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''New World'' is a Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2893136/An_Enemy_Spy An Enemy Spy]]. The plot centers around an eighteen year old trainer named Dust and his adventures. Rather than the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh or Unova regions, New World takes place in an original setting in a time period based loosely around the [[TheEdwardianEra late Nineteenth and early Twentieth Centuries.]] The story is somewhat post apocalyptic, though the cataclysm happened far in the past and nobody knows about it.
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''New World'' is a Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2893136/An_Enemy_Spy An Enemy Spy]]. The plot centers around an eighteen year old trainer named Dust and his adventures. Rather than the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh or Unova regions, New World takes place in an original setting in a time period based loosely around the [[TheEdwardianEra late Nineteenth and early Twentieth Centuries.]] The story is somewhat post apocalyptic, though post-apocalyptic, although the cataclysm happened far in the past and nobody knows about it.
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* {{Bathe Her and Bring Her to Me}}: The Baron does this while Maddie in his custody. It has nothing to do with sex, he just wants her to look presentable.
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* {{Bathe Her and Bring Her to Me}}: BatheHerAndBringHerToMe: The Baron does this while Maddie in his custody. It has nothing to do with sex, he just wants her to look presentable.
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* {{Mooks}}: The Blackshirts, although they're actually fairly effective.
* PokemonSpeak: Averted. Lampshaded with Hoothoot.
--> "Hoothoot!" It went. Whoever had named this Pokémon clearly hadn't felt very creative that day.
* PokemonSpeak: Averted. Lampshaded with Hoothoot.
--> "Hoothoot!" It went. Whoever had named this Pokémon clearly hadn't felt very creative that day.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Mewtwo, until an idiot trainer breaks him out.
* {{Telepathy}}: Mewtwo communicates like this.
* TheEdwardianEra: The story takes place in a pseudo version of this time period.
* TheLoad: What Dust originally thinks of Totodile, as it has yet to grow into a competent fighter.
* {{Tsundere}}: Amelia Blackmoor.
* WeAreAsMayflies:
-->'''Mewtwo''': ''Your wondrous civilization is little more than a castle of sand against the relentless tide of the eons. Humans, who measure the passing of time in decades and centuries, thought you were fit to rule over those for whom a hundred millennia is but a single tick on the clock?''
* WouldHitAGirl: Ashton, very much so.
* {{Telepathy}}: Mewtwo communicates like this.
* TheEdwardianEra: The story takes place in a pseudo version of this time period.
* TheLoad: What Dust originally thinks of Totodile, as it has yet to grow into a competent fighter.
* {{Tsundere}}: Amelia Blackmoor.
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-->'''Mewtwo''': ''Your wondrous civilization is little more than a castle of sand against the relentless tide of the eons. Humans, who measure the passing of time in decades and centuries, thought you were fit to rule over those for whom a hundred millennia is but a single tick on the clock?''
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* TheLoad: What Dust originally thinks of Totodile, as it has yet to grow into a competent fighter.
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* YouGotSpunk: Ashton hates a girl with spunk.
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--> "Hoothoot!" It went. Whoever had named this Pokémon clearly hadn't felt very creative that day.
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''New World'' is a {{Pokemon}} Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2893136/An_Enemy_Spy An Enemy Spy]]. The plot centers around an eighteen year old trainer named Dust and his adventures. Rather than the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh or Unova regions, New World takes place in an original setting in a time period based loosely around the [[TheEdwardianEra late Nineteenth and early Twentieth Centuries.]] The story is somewhat post apocalyptic, though the cataclysm happened far in the past and nobody knows about it.
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''New World'' is a {{Pokemon}} Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2893136/An_Enemy_Spy An Enemy Spy]]. The plot centers around an eighteen year old trainer named Dust and his adventures. Rather than the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh or Unova regions, New World takes place in an original setting in a time period based loosely around the [[TheEdwardianEra late Nineteenth and early Twentieth Centuries.]] The story is somewhat post apocalyptic, though the cataclysm happened far in the past and nobody knows about it.
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* {{Groin Attack}}: Dust attempts to have Beedrill do this against an enemy Rhyperior. It didn't work very well.
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* {{Groin Attack}}: GroinAttack: Dust attempts to have Beedrill do this against an enemy Rhyperior. It didn't work very well.
