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* IrrationalHatred: Jürgen seems to hate all aircraft and Monty seems to hate all submarines.
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** The R.M.S. ''Minuscule'' is a play on the UsefulNotes/RMSTitanic and inspired by the eponymous Creator/JamesCameron [[Film/Titanic1997 blockbuster]] which is contemporary with the fic.
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* DownInTheDumps: Widget spent much of her youth living on a junkyard. This wasn't too bad because it provided her with everything she needed to build ''Albacore''.
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: These stories hammer ''heavily'' on "[[ByronicHero Byronic]]" and "pelagic" (the latter of which is [[YouKeepUsingThatWord completely misused]]).
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: These stories hammer ''heavily'' on "[[ByronicHero Byronic]]" and "pelagic" (the latter of which is [[YouKeepUsingThatWord completely misused]]).misused).
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%%* BadassCape: Widget wears one. It's not flowing freely, though; she wears it to hide her mechanical left arm.
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* BatmanGambit: The ''Minuscule'' scene. Widget has ''Albacore'' fire an iceberg torpedo that promptly creates an iceberg in front of the rodent-sized cruise ship ''Minuscule'' which collides with it and sinks. All this only serves to lure the Rescue Rangers out onto a rescue mission. The Rangers do exactly what Widget expects them to -- and ''Albacore'' can attack the hovering ''Ranger Plane''.
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%%* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: At least during the first chapters of ''Under the Bridge'', nobody aboard ''Albacore'' knows Widget's name, not even Jürgen; they all call her "The Gray Mouse" (which refers to her gray hair). In fact, neither do readers who haven't been filled in on the story before reading it.
%%* EvilCounterpart: That's what Widget starts as.
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%%* GibberishOfLove: Chip falls victim to this in his afterlife dream sequence involving Gadget in ''Under the Bridge''.
%%-->He had to say something to express his love.\\
%%"Hominahominahomina..."\\
%%[[LampshadeHanging That wasn't it]].
%%* GondorCallsForAid: The massive help mission which the Rangers launch in ''Under the Bridge'' after they've received Widget's call for help.
%%* GratuitousGerman: Despite speaking English fluently, Jürgen keeps slipping back into his native German.
%%** Widget also isn't immune, shouting the German command ("Los!") right after specifically reminding herself ''not'' to do that.
%%-->He had to say something to express his love.\\
%%"Hominahominahomina..."\\
%%[[LampshadeHanging That wasn't it]].
%%* GondorCallsForAid: The massive help mission which the Rangers launch in ''Under the Bridge'' after they've received Widget's call for help.
%%* GratuitousGerman: Despite speaking English fluently, Jürgen keeps slipping back into his native German.
%%** Widget also isn't immune, shouting the German command ("Los!") right after specifically reminding herself ''not'' to do that.
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** [[DarkAndTroubledPast Widget grew up in a horrible orphanage, with a drug addict and on a junk yard]], not knowing that she has any siblings. Then she learns that she has got a twin sister named Gadget who is beautiful and who has got friends. This gives her the idea that her parents had tried to drown her in the river in favor of her "perfect" twin sister who therefore is to blame for Widget's miserable past. This, Widget seeks revenge on her own sister and sets an elaborate murder plan into motion that involves the construction of an advanced attack submarine and the hiring of a war veteran as its captain.
** Gadget may be the kindest mousette you'll ever encounter. However, threatening her or her friends, the Rescue Rangers, is her BerserkButton, and then you don't want to be around her. Threatening to kill her and her friends with what amounts to heavy military equipment -- and she soon discovers that it's exactly this what Widget does -- will trigger her hard enough to go on her own killing spree, breaking laws left and right.
* GondorCallsForAid: The massive help mission which the Rangers launch in ''Under the Bridge'' after they've received Widget's call for
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** Chip stays at the HQ with the two-way radio on which the Rangers have received Widget's distress call, getting into contact with Widget and warning her that Gadget is on her way to destroy ''Albacore''. He also serves as a relay between Widget and Dale, Monty and Zipper; see below.
