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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[http://www.ashido.com/temp/HunterSmokerfpregrifffantasy.gif Invoked for laughs]] at how unrealistic many fantasies about GirlsLove works, including SelfFanservice and the whole [[{{AThreesomeIsHot}} "lesbians will totally make an exception for me!"]] idea.
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[http://www.ashido.com/temp/HunterSmokerfpregrifffantasy.gif Invoked for laughs]] at how unrealistic many fantasies about GirlsLove female focused QueerRomance works, including SelfFanservice and the whole [[{{AThreesomeIsHot}} "lesbians will totally make an exception for me!"]] idea.
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** CatSmile: [[http://community.livejournal.com/respectawoman/17068.html#cutid1 Hunter pulls them off a lot in Shimeji form.]]
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** It's [[DiscussedTrope discussed]] by Charger and Hunter in the [[http://www.lolhelensucks.com/images/huntersmoker/ChargerHuntercuredmousey1.gif Cured!AU]], with Charger suggesting that Mousey deliberately seeks out women who she knows will reject her as a way to self-aggrandize and avoid having to actually confront her own feelings.
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* ICanChangeMyBeloved: A DeconstructedTrope with each of Smoker's relationships.
** Juan thinks he's being a good boyfriend by trying to fix Smoker's flaws and "flaws", but she's obviously hurt by his criticisms and failure to accept her for who she is.
** Mousey's attempts to "fix" Smoker are mostly meant to feed her ego and fish for compliments from others for her "good deeds", even if she's genuinely concerned about Smoker's well-being.
** Hunter acknowledges Smoker's rough edges and argues with her on certain things, but [[DefiedTrope actively avoids]] trying to force Smoker to change. As a result, their relationship is the healthiest one that Smoker's ever had.
** Juan thinks he's being a good boyfriend by trying to fix Smoker's flaws and "flaws", but she's obviously hurt by his criticisms and failure to accept her for who she is.
** Mousey's attempts to "fix" Smoker are mostly meant to feed her ego and fish for compliments from others for her "good deeds", even if she's genuinely concerned about Smoker's well-being.
** Hunter acknowledges Smoker's rough edges and argues with her on certain things, but [[DefiedTrope actively avoids]] trying to force Smoker to change. As a result, their relationship is the healthiest one that Smoker's ever had.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Mousey frames everything that happens in relation to how it makes ''her'' feel, regardless of the effects on others, to the point that when [[spoiler: Smoker gets stabbed]] her first words are "Why does this keep happening to me?"
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* AdaptationalNationality: Hunter is Chinese in the Cowboy!AU whilst being Japanese in all other universes, as Chinese people were substantially more common in the WildWest than Japanese people were.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Mousey/Angie is all-but-stated to be romantically interested in Smoker, while Smoker is already in some sort of relationship with Hunter and generally finds Mousey annoying. It's a DownplayedTrope given that she marries a man and, in the Cured!AU, is shown to still be [[TheLostLenore mourning him]], indicating that he wasn't simply TheBeard.
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* WidowWoman: Charger's husband died when the apocalypse hit.
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* BaldWoman: Both Smoker and Hunter shaved their heads at one point.
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** Pre-infection, Smoker and Hunter watched ''Film/WestSideStory''. In Hunter's Not Immune scenario, Smoker sings it to her. While it's the same song both times, the loss is much closer to home the second time.
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** Pre-infection, Smoker and Hunter watched ''Film/WestSideStory''.''Film/{{West Side Story|1961}}''. In Hunter's Not Immune scenario, Smoker sings it to her. While it's the same song both times, the loss is much closer to home the second time.
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** An April Fool’s day parody crossover with Metal Gear.
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** An April Fool’s Fool's day parody crossover with Metal Gear.
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--> '''Smoker''': "Alright I’m going to sleep."
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--> '''Smoker''': "Alright I’m I'm going to sleep."
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* DieOrFly: When Winged!Charger (who doesn’t think she can fly) and Jockey are stuck on a roof with too many zombies to kill, Jockey jumps off the roof to force Charger to try.
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* DieOrFly: When Winged!Charger (who doesn’t doesn't think she can fly) and Jockey are stuck on a roof with too many zombies to kill, Jockey jumps off the roof to force Charger to try.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: When she’s about to be overrun by a horde of zombies, Charger does not give an inch, just readies her machete.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: When she’s she's about to be overrun by a horde of zombies, Charger does not give an inch, just readies her machete.
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: Hunter slaps Smoker when she’s trying to quit smoking and a JerkAss because of it.
* GoryDiscretionShot: We don’t hear Charger telling the other survivors about Botflies. We do hear their reactions:
--> '''Hunter''': "JESUS CHARGER, STOP! I’M NEVER GONNA SLEEP AGAIN!"
