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''Tempered In Water'' is a AltFic following the everyday life of '''A Master and His Servant''' ([[HappinessInSlavery or so the Servant says]]) that is Naruto, our titular Idealistic but IdiotHero, and Haku, a BrokenBird who almost lost her reason to live ([[SamusIsAGirl yes, HER]]).
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''Tempered In Water'' is a AltFic following the everyday life of '''A Master a master and His Servant''' his servant ([[HappinessInSlavery or so the Servant says]]) that is servant claims]])... in other words Naruto, our titular Idealistic idealistic but IdiotHero, [[IdiotHero idiotic hero]], and Haku, a BrokenBird who almost lost her reason to live ([[SamusIsAGirl yes, HER]]).
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* AngstWhatAngst: Averted. Everyone, especially Naruto, {{Wangst}}s about their first kill, however said angst passes and becomes part of CharacterDevelopment.
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* AccidentalHero: By means of stupidity, no less. 1. He tried to kill Haku, except he stabbed her in the WRONG places. 2. Not retrieving kunai he used and preventing heavy bleeding to occur. As the result, Haku survives (if barely).
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* AscendedExtra: Downplayed Sakura IS NOT really an Extra but she is given more attention than in Canon.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Almost but [[MessianicArchetype Naruto]] put a stop to it.
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* InnocentCohabitation: Haku and Naruto live together.
* JerkAss: Sasuke, even more so than the Canon.
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* LawfulStupid: Hiruze, accepts Haku despite the risk but had to enforce the law regarding Haku's behavior.
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* LawfulGood/ LawfulStupid: Hiruze, accepts Haku despite the risk but had to enforce the law regarding Haku's behavior.
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* LawfulGood/ LawfulStupid: Hiruze, accepts Haku despite the risk but had to enforce the law regarding Haku's behavior.
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* AccidentalHero: By means of stupidity, no less. 1. He tried to kill Haku, except he stabbed her in the WRONG places. 2. Not retrieving Kunai he used and preventing heavy bleeding to occur. As the result, Haku survives (if barely).
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* AccidentalHero: By means of stupidity, no less. 1. He tried to kill Haku, except he stabbed her in the WRONG places. 2. Not retrieving Kunai kunai he used and preventing heavy bleeding to occur. As the result, Haku survives (if barely).
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* AscendedExtra: Downplayed Sakura IS NOT really an Extra but she's given more attention than in Canon.
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* AscendedExtra: Downplayed Sakura IS NOT really an Extra but she's she is given more attention than in Canon.Canon.
* DeadFic: Has not been updated since 1 February 2009.
* DeadFic: Has not been updated since 1 February 2009.
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* InnocentCohabitation: Haku and Naruto and Haku live together.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Haku, for most of her life was only able to feel happiness when serving her master. [[CharacterDevelopment She changed over time.
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* HappinessInSlavery: Haku, for most of her life was only able to feel happiness when serving her master. [[CharacterDevelopment She changed over time.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Almost but [[TheMessiah Naruto]] put a stop to it.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Almost but [[TheMessiah [[MessianicArchetype Naruto]] put a stop to it.
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Tempered In Water is a AltFic that somehow lighthearted but still serious at the same time, following the everyday life of '''A Master and His Servant''' ([[HappinessInSlavery or so the Servant say]]) that is Naruto, our titular Idealistic but IdiotHero, and Haku, a BrokenBird who almost lose her reason to live ([[SamusIsAGirl yes, HER]]).
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183054/1/Tempered_in_Water Read here for its awesomeness]].
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183054/1/Tempered_in_Water Read here for its awesomeness]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183054/1/Tempered_in_Water Read
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* AccidentalHero: By means of stupidity, no less. 1. He tried to kill Haku, except he stab her in the WRONG places. 2. Not retrieving Kunai he used, prevent heavy bleeding to occurs. As the result, Haku survives (if barely).
* AngstWhatAngst: Realistically averted, everyone, especially Naruto, is {{Wangst}}ing about their first kill, however said angst stick not too long and actually became a part of CharacterDevelopment.
* AscendedExtra: Sakura IS NOT really an Extra, however she's given more attention than in Canon.
* BrokenBird: Haku, [[TheWoobie MY GAWD]]!
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Many of them, but Naruto's inspirational speech to Haku just outstanding.
* DrivenToSuicide: Almost, thankfully there's [[TheMessiah Naruto]].