** Since the ''Ranger Wing'' doesn't have a radio, there's no way for Chip or anyone else to get into contact with Gadget and update her on the current situation. So it's up to Widget and[=/=]or the crew of ''Albacore'' to keep Gadget from firing the torpedo. And since the Rangers have no other aircraft at their disposal since ''Albacore'' had destroyed the ''Ranger Plane'', Gadget and the ''Ranger Wing'' are the only chance Widget has to have the sailor flown out, so a counter-attack on the ''Ranger Wing'' is out of question.
** The trickiest part is to get Widget to trust Gadget and the Rangers. This can only work by proving to her that the story about the escape from the bridge, Geegaw's cramp in the cold water and Monty's tough choice is the truth. The Rangers have told Widget this story, but since it came from her arch-enemies, she refused to believe it and stuck to her version, so the Rangers need proof. Therefore, Dale, Monty and Zipper roam the city, trying to find the very same cats that had attacked Geegaw and Monty that fateful night because they'd be the only witnesses. However, the three fail to find these cats in time before Gadget comes in sight of ''Albacore'', so Chip has to bluff and tell Widget that they did find the cats.
** Finally, upon hearing Chip's bluff and taking it for the truth, Widget has ''Albacore'' fly distress signal flags and goes outside. That way, if Gadget carries on on her attack, she will have to ''see'' Widget when she kills her, not to mention sink a vessel flying a legitimate distress signal, and Widget doubts that Gadget is cold-blooded enough for that. Widget also takes Andy, the young injured sailor, with her to go on comforting him -- and so that Gadget would also have to see at least one helpless collateral victim when she launches the torpedo.
* GratuitousGerman:
** Despite speaking English fluently, and although hardly anyone around him with the exception of Widget would even understand him, Kapitänleutnant Jürgen keeps slipping back into his native
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* RedRightHand: Widget's mechanical left arm which she hides under a black cloak and in a black glove.
* RepetitiveName: Kapitänleutnant Jürgen. His family name is Jürgen, his first name is Jürgen, [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree and his middle name happens to be Jürgen, too]]]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Two-fold, even. Widget built a sophisticated attack submarine, hired a crew for it and even sinks a rodent ferryboat just to exact revenge on her sister Gadget. [[spoiler:Gadget, in turn, after finding out that Widget is out to kill her, builds a guided torpedo out of an illegally imported Russian machine gun round to sink Widget's submarine with everyone aboard.]]
* RepetitiveName: Kapitänleutnant Jürgen. His family name is Jürgen, his first name is Jürgen, [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree and his middle name happens to be Jürgen, too]]]].
* RevengeBeforeReason: Two-fold, even. Widget built a sophisticated attack submarine, hired a crew for it and even sinks a rodent ferryboat just to exact revenge on her sister Gadget. [[spoiler:Gadget, in turn, after finding out that Widget is out to kill her, builds a guided torpedo out of an illegally imported Russian machine gun round to sink Widget's submarine with everyone aboard.]]
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* RedRightHand: Widget's mechanical left arm which she hides under a black cloak and in a black glove.
glove. She is very sensitive about it and makes sure that nobody aboard ''Albacore'' ever finds out about it -- well, at least until the events of ''Under the Bridge'' unfold, and they don't quite unfold the way she intended them to.
* RepetitiveName: Kapitänleutnant Jürgen. His family name is Jürgen, his first name is Jürgen, [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree and his middle name happens to be Jürgen,too]]]].
too]]. His father stuttered and didn't want to correct his mistake.]]
* RevengeBeforeReason: Two-fold, even. Widget built a sophisticated attack submarine, hired a crew for it and even sinks a rodent ferryboat as Rescue Rangers bait just to exact revenge on her sister Gadget. [[spoiler:Gadget, in turn, after finding out that Widget is out to kill her, builds a guided torpedo out of an illegally imported Russian machine gun round to sink Widget's submarine with everyone aboard.]]
* RepetitiveName: Kapitänleutnant Jürgen. His family name is Jürgen, his first name is Jürgen, [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree and his middle name happens to be Jürgen,
* RevengeBeforeReason: Two-fold, even. Widget built a sophisticated attack submarine, hired a crew for it and even sinks a rodent ferryboat as Rescue Rangers bait just to exact revenge on her sister Gadget. [[spoiler:Gadget, in turn, after finding out that Widget is out to kill her, builds a guided torpedo out of an illegally imported Russian machine gun round to sink Widget's submarine with everyone aboard.]]
