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--> ''Oh nice parentage you got there Ajas. Morons and Retards… Luckily mum's side's a bit better. Wait, no, there's still Petunia. Damn.''

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--> ''Oh nice parentage you got there Ajas. Morons and Retards… Retards... Luckily mum's side's a bit better. Wait, no, there's still Petunia. Damn.''



* HalfHumanHybrid: Harry is now a Tormentor—that is he's half Human, half Dementor.

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* HalfHumanHybrid: Harry is now a Tormentor—that Tormentor-that is he's half Human, half Dementor.



* InTheHood: Harry/Ajas takes to wearing his Dementor's cloak while traversing the Wizarding world so he won’t be recognized.

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* InTheHood: Harry/Ajas takes to wearing his Dementor's cloak while traversing the Wizarding world so he won’t won't be recognized.



* LukeIAmYourFather: the results of the Goblin's Inheritance tests are quite surprising and traumatizing when Harry/Ajas learns that his biological father wasn’t James Potter but [[spoiler: Tom Marvolo Riddle]].

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* LukeIAmYourFather: the results of the Goblin's Inheritance tests are quite surprising and traumatizing when Harry/Ajas learns that his biological father wasn’t wasn't James Potter but [[spoiler: Tom Marvolo Riddle]].



* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: [[spoiler: When the Dementor tries to suck out Harry’s soul and the horcrux within it backfired horribly and the Dementor was absorbed into Harry instead.]]

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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: [[spoiler: When the Dementor tries to suck out Harry’s Harry's soul and the horcrux within it backfired horribly and the Dementor was absorbed into Harry instead.]]
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moved to YMMV subpage as it's a subjective, Just For Fun wick


* XMeetsY: ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' meets ''ComicBook/SinCity'' meets ''Franchise/MortalKombat'' meets ''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''.

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* CreepyCrows: a certain anonymous party [[spoiler: most likely Voldemort]] sends his correspondence using a raven instead of an owl.



* RavensAndCrows: a certain anonymous party [[spoiler: most likely Voldemort]] sends his correspondence using a raven instead of an owl.

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Shallow Love Interest is being renamed and misuse and bitching purged


* MightyWhiteyAndMellowYellow: Harry/Ajas with Mai. Mai, a poverty-stricken Vietnamese immigrant, is Harry/Aja's ShallowLoveInterest and he only gets with her because he has a fetish for Asian chicks. She exists to give Harry/Aja's a PetTheDog moment by helping her get an education and apprenticeship at Ollivander's.

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* MightyWhiteyAndMellowYellow: Harry/Ajas with Mai. Mai, a poverty-stricken Vietnamese immigrant, is Harry/Aja's ShallowLoveInterest SatelliteLoveInterest and he only gets with her because he has a fetish for Asian chicks. She exists to give Harry/Aja's a PetTheDog moment by helping her get an education and apprenticeship at Ollivander's.



* ShallowLoveInterest: Mai
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* MightyWhiteyAndMellowYellow: Harry/Ajas with Mai. Mai, a poverty-stricken Vietnamese immigrant, is Harry/Aja's ShallowLoveInterest and he only gets with her because he has a fetish for Asian chicks. She exists to give Harry/Aja's a PetTheDog moment by helping her get an education and apprenticeship at Ollivander's.


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* ThereIsAnother: [[spoiler: Mai is a parselmouth. Slytherin's descendants are the only parselmouths ''in Europe''. Mai has the ability because her family are the descendants of Nagas and having the power is more common in Asia.]]
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* AsianGalWithWhiteGuy: Mai and Harry/Ajas.
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* BadPowersGoodPeople: Harry/Ajas uses his Dementor powers and dark curses to save a little girl from a gang of Death Eaters.
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* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Balthazar, who is the result of someone turning one his relative's pet snakes [[spoiler along with the memories of Herpo the Foul]] into a piece of sentient jewelry.

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* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Balthazar, who is the result of someone turning one his relative's pet snakes [[spoiler [[spoiler: along with the memories of Herpo the Foul]] into a piece of sentient jewelry.
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* DarkFic
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* EvilMentor: Balthazar to Harry/Ajas.