* HappinessInSlavery: Haku, for most of her live, only able to feel happiness [[TearJerker IN A DEVOTION TO HER MASTER]]. [[CharacterDevelopment She changed over time, if realistically slow]].
* InnocentCohabitation: Naruto and Haku. For now.
* AngstWhatAngst: Realistically averted, everyone, especially Naruto, is {{Wangst}}ing about their first kill, however said angst stick not too long and actually became a part of CharacterDevelopment.
* AscendedExtra: Sakura IS NOT really an Extra, however she's given more attention than in Canon.
* BrokenBird: Haku, [[TheWoobie MY GAWD]]!
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Many of them, but Naruto's inspirational speech to Haku just outstanding.
* DrivenToSuicide: Almost, thankfully there's [[TheMessiah Naruto]].
* HappinessInSlavery: Haku, for most of her live, only able to feel happiness [[TearJerker IN A DEVOTION TO HER MASTER]]. [[CharacterDevelopment She changed over time, if realistically slow]].
* InnocentCohabitation: Naruto and Haku. For now.
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* AccidentalHero: By means of stupidity, no less. 1. He tried to kill Haku, except he stab stabbed her in the WRONG places. 2. Not retrieving Kunai he used, prevent used and preventing heavy bleeding to occurs.occur. As the result, Haku survives (if barely).
* AngstWhatAngst:Realistically averted, everyone, Averted. Everyone, especially Naruto, is {{Wangst}}ing {{Wangst}}s about their first kill, however said angst stick not too long passes and actually became a becomes part of CharacterDevelopment.
* AscendedExtra: Downplayed Sakura IS NOT really anExtra, however Extra but she's given more attention than in Canon.
*BrokenBird: Haku, [[TheWoobie MY GAWD]]!
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Many of them, but Naruto's inspirational speech to Haku just outstanding.
*DrivenToSuicide: Almost, thankfully there's Almost but [[TheMessiah Naruto]].
Naruto]] put a stop to it.
* HappinessInSlavery: Haku, for most of herlive, life was only able to feel happiness [[TearJerker IN A DEVOTION TO HER MASTER]]. when serving her master. [[CharacterDevelopment She changed over time, if realistically slow]].
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* InnocentCohabitation: Naruto andHaku. For now.Haku live together.
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* {{Kuudere}}: Haku, SOMEWHAT.
* LawfulGood/ LawfulStupid: Hiruzen, accept Haku despite being risky, but had to enforce the totally unjust law regarding Haku's behavior. He almost hate his own self for this reason.
* SamusIsAGirl: Haku, [[CrapsackWorld for convenience]].
* StepfordSmiler: Sakura, beyond her cheerful nature and slightly cruel treatment on Naruto, she developed [[OvershadowedByAwesome Inferiority Complex]] over him (and Sasuke).
* SweetDreamsFuel: Oh hell, the whole relationship between Naruto and Haku.
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: Haku's 'reaction' upon her newly-founded [[ClingyJealousGirl jealously]], she keep reminding herself that Naruto is her Master and no more.
* YamatoNadeshiko: Haku, but even more so than the canon.
* LawfulGood/ LawfulStupid: Hiruzen, accept Haku despite being risky, but had to enforce the totally unjust law regarding Haku's behavior. He almost hate his own self for this reason.
* SamusIsAGirl: Haku, [[CrapsackWorld for convenience]].
* StepfordSmiler: Sakura, beyond her cheerful nature and slightly cruel treatment on Naruto, she developed [[OvershadowedByAwesome Inferiority Complex]] over him (and Sasuke).
* SweetDreamsFuel: Oh hell, the whole relationship between Naruto and Haku.
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: Haku's 'reaction' upon her newly-founded [[ClingyJealousGirl jealously]], she keep reminding herself that Naruto is her Master and no more.
* YamatoNadeshiko: Haku, but even more so than the canon.
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* SamusIsAGirl: Haku, [[CrapsackWorld for convenience]].
* StepfordSmiler: Sakura, beyond her cheerful nature and slightly cruel treatment
* YamatoNadeshiko: Haku, but even more so than the canon.
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* BetterThanItSounds: This is story of Fem!Haku meets Naruto where she isn't dead but instead devoted herself to him.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Realistically averted, everyone, especially Naruto, is {{Wangst}}ing about their first kill, [[IGotBetter however said angst stick not too long and actually became a part of]] CharacterDevelopment.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Realistically averted, everyone, especially Naruto, is {{Wangst}}ing about their first kill, [[IGotBetter however said angst stick not too long and actually became a part of]] of CharacterDevelopment.