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->''"Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me [[TextualCelebrityResemblance I look like Amy Lee]] (AN: if u don't know who she is [[ReversePsychology get da hell out of here]]!)."''

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->''"Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me [[TextualCelebrityResemblance I look like Amy Lee]] Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is [[ReversePsychology get da hell out of here]]!).here!)."''

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* PairTheSuitors: Inverted. Vampire and Draco used to be a couple, but broke up and are now both in love with Ebony.


For the ''Manga/DeathNote'' version, see ''FanFic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami''. For the ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' version, see ''FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'' or ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''. For the ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' version, see ''[[Fanfic/GurrenLagannhen Gurren Lagannhen]]''. For the ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' version, see ''FanFic/PokemonAttackOfMewtwo''. For the ''{{Redwall}}'' version, see [[FanFic/SoullessShell soulless shell]], though that one's closer to [[FanFic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]] in some ways. For the ''Literature/WarriorCats'' version, see ''FanFic/StarKitsProphecy''. For ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' version, see ''FanFic/MyInnerLife''.

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For the ''Manga/DeathNote'' version, see ''FanFic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami''. For the ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' version, see ''FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'' or ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''. For the ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' version, see ''[[Fanfic/GurrenLagannhen Gurren Lagannhen]]''. For the ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' version, see ''FanFic/PokemonAttackOfMewtwo''. For the ''{{Redwall}}'' ''{{Literature/Redwall}}'' version, see [[FanFic/SoullessShell soulless shell]], though that one's closer to [[FanFic/LegolasByLaura legolas by laura]] in some ways. For the ''Literature/WarriorCats'' version, see ''FanFic/StarKitsProphecy''. For ''Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda'' version, see ''FanFic/MyInnerLife''.


* CoolCar: Draco has a flying Mercedes-Benz. Notably, one of the actual canon features of the fanfic: at least one flying car does exist in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' 'verse. Although it's fairly out of character for Malfoy to own an enchanted version of a Muggle invention.

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* CoolCar: Draco has a flying Mercedes-Benz. Notably, one of the actual canon features of the fanfic: at least one flying car does exist in the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' 'verse. Although it's fairly out of character for Malfoy to own an enchanted version of a Muggle invention.


* CoolCar: Draco has a flying Mercedes-Benz. Notably, one of the actual canon features of the fanfic: at least one flying car does exist in the Franchise/PotterVerse. Although it's fairly out of character for Malfoy to own an enchanted version of a Muggle invention.

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* CoolCar: Draco has a flying Mercedes-Benz. Notably, one of the actual canon features of the fanfic: at least one flying car does exist in the Franchise/PotterVerse.''Literature/HarryPotter'' 'verse. Although it's fairly out of character for Malfoy to own an enchanted version of a Muggle invention.


* IncestIsRelative: "I'm not related to [[MyChemicalRomance Gerard Way]] but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie."

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* IncestIsRelative: "I'm not related to [[MyChemicalRomance [[Music/MyChemicalRomance Gerard Way]] but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie."


* CommonMarySueTraits: ''"...and I have long ebony black hair with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears..."'' Make it more obvious, why don't you? After whining about Snap and Loopin videotaping her and random men wanting her, she exclaims "Im good at too many things! WHY CAN'T I JUST BE NORMAL? IT'S A FUCKING CURSE!"


* AntiClimax: Chapter 17-18. 17 sets up some fight between "Dumblydore" and Voldemort, but 18 opens with Ebony waking up. It's explained away in a paragraph, where Dumbledore "chased him off" (and then segues into Ebony and Draco having sex to a Linkin Park song...). Of course, most fights end with someone flying away. Rather like ''TheIliad'', only stupid.

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* AntiClimax: Chapter 17-18. 17 sets up some fight between "Dumblydore" and Voldemort, but 18 opens with Ebony waking up. It's explained away in a paragraph, where Dumbledore "chased him off" (and then segues into Ebony and Draco having sex to a Linkin Park song...). Of course, most fights end with someone flying away. Rather like ''TheIliad'', ''Literature/TheIliad'', only stupid.


* SelectiveSquick: [[invoked]] Tara refuses to refer to her- er, ''Ebony's'' vagina as anything other than "my you-know-what" or "my thingie", but does not skimp on introducing anal sex, rape, [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs anal rape]], torture, etc.


* ViewersAreMorons: Geddit?


* DarknessVonGothickname: Most of the original Harry Potter character have been given new names. Such as Hermione now being B'loody Mary, Ron being Diabolo, "Navel" becoming "[[{{Dracula}} Dracola]]" and Harry becoming Vampire.



* FailOSuckyName: Most of the original Harry Potter character have been given new names. Such as Hermione now being B'loody Mary, Ron being Diabolo, "Navel" becoming "[[{{Dracula}} Dracola]]" and Harry becoming Vampire.


See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.

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See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries'', a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.
''VideoGame/TheImmortal'' or the song by Music/{{Evanescence}}.

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* SecondPersonNarration: The story briefly dips into this in chapter 37, then switches back to first person. Of note, the sentence "You went to the conmen room after putting on my clothes."


* CompleteMonster: [[invoked]] Snap, Loopin, and Volxemort, according to Tara. It doesn't really work out.




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* YouMonster: Snap, Loopin, and Volxemort, according to Tara. It doesn't really work out.


Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.

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See also ''WebVideo/MyImmortalTheWebSeries''", a WebVideo adaptation. Not to be confused with ''VideoGame/TheImmortal''.

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