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%%* BambooTechnology: Even ''Albacore'' falls victim to this. Mr. Fenton, a bat, is not only the sonar operator, ''he %%is the actual sonar''.
%%--> "PING!"
%%* BattleBallgown: Widget's wedding dress is made of Kevlar.
* {{BFG}}: The Darned Nearly Recoilless Rifle is pretty huge if operated by mice. .22 rimfire cartridges might be small for humans, but for rodents they're large enough to require a big weapon which, despite Widget's efforts, isn't entirely recoilless.
%%--> "PING!"
%%* BattleBallgown: Widget's wedding dress is made of Kevlar.
* {{BFG}}: The Darned Nearly Recoilless Rifle is pretty huge if operated by mice. .22 rimfire cartridges might be small for humans, but for rodents they're large enough to require a big weapon which, despite Widget's efforts, isn't entirely recoilless.
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%%* DarkAndTroubledPast: Widget's {{Backstory}}.
%%* DarkerAndEdgier: A lot in comparison to the show.
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%%* ForeignSoundingGibberish: Appears in ''Sovereign''.
%%-->"Ich bin Muenster von Kublewagen-Nebelwerfer, der family solicitor."
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* MeaningfulName: [[{{Canon}} Hackwrench]], Jürgen, etc.
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* MeaningfulName: [[{{Canon}} Hackwrench]], Jürgen, Hackwrench]] (may fit Widget even better than Gadget), [[Film/DasBoot Jürgen]], etc.
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* MustHaveCaffeine: Gadget is pretty much [[{{Fanon}} addicted to the stuff]].
* MythologyGag: Before she first encounters the Rangers, Widget lets off her anger on Gadget dolls made by Applause, known among Rangerphiles as "[[FanNickname Gadget plushies]]" and for being outrageously expensive nowadays. The only hints at their identity are their make, their size, and that Jürgen asks Widget if they should travel to Orlando[[note]]as in Walt Disney World[[/note]] to get more.
* MythologyGag: Before she first encounters the Rangers, Widget lets off her anger on Gadget dolls made by Applause, known among Rangerphiles as "[[FanNickname Gadget plushies]]" and for being outrageously expensive nowadays. The only hints at their identity are their make, their size, and that Jürgen asks Widget if they should travel to Orlando[[note]]as in Walt Disney World[[/note]] to get more.
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* MustHaveCaffeine: Gadget is pretty much [[{{Fanon}} addicted to the stuff]].
stuff (which may already have been established {{fanon}} back then).
* MythologyGag: Before she first encounters the Rangers, Widget lets off her anger on what clearly are Gadget dolls made by Applause, known among Rangerphiles as "[[FanNickname Gadget plushies]]" and for being outrageously expensive nowadays. The only hints at their identity are their make, their size, and that Jürgen asks Widget if they should travel to Orlando[[note]]as in Walt Disney World[[/note]] to get more. ''Under the Bridge'' seems to try to explain why the "Gadget plushies" were so rare and costly back then already.
* NoOSHACompliance: After a young sailor aboard ''Albacore'' is severely injured when his ankle is caught in an open drive chain, even Widget has to admit that leaving them completely unshrouded wasn't such a bright idea.
* MythologyGag: Before she first encounters the Rangers, Widget lets off her anger on what clearly are Gadget dolls made by Applause, known among Rangerphiles as "[[FanNickname Gadget plushies]]" and for being outrageously expensive nowadays. The only hints at their identity are their make, their size, and that Jürgen asks Widget if they should travel to Orlando[[note]]as in Walt Disney World[[/note]] to get more. ''Under the Bridge'' seems to try to explain why the "Gadget plushies" were so rare and costly back then already.
* NoOSHACompliance: After a young sailor aboard ''Albacore'' is severely injured when his ankle is caught in an open drive chain, even Widget has to admit that leaving them completely unshrouded wasn't such a bright idea.