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* {{I Have You Now, My Pretty}}: Maddie is subjected all manner of sexual abuse when Ashton takes her a "guest".
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* {{I Have You Now, My Pretty}}: IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Maddie is subjected all manner of sexual abuse when Ashton takes her a "guest".
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* {{Complete Monster}}: Ashton has nothing that comes even close to being a redeeming value. He is a selfish, sadistic, bloodthirsty rapist who hurts others for no other reason than that he can get away with it.
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* AristocratsAreEvil: [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Baron]] and his son, Ashton. The Baron challenges a trainer to a friendly battle and nearly kills his Pokemon for seemingly no other reason than to show that he could. Ashton is an all around {{Jerkass}} who sees no problem with stealing other people's valuable livestock because he is too lazy to go out into the wild to catch a Pokemon of his own.
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* AristocratsAreEvil: [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep The Baron]] and his son, Ashton. The Baron rules over his territory with an iron fist and is quick to destroy anyone who challenges a trainer to a friendly battle and nearly kills his Pokemon for seemingly no other reason than to show that he could. him in any way. His son Ashton is an all around {{Jerkass}} who sees no problem with stealing other people's valuable livestock more stupidly sadistic, hurting people because he there is too lazy no authority to go out into the wild to catch a Pokemon of his own.keep him in check.
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* AttemptedRape: Almost happens to Maddie.
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* AttemptedRape: Almost happens to Maddie. Then later it really does happen. Many many times.
* {{Bathe Her and Bring Her to Me}}: The Baron does this while Maddie in his custody. It has nothing to do with sex, he just wants her to look presentable.
* {{Bathe Her and Bring Her to Me}}: The Baron does this while Maddie in his custody. It has nothing to do with sex, he just wants her to look presentable.
* {{Complete Monster}}: Ashton has nothing that comes even close to being a redeeming value. He is a selfish, sadistic, bloodthirsty rapist who hurts others for no other reason than that he can get away with it.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Ashton savagely attacks Maddie after she slaps him. While he is attempting to rape her.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Ashton savagely attacks Maddie after she slaps him. While he is attempting to rape her. In fact, everything Ashton does counts as this.
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* HumansAreBastards: Mewtwo certainly thinks so.
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* HumansAreBastards: Mewtwo certainly thinks so. Ashton and his father don't do much to prove that notion wrong.
* {{I Have You Now, My Pretty}}: Maddie is subjected all manner of sexual abuse when Ashton takes her a "guest".
* {{I Have You Now, My Pretty}}: Maddie is subjected all manner of sexual abuse when Ashton takes her a "guest".
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* TheKlutz: Dust is constantly tripping and falling on things. This proclivity sometimes puts him in danger, such as when he falls into a Spinarak nest.
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* MismatchedEyes: Ashton's eyes are green and purple.
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* AfterTheEnd: Hinted at by Mewtwo.AfterTheEnd
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* {{Groin Attack}}: Dust attempts to have Beedrill do this against an enemy Rhyperior. It didn't work very well.
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''New World'' is a {{Pokemon}} Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2893136/An_Enemy_Spy An Enemy Spy]]. The plot centers around an eighteen year old trainer named Dust and his adventures. Rather than the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh or Unova regions, New World takes place in an original setting in a time period based loosely around the [[TheEdwardianEra late Nineteenth and early Twentieth Centuries.]]
As of this edit, there are twenty-two chapters including the prologue.
As of this edit, there are twenty-two chapters including the prologue.
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''New World'' is a {{Pokemon}} Fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2893136/An_Enemy_Spy An Enemy Spy]]. The plot centers around an eighteen year old trainer named Dust and his adventures. Rather than the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh or Unova regions, New World takes place in an original setting in a time period based loosely around the [[TheEdwardianEra late Nineteenth and early Twentieth Centuries.]]
As of]] The story is somewhat post apocalyptic, though the cataclysm happened far in the past and nobody knows about it.
Interspersed with thisedit, there are twenty-two chapters including narrative is another one following a girl named Espa at some time in the prologue.
distant past. This part of the story will detail the destruction of the formerly advanced human civilization. Her narrative will tie into Dust's as the story goes on.
