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Since the story was last updated in 2014, and Fimfiction states that it's currently on hiatus, it seems to be a DeadFic.
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* GodEmperor: How the Cult Imperia (led by Hierophant North Star) view Nightmare moon.
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* GodEmperor: How the Cult Imperia (led by Hierophant North Star) view Nightmare moon.Moon.
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* GodEmperor: How the Cult Imperia (led by Hierophant North Star) view Nightmare moon.
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my child" at one point.
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* CarryingTheAntidote: Although he isn't responsible for (this) poisoning, the Inquisitor is familiar enough with the poison that [[spoiler: Twilight]] fell victim to that he keeps the antidote on him at all times.
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my child" at one point.
* ParentalSubstitute: Nightmare Moon quickly becomes one toTwilight.Twilight, at one point even (mentally) referring to her as "my child".
* ParentalSubstitute: Nightmare Moon quickly becomes one to
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* TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler: Twilight]] is poisoned in the middle of a feast, with international guests that are a hair's breadth away from war with Equestria and with nearly a half-dozen different agendas at the table it's hard to tell ''who'' would have done it... if the attempt even struck its intended target at all.
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* AntiVillain: Nightmare Moon is actually a pretty nice pony. She's horrified by the suggestion that she kill Twilight to avoid the filly becoming a potential threat, is the one who forced Twilight to realize what a terrible path her fledgling abuses of power would lead to, and in in a conversation with her student, the Inquisitor, and [[TokenGoodTeammate Silverstar]] she is the only one to bring up morality as a reason to avoid war.
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* TheChosenOne: Twilight Sparkle is very important to LaResistance, but we have no idea ''why''.
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* FriendlessBackground: Twilight had one real friend--but then Orion's moving away, and her entire school has collectively shunned her.
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* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: By the time Twilight begins school, she is so far ahead of the curriculum that she thinks the teacher's assignment is a hidden test, and proceeds to perform a large, absolutely incredible act of telekinesis. This, her other demonstrations of mental/magical superiority to her classmates, and her own past problems with nobles combine to make her a social outcast.
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** But even he wants to [[spoiler: go to war with the griffons]] for the political effects it would have on the nobility and to crush the griffon's spirits for the next few generations.
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* [[FrenchMaidOutfit Prench Maid Outfit]]: Nightmare Moon wears one as an All Hallows Eve costume, mostly as a prank.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: An oracle at the Eclipse predicts Twilight Sparkle and Orion parting for a long time. It does not come as expected...
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* TheStoic: Orion.
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* TheBrigadier: Marshall Silverstar
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* TheBrigadier: Marshall SilverstarSilverstar.
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* BadassBoast: Nightmare Moon to Cernunnos.
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He turns out to just be that way because of the pressures of nobility. Once Twilight gets to know him, she finds he's not so bad.
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* PrecociousCrush: Twilight to the Honour Guard Proud Song.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: The tulpar claim this, in response to those who claim they and their god are evil.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: The tulpar thestrals claim this, in response to those who claim they and their god are evil.
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** Many ponies (including the Inquisitor and North Star) hate the tulpar, a subspecies of pegasi with bat wings supposedly created by an evil alicorn (though they argue the "evil" part).
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** Many ponies (including the Inquisitor and North Star) hate the tulpar, thestrals, a subspecies of pegasi with bat wings supposedly created by an evil alicorn (though they argue the "evil" part).
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** See also ShameIfSomethingHappened.
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* ShoutOut: The royal kitchens are head by the short tempered [[Series/HellsKitchen Chef Ram Sea]].
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* ShoutOut: The royal kitchens are head headed by the short tempered [[Series/HellsKitchen Chef Ram Sea]].
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** Interestingly, comments from characters in the know have revealed that this is only the case in Equestria -- the rest of the world still has daylight.
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** In one chapter a character thinks about the softer shades that the starlight reveals, a direct line taken from the brony song "The Moon Rises".
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* AncientKeeper: The dragon in the chambers under Nightmare Moon's castle.
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* AncientKeeper: The Ladon, the dragon in the chambers under Nightmare Moon's castle.
** Twilight says that the Blackcloaks aren't so bad when you get to know them.
* IHaveYourWife: The Empire keeps the dragon overlord Fostrun from going to war by holding his son (Spike) hostage.
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* LaResistance: Mostly in the background so far, but Twilight's parents were members, as is the head of the orphanage.
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* LaResistance: The Harbingers of Dawn, or "Dawnists" for short. Mostly in the background so far, but Twilight's parents were members, as is the head of the orphanage.
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* MoralityPet: Twilight is one to Nightmare Moon. For a time, the Inquisitor considers taking her on as one as well, but ultimately his more cynical side wins out.
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* LikeBrotherAndSister: Twilight and Orion. [[spoiler: When he gets adopted by a family living far away, she's heartbroken.]]
* MamaBear: Nightmare Moon gains this attitude towards Twilight.
* MoralityPet: Twilight is one to Nightmare Moon.For a time, the The Inquisitor considers seems to be taking her on as one as well, but ultimately his more cynical side wins out.well.
* MamaBear: Nightmare Moon gains this attitude towards Twilight.
* MoralityPet: Twilight is one to Nightmare Moon.
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* ShoutOut: The royal kitchens are head by the short tempered [[Series/HellsKitchen Chef Ram Sea]].
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** The Inquisitor seems to have collected quite a few hobbies over the years.
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* EnigmaticMinion: The Inquisitor is this in ''spades''. Just how enigmatic is he? Well, for one thing, Nightmare Moon doesn't remember when he started working for her -- it's like he's been there from the beginning. But more than that, [[spoiler: ''he knows Nightmare Moon as Luna.'']]
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* EnigmaticMinion: The Inquisitor is this in ''spades''. Just how enigmatic is he? Well, for one thing, Nightmare Moon doesn't remember when he started working for her -- it's like he's been there from the beginning. But more than that, [[spoiler: ''he knows Nightmare Moon as is Luna.'']]
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* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Coltfriend]]: Twilight's reaction when Nightmare jokingly suggests this about her relationship with Orion.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: When the griffon king threatens to go to war with Equestria, the Inquisitor reminds him that his daughter (implied and later confirmed to be Gilda) is in Equestria as part of an exchange program, and that he can't vouch for her safety if there is a war.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: When the griffon king threatens to go to war with Equestria, the Inquisitor reminds him that his daughter (implied and later confirmed to be Gilda) (Gilda) is in Equestria as part of an exchange program, and that he can't vouch for her safety if there is a war.
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** Surprisingly, Nightmare Moon is the one who puts a stop to this, telling Twilight that her position doesn't give her the right to use that power to bully others. She warns Twilight that doing so is a slippery slope.
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** Surprisingly, Nightmare Moon herself is the one who puts a stop to this, telling Twilight that her position doesn't give her the right to use that power to bully others. She warns Twilight that doing so is a slippery slope.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Silverstar seems to be the ''only'' member of Nightmare Moon's inner circle who ''isn't'' a self-serving, ManipulativeBastard.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Silverstar seems to be the ''only'' member of Nightmare Moon's inner circle Inner Circle who ''isn't'' a self-serving, ManipulativeBastard.