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* SerialKillerKiller: Harry/Ajas consumes the soul of a pedophile rapist and then [[MercyKill finishes the job]].


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* SnarkyNonHumanSidekick: Balthazar, who is the result of someone turning one his relative's pet snakes [[spoiler along with the memories of Herpo the Foul]] into a piece of sentient jewelry.
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* TheAtoner: from where you'd least expect it. [[spoiler: Soon after Voldemort learns that Harry/Ajas is his son, Harry/Ajas receives an anonymous birthday gift from a dark and mysterious benefactor that later saves his life.]]

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* TheAtoner: from where you'd least expect it. [[spoiler: Soon after Voldemort learns that Harry/Ajas is his son, Harry/Ajas receives an anonymous birthday gift from a dark and mysterious benefactor benefactor, a gift that later saves his life.]]
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* ThAtoner: from where you'd least expect it. [[spoiler: Soon after Voldemort learns that Harry/Ajas is his son, Harry/Ajas receives an anonymous birthday gift from a dark and mysterious benefactor that later saves his life.]]

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* ThAtoner: TheAtoner: from where you'd least expect it. [[spoiler: Soon after Voldemort learns that Harry/Ajas is his son, Harry/Ajas receives an anonymous birthday gift from a dark and mysterious benefactor that later saves his life.]]
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* ThAtoner: from where you'd least expect it. [[spoiler: Soon after Voldemort learns that Harry/Ajas is his son, Harry/Ajas receives an anonymous birthday gift from a dark and mysterious benefactor that later saves his life.]]


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* HorrorHunger: Since becoming part-Dementor Harry/Ajas hungers to consume wicked souls.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Harry changes his name to "Ajas Terror Mephysto." It gets worse after the Goblins run their inheritance test and determine that he is "Ajas Terror Mephysto-[[spoiler: Voldemort]]."

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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Harry changes his name to "Ajas Terror Mephysto." [[FromBadToWorse It gets worse worse]] after the Goblins run their inheritance test and determine that he is "Ajas Terror Mephysto-[[spoiler: Voldemort]]."
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* LukeYouAreMyFather: [[spoiler: Voldemort learns the results of Harry’s inheritance tests through one of his goblin spies.]]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Harry changes his name to "Ajas Terror Mephysto."

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* LukeYouAreMyFather: [[spoiler: Voldemort learns the results of Harry’s Harry's inheritance tests through one of his goblin spies.]]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Harry changes his name to "Ajas Terror Mephysto." It gets worse after the Goblins run their inheritance test and determine that he is "Ajas Terror Mephysto-[[spoiler: Voldemort]]."
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* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Harry/Ajas after becoming half-Dementor'' and later he goes through them ''again'' after [[spoiler: his true parentage is revealed.]]

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* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Harry/Ajas after becoming half-Dementor'' half-Dementor and later he goes through them ''again'' after [[spoiler: his true parentage is revealed.]]
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* SignificantAnagram: Harry plays around with anagrams to craft his new name.

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* SignificantAnagram: Harry plays around with anagrams to craft his new name. name so "Harry James Potter" becomes "Ajas Terror Mephysto."
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6981888/1/Tormentor Tormentor]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2541595/milky0candy milky0candy]] is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] FanFiction set after ''Order Of The Phoenix''. Harry decides to leave the Dursley's home. His world will soon be shattered as he uncovers realities concerning the link he has with Voldemort.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6981888/1/Tormentor Tormentor]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2541595/milky0candy milky0candy]] is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] FanFiction set after ''Order Of The Phoenix''. Harry decides to leave the Dursley's home. His world will soon be shattered as he uncovers realities concerning the link he has with Voldemort. Independent!Dark Heir!Dementor!Powerful!Harry. Not the usual type



* DarkIsNotEvil: Harry uses dark curses and his [[spoiler: Dementor]] powers to save a child from a Death Eater raid.

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* DarkIsNotEvil: Harry uses dark curses and his [[spoiler: Dementor]] Dementor powers to save a child from a Death Eater raid.



