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[[https://ficbook.net/readfic/589106 The Coolest Evil Dumbledore Ever]] is a Literature/{{Harry Potter}} ParodyFic gathering together all the stereotypes used in Evil!Dumbledore fanfics. It's written in Russian by [[https://ficbook.net/authors/52963 d88]] and [[https://ficbook.net/authors/39449 Sky Lynx]].
'''It's written in Russian.'''
'''It's written in Russian.'''
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'''It's written in Russian.'''
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* EverythingExplodesEnding: Harry uses a bomb to finally get rid of the Order, the Death Eaters, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Kreacher]] all at once.
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* EverythingExplodesEnding: Harry uses a bomb to finally get rid of the Order, the Death Eaters, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Kreacher]] all at once.
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-->'''Harry''': Do I have a magical guardian?
-->'''Chiefaccountant''': Of course you do, in this genre. In other fanfics this term's rare.
-->'''Chiefaccountant''': Of course you do, in this genre. In other fanfics this term's rare.
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-->'''Harry''': Do I have a magical guardian?
-->'''Chiefaccountant''':guardian?\\
'''Chiefaccountant''': Of course you do, in this genre. In other fanfics this term's rare.
-->'''Chiefaccountant''':
'''Chiefaccountant''': Of course you do, in this genre. In other fanfics this term's rare.
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-->'''Harry''': As for the Weasleys, their whole family's evil! Except for Fred and George: them I would trust.
-->'''Draco''': How can you be sure they're good guys?
-->'''Harry''': It's another stereotype.
-->'''Draco''': How can you be sure they're good guys?
-->'''Harry''': It's another stereotype.
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-->'''Harry''': As for the Weasleys, their whole family's evil! Except for Fred and George: them I would trust. \n-->'''Draco''': \\
'''Draco''': How can you be sure they're goodguys?
-->'''Harry''':guys?\\
'''Harry''': It's another stereotype.
'''Draco''': How can you be sure they're good
-->'''Harry''':
'''Harry''': It's another stereotype.
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* SparedByAdaptation: Fred, Snape, and Voldemort.
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! This fanfic contains examples of:
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Dumbledore, most of the Order, including the Weasleys, and Neville are power-hungry, greedy and manipulative traitors.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Dumbledore, most of the Order, including Order (including the Weasleys, Weasleys), and Neville are power-hungry, greedy and manipulative traitors.
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** In his start-of-the-term speech Dumbledore repeats that the name of the Forbidden Forest means it's forbidden to go there. He says he's tired of dozens of idiots who don't get the hint.
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** In his start-of-the-term opening term speech Dumbledore repeats that the name of the Forbidden Forest means it's forbidden to go there. He says he's tired of dozens of idiots who don't get the hint.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* LemonyNarrator: The authors take it UpToEleven.
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* LemonyNarrator: The authors take it UpToEleven.up to eleven.
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* BaldOfAwesome: Harry's new style.
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* MandatoryLine: Lampshaded and spoofed. The authors give Blaise Zabini some lines, because, as the narration helpfully says, he has to say ''something'' if he is in the plot all.
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* MandatoryLine: Lampshaded and spoofed. The authors give Blaise Zabini some lines, because, as the narration helpfully says, he has to say ''something'' if he is in the plot at all.
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* BigBad: Dumbledore is everything an Evil!Dumbledore ought to be – he steals money from Harry and the Weasleys, he alone put Black in Azkaban, he made up the prophecy with Trelawney's help, and so on.
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* BigBad: Dumbledore is everything an Evil!Dumbledore ought to be – – he steals money from Harry and the Weasleys, he alone put Black in Azkaban, he made up the prophecy with Trelawney's help, and so on.
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* CutHimselfShaving: When Harry touches Slytherin's sword, his fingers fall off. He gets promptly healed by Madam Pomfrey – after telling her he had only been a bit too energetic when biting his nails.
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* CutHimselfShaving: When Harry touches Slytherin's sword, his fingers fall off. He gets promptly healed by Madam Pomfrey – – after telling her he had only been a bit too energetic when biting his nails.