* RammingAlwaysWorks: Well, it did work for Jürgen in whatever war made him a veteran. He took out aircraft by ramming them -- with a submarine. Monterey Jack can confirm this, for he and Geegaw were in the Air Force back then. And it still does work because he attacks the ''Ranger Plane'' this way.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Two-fold, even. Widget built a sophisticated attack submarine, hired a crew for it and even sinks a rodent ferryboat just to exact revenge on her sister Gadget. [[spoiler:Gadget, in turn, after finding out that Widget is out to kill her, builds a torpedo out of an illegally imported Russian machine gun round to sink Widget's submarine with everyone aboard.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Two-fold, even. Widget built a sophisticated attack submarine, hired a crew for it and even sinks a rodent ferryboat just to exact revenge on her sister Gadget. [[spoiler:Gadget, in turn, after finding out that Widget is out to kill her, builds a guided torpedo out of an illegally imported Russian machine gun round to sink Widget's submarine with everyone aboard.]]
* SecretIdentity:
** Until some point in ''Under the Bridge'', Widget doesn't want anyone to know that she's hunting down her own twin sister. So she reveals her identity to the crew of ''Albacore'' who only know her by the name "The Gray Mouse".
** In a sense, the same trope applies to the identities both Gadget and Widget have assumed online. They've exchanged mails about engineering subjects quite amicably for quite a while already without even knowing who their respective counterpart was.
** Until some point in ''Under the Bridge'', Widget doesn't want anyone to know that she's hunting down her own twin sister. So she reveals her identity to the crew of ''Albacore'' who only know her by the name "The Gray Mouse".
** In a sense, the same trope applies to the identities both Gadget and Widget have assumed online. They've exchanged mails about engineering subjects quite amicably for quite a while already without even knowing who their respective counterpart was.
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* SharedUniverse / FanVerse: No Rangerverse saw as many guest writers as the ''Nowakverse''.
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* SharedUniverse / FanVerse: SharedUniverse[=/=]FanVerse: No Rangerverse saw as many guest writers as the ''Nowakverse''.
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** Widget has a "[[Film/IndianaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom Temple of Hate]]" aboard ''Albacore''. This could just as well be a ShoutOut to Music/TheSistersOfMercy.
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** Widget has a "[[Film/IndianaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom Temple of Hate]]" aboard ''Albacore''. This could just as well be a ShoutOut to Music/TheSistersOfMercy.Music/TheSistersOfMercy and their song "Temple of Love".
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* TankGoodness: The Exterminator from ''Under the Bridge''.
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* TankGoodness: The Exterminator from ''Under the Bridge''.Bridge'', although it's so small that it has only got a crew of one.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: The Darned Nearly Recoilless Rifles designed by Widget. .22 Rimfire might be small for humans, but they are described in ''Under the Bridge'' as the rodent equivalent of 150mm artillery. Nevertheless, they were conceived and are used mostly as anti-personnel rifles.
** Also in ''Under the Bridge'', Gadget herself builds [[spoiler:a magnetic homing torpedo out of an illegaly imported Soviet 14.5×114 anti-tank machine gun round to sink her sister's submarine]].
** Also in ''Under the Bridge'', Gadget herself builds [[spoiler:a magnetic homing torpedo out of an illegaly imported Soviet 14.5×114 anti-tank machine gun round to sink her sister's submarine]].
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill:
** The Darned Nearly Recoilless Rifles designed by Widget. .22 Rimfire might be small for humans, but they are described in ''Under the Bridge'' as the rodent equivalent of 150mm artillery. Nevertheless, they were conceived and are used mostly as anti-personnel rifles.
** Also in ''Under the Bridge'', Gadget herself builds [[spoiler:a magnetic homing torpedo out of an illegaly imported Soviet 14.5×114 heavy anti-tank machine gun round tosink kill Widget by sinking her sister's submarine]].entire submarine even if that means also drowning the entire rest of the crew]].
** The Darned Nearly Recoilless Rifles designed by Widget. .22 Rimfire might be small for humans, but they are described in ''Under the Bridge'' as the rodent equivalent of 150mm artillery. Nevertheless, they were conceived and are used mostly as anti-personnel rifles.
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* TheUnFavorite: Widget thinks she is one.
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* TheUnFavorite: Widget thinks she is one.one in comparison to Gadget to the point where her own father allegedly tried to drown her.
