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* DarkerAndEdgier: The show in canon is a light-hearted SliceOfLife series about a preteen boy living with his ten sisters. This fic is about him being kidnapped after being thrown out of the house, used as bait so his sisters will be kidnapped, too, and all eleven of them being exposed to magical orbs that irreversibly change their bodies so scientists ca experiment on them. Oh, also? A lot of swearing, a lot of blood, and the kids kill people during their escape. A DarkFic, indeed.
* {{Dehumanization}}: In two forms. First, the Loud siblings being exposed to/fused with the Orbs turned each of them into something more than human (with some of them having new appearances as a result). Second, the scientists (led by Singed) don't treat the Loud siblings as humans even ''before'' the experiments began, and treat them even worse after.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: {{Subverted}} with Dr. Singed, the ForScience EvilGenius who hears Tetherby's reasons for experimenting on the Loud children and notes they're ''incredibly'' questionable, if not outright [[EvilIsPetty petty]]...but also admits he couldn't really care less as long as he can unlock the secrets of the Orbs.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** {{Subverted}} with Dr. Singed, the ForScience EvilGenius who hears Tetherby's reasons for experimenting on the Loud children and notes they're ''incredibly'' questionable, if not outright [[EvilIsPetty petty]]...but also admits he couldn't really care less as long as he can unlock the secrets of theOrbs.Orbs.
** Played straight when Lucy's powers are revealed, as [[TraumaticSuperPowerAwakening it involved her being ripped apart, literally pulling herself back together, and then turning into a Lovecraftian horror beast]]. More than half of the scientists observing the seen are horrified/disgusted to the point of just staring blankly.
** {{Subverted}} with Dr. Singed, the ForScience EvilGenius who hears Tetherby's reasons for experimenting on the Loud children and notes they're ''incredibly'' questionable, if not outright [[EvilIsPetty petty]]...but also admits he couldn't really care less as long as he can unlock the secrets of the
** Played straight when Lucy's powers are revealed, as [[TraumaticSuperPowerAwakening it involved her being ripped apart, literally pulling herself back together, and then turning into a Lovecraftian horror beast]]. More than half of the scientists observing the seen are horrified/disgusted to the point of just staring blankly.
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* LuredIntoATrap: After being left in the woods for half an hour, Lincoln wonders why the mercenaries who were hired by Tetherby to capture the Louds left him there. After hearing his Sisters voices, he realizes he was put there as bait to capture his sisters.
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* LossOfIdentity: This almost happens to the Louds, who've not only been kept from each other for a year while facing painful experimentation, but whose bodies have been irreversibly changed to the point that some of them barely look human anymore. Luckily, though, they each maintain enough sense of self to prevent this trope (which makes sense, given how each of them have big personalities).
* LuredIntoATrap: After being left in the woods for half an hour, Lincoln wonders why the mercenaries who were hired by Tetherby to capture the Louds left him there. After hearing his Sisters voices, [[OhCrap he realizes he was put there as bait to capture hissisters.sisters]].
* LuredIntoATrap: After being left in the woods for half an hour, Lincoln wonders why the mercenaries who were hired by Tetherby to capture the Louds left him there. After hearing his Sisters voices, [[OhCrap he realizes he was put there as bait to capture his
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Shortly after the girls are kidnapped (and Lincoln is re-kidnapped), Luan gives Lord Tetherby an insult that is so good it has all of her siblings laughing.
--> '''Lord Tetherby''': You... unrefined... undisciplined... miscreant maggot of a child! Do you even know who you're dealing with?
--> '''Luan''': A fat man in dire need of a gym membership?
--> '''Lord Tetherby''': You... unrefined... undisciplined... miscreant maggot of a child! Do you even know who you're dealing with?
--> '''Luan''': A fat man in dire need of a gym membership?
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* KidnappedForExperimentation: Tetherby's ultimate plans for the Loud siblings.