* TheEmpath: Harry/Ajas becomes one [[spoiler: after becoming part-Dementor]].

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* TheEmpath: Harry/Ajas becomes one [[spoiler: after becoming part-Dementor]].part-Dementor.



* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler: Harry is now a Tormentor—that is he’s half Human, half Dementor.]]

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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler: Harry is now a Tormentor—that is he’s he's half Human, half Dementor.]]



* LackOfEmpathy: Harry/Ajas finds that after [[spoiler: becoming part-Dementor]] his human emotions have become dulled.

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* LackOfEmpathy: Harry/Ajas finds that after [[spoiler: becoming part-Dementor]] part-Dementor his human emotions have become dulled.



* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Harry/Ajas after [[spoiler: becoming half-Dementor'' and later he goes through them ''again'' after [[spoiler: his true parentage is revealed.]]
* TheStoic: ever since [[spoiler: getting kissed]] Harry/Ajas has felt cold inside.

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* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Harry/Ajas after [[spoiler: becoming half-Dementor'' and later he goes through them ''again'' after [[spoiler: his true parentage is revealed.]]
* TheStoic: ever since [[spoiler: getting kissed]] kissed Harry/Ajas has felt cold inside.



* TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler: Harry discovers his entire life is a lie when he discovers his true parentage and that he was glamoured to look like James Potter’s son. This also means that the prophecy is complete bull because surely Voldemort did not defy himself three times.]]

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* TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler: Harry discovers his entire life is a lie when he discovers his true parentage and that he was glamoured to look like James Potter’s Potter's son. This also means that the prophecy is complete bull because surely Voldemort did not defy himself three times.]]
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* XMeetsY: ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' meets ''ComicBook/SinCity''.

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* XMeetsY: ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' meets ''ComicBook/SinCity''.''ComicBook/SinCity'' meets ''Franchise/MortalKombat'' meets ''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''.
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* XMeetsY: ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' meets ComicBook/SinCity.

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* XMeetsY: ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' meets ComicBook/SinCity.''ComicBook/SinCity''.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: this fic makes use of the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' FandomSpecificPlot where Harry remembers the goblins' names and so the goblins are very helpful to Harry. However it's later {{Subverted}} because [[AffablyEvil friendly and helpful]] does not mean ''loyal''.

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* NiceToTheWaiter: this fic makes use of the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' FandomSpecificPlot where because Harry remembers the goblins' names and so names, the goblins are very helpful to Harry. However it's later {{Subverted}} because [[AffablyEvil friendly and helpful]] does not mean ''loyal''.

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* TheEmpath: Harry/Ajas becomes one [[spoiler: after becoming part-Dementor]].



* InTheHood: Harry/Ajas takes to wearing his Dementor’s cloak while traversing the Wizarding world so he won’t be recognized.
* LackOfEmpathy:

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* InTheHood: Harry/Ajas takes to wearing his Dementor’s Dementor's cloak while traversing the Wizarding world so he won’t be recognized.
* LackOfEmpathy: Harry/Ajas finds that after [[spoiler: becoming part-Dementor]] his human emotions have become dulled.
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* LikeFatherLikeSon: Harry's fondness for anagrams [[Foreshadowing foreshadows]] a later revelation.

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* LikeFatherLikeSon: Harry's fondness for anagrams [[Foreshadowing [[{{Foreshadowing}} foreshadows]] a later revelation.



* RedLightDistrict: Harry’s new apartment is in one. After his initial misgivings he finds it a brilliant safe house because no one expects to find the ChosenOne hiding out in a brothel.

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* RedLightDistrict: Harry’s Harry's new apartment is in one. After his initial misgivings he finds it a brilliant safe house because no one expects to find the ChosenOne hiding out in a brothel.
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* RogueAnglesOfSatin

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* RogueAnglesOfSatin RougeAnglesOfSatin

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* FriendsWithBenefets: Harry/Ajas and Mai.

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* FriendsWithBenefets: FriendsWithBenefits: Harry/Ajas and Mai.