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* WrenchWench: Widget, maybe even more so than Gadget.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Pelagic" means an open zone in the deep ocean. It has nothing to do with cats. Given that Nowak co-wrote the MST of ''Under the Bridge'', presumably he looked up what the word meant at some point after writing the story, because the MST beats him up ''heavily'' for misusing the word.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Pelagic" means an open zone in the deep ocean. It has nothing to do with cats. Given that Nowak co-wrote the MST of ''Under the Bridge'', presumably he looked up what the word meant at some point after writing the story, because the MST beats him up ''heavily'' for misusing the word.
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* WrenchWench: Widget, maybe even more so than Gadget.
Gadget. It helped that she spent several years of her life living on a junkyard.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Pelagic" means an open zone in the deep ocean. It has nothing to do with cats. Given that Nowak co-wrote theMST {{MST}} of ''Under the Bridge'', presumably he looked up what the word meant at some point after writing the story, because the MST {{MST}} beats him up ''heavily'' for misusing the word.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Pelagic" means an open zone in the deep ocean. It has nothing to do with cats. Given that Nowak co-wrote the
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Widget was born albino and missing an arm, and was dropped from an overpass by Monterey Jack when she was a baby. She was "raised" by an abusive street mother who called her "Li'l Freako" and used her to get handouts before [=ODing=], after which Widget had to fend for herself on the streets, building her own artificial limb.
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* BadassCape: Widget wears one. It's not flowing freely, though; she wears it to hide her mechanical left arm.
* BambooTechnology: Even ''Albacore'' falls victim to this. Mr. Fenton, a bat, is not only the sonar operator, ''he is the actual sonar''.
--> "PING!"
* BattleBallgown: Widget's wedding dress is made of Kevlar.
* BambooTechnology: Even ''Albacore'' falls victim to this. Mr. Fenton, a bat, is not only the sonar operator, ''he is the actual sonar''.
--> "PING!"
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* BigNo: Dale in ''Under the Bridge''.
--> "No," gasped Dale. Then, a howl: "[=NOOOOOooooo=]!"
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* CoolBoat: ''Albacore'' is so this.
* CharacterDevelopment: In particular, Widget in ''Under the Bridge''.
* CrazyEnoughToWork: [[spoiler:Gadget's raid on the prison]] in ''Sovereign''.
* DarkActionGirl: Widget.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Widget's {{Backstory}}.
* DarkerAndEdgier: A lot in comparison to the show.
* CharacterDevelopment: In particular, Widget in ''Under the Bridge''.
* CrazyEnoughToWork: [[spoiler:Gadget's raid on the prison]] in ''Sovereign''.
* DarkActionGirl: Widget.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Widget's {{Backstory}}.
* DarkerAndEdgier: A lot in comparison to the show.
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* EnemyMine: Widget when she needs Rescue Rangers help in ''Under the Bridge''.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: At least during the first chapters of ''Under the Bridge'', nobody aboard ''Albacore'' knows Widget's name, not even Jürgen; they all call her "The Gray Mouse" (which refers to her gray hair). In fact, neither do readers who haven't been filled in on the story before reading it.
* EvilCounterpart: That's what Widget starts as.
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Darned Nearly Recoilless Rifle. Except that what recoil is left will still knock a single gunmouse over backwards.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: At least during the first chapters of ''Under the Bridge'', nobody aboard ''Albacore'' knows Widget's name, not even Jürgen; they all call her "The Gray Mouse" (which refers to her gray hair). In fact, neither do readers who haven't been filled in on the story before reading it.
* EvilCounterpart: That's what Widget starts as.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Darned Nearly Recoilless
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* ForeignSoundingGibberish: Appears in ''Sovereign''.
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* GibberishOfLove: Chip falls victim to this in his afterlife dream sequence involving Gadget in ''Under the Bridge''.
-->He had to say something to express his love.\\
"Hominahominahomina..."\\
[[LampshadeHanging That wasn't it]].
* GondorCallsForAid: The massive help mission which the Rangers launch in ''Under the Bridge'' after they've received Widget's call for help.
* GratuitousGerman: Despite speaking English fluently, Jürgen keeps slipping back into his native German.
** Widget also isn't immune, shouting the German command (Los!) right after specifically reminding herself ''not'' to do that.
-->He had to say something to express his love.\\
"Hominahominahomina..."\\
[[LampshadeHanging That wasn't it]].
* GondorCallsForAid: The massive help mission which the Rangers launch in ''Under the Bridge'' after they've received Widget's call for help.