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* BigBad: Dumbledore is everything an Evil!Dumbledore ought to be – he steals money from Harry and the Weasleys, he alone put Black in Azkaban, he made up the prophecy with Trelawney's help, and so on.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: When Harry comes to murder Ollivander, the latter is absolutely mad at him… for not being able to pronounce Avada Kedavra properly and having to try it several times.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: When Harry comes to murder Ollivander, the latter is absolutely mad at him… for not being able to pronounce Avada Kedavra properly and having to try it several times.
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* BigBad: Dumbledore is everything an Evil!Dumbledore ought to be – – he steals money from Harry and the Weasleys, he alone put Black in Azkaban, he made up the prophecy with Trelawney's help, and so on.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: When Harry comes to murder Ollivander, the latter is absolutely mad athim… him... for not being able to pronounce Avada Kedavra properly and having to try it several times.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: When Harry comes to murder Ollivander, the latter is absolutely mad at
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* CutHimselfShaving: When Harry touches Slytherin's sword, his fingers fall off. He gets promptly healed by Madam Pomfrey – after telling her he had only been a bit too energetic when biting his nails.
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* CutHimselfShaving: When Harry touches Slytherin's sword, his fingers fall off. He gets promptly healed by Madam Pomfrey – – after telling her he had only been a bit too energetic when biting his nails.
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: All of a sudden, Dudley wants to make friends with Harry… but Harry doesn't. He sends the Dursley family away to an African resort, and later they are murdered by Dumbledore's minions.
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: All of a sudden, Dudley wants to make friends with Harry… Harry... but Harry doesn't. He sends the Dursley family away to an African resort, and later they are murdered by Dumbledore's minions.
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-->Dumbledore was waiting for Harry in his office. Guess what he was doing? But of course he was having tea with lemon drops! Oh yes, in fanfics the headmaster’s a great fan of tea. In canon, now there he was always busy with serious stuff, but here he always has time for tea.
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-->Dumbledore was waiting for Harry in his office. Guess what he was doing? But of course he was having tea with lemon drops! Oh yes, in fanfics the headmaster’s headmaster's a great fan of tea. In canon, now there he was always busy with serious stuff, but here he always has time for tea.
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* CondescendingCompassion. The narration. "Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
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* CondescendingCompassion. The narration. "Ron narrators
-->Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
-->Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body.
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** Lampshaded in the narration: fanfics, Malfoy has to be called a ferret, so Ron does so constantly.
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** Lampshaded in the narration: in fanfics, Malfoy has to be called a ferret, so Ron does so constantly.
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* ClicheStorm: Done deliberately as the whole premise of the story.
* CondescendingCompassion. The authors. "Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
* CondescendingCompassion. The authors. "Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
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* ClicheStorm: Done deliberately InUniverse as the whole premise of the story.
* CondescendingCompassion. Theauthors.narration. "Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
* CondescendingCompassion. The
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* MandatoryLine: Lampshaded and spoofed. The authors give Blaise Zabini some lines, because, as the narration helpfully says, he has to say ''something'' if he is in the plot all.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Fudge, who supported Harry and ended up being the most successful Minister in history.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Dumbledore, most of the Order, including the Weasleys, and Neville.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Dumbledore, most of the Order, including the Weasleys, and Neville.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
** Fudge, who supported Harry and ended up being the most successful Minister inhistory.history.
** The Malfoys, who used to be good friends with Harry's parents and become practically family to Harry himself.
** Peter Pettigrew betrayed the Potters while under the Imperius Curse (cast by Dumbledore).
* AdaptationalVillainy: Dumbledore, most of the Order, including the Weasleys, andNeville.Neville are power-hungry, greedy and manipulative traitors.
** Fudge, who supported Harry and ended up being the most successful Minister in
** The Malfoys, who used to be good friends with Harry's parents and become practically family to Harry himself.
** Peter Pettigrew betrayed the Potters while under the Imperius Curse (cast by Dumbledore).
* AdaptationalVillainy: Dumbledore, most of the Order, including the Weasleys, and
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* CaptainObvious: In his start-of-the-term speech Dumbledore repeats that the name of the Forbidden Forest means it's forbidden to go there. He says he's tired of dozens of idiots who don't get the hint.
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* CaptainObvious: CaptainObvious:
** In his start-of-the-term speech Dumbledore repeats that the name of the Forbidden Forest means it's forbidden to go there. He says he's tired of dozens of idiots who don't get the hint.
