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** The divorce one actually does line up, but only by having ridiculously DoubleStandard laws, [[RuleOfDrama specifically written to force this scenario]]. The wizard always gets custody of the children, if the witch is the one who asks for divorce. If the wizard asks for divorce, it's up to the courts. The law is based on [[StrawMysogynist the claim that any woman who wants a divorce can't possibly be a good mother.]]

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** The divorce one actually does line up, but only by having ridiculously DoubleStandard laws, [[RuleOfDrama specifically written to force this scenario]]. The wizard always gets custody of the children, if the witch is the one who asks for divorce. If the wizard asks for divorce, it's up to the courts. The law is based on [[StrawMysogynist [[StrawMisogynist the claim that any woman who wants a divorce can't possibly be a good mother.]]


* TransplantedCharacterFic: Begins as one, until Hermione [[RememberedICouldFly realizes]] that she's actually supposed to be a badass witch and [[DieForOurShip kills evil!Ron.]]

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** Indeed, everyone is so out of character that one reviewer speculated that the fic took place in the [[Franchise/StarTrek Mirror Universe]].


** Most {{egregious}}ly, Harry wishes he'd never learned about the wizarding world. So you'd rather have stayed with your abusive relatives and [[FridgeLogic never met the great love of your life]] then?

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** Most {{egregious}}ly, JustForFun/{{egregious}}ly, Harry wishes he'd never learned about the wizarding world. So you'd rather have stayed with your abusive relatives and [[FridgeLogic never met the great love of your life]] then?


* AllThereInTheManual: A lot of the author's ideas about the Ron/Hermione relationship seem to come from [[http://www.mugglenet.com/2005/11/madam-puddifoots-ron-loves-hermione-and-he-will-_____-her/ this editorial]], though it's [[{{Plagiarism}} never credited.]]

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* AllThereInTheManual: A lot of the author's ideas about the Ron/Hermione relationship seem to come from [[http://www.mugglenet.com/2005/11/madam-puddifoots-ron-loves-hermione-and-he-will-_____-her/ this editorial]], though it's [[{{Plagiarism}} [[UsefulNotes/{{Plagiarism}} never credited.]]


* StealthPun: Whether this was intentional nobody knows, but: [[{{Erasure}} "live in]] [[PortmanteauCoupleName Harmony"]], really?

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* StealthPun: Whether this was intentional nobody knows, but: [[{{Erasure}} [[Music/{{Erasure}} "live in]] [[PortmanteauCoupleName Harmony"]], really?


* TwoDecadesBehind: Or seven decades. Ron's insistence that his children change from playclothes and be presented to him after work sounds has more in common with The Sound of Music than a working class man in 2017.

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* TwoDecadesBehind: Or seven decades. Ron's insistence that his children change from playclothes and be presented to him after work sounds has more in common with The Sound of Music than a working class man in 2017.early 2010.


* OutOfCharacter: Most {{egregious}}ly, Harry wishes he'd never learned about the wizarding world. So you'd rather have stayed with your abusive relatives and [[FridgeLogic never met the great love of your life]] then?

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* OutOfCharacter: OutOfCharacter:
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Most {{egregious}}ly, Harry wishes he'd never learned about the wizarding world. So you'd rather have stayed with your abusive relatives and [[FridgeLogic never met the great love of your life]] then?then?
** The fic explicitly states that Ginny's behavior in the books was just posturing and that she's really a blood supremacist.


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* TwoDecadesBehind: Or seven decades. Ron's insistence that his children change from playclothes and be presented to him after work sounds has more in common with The Sound of Music than a working class man in 2017.


* NoWomansLand

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* NoWomansLandNoWomansLand: The wizarding world, apparently.


* DearNegativeReader: Chapter 5 opens with one, along with the [[ArgumentumAdLapidem unsupported assertion]] that [=LoPEF=] is "writing the redheads quite in character".


''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997438/1/The_Last_War The Last War]]'' by Lady of Pale Emerald Fires picks up the {{Potterverse}} after everyone has left school. Ron and Hermione are married, and so are Harry and Ginny. [[DeusAngstMachina But all]] [[DieForOurShip isn't well...]]

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997438/1/The_Last_War The Last War]]'' by Lady of Pale Emerald Fires picks up the {{Potterverse}} world of ''Literature/HarryPotter'' after everyone has left school. Ron and Hermione are married, and so are Harry and Ginny. [[DeusAngstMachina But all]] [[DieForOurShip isn't well...]]



* RecycledInSpace: A LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek [-IN THE [[Franchise/HarryPotter POTTERVERSE]]-]!

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* RecycledInSpace: A LifetimeMovieOfTheWeek [-IN THE [[Franchise/HarryPotter POTTERVERSE]]-]! HARRY POTTER]]-]!


* TransplantedCharacterFic: Begins as one, until Hermione [[RememberedICouldFly realizes]] that she's actually supposed to be a {{badass}} witch and [[DieForOurShip kills evil!Ron.]]

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* TransplantedCharacterFic: Begins as one, until Hermione [[RememberedICouldFly realizes]] that she's actually supposed to be a {{badass}} badass witch and [[DieForOurShip kills evil!Ron.]]

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* GRatedSex: In the words of one HMS STFU commenter: "Also, doesn't the writer realize that Erasure's Always [to which they dance at the end of Chapter 4] is about sex?"

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* FlightOfRomance: Hermione's opening monologue refers to the "symbolic flight" interpretation of the ''Prisoner of Azkaban'' Hippogriff ride.

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* TheLastTitle: Though, as noted under NonindicativeName, it's unclear as to what the "Last War" of the title is.

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