* GratuitousGerman: Despite speaking English fluently, Jürgen keeps slipping back into his native German.
** Widget also isn't immune, shouting the German command (Los!) right after specifically reminding herself ''not'' to do that.
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* EvilAlbino[=/=]HeroicAlbino: Widget has been both.
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* WalkingSpoiler: Widget. Her forename alone halfway gives away who she is and where she comes from. And the reader isn't supposed to know this right away because the story keeps it secret for at least the first two chapters.
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* MoodWhiplash: ''Under the Bridge'' in particular is quite a dramatic DarkFic, but it keeps throwing in funny or even wacky bits when you expect them the least.
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'''The Nowakverse''' is probably the most famous FanVerse in the ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' fandom. It started with John Nowak's FanFic ''Under the Bridge'' which was followed by another two stories by the same author, ''Icarus'' and ''Sovereign''. Several other authors at least used elements from the ''Nowakverse'' in their stories, be it only the main original character, Gadget's [[LongLostRelative long lost sister]] Widget Hackwrench, be it Widget's self-made submarine Albacore including the entire crew, [[spoiler:her husband]], Kapitänleutnant Jürgen Jürgen, [[spoiler:and their son, Gimcrack]]. Widget actually managed to build up so much of a fame of her own that no other original character from ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' FanFic has ever been subject of more FanArt.
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'''The Nowakverse''' is probably the most famous FanVerse in the ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' fandom. It started with John Nowak's FanFic ''Under the Bridge'' which was followed by another two stories by the same author, ''Icarus'' and ''Sovereign''. Several other authors at least used elements from the ''Nowakverse'' in their stories, be it only the main original character, Gadget's [[LongLostRelative long lost sister]] Widget Hackwrench, be it Widget's self-made submarine Albacore ''Albacore'' including the entire crew, [[spoiler:her husband]], Kapitänleutnant Jürgen Jürgen, [[spoiler:and their son, Gimcrack]]. Widget actually managed to build up so much of a fame of her own that no other original character from ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' FanFic has ever been subject of more FanArt.
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: These stories hammer ''heavily'' on "Byronic" and "pelagic" (the latter of which is [[YouKeepUsingThatWord completely misused]]).
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: These stories hammer ''heavily'' on "Byronic" "[[ByronicHero Byronic]]" and "pelagic" (the latter of which is [[YouKeepUsingThatWord completely misused]]).
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* BambooTechnology: Even Albacore falls victim to this. Mr. Fenton, a bat, is not only the sonar operator, ''he is the actual sonar''.
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* BambooTechnology: Even Albacore ''Albacore'' falls victim to this. Mr. Fenton, a bat, is not only the sonar operator, ''he is the actual sonar''.
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* CatsAreMean
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* CatsAreMeanCatsAreMean: Especially those who tried to trap Monty, Geegaw and the newborn babies on the bridge.
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* CoolBoat: Albacore is so this.
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* CoolBoat: Albacore ''Albacore'' is so this.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: A lot.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: A lot.lot in comparison to the show.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: At least during the first chapters of ''Under the Bridge'', nobody aboard Albacore knows Widget's name, not even Jürgen; they all call her "The Gray Mouse" (which refers to her gray hair). In fact, neither do readers who haven't been filled in on the story before reading it.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: At least during the first chapters of ''Under the Bridge'', nobody aboard Albacore ''Albacore'' knows Widget's name, not even Jürgen; they all call her "The Gray Mouse" (which refers to her gray hair). In fact, neither do readers who haven't been filled in on the story before reading it.
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That wasn't it.
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[[LampshadeHanging That wasn't it.it]].
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* LoveTriangle: Gidget, Bertie and David in ''Under the Bridge''. Who they are doesn't matter because David is only mentioned by name, and Gidget and Bertie are mere decoration for the cruise ship Minuscule which is sunk by the Albacore a few paragraphs later.
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* LoveTriangle: Gidget, Bertie and David in ''Under the Bridge''. Who they are doesn't matter because David is only mentioned by name, and Gidget and Bertie are mere decoration for the cruise ship Minuscule ''Minuscule'' which is sunk by the Albacore ''Albacore'' a few paragraphs later.