** In his start-of-the-term speech Dumbledore repeats that the name of the Forbidden Forest means it's forbidden to go there. He says he's tired of dozens of idiots who don't get the hint.
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* CondescendingCompassion. The authors. "Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after brainstorming. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
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* CondescendingCompassion. The authors. "Ron wasn't with them. He was still ill in the hospital wing after brainstorming.the brains' attack. After all, brains are entirely foreign to his body."
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* EasilyOverheardConversation: In the beginning Harry, Hermione, Draco and Blaise overhear Dumbledore, Alastor Moody and Arthur Weasley discussing their EvilPlan in Dumbledore's study.
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* EasilyOverheardConversation: EasilyOverheardConversation:
** In the beginning Harry, Hermione, Draco and Blaise overhear Dumbledore, Alastor Moody and Arthur Weasley discussing their EvilPlan in Dumbledore's study.
** In the beginning Harry, Hermione, Draco and Blaise overhear Dumbledore, Alastor Moody and Arthur Weasley discussing their EvilPlan in Dumbledore's study.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Goblin logic, to be precise. Chiefaccountant goblins need Harry's blood to know how much money there is on his account.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: When the Weasleys ask to legally adopt Harry, their petition is dealt with by Dolores Umbridge, who, still thinking that Harry likes the family, makes it an EpicFail.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: NiceJobFixingItVillain:
** When the Weasleys ask to legally adopt Harry, their petition is dealt with by Dolores Umbridge, who, still thinking that Harry likes the family, makes it an EpicFail.
** When the Weasleys ask to legally adopt Harry, their petition is dealt with by Dolores Umbridge, who, still thinking that Harry likes the family, makes it an EpicFail.
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* NoNameGiven: The Defense professor. We don't know either his/her looks, name, or even sex. The only thing known is that (s)he's a simple Auror.
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* NoNameGiven: The Defense professor. We don't know either his/her looks, name, or even sex.gender. The only thing known is that (s)he's a simple Auror.
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* RunningGag: In fanfics, Malfoy has to be called a ferret.
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* RunningGag: In RunningGag:
** Lampshaded in the narration: fanfics, Malfoy has to be called aferret.ferret, so Ron does so constantly.
** Lampshaded in the narration: fanfics, Malfoy has to be called a
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* TakeThatScrappy: Harry thinks of sparing Pettigrew because the latter became a traitor under Imperius, but then kills him because nobody likes him anyway.
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* TakeThatScrappy: InUniverse. Harry thinks of sparing Pettigrew because the latter became a traitor under Imperius, but then kills him because nobody likes him anyway.
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* UselessProtagonist: Blaise Zabini is there because he just is. Later on he gets OutOfFocus more and more.
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* UselessProtagonist: UselessProtagonist:
** Blaise Zabini is there because he just is. Later on he gets OutOfFocus more and more.
** Blaise Zabini is there because he just is. Later on he gets OutOfFocus more and more.
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* GenreBlindness: Harry sometimes.
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* GenreBlindness: GenreBlindness:
** Harry sometimes.
** Harry sometimes.
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* LemonyNarrator: The authors take it UpToEleven.
-->Dumbledore was waiting for Harry in his office. Guess what he was doing? But of course he was having tea with lemon drops! Oh yes, in fanfics the headmaster’s a great fan of tea. In canon, now there he was always busy with serious stuff, but here he always has time for tea.
-->Dumbledore was waiting for Harry in his office. Guess what he was doing? But of course he was having tea with lemon drops! Oh yes, in fanfics the headmaster’s a great fan of tea. In canon, now there he was always busy with serious stuff, but here he always has time for tea.
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* AsYouKnow: Alastor Moody forgets some details from Dumbledore's plan, so that Dumbledore would explain them and the readers will know the plan too.
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* AsYouKnow: As befits a ParodyFic, lampshaded at every possible moment.
** Alastor Moody forgets some details from Dumbledore's plan, so that Dumbledore would explain them and the readers will know the plan too.
** Alastor Moody forgets some details from Dumbledore's plan, so that Dumbledore would explain them and the readers will know the plan too.
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'It's written in Russian.'
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