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''Stealing Harry'', officially referred as "Stealing Harryverse" is an AltFic fan fiction written by copperbadge, formally known as Sam The Storyteller.
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''Stealing Harry'', officially referred as "Stealing Harryverse" Harryverse", is an AltFic fan fiction written by copperbadge, formally known as Sam The Storyteller.
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** Narcissa has lost Lucius to Azkaban and is left in disgrace. She doesn't take her situation well and takes
her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
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** Narcissa has lost Lucius to Azkaban and is left in disgrace. She doesn't take her situation well and takes
takes her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
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The work is very popular among Remus/Sirius shippers, though others enjoy it as well. Sadly, though ''Stealing Harry'' is complete, its sequel, ''Laocoon's Children,'' was a DeadFic for a very long time. However, the author compilled and completed the series on Archive of Our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/58157 here]]
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The work is very popular among Remus/Sirius shippers, though others enjoy it as well. Sadly, though ''Stealing Harry'' is complete, its sequel, ''Laocoon's Children,'' was a DeadFic for a very long time. However, the author compilled compiled and completed the series on Archive of Our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/58157 here]]
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The work is very popular among Remus/Sirius shippers, though others enjoy it as well. Sadly, though ''Stealing Harry'' is complete, its sequel, ''Laocoon's Children,'' was a DeadFic for a very long time. However the author compilled and completed the series in Archive of Our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/58157 here]]
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The work is very popular among Remus/Sirius shippers, though others enjoy it as well. Sadly, though ''Stealing Harry'' is complete, its sequel, ''Laocoon's Children,'' was a DeadFic for a very long time. However However, the author compilled and completed the series in on Archive of Our Own [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/58157 here]]
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** Vernon and Petunia are in charge of raising Harry, but lock him in a tiny closet and allow Dudley to bully him relentlessly. Witnessing this treatment is what motivates Sirius to forcibly take custody of Harry and give him a happier life.
** Narcissa has lost Lucius to Azkaban, and is left in disgrace. She doesn't take her situation well and takes out her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
* AdaptationalBadass: While no slouch in canon, Nymphadora Tonks is much more accomplished thanks to her expanded role [[spoiler: including becomind the second-year D.A instructor instead of Lockheart, and killing the basilisk]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew is far worse here than he ever was in canon, and stronger as well. He's the main antagonist of The Philosopher's Stone rather than Quirrel, who is just his Dragon]]
** Narcissa has lost Lucius to Azkaban, and is left in disgrace. She doesn't take her situation well and takes out her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
* AdaptationalBadass: While no slouch in canon, Nymphadora Tonks is much more accomplished thanks to her expanded role [[spoiler: including becomind the second-year D.A instructor instead of Lockheart, and killing the basilisk]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew is far worse here than he ever was in canon, and stronger as well. He's the main antagonist of The Philosopher's Stone rather than Quirrel, who is just his Dragon]]
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** Vernon and Petunia are in charge of raising Harry, Harry but lock him in a tiny closet and allow Dudley to bully him relentlessly. Witnessing this treatment is what motivates Sirius to forcibly take custody of Harry and give him a happier life.
** Narcissa has lost Lucius toAzkaban, Azkaban and is left in disgrace. She doesn't take her situation well and takes out takes
her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
* AdaptationalBadass: While no slouch in canon, Nymphadora Tonks is much more accomplished thanks to her expandedrole role, [[spoiler: including becomind becoming the second-year D.A A. instructor instead of Lockheart, and Lockhart and killing the basilisk]]
basilisk]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew is far worse here than he ever was in canon, and stronger as well. He's the main antagonist ofThe ''The Philosopher's Stone Stone'' rather than Quirrel, Quirrell, who is just his Dragon]]Dragon]].
** Narcissa has lost Lucius to
her frequent, unpredictable bouts of anger out on poor Draco.
* AdaptationalBadass: While no slouch in canon, Nymphadora Tonks is much more accomplished thanks to her expanded
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: Peter Pettigrew is far worse here than he ever was in canon, and stronger as well. He's the main antagonist of
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* {{Happily Adopted}}: Harry, after Remus and Sirius 'kidnap' him from [[MuggleFosterParents Petunia]] and [[EvilUncle Vernon Dursley]].