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* PurpleProse: The third chapter of ''Under the Bridge'' starts out with this in the short scene with Bertie and Gidget aboard the R.M.S. Minuscule. It ends when the story cuts to aboard the Albacore which prepares for an attack on the Minuscule.
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* PurpleProse: The third chapter of ''Under the Bridge'' starts out with this in the short scene with Bertie and Gidget aboard the R.M.S. Minuscule. ''Minuscule''. It ends when the story cuts to aboard the Albacore ''Albacore'' which prepares for an attack on the Minuscule.''Minuscule''.
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* RepetitiveName: Kapitänleutnant Jürgen. His family name is Jürgen, his first name is Jürgen, [[spoiler:and his middle name happens to be Jürgen, too]].
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* RepetitiveName: Kapitänleutnant Jürgen. His family name is Jürgen, his first name is Jürgen, [[spoiler:and [[spoiler:[[RuleOfThree and his middle name happens to be Jürgen, too]].too]]]].
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** Although not explicitly mentioned, Albacore is one to the [[Literature/TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderTheSea Nautilus]] (although the latter's Disney live-action version has a full-blown [[TheCameo Cameo]] in the ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' episode "A Creep in the Deep").
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** Although not explicitly mentioned, Albacore ''Albacore'' is one to the [[Literature/TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderTheSea Nautilus]] (although the latter's Disney live-action version has a full-blown [[TheCameo Cameo]] in the ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' episode "A Creep in the Deep").
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** Widget has a "[[Film/IndianaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom Temple of Hate]]" aboard Albacore.
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** Widget has a "[[Film/IndianaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom Temple of Hate]]" aboard Albacore.''Albacore''. This could just as well be a ShoutOut to Music/TheSistersOfMercy.
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* {{Thememobile}}: What'd Widget be without Albacore?
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* {{Thememobile}}: What'd Widget be without Albacore?''Albacore''?
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* TookALevelInKindness: Widget takes several ones.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Widget takes several ones.ones, starting when she has to take care of a young injured sailor squirrel named Andy and culminating with the birth of her son Gimcrack.
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* SpyCatsuit: Widget's black wetsuit.
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* SpyCatsuit: Widget's black wetsuit.wet suit.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Pelagic" means an open zone in the deep ocean. It has nothing to do with cats. Given that Nowak cowrote the MST of ''Under the Bridge'', presumably he looked up what the word meant at some point after writing the story, because the MST beats him up ''heavily'' for misusing the word.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Pelagic" means an open zone in the deep ocean. It has nothing to do with cats. Given that Nowak cowrote co-wrote the MST of ''Under the Bridge'', presumably he looked up what the word meant at some point after writing the story, because the MST beats him up ''heavily'' for misusing the word.
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* TakeThat: Dale's [[CirclesOfHell Circle of Hell]] in ''Under the Bridge'' might be one to MicrosoftWindows 95.
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* TakeThat: Dale's [[CirclesOfHell Circle of Hell]] in ''Under the Bridge'' might be one to MicrosoftWindows UsefulNotes/MicrosoftWindows 95.
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** Although not explicitly mentioned, Albacore is one to the [[TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderTheSea Nautilus]] (although the latter's Disney live-action version has a full-blown [[TheCameo Cameo]] in the ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' episode "A Creep in the Deep").
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** Although not explicitly mentioned, Albacore is one to the [[TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderTheSea [[Literature/TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderTheSea Nautilus]] (although the latter's Disney live-action version has a full-blown [[TheCameo Cameo]] in the ''WesternAnimation/ChipNDaleRescueRangers'' episode "A Creep in the Deep").
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** Widget has a "[[Franchise/IndianaJones Temple of Hate]]" aboard Albacore.
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** Widget has a "[[Franchise/IndianaJones "[[Film/IndianaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom Temple of Hate]]" aboard Albacore.
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** Widget has a "[[IndianaJones Temple of Hate]]" aboard Albacore.
** Dale quotes Darkwing Duck in ''Icarus''. Take a wild guess what exactly he quotes.
** Dale quotes Darkwing Duck in ''Icarus''. Take a wild guess what exactly he quotes.
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** Widget has a "[[IndianaJones "[[Franchise/IndianaJones Temple of Hate]]" aboard Albacore.
