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** Both of the OCs get endless praise heaped upon them by the canon characters. The most blatant instance is chapter two of ''Smile Precure meet the Dream Traveler'', where Blaze comes in, saves the Pretty Cure, and defeats three blue-nosed Akanbes without using Rainbow Healing like what's required in canon. The Cures and the narrative insist he's the greatest thing ever to grace ''Pretty Cure'' fandom with words like "So cool!" and remarking how he's fighting all by himself, yet the SilentMajority of readers regard him as a boring and obnoxious GodModeSue.
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** Both of the OCs get endless praise heaped upon them by the canon characters. The most blatant instance is chapter two of ''Smile Precure meet the Dream Traveler'', where Blaze comes in, saves the Pretty Cure, and defeats three blue-nosed Akanbes without using Rainbow Healing like what's required in canon. The Cures and the narrative insist he's the greatest thing ever to grace ''Pretty Cure'' fandom with words like "So cool!" and remarking how he's fighting all by himself, yet the SilentMajority of readers regard him as a boring and obnoxious GodModeSue.himself.
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** It gets taken UpToEleven in the sequels, especially with the introduction of Shadow Akechi in the ''Doki Doki'' series. No matter what atrocities or abuse Shadow heaps on others, everyone says he's the best thing ever. The worst occurs when, in one of the final chapters, Shadow is mercilessly beating twelve-year-old Regina nearly to death, and Cure Heart ''smiles and watches while saying Shadow is amazing because he can channel rage and hatred into such awesome power.''
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** It gets taken UpToEleven up to eleven in the sequels, especially with the introduction of Shadow Akechi in the ''Doki Doki'' series. No matter what atrocities or abuse Shadow heaps on others, everyone says he's the best thing ever. The worst occurs when, in one of the final chapters, Shadow is mercilessly beating twelve-year-old Regina nearly to death, and Cure Heart ''smiles and watches while saying Shadow is amazing because he can channel rage and hatred into such awesome power.''
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''Precure Meet the Dream Traveler'' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow.
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''Precure Meet the Dream Traveler'' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' ''Anime/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.Precure Meet The Dream Traveler to Fanfic.Precure Meet The Dream Traveler. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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* ScriptFic: Every single fic is written like a screenplay.
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* ScriptFic: Every single fic is written like a screenplay.
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* WouldHarmASenior: Shadow impales the 68-years-old Bell through the gut. Later, h and Blaze verbally abuse the old woman.
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* WouldHarmASenior: Shadow impales the 68-years-old Bell through the gut. Later, h he and Blaze verbally abuse the old woman.
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* WouldHarmASenior: Shadow impales the 68-years-old Bell through the gut. Later, h and Blaze verbally abuse the old woman.
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* DeadFic: This series of stories was last updated on May 9th, 2016 on Deviantart, and its fanfiction.net version was deleted when the author was permanently banned from the site. No updates have happened since.
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* DeadFic: This series of stories was last updated on May 9th, 2016 on Deviantart, and its fanfiction.net version was deleted when the author was permanently banned from the that site. No updates have happened since.
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** Shadow is also a ninja, gunman, swordsman, and has a similarly armored form.
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** Shadow is also a ninja, gunman, swordsman, and has a similarly armored form.
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* PhallicWeapon: Blaze's sword, the Dreamblade, is once described as "lengthening and thickening" in his ''Suite'' fic.
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* PhallicWeapon: Blaze's sword, the Dreamblade, is once described as "lengthening and thickening" in his ''Suite'' fic. During his ''Smile'' fic, he would try to plunge it into a scar that he gave to Joker, which is described as looking like a slit.
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* SlapOnTheWristNuke: In ''Suite Precure meet the Dream Traveler'', Blaze pulls out a plutonium bomb, which is a type of ''nuclear warhead'', and detonates it in the middle of town. [[TheWorfBarrage It doesn't do a thing to the enemy]], and the town itself and everyone in it is absolutely fine. No explanation is given.
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DeadFic: * This series of stories was last updated on May 9th, 2016 on Deviantart, and its fanfiction.net version was deleted when the author was permanently banned from the site. No updates have happened since.
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* DeadFic: * This series of stories was last updated on May 9th, 2016 on Deviantart, and its fanfiction.net version was deleted when the author was permanently banned from the site. No updates have happened since.
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* SelfInsertFic: The author's ''[=DeviantArt=]'' handle is "[=BlazeAkechi=]", which is the same name as his primary OriginalCharacter. Shadow Akechi can also be considered one as he acts virtually the same way. Both characters have OOC knowledge, both are made into major characters in every fic where they star, both are important to the plot, both hook up with specific characters, both force their beliefs onto a willing character set, and both effortlessly defeat anyone who challenges them while being lauded as heroes.