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* {{Happily Adopted}}: Harry, after Remus and Sirius 'kidnap' "kidnap" him from [[MuggleFosterParents Petunia]] and [[EvilUncle Vernon Dursley]].
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* {{Meaningful Rename}}: Harry's alias as Professor Snape's nephew is "Parvus Rana," which means "small frog."
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* {{Meaningful Rename}}: Harry's alias as Professor Snape's nephew is "Parvus Rana," Rana", which means "small frog."
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* ShoutOut: To the ancient Rome {{sculpture|s}} ''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons'', which is also called the ''Laocoön Group''. In ''Literature/TheAeneid'', Laocoön is silenced from telling the truth about the Troyan horse by the gods, who sic snakes onto him.
* {{Sssssnake Talk}}: Just like in canon, Harry.
* {{Sssssnake Talk}}: Just like in canon, Harry.
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* ShoutOut: To the ancient Rome Roman {{sculpture|s}} ''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons'', which is also called the ''Laocoön Group''. In ''Literature/TheAeneid'', Laocoön is silenced from telling the truth about the Troyan horse by the gods, who sic snakes onto him.
* {{Sssssnake Talk}}:Just Harry, just like in canon, Harry.canon.
* {{Sssssnake Talk}}:
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* TuckAndCover: During the attack on the Burrow Remus physically blocks Harry from several curses, since they don't affect him as a werewolf.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Remus, "Hit him?" the man [Remus] asked. "I'd as soon hit a child.'
* WouldntHurtAChild: Remus, "Hit him?" the man [Remus] asked. "I'd as soon hit a child.'
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* TuckAndCover: During the attack on the Burrow Burrow, Remus physically blocks Harry from several curses, since they don't affect him as a werewolf.
* WouldntHurtAChild:Remus, "Hit Remus.
--->"Hit him?" the man [Remus] asked. "I'd as soon hit a child.'"
* WouldntHurtAChild:
--->"Hit him?" the man [Remus] asked. "I'd as soon hit a child.
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* ShouOut: To the ancient Rome {{sculpture|s}} ''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons'', which is also called the ''Laocoön Group''. In ''Literature/TheAeneid'', Laocoön is silenced from telling the truth about the Troyan horse by the gods, who sic snakes onto him.
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* ShouOut: ShoutOut: To the ancient Rome {{sculpture|s}} ''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons'', which is also called the ''Laocoön Group''. In ''Literature/TheAeneid'', Laocoön is silenced from telling the truth about the Troyan horse by the gods, who sic snakes onto him.
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* MadeOfIron: Lupin. Being a werewolf has blessed Lupin with [[GoodThingYouCanHeal incredible healing abilities]] and resistance to most curses. He can take an Killing Curse full-on with only a splitting headache afterwards.
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* MadeOfIron: Lupin. Being a werewolf has blessed Lupin with [[GoodThingYouCanHeal incredible healing abilities]] and resistance to most curses. He can take an a Killing Curse full-on with only a splitting headache afterwards.
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* MrFanservice: Sirius, to the point where he's seen as one of the most eligible bachelors in the wizarding world, and much speculation is made of his dating life. They all seem to overlook his "valet" Remus Lupin.
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* MrFanservice: Sirius, to the point where he's seen as one of the most eligible bachelors in the wizarding world, and much speculation is made of about his dating life. They all seem to overlook his "valet" Remus Lupin.
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* ShouOut: To the ancient Rome {{sculpture|s}} ''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons''. In ''Literature/TheAeneid'', Laocoön is silenced from telling the truth about the Troyan horse by the gods, who sic snakes onto him. The sculpture goes further and makes his children suffer the same fate.
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* ShouOut: To the ancient Rome {{sculpture|s}} ''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons''.''Art/LaocoonAndHisSons'', which is also called the ''Laocoön Group''. In ''Literature/TheAeneid'', Laocoön is silenced from telling the truth about the Troyan horse by the gods, who sic snakes onto him. The sculpture goes further and makes his children suffer the same fate.