** Dale quotesDarkwing Duck WesternAnimation/DarkwingDuck in ''Icarus''. Take a wild guess what exactly he quotes.
** Dale quotes
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* TakeThat: Dale's [[CirclesOfHell Circle of Hell]] in ''Under the Bridge'' might be one to MicrosoftWindows 95.
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** Widget is initially known as [[Literature/FafhrdAndTheGrayMouser The Gray Mouse]].
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* SelfDeprecation: In the aformentioned {{MST}}ing, (which, remember, Nowak himself co-wrote) Mike & the Bots frequently poke fun at the story's dark tone and the overuse of Technobabble. Later, Nowak shows up and depicts himself as a guy who always over analyzes things.
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* SelfDeprecation: In the aformentioned {{MST}}ing, (which, remember, Nowak himself co-wrote) Mike & the Bots frequently poke fun at the story's dark tone and the overuse of Technobabble. Later, Nowak shows up and depicts himself as a guy "dark ComicStrip/{{Dilbert}}" who always over analyzes things.
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* {{MST}}: ''Under the Bridge'' was [=MSTed=] by Nowak himself, along with Matt Plotecher of [[Fanfic/ChipNoirDalesRescueRangers]] fame. Not the only [=MSTing=] they wrote together, but the only ''CDRR'' fanfic [=MSTed=] by its own author.
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* {{MST}}: ''Under the Bridge'' was [=MSTed=] by Nowak himself, along with Matt Plotecher of [[Fanfic/ChipNoirDalesRescueRangers]] ''Fanfic/ChipNoirDalesRescueRangers'' fame. Not the only [=MSTing=] they wrote together, but the only ''CDRR'' fanfic [=MSTed=] by its own author.
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* CryForTheDevil: Widget's past is a really tragic one.
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* {{MST}}: ''Under the Bridge'' was [=MSTed=] by Nowak himself, along with coauthor MAtt Plotecher.
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* {{MST}}: ''Under the Bridge'' was [=MSTed=] by Nowak himself, along with coauthor MAtt Plotecher.Matt Plotecher of [[Fanfic/ChipNoirDalesRescueRangers]] fame. Not the only [=MSTing=] they wrote together, but the only ''CDRR'' fanfic [=MSTed=] by its own author.
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* OldShame: John Nowak has since described himself as "someone who should never have written Rescue Rangers stories", and this series is a punchline in his MST works.
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* LeftHanging: ''Sovereign'' Part 4 is still missing. According to WordOfGod, it had partially been written already, but it shall be rewritten entirely.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: All of this could have been avoided if only [[spoiler:Gadget talked with Widget after the faithful science fair competition.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: All of this could have been avoided if only [[spoiler:Gadget talked with Widget after the faithful fateful science fair competition.]]
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* {{MST}}: ''Under the Bridge'' was [=MSTed=] by Nowak himself, along with a coauthor.
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* {{MST}}: ''Under the Bridge'' was [=MSTed=] by Nowak himself, along with a coauthor.coauthor MAtt Plotecher.
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* BreakTheCutie: Gadget. After Widget attacked the Rangers trying to kill her and turned into a permanent thread, she transforms from the kindest and most compassionate Ranger to a [[spoiler:cold-blooded killer and plans to hunt down and kill Widget first by attacking and sinking her submarine, all hands aboard or not, her weapon of choice illegal or not]]. It is in fact an exaggeration of Gadget's only [[{{Canon}} canonical]] BerserkButton, but this time it's taken so far that some consider it OutOfCharacter.
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* BreakTheCutie: Gadget. After Widget attacked the Rangers trying to kill her and turned into a permanent thread, threat, she transforms from the kindest and most compassionate Ranger to a [[spoiler:cold-blooded killer and plans to hunt down and kill Widget first by attacking and sinking her submarine, all hands aboard or not, her weapon of choice illegal or not]]. It is in fact an exaggeration of Gadget's only [[{{Canon}} canonical]] BerserkButton, but this time it's taken so far that some consider it OutOfCharacter.
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* TheCameo: WesternAnimation/DangerMouse and Penfold appear in ''Sovereign''.
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** Widget also isn't immune, shouting the German command (Los!) right after specifically reminding herself ''not'' to do that.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: All of this could have been avoided if only [[spoiler:Gadget talked with Widget after the faithful science fair competition.]]