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* FieryRedhead: Ruby Bloodmane. Although whether or not it's [[JerkAssFacade an act]] or she's [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk just plain mean]], is unknown.
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* FieryRedhead: Ruby Bloodmane. Although whether or not it's [[JerkAssFacade an act]] act or she's [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk just plain mean]], is unknown.
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* [[spoiler:ParentalSubstitute:]] [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]] becomes one.
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* [[spoiler:ParentalSubstitute:]] ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]] becomes one.
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* [[spoiler:PromotionToParent:]] Happens to [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer. With her mother dead, the very young Paprika looks to her to be her new mother.]]
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* [[spoiler:PromotionToParent:]] PromotionToParent: Happens to [[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer. With her mother dead, the very young Paprika looks to her to be her new mother.]]
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** [[BadAssBookWorm Twilight Sparkle]] as well. She [[BeamOWar blasted]] a character's [[AnArmandaLeg FOREARM]] off! Not to mention, [[spoiler:slayed a bunch of changelings [[PlotTwist pretending to be Celestia's soldiers]]]]
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** [[BadAssBookWorm Twilight Sparkle]] as well. She [[BeamOWar blasted]] a character's [[AnArmandaLeg FOREARM]] off! Not to mention, [[spoiler:slayed [[spoiler:slew a bunch of changelings [[PlotTwist pretending to be Celestia's soldiers]]]]
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However... newer threats have emerged since then; plotting to break the alliance by whatever means necessary. Such as a cult of heretics, who use blasphemous practices to wreak havoc on pony-kind.
Twilight Sparkle and her friends, become aware of this issue and plan to put a stop to it. But sometimes, fate doesn't play kindly to heroes. Meanwhile, an unfortunate pony is imprisoned in a world she knows nothing about. A tale riddled with twists and turns around every corner, an inevitable sense of danger, and fear of a possible war. Will there be saviors to prevent an all out war? Or will the two worlds be hellbent to destroy the other? We shall see.
Twilight Sparkle and her friends, become aware of this issue and plan to put a stop to it. But sometimes, fate doesn't play kindly to heroes. Meanwhile, an unfortunate pony is imprisoned in a world she knows nothing about. A tale riddled with twists and turns around every corner, an inevitable sense of danger, and fear of a possible war. Will there be saviors to prevent an all out war? Or will the two worlds be hellbent to destroy the other? We shall see.
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However... newer threats have emerged since then; plotting to break the alliance by whatever means necessary. Such as a cult of heretics, heretics who use blasphemous practices to wreak havoc on pony-kind.
Twilight Sparkle and herfriends, friends become aware of this issue and plan to put a stop to it. But sometimes, fate doesn't play kindly to heroes. Meanwhile, an unfortunate pony is imprisoned in a world she knows nothing about. A tale riddled with twists and turns around every corner, an inevitable sense of danger, and fear of a possible war. Will there be saviors to prevent an all out all-out war? Or will the two worlds each world be hellbent to destroy on destroying the other? We shall see.
Twilight Sparkle and her
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** Void Wing would [[BadAss risk life and limb]], to [[TeamMom protect her little brother]], Lemon Lime. She even helped Sunset Shimmer fight a huge bird!
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** Void Wing would [[BadAss risk life and limb]], limb, to [[TeamMom protect her little brother]], Lemon Lime. She even helped Sunset Shimmer fight a huge bird!
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* TeamMom: Void Wing. Never mess with her brother... [[BadAss ever.]]
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* TeamMom: Void Wing. Never mess with her brother... [[BadAss ever.]]
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* AncientConspiracy: The Equestrian Universal Defense could count, considering the organization started [[spoiler:some time after Ronia became "sealed of".]]
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* AncientConspiracy: The Equestrian Universal Defense could count, Defense, considering the organization started [[spoiler:some time after Ronia became "sealed of".off".]]
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* ThroneMadeOfX: Nezend's Ivory Throne.
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* MysteriousPast: Kapral tells Seris a [[DarkAndTroubledPast tragic backstory about himself]]. And then vaguely tells him it was a [[AvertedTrope lie]]. As for why he lied remains unknown, but it makes his past all the more mysterious.
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* MysteriousPast: Kapral tells Seris a [[DarkAndTroubledPast tragic backstory about himself]]. And then vaguely tells him it [[spoiler:it was a [[AvertedTrope lie]]. lie]]]]. As for why he lied [[spoiler:he lied]] remains unknown, but it makes his past all the more mysterious.
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* MysteriousPast: Kapral tells Seris a [[DarkAndTroubledPast tragic backstory about himself]]. And then vaguely tells him it was a lie. As for why he lied remains unknown, but it makes his past all the more mysterious.
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* MysteriousPast: Kapral tells Seris a [[DarkAndTroubledPast tragic backstory about himself]]. And then vaguely tells him it was a lie.[[AvertedTrope lie]]. As for why he lied remains unknown, but it makes his past all the more mysterious.
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* CutShort: The story, ''Swordstorm Book I'', ended up being canceled at around chapter [[spoiler:19]]
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Ruby, ''definintely'' qualifies! She's so possessive of Void Wing, she can hardly tolerate her ''looking'' at stallions! And even got jealous of Sunset Shimmer!
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Ruby, ''definintely'' qualifies! She's so possessive of Void Wing, she can hardly tolerate her ''looking'' at stallions! And even got jealous of Sunset Shimmer![[spoiler:Sunset Shimmer]]!
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Ruby, ''definintely'' qualifies! She's so possessive of Void Wing, she can hardly tolerate her ''looking'' at stallions! And even got jealous of Sunset Shimmer!
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* CutShort: The story, ''Swordstorm Book I'', ended up being canceled at around chapter [[spoiler:19]]
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** Seris is definitely "not" perfect either. He tends to be sarcastic, yet is also a bit selfish.
** Lightning Dust from the "Sellsword" side story, is mostly a [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonist]] who plans to seek vengeance on the pony who got her kicked out of the Wonderbolts Academy: Rainbow Dash.
*** [[spoiler:She ends up making an appearance in chapter 18 in "Swordstorm Book I", and will most likely make more appearances.]]
** Lightning Dust from the "Sellsword" side story, is mostly a [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonist]] who plans to seek vengeance on the pony who got her kicked out of the Wonderbolts Academy: Rainbow Dash.
*** [[spoiler:She ends up making an appearance in chapter 18 in "Swordstorm Book I", and will most likely make more appearances.]]
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** Seris is definitely "not" ''not'' perfect either. He tends to be sarcastic, yet is also a bit selfish.
** Lightning Dust from the"Sellsword" ''Sellsword'' side story, is mostly a [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonist]] who plans to seek vengeance on the pony who got her kicked out of the Wonderbolts Academy: Rainbow Dash.
*** [[spoiler:She ends up making an appearance in chapter 18 in"Swordstorm ''Swordstorm Book I", I'', and will most likely make more appearances.]]
** Lightning Dust from the
*** [[spoiler:She ends up making an appearance in chapter 18 in
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