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* HasTwoMommies: Sunny Skies is the magically conceived daughter of Spitfire and Fleetfoot.
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* HomosexualReproduction: Sunny Skies is the magically conceived daughter of Spitfire and Fleetfoot.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are ''RainbowFactory'', ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'', and ''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are ''RainbowFactory'', ''Fanfic/RainbowFactory'', ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'', and ''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are ''RainbowFactory'', ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'', and ''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are ''RainbowFactory'', ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'', ''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles'', and ''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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** [[spoiler: She eventually realizes this herself during her fight with Stratus when he says they're NotSoDifferent, refusing to kill him in cold blood. But then Nox does it anyway.]]
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** [[spoiler: She eventually realizes this herself during her fight with Stratus when he says they're NotSoDifferent, not that different, refusing to kill him in cold blood. But then Nox does it anyway.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: [[spoiler: Stratus says this of himself and Starburst when she prepares to kill him. This snaps her out of her bloodlust, and she decides not to kill him... only for Nox to do it for her.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: [[spoiler: Stratus says this of himself and Starburst when she prepares to kill him. This snaps her out of her bloodlust, and she decides not to kill him... only for Nox to do it for her.]]
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* StormingTheCastle: After [[spoiler: Sunny's death]], Starburst gives into her rage over the war and all the pointless death, launching a one mare assault on the griffon capital Griffonia, curbstomping her way through the defenses to attack Emperor Stratus in his own palace. [[spoiler: She comes within a hairsbreadth of killing him, until his NotSoDifferent speech knocks her out of it... and then Nox kills him anyway.]]
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* StormingTheCastle: After [[spoiler: Sunny's death]], Starburst gives into her rage over the war and all the pointless death, launching a one mare assault on the griffon capital Griffonia, curbstomping her way through the defenses to attack Emperor Stratus in his own palace. [[spoiler: She comes within a hairsbreadth of killing him, until his NotSoDifferent speech NotSoDifferentRemark knocks her out of it... and then Nox kills him anyway.]]
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler: Sunny Skies]] dies smiling.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183531/mlp-next-generation-know-fear MLP Next Generation: Know Fear!]] is a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and the GreenLantern series written
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183531/mlp-next-generation-know-fear MLP Next Generation: Know Fear!]] is a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and the GreenLantern ComicBook/GreenLantern series written
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Not armor.
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* InstantArmor: Her uniform appears and reappears on her command.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are ''RainbowFactory'', ''CupCakes'', and ''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are ''RainbowFactory'', ''CupCakes'', ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}'', and ''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are RainbowFactory, CupCakes, and CheerileesGarden. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* ShoutOut: When looking for new material for more fear based attacks, Starburst "borrows" some books from the horror section of the comic shop. Among the books she reads are RainbowFactory, CupCakes, ''RainbowFactory'', ''CupCakes'', and CheerileesGarden.''Fanfic/CheerileesGarden''. Needless to say, by the time she's done reading them she's practically begging for some BrainBleach.
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler: Pinpoint betrays Twilight and Valiant Heart to Steel Wing, out of a belief that they griffons are going to win anyway, and this way at least he and his family will be safe.]]
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler: Pinpoint betrays Twilight and Valiant Heart to Steel Wing, out of a belief that they griffons are going to win anyway, and this way at least he and his family will be safe.]]
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Changed spelling error of name: \"Starbirst\" to \"Starburst\"
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* StormingTheCastle: After [[spoiler: Sunny's death]], Starbirst gives into her rage over the war and all the pointless death, launching a one mare assault on the griffon capital Griffonia, curbstomping her way through the defenses to attack Emperor Stratus in his own palace. [[spoiler: She comes within a hairsbreadth of killing him, until his NotSoDifferent speech knocks her out of it... and then Nox kills him anyway.]]
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* StormingTheCastle: After [[spoiler: Sunny's death]], Starbirst Starburst gives into her rage over the war and all the pointless death, launching a one mare assault on the griffon capital Griffonia, curbstomping her way through the defenses to attack Emperor Stratus in his own palace. [[spoiler: She comes within a hairsbreadth of killing him, until his NotSoDifferent speech knocks her out of it... and then Nox kills him anyway.]]
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** In turn, Prism Bolt and Rainbow Dash both chew out Valiant for his and Twilight's reaction to the above [[spoiler: branding Star a criminal]].
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** In turn, Prism Bolt and Rainbow Dash both chew out Valiant for his and Twilight's reaction to the above [[spoiler: branding Star a criminal]].criminal]].
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* PoorCommunicationKills: All this might have been avoided if Starburst and her family had an actual sit-down and talked things out!
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Complete with 17 Chapters, a sequel has already been announced under the name: ''[[FanFic/MLPNextGenerationLoveConquersAllAvariceTakesItAll MLP Next Generation: Love Conquers All, Avarice Takes It All]]''
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Complete with 17 Chapters, a sequel has already been announced under the name: ''[[FanFic/MLPNextGenerationLoveConquersAllAvariceTakesItAll MLP Next Generation: Love Conquers All, All! Avarice Takes It All]]''
All!]]''
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** She starts incorporating this into all her fights after this.
* DatePeepers: Claire, Cotton Candy, Prism Bolt, and June do this when Star and Del finally admit their feelings and go out (though June's really only there to keep them in line). And it turns out that Star and Del knew they were there the whole time but ignored them.
* DatePeepers: Claire, Cotton Candy, Prism Bolt, and June do this when Star and Del finally admit their feelings and go out (though June's really only there to keep them in line). And it turns out that Star and Del knew they were there the whole time but ignored them.
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Complete with 17 Chapters, a sequel has already been announced under the name: FanFic/MLPNextGenerationLoveConquersAllAvariceTakesitAll
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''[[FanFic/MLPNextGenerationLoveConquersAllAvariceTakesItAll MLP Next Generation: Love Conquers All, Avarice Takes It All]]''
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* SequelHook: It has three: Starburst dedicates herself to continuing to fight the war, [[spoiler: even as a renegade]]; meanwhile, unknown to her, Nox [[spoiler: is raised as a Black Lantern]]; and in the final scene [[spoiler: two more rings -- one orange, the other violet -- arrive on Equestria]].
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