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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka {{Tropers/Risetteer}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, [=ExtraSaber=], aka {{Tropers/Risetteer}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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* ComicalOverreacting: There's no reason to set up a crime scene with police tape and a chalk outline for stolen pudding. Yet, our two Ace Defectives do it anyway.
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* ComicalOverreacting: ComicalOverreacting:
** There's no reason to set up a crime scene with police tape and a chalk outline for stolen pudding. Yet, our two Ace Defectives do it anyway.
** There's no reason to set up a crime scene with police tape and a chalk outline for stolen pudding. Yet, our two Ace Defectives do it anyway.
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* DefectiveDetective: Ace Defectives is putting it mildly. Yukari and Junpei's "strategy" is to ask people if they did it and then take their denials at face value.
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* CreditsGag: All three chapters list the members of S.E.E.S. present in the fic, with chapters 2 and 3 giving them embarrassing nicknames.
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* StalkerWithACrush: Aigis makes no secret of this, much to Yukari's ire.
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* StalkerWithACrush: Aigis makes no secret of this, much to Minato's discomfort and Yukari's ire.
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* CommandOverride: What ends up giving the culprit away. [[spoiler:Aigis is programmed to follow Mitsuru's orders, but considers Minato's to be a higher priority than hers. So when Minato decides to ask SEES who did it, Aigis bluntly answers.]]
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* OverrideCommand: What ends up giving the culprit away. [[spoiler:Aigis is programmed to follow Mitsuru's orders, but considers Minato's to be a higher priority than hers. So when Minato decides to ask SEES who did it, Aigis bluntly answers.]]
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* CommandOverride: What ends up giving the culprit away. [[spoiler:Aigis is programmed to follow Mitsuru's orders, but considers Minato's to be a higher priority than hers. So when Minato decides to ask SEES who did it, Aigis bluntly answers.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Honestly, the biggest clue was the pretentiously French perfumes used to prevent Koromaru from sniffing out the culprit.
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* BigEntrance: As part of their big reveal, Junpei and Yukari gather everyone in the command room before blowing up the door with fireworks and emerging from the smoke in fancy-ish outfits. No one is impressed.
-->'''Mitsuru:''' I do hope you realize you just violated our fire code to an extreme degree.
-->'''Mitsuru:''' I do hope you realize you just violated our fire code to an extreme degree.
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* ComicalOverreacting: There's no reason to set up a crime scene with police tape and a chalk outline for stolen pudding. Yet, our two Ace Defectives do it anyway.
** The culprit does the same, as they cover their tracks with perfume and then try to make it seem like there was no theft in the first place.
* EpicFail: Junpei's conclusion? Ken did it, because kids love sugar. Yukari's conclusion? Fuuka did it, because she was startled when they used Aigis to blow up her door. Both of them are wrong.
** The culprit does the same, as they cover their tracks with perfume and then try to make it seem like there was no theft in the first place.
* EpicFail: Junpei's conclusion? Ken did it, because kids love sugar. Yukari's conclusion? Fuuka did it, because she was startled when they used Aigis to blow up her door. Both of them are wrong.
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* StalkerWithACrush: Aigis makes no secret of this, much to Yukari's ire.
-->'''Aigis:''' Minato-san awoke from his slumber at approximately 12:42pm. He did not bother to get dressed, instead opting to view the Phoenix Ragner Featherman R marathon showing on TV, evidently for build-up to the upcoming feature film. He had saved rations for this event in the mini-fridge in the room, and has not left the room since. His temperature is at 37.1°C--
-->'''Aigis:''' Minato-san awoke from his slumber at approximately 12:42pm. He did not bother to get dressed, instead opting to view the Phoenix Ragner Featherman R marathon showing on TV, evidently for build-up to the upcoming feature film. He had saved rations for this event in the mini-fridge in the room, and has not left the room since. His temperature is at 37.1°C--
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* SweetTooth: Junpei accuses Ken of having this, as he's a kid, and 'kids do stupid shit for sugar'.
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* HypercompetantSidekick: Aigis pretty much does all the work for the Ace Defectives. In fact, [[spoiler:the only thing preventing her from revealing the culprit was because the culprit told her not to say ''anything''.]]
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* HypercompetantSidekick: HypercompetentSidekick: Aigis pretty much does all the work for the Ace Defectives. In fact, [[spoiler:the only thing preventing her from revealing the culprit was because the culprit told her not to say ''anything''.]]
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* HypercompetantSidekick: Aigis pretty much does all the work for the Ace Defectives. In fact, [[spoiler:the only thing preventing her from revealing the culprit was because the culprit told her not to say ''anything''.]]
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BigEater: Another trait of the fic's Minato.
BrilliantButLazy: This fic's Minato is definitely this when not Social Linking or in Tartarus.
SheCleansUpNicely: Fuuka seems to go through this procedure every day if her appearance on her lazy days are to go by.
ShipTease: Like in the game's canon, Yukari gets rather red-faced in front of Minato.
WronglyAccused: Yukari does this a lot to every S.E.E.S. member.
BrilliantButLazy: This fic's Minato is definitely this when not Social Linking or in Tartarus.
SheCleansUpNicely: Fuuka seems to go through this procedure every day if her appearance on her lazy days are to go by.
ShipTease: Like in the game's canon, Yukari gets rather red-faced in front of Minato.
WronglyAccused: Yukari does this a lot to every S.E.E.S. member.
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BigEater: Another trait of the fic's Minato.
BrilliantButLazy: This fic's Minato is definitely this when not Social Linking or in Tartarus.
SheCleansUpNicely: Fuuka seems to go through this procedure every day if her appearance on her lazy days are to go by.
ShipTease: Like in the game's canon, Yukari gets rather red-faced in front of Minato.
WronglyAccused: Yukari does this a lot to every S.E.E.S. member.
BrilliantButLazy: This fic's Minato is definitely this when not Social Linking or in Tartarus.
SheCleansUpNicely: Fuuka seems to go through this procedure every day if her appearance on her lazy days are to go by.
ShipTease: Like in the game's canon, Yukari gets rather red-faced in front of Minato.
WronglyAccused: Yukari does this a lot to every S.E.E.S. member.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka {{Tropers/Rissetter}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka {{Tropers/Rissetter}}.{{Tropers/Risetteer}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka {{Tropers/Risetter}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka {{Tropers/Risetter}}.{{Tropers/Rissetter}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka Tropers/Rissetter. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka Tropers/Rissetter.{{Tropers/Risetter}}. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka Tropers/Risetter.Tropers/Rissetter. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8331514/1/ Ace Defectives]]'' is a fanfic written by ExtraSaber, aka Tropers/Risetter. Taking place midway through {{VideoGame/Persona 3}}, it follows Yukari Takeba and Junpei Iori's attempts to solve a mystery... who ate Yukari's pudding. A daft, silly, humorous series of mishaps and detective madness follow, as the two Ace Defectives are on the case! A funny read with some genuine good jabs towards P3's characters and setting, in good humor.
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