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DeadFic: * This series of stories was last updated on May 9th, 2016 on Deviantart, and its fanfiction.net version was deleted when the author was permanently banned from the site. No updates have happened since.
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'''Precure Meet The Dream Traveler''' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow.
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!!''Precure Meet The Dream Traveler'' provides examples of:
* ADogNamedDog: Shadow calls the dragon inside him "Dragon". He has never once given it any other name.
* ADogNamedDog: Shadow calls the dragon inside him "Dragon". He has never once given it any other name.
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!!''Precure Meet The the Dream Traveler'' provides examples of:
* ADogNamedDog: Shadow calls the dragon inside him "Dragon". He has never once given it any other name.of:
* ADogNamedDog: Shadow calls the dragon inside him "Dragon". He has never once given it any other name.
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* ADogNamedDog: Shadow calls the dragon inside him "Dragon". He has never once given it any other name.
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'''Precure Meet The Dream Traveler''' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow. Anyone who is familiar with ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' from ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'' and onwards will easily know the plotline. It is noted for its {{plagiarism}} (of the original series, video games, roleplays, and other fanfics), underage relationships, [[CantTakeCriticism hostile author]] and [[SociopathicHero overly-violent]] {{Gary Stu}}s.
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'''Precure Meet The Dream Traveler''' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow. Anyone who is familiar with ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' from ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'' and onwards will easily know the plotline. It is noted for its {{plagiarism}} (of the original series, video games, roleplays, and other fanfics), underage relationships, [[CantTakeCriticism hostile author]] and [[SociopathicHero overly-violent]] {{Gary Stu}}s.\n
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As of 08/27/2015, the author's Fanfiction.net account has been banned. AndThereWasMuchRejoicing.
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Lolicon and shotacon have been disambiguated. Links with too little context are being removed - "paedo" is not always a trope, examples where the tropeworthiness is unclear are being removed. Also, please do not use "loli" as a synonym for little girl; see Lolicon And Shotacon as to why not
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'''Precure Meet The Dream Traveler''' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow. Anyone who is familiar with ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' from ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'' and onwards will easily know the plotline. It is noted for its {{plagiarism}} (of the original series, video games, roleplays, and other fanfics), [[{{lolicon}} underage relationships]], [[CantTakeCriticism hostile author]] and [[SociopathicHero overly-violent]] {{Gary Stu}}s.
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'''Precure Meet The Dream Traveler''' is a series of ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' fanfics written by Xantrax-42. The series is a retelling of various seasons with one or two {{Original Character}}s inserted. These characters are named Blaze and Shadow. Anyone who is familiar with ''Franchise/PrettyCure'' from ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'' and onwards will easily know the plotline. It is noted for its {{plagiarism}} (of the original series, video games, roleplays, and other fanfics), [[{{lolicon}} underage relationships]], relationships, [[CantTakeCriticism hostile author]] and [[SociopathicHero overly-violent]] {{Gary Stu}}s.
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** Both Blaze and Shadow are adult men who find middle school girls attractive. In their respective fics, they end up with middle-school girlfriends whom they frequently make out with.
** At the end of ''Doki Doki Pretty Cure Meet the Dark Wanderer,'' Blaze calls the Suite girls "babes." Said Cure team has a ten-year-old on it.
** Both Blaze and Shadow are adult men who find middle school girls attractive. In their respective fics, they end up with middle-school girlfriends whom they frequently make out with.
** At the end of ''Doki Doki Pretty Cure Meet the Dark Wanderer,'' Blaze calls the Suite girls "babes." Said Cure team has a ten-year-old on it.
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* InformedAttribute: Blaze and Shadow's power. In all fics they've appeared in, both Precure, fairies, and villains alike note them as being incredibly powerful, more powerful than the current Precure team put together. Yet, when we actually see them in action, the results are the same as in canon. The most shameful example is in the ''Smile'' rewrite when Blaze, in his Terro form, assists the girls in their Princess form against the Bad End Generals in their Hyper forms; as with canon, the girls fail to defeat them on brute force, and Terro-Blaze adding his power to the mix ultimately contributes nothing.
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** When Shadow impales Mamo with his [[PhallicWeapon sword]], she is described as making a loud gasp. It has reminded detractors of rape.
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** When Shadow impales Mamo Marmo with his [[PhallicWeapon sword]], she is described as making a loud gasp. It has reminded detractors of rape.
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