularly so]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Emma]] during the battle with the forces of Chaos. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Spectacularly so]].
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** We do know, however, that they fired an anti-tank rocket as a 'warning shot'... [[CrowningMomentOfFunny at Vincent's face.]]
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** We do know, however, that they fired an anti-tank rocket as a 'warning shot'... [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments at Vincent's face.]]
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* [[ThisIsMySide This Is My Room]]: Each of the factions have claimed their own territory. The Sisters of Battle in the attic (inside of two old-school doll houses that are now abbeys). The Guard have a bedroom to share with the Adeptus Mechanicus and the Inquisition. The Space Marines have a bedroom too, with their own Adeptus Mechanicus forces as well as the majority of the vehicles. The Orks have the basement. The Tau are stuffed in a corner of the living room. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny The Eldar have the downstairs bathroom, and have only just figured out what the 'convenient landing pad' was used for]].
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* [[ThisIsMySide This Is My Room]]: Each of the factions have claimed their own territory. The Sisters of Battle in the attic (inside of two old-school doll houses that are now abbeys). The Guard have a bedroom to share with the Adeptus Mechanicus and the Inquisition. The Space Marines have a bedroom too, with their own Adeptus Mechanicus forces as well as the majority of the vehicles. The Orks have the basement. The Tau are stuffed in a corner of the living room. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments The Eldar have the downstairs bathroom, and have only just figured out what the 'convenient landing pad' was used for]].
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** According to the author, the Howling Banshees are tsuntsun. [[OhCrap All.]][[CrowningMomentOfFunny Of. Them.]]
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** According to the author, the Howling Banshees are tsuntsun. [[OhCrap All.]][[CrowningMomentOfFunny ]][[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Of. Them.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheVamp]]: [[spoiler:The Rose]] tries to be one, but fails utterly when [[spoiler:she picked the [[CrowningMomentOfFunny one flower that Michael was allergic to]] as her theme flower.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheVamp]]: [[spoiler:The Rose]] tries to be one, but fails utterly when [[spoiler:she picked the [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments one flower that Michael was allergic to]] as her theme flower.]]
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* {{Rule 34}}: Mentioned.
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* {{Rule 34}}: Rule34: Mentioned.
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* SexySantaDress: Used in the Christmas Omake, [[FetishFuel especially the one made entirely of red and white ribbons]].
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* SexySantaDress: Used in the Christmas Omake, [[FetishFuel [[Stripperiffic especially the one made entirely of red and white ribbons]].
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And then, the fun ends (and starts) with [[spoiler:Chaos making their rude entrance]]. The fic's last complete update on 5/21/2012; future updates will appear in pieces on {{Spacebattles}} before being posted on FF.net, such as the 3/26/2013 update found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/40k-toyhammer.225408/ here.]]
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And then, the fun ends (and starts) with [[spoiler:Chaos making their rude entrance]]. The fic's last complete update on 5/21/2012; future updates will appear in pieces on {{Spacebattles}} Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom before being posted on FF.net, such as the 3/26/2013 update found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/40k-toyhammer.225408/ here.]]
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* XMeetsY: ''Literature/TheIndianInTheCupboard'' (or ''Film/SmallSoldiers'') meets ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}''.
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* AuthorAvatar: Vincent, per WordOfGod.
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* AuthorAvatar: Vincent, per WordOfGod.Word Of God.
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* OneOfUs: A few trope names (Batel is noted to be an {{Expy}}) are dropped. Not really surprising, considering that Vincent, the AuthorAvatar, is egregiously stated to be OneOfUs.
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* {{Troll}}ing: Emma likes to do this. In a MASSIVE one to Justicar Amadeus:
-->'''Amadeus''': Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?\\
-->'''Amadeus''': Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?\\
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* {{Troll}}ing: {{Troll}}ing:
** Emma likes to do this. In a MASSIVE one to Justicar Amadeus:
-->'''Amadeus''': --->'''Amadeus''': Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?\\
** Emma likes to do this. In a MASSIVE one to Justicar Amadeus:
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** According to WordOfGod, the Howling Banshees are tsuntsun. [[OhCrap All.]][[CrowningMomentOfFunny Of. Them.]]
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** According to WordOfGod, the author, the Howling Banshees are tsuntsun. [[OhCrap All.]][[CrowningMomentOfFunny Of. Them.]]
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** Michael, the KidWithTheLeash to at least four (miniaturized) [[BadassArmy Badass Armies]], including SpaceMarines, [[MachineWorship tech-priests]], {{Badass Normal}}s, and {{Badass}}es in general. Oh, and a {{Tsundere}}. [[spoiler:He works as an exterminator.]]
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** Michael, the KidWithTheLeash to at least four (miniaturized) [[BadassArmy Badass Armies]], including SpaceMarines, [[MachineWorship tech-priests]], {{Badass Normal}}s, and {{Badass}}es badasses in general. Oh, and a {{Tsundere}}. [[spoiler:He works as an exterminator.]]
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** While Michael agrees with the Orks that there is no such thing as "Enuff Dakka," there ''is'' such a thing as "Time and place for Dakka." Since they're living in the basement, if they decide to start shooting things, they could bring the entire house down on top of them. The Orks are forced to agree.
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--> I HAVE ''KILLED '''MILLIONS'''''! SET WHOLE ''WORLDS'' TO THE ''TORCH''! ''BILLIONS'' HAVE ''COWERED'' BEFORE ''ME'' AS I ''DESTROYED'' THEIR CHAMPIONS! YET, YOU ''MOCK ME!?''
* LighterAndSofter: Very much so in comparison to [[CrapsackWorld the]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality source]] [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} material]]. All the human, Eldar, Tau, and even ([[BloodKnight to some extent]]) Ork characters seen so far are decent people who actually care about their fellow soldiers and are even willing to ally with [[FantasticRacism xenos]] once they start getting adjusted to living in Michael's house.
* LighterAndSofter: Very much so in comparison to [[CrapsackWorld the]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality source]] [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} material]]. All the human, Eldar, Tau, and even ([[BloodKnight to some extent]]) Ork characters seen so far are decent people who actually care about their fellow soldiers and are even willing to ally with [[FantasticRacism xenos]] once they start getting adjusted to living in Michael's house.
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* LighterAndSofter: Very much so in comparison to [[CrapsackWorld the]] [[BlackAndGreyMorality source]] [[TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}} material]]. All the human, Eldar, Tau, and even ([[BloodKnight to some extent]]) Ork characters
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* [[spoiler:BackFromTheDead: Eizak, with an absolutely ''delicious'' one-liner; (Answering whether the Last Rites should be administered) "That will ''not'' be necessary."]]
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* [[spoiler:NotQuiteDead: Eizak, with an absolutely ''delicious'' one-liner; (Answering whether the Last Rites should be administered) "That will ''not'' be necessary."]]
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* ActionSurvivor: Michael, Vincent, Alice and Batel...which is rather funny considering that all 4 of them are literal giants (say, ''[[Anime/GunBuster]]''-scale) when compared to the miniatures.
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* ActionSurvivor: Michael, Vincent, Alice and Batel...which is rather funny considering that all 4 of them are literal giants (say, ''[[Anime/GunBuster]]''-scale) ''Anime/GunBuster''-scale) when compared to the miniatures.