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* BubblegloopSwamp: Dust briefly visits a boggy area, and is almost eaten by a Swampert
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* BubblegloopSwamp: Dust briefly visits a boggy area, and is almost eaten by a SwampertSwampert.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Many chapters end on them.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Many chapters end on them.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Pokemon are highly dangerous creatures, and will kill each other if able to instead of just knocking eachother out.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Pokemon are highly dangerous creatures, and will kill each other if able to instead of just knocking eachother each other out.
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*{{Agony Beam}}: Yoko's Psyshock has this effect on a bandit.
**Averted by Amelia Blackmoor.
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* DeadLittleSister: Dust's father caught an extremely rare white Sawsbuck back in his youth, but he got it killed in a fight with a ruthless trainer because of his overconfidence. He's kept the pokeball empty ever since as a reminder.
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* {{Attempted Rape}}: Almost happens to Maddie.
* {{Big Creepy Crawlies}}: Dust is attacked by a giant Ariados.
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* {{Dead Little Sister}}: Dust's father caught an extremely rare white Sawsbuck back in his youth, but he got it killed in a fight with a ruthless trainer because of his overconfidence. He's kept the pokeball empty ever since as a reminder.
* {{Disproportionate Retribution}}: Ashton savagely attacks Maddie after she slaps him. While he is attempting to rape her.
* {{Disproportionate Retribution}}: Ashton savagely attacks Maddie after she slaps him. While he is attempting to rape her.
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* {{Dead Little Sister}}: DeadLittleSister: Dust's father caught an extremely rare white Sawsbuck back in his youth, but he got it killed in a fight with a ruthless trainer because of his overconfidence. He's kept the pokeball empty ever since as a reminder.
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** Interesting note: Despite his noble birth, Ashton speaks with a working class accent, perhaps to accentuate his rather unnoble nature.
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*** This accent is completely fake by the way. When Ashton is mad, [[OohMeAccentsSlipping he drops out of it]]
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** Interesting note: Despite his noble birth, Ashton speaks with a working class accent, perhaps to accentuate his rather unnoble nature.
*** Thisnature. [[note]]This accent is completely fake by the way. When Ashton is mad, [[OohMeAccentsSlipping he drops out of it]]it.]][[/note]]
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* {{Giant Spider}}: Dust falls into a Spinarak nest, and is attacked by a giant Ariados.
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* {{Humans Are Bastards}}: Mewtwo certainly thinks so.
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* {{Mismatched Eyes}}: Ashton's eyes are green and purple.
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* {{Putting On The Reich}}: Borderline semi-example. The Blackshirts are likely named after the paramilitary group of Fascist Italy.
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* {{The Klutz}}: Dust is constantly tripping and falling on things. This proclivity sometimes puts him in danger, such as when he falls into a Spinarak nest.
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* {{The Klutz}}: TheKlutz: Dust is constantly tripping and falling on things. This proclivity sometimes puts him in danger, such as when he falls into a Spinarak nest.
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* {{Would Hit A Girl}}: Ashton, very much so.
* {{You Got Spunk}}: Ashton hates a girl with spunk.
* {{You Got Spunk}}: Ashton hates a girl with spunk.
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* {{Would Hit A Girl}}: WouldHitAGirl: Ashton, very much so.
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* ReptilesAreAbhorrent: Thoroughly averted by Totodile.
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* {{You Got Spunk}}: Ashton hates a girl with spunk.spunk.
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* {{Mooks}}: The Blackshirts.
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* {{Mooks}}: The Blackshirts.Blackshirts, although they're actually fairly effective.
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* {{I Like A Girl With Spunk}}: Ashton hates a girl with spunk.
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* {{Would Hit A Girl}}: Ashton, very much so.so.
* {{You Got Spunk}}: Ashton hates a girl with spunk.
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-->'''Mewtwo''': ''Your wondrous civilization is little more than a castle of sand against the relentless tide of the eons. Humans, who measure the passing of time in decades and centuries, thought you were fit to rule over those for whom a hundred millennia is but a single tick on the clock?''clock?''
* {{Would Hit A Girl}}: Ashton, very much so.
* {{Would Hit A Girl}}: Ashton, very much so.
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*** This accent is completely fake by the way. When Ashton is mad, [[OohMeAccent'sSplipping he drops out of it]]
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* {{AttemptedRape}}: {{Attempted Rape}}: Almost happens to Maddie.