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* ThatManIsDead: Ajas decides to completely cut ties with his old life considering that "Harry Potter" never really existed in the first place.
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* AsianGirlWithWhiteGuy: Mai and Harry.

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* AsianGirlWithWhiteGuy: AsianGalWithWhiteGuy: Mai and Harry.Harry/Ajas.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6981888/1/Tormentor Tormentor]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2541595/milky0candy milky0candy]] is a ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] FanFiction set after ''Order Of The Phoenix''. Harry decides to leave the Dursley's home. His world will soon be shattered as he uncovers realities concerning the link he has with Voldemort.

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!!''Tormentor'' provides examples of:
* AsianGirlWithWhiteGuy: Mai and Harry.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Harry/Ajas is less than impressed by his relatives:
--> ''Oh nice parentage you got there Ajas. Morons and Retards… Luckily mum's side's a bit better. Wait, no, there's still Petunia. Damn.''
* BlackEyesOfEvil: Harry/Ajas has them in his true form.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Harry uses dark curses and his [[spoiler: Dementor]] powers to save a child from a Death Eater raid.
* EmbarrassingMiddleName: When Merope gives her son the middle name [[WhoNamesTheirKidDude Marvolo]], Mrs. Cole wonders if they came from a family of Circus freaks.
* FanArt: [[http://jesuka.deviantart.com/art/Tormentor-244702763]], [[http://jesuka.deviantart.com/art/Tormentor-close-up-244702894]]
* FirstEpisodeResurrection: In the first chapter Harry is attacked by Dementors and kissed. However [[spoiler: the horcrux acted as an anchor so instead of having his soul sucked out the Dementor was absorbed into Harry. So instead of becoming a soulless husk he gets cool new powers instead.]]
* FriendsWithBenefets: Harry/Ajas and Mai.
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler: Harry is now a Tormentor—that is he’s half Human, half Dementor.]]
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Harry/Aja's roommates.
* InTheHood: Harry/Ajas takes to wearing his Dementor’s cloak while traversing the Wizarding world so he won’t be recognized.
* LackOfEmpathy:
* LikeFatherLikeSon: Harry's fondness for anagrams [[Foreshadowing foreshadows]] a later revelation.
* LukeIAmYourFather: the results of the Goblin's Inheritance tests are quite surprising and traumatizing when Harry/Ajas learns that his biological father wasn’t James Potter but [[spoiler: Tom Marvolo Riddle]].
* LukeYouAreMyFather: [[spoiler: Voldemort learns the results of Harry’s inheritance tests through one of his goblin spies.]]
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Harry changes his name to "Ajas Terror Mephysto."
* NiceToTheWaiter: this fic makes use of the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' FandomSpecificPlot where Harry remembers the goblins' names and so the goblins are very helpful to Harry. However it's later {{Subverted}} because [[AffablyEvil friendly and helpful]] does not mean ''loyal''.
* OverlordJr: [[spoiler: Harry/Ajas]]
* RavensAndCrows: a certain anonymous party [[spoiler: most likely Voldemort]] sends his correspondence using a raven instead of an owl.
* RedLightDistrict: Harry’s new apartment is in one. After his initial misgivings he finds it a brilliant safe house because no one expects to find the ChosenOne hiding out in a brothel.
* RogueAnglesOfSatin
* SignificantAnagram: Harry plays around with anagrams to craft his new name.
* ShallowLoveInterest: Mai
* StagesOfMonsterGrief: Harry/Ajas after [[spoiler: becoming half-Dementor'' and later he goes through them ''again'' after [[spoiler: his true parentage is revealed.]]
* TheStoic: ever since [[spoiler: getting kissed]] Harry/Ajas has felt cold inside.
* TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler: Harry discovers his entire life is a lie when he discovers his true parentage and that he was glamoured to look like James Potter’s son. This also means that the prophecy is complete bull because surely Voldemort did not defy himself three times.]]
* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: [[spoiler: When the Dementor tries to suck out Harry’s soul and the horcrux within it backfired horribly and the Dementor was absorbed into Harry instead.]]
* XMeetsY: ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' meets ComicBook/SinCity.
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