* GoryDiscretionShot: We don’t hear Charger telling the other survivors about Botflies. We do hear their reactions:
--> '''Hunter''': "JESUS CHARGER, STOP! I’M NEVER GONNA SLEEP AGAIN!"
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: Hunter slaps Smoker when she’s she's trying to quit smoking and a JerkAss because of it.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Wedon’t don't hear Charger telling the other survivors about Botflies. We do hear their reactions:
--> '''Hunter''': "JESUS CHARGER, STOP!I’M I'M NEVER GONNA SLEEP AGAIN!"
* GoryDiscretionShot: We
--> '''Hunter''': "JESUS CHARGER, STOP!
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* MrExposition: The scientist at the beginning of the cured AU explains how the zombies have been doing, what he’s trying to accomplish, how their mission is going, etc. It’s justified because he’s talking into a recorder.
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* MrExposition: The scientist at the beginning of the cured AU explains how the zombies have been doing, what he’s he's trying to accomplish, how their mission is going, etc. It’s It's justified because he’s he's talking into a recorder.
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* NoNameGiven: We don’t know David’s last name. He’s even referred to as “Mr. [blank]”
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* NoNameGiven: We don’t don't know David’s David's last name. He’s He's even referred to as “Mr. [blank]”"Mr. [blank]"
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* PuffOfLogic: When it is pointed out that Cured!Smoker can’t use an artificial voicebox, she switches to a phone with text-to-speech.
* PunchAWall: Hunter when she gets really mad and frustrated, such as Charger’s version of the Sacrifice scenario or Smoker’s version of the Not Immune scenario.
* PunchAWall: Hunter when she gets really mad and frustrated, such as Charger’s version of the Sacrifice scenario or Smoker’s version of the Not Immune scenario.
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* PuffOfLogic: When it is pointed out that Cured!Smoker can’t can't use an artificial voicebox, she switches to a phone with text-to-speech.
* PunchAWall: Hunter when she gets really mad and frustrated, such asCharger’s Charger's version of the Sacrifice scenario or Smoker’s Smoker's version of the Not Immune scenario.
* PunchAWall: Hunter when she gets really mad and frustrated, such as
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* TherapyIsForTheWeak: Cured!Hunter and Smoker believe this. Charger’s not so sure.
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* TherapyIsForTheWeak: Cured!Hunter and Smoker believe this. Charger’s Charger's not so sure.
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--> '''Hunter''': "#$%@, if I’d known it was that easy I would have done it hours ago."
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--> '''Hunter''': "#$%@, if I’d I'd known it was that easy I would have done it hours ago."
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* TheUnintelligible: Cured!Smoker’s missing her tongue, so she can’t pronounce anything. She gets by with text-to-speech, a voicebox (which vanishes in a PuffOfLogic) and a notepad.
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* TheUnintelligible: Cured!Smoker’s Cured!Smoker's missing her tongue, so she can’t can't pronounce anything. She gets by with text-to-speech, a voicebox (which vanishes in a PuffOfLogic) and a notepad.
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--> '''Hunter''': (After being badly beaten by a guy she was fighting) "HE @#%@ PUSHED YOU, I JUST”
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--> '''Hunter''': (After being badly beaten by a guy she was fighting) "HE @#%@ PUSHED YOU, I JUST”JUST"
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* BadDreams: Jockey gets these. She gets really mad, shocking everyone, when Smoker pries about them.
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* BiTheWay: Hunter.
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** Pre-infection, Smoker and Hunter watched WestSideStory. In Hunter's Not Immune scenario, Smoker sings it to her. While it's the same song both times, the loss is much closer to home the second time.
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** Pre-infection, Smoker and Hunter watched WestSideStory.''Film/WestSideStory''. In Hunter's Not Immune scenario, Smoker sings it to her. While it's the same song both times, the loss is much closer to home the second time.
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** One where they're {{Pokemon}} trainers.
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** One where they're {{Pokemon}} Franchise/{{Pokemon}} trainers.
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* HiddenDepths: Smoker and Jockey are great lovers of music, from the Midnight Riders to showtunes. Hunter, naturally, teases Smoker mercilessly for this. On the other hand, Hunter herself likes some rather embarrassing music...
** Charger's familiar with TheMusicMan, which surprises everyone.
** Charger's familiar with TheMusicMan, which surprises everyone.
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* HiddenDepths: HiddenDepths:
** Smoker and Jockey are great lovers of music, from the Midnight Riders to showtunes. Hunter, naturally, teases Smoker mercilessly for this. On the other hand, Hunter herself likes some rather embarrassing music...
** Charger's familiar withTheMusicMan, ''Theatre/TheMusicMan'', which surprises everyone.
** Smoker and Jockey are great lovers of music, from the Midnight Riders to showtunes. Hunter, naturally, teases Smoker mercilessly for this. On the other hand, Hunter herself likes some rather embarrassing music...
** Charger's familiar with
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