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* AntiMagic: Again, the magic-restricting cones.
** Emancipation grills are shown to also block the use of magic through them.

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* AntiMagic: Again, the magic-restricting cones.
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cones. Emancipation grills are shown to also block the use of magic through them.



* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Wheatley]]
* BadDreams: [=GLaDOS=] of all characters has one in chapter 10.

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* BadDreams: [=GLaDOS=] BadDreams:
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of all characters characters, has one in chapter 10.



* [[spoiler:BroughtDownToNormal: Princess Celestia.]]
* [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather Chell, I Am Your Mother]]]]

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* ContinuityNod: It's filled to the brim with them, both for ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' and, and for ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies''.

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* ContinuityNod: It's filled to the brim with them, both for ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' and, and for ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies''.



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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: [=GLaDOS=] offers this gem: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."
** And of course, there's Pinkie: "Oh, Rarity, you don’t need to address me with expositional dialog explaining the characters, setting, and situation. That’s what the narration’s for."

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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: LeaningOnTheFourthWall:
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[=GLaDOS=] offers this gem: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."
** And of course, there's Pinkie: "Oh, Rarity, you don’t don't need to address me with expositional dialog explaining the characters, setting, and situation. That’s That's what the narration’s narration's for."



* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:How [=GLaDOS=] brings Atlas and P-Body back.]]

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* PeoplePuppets: PeoplePuppets:
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[[spoiler:How [=GLaDOS=] brings Atlas and P-Body back.]]



* YouHaveFailedMe: [=GLaDOS=] is not very forgiving to her Diamond Dog minions.

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* YouHaveFailedMe: [=GLaDOS=] is not very forgiving to her Diamond Dog minions.minions.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The title of Chapter 3 is "The Practical Purpose of Portals."

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: AlliterativeTitle: The title of Chapter 3 is "The Practical Purpose of Portals."
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It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc. Picking up where the original left off, it is a longer and more in-depth tale that chronicles SelfDemonstrating/GLaDOS's plan to rebuild Aperture Science and the emotional turmoil it causes for Chell and her friends in Ponyville.

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It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc. Picking up where the original left off, it is a longer and more in-depth tale that chronicles SelfDemonstrating/GLaDOS's [=GLaDOS=]'s plan to rebuild Aperture Science and the emotional turmoil it causes for Chell and her friends in Ponyville.
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* GenreSavvy: [=GLaDOS=] knows all the tropes, and uses them to her advantage.
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It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc. Picking up where the original left off, it is a longer and more in-depth tale that chronicles GLaDOS's plan to rebuild Aperture Science and the emotional turmoil it causes for Chell and her friends in Ponyville.

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It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc. Picking up where the original left off, it is a longer and more in-depth tale that chronicles GLaDOS's SelfDemonstrating/GLaDOS's plan to rebuild Aperture Science and the emotional turmoil it causes for Chell and her friends in Ponyville.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109545/a-trusted-friend-in-science-and-ponies A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies]]'' is a is a FanSequel to ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' written by Tropers/{{Rethkir}}. Like its predecessor, it is a {{crossover}} fic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}''.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109545/a-trusted-friend-in-science-and-ponies A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies]]'' is a is a FanSequel to ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' written by Tropers/{{Rethkir}}. Like its predecessor, it is a {{crossover}} fic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}''.

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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The Combine]] is this throughout the first half of the story, as [=GLaDOS=] drives the plot by attempting to [[spoiler:bring them to Equestria.]]


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* GenreSavvy: Applejack is savvy enough to accurately predict a conversation between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash.
** DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [=GLaDOS=] knows all the tropes, and uses them to her advantage.

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* GenreSavvy: Applejack is savvy enough to accurately predict a conversation between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash.
** DangerouslyGenreSavvy:
[=GLaDOS=] knows all the tropes, and uses them to her advantage.
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* SkewedPriorities: [=GLaDOS=] is relieved that the giant snake eating Spot is not poisonous because [[spoiler:she could only say IWarnedYou for giant snakes, not giant ''poisonous'' snakes.]] Her priorities in general are pretty skewed.

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* SkewedPriorities: [=GLaDOS=] is relieved that the giant snake eating Spot is not poisonous venomous because [[spoiler:she could only say IWarnedYou for giant snakes, not giant ''poisonous'' ''venomous'' snakes.]] Her priorities in general are pretty skewed.
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* IdiotPlot: Much of the plot revolves around the supposed heroes being colossally stupid. This is pointed out repeatedly within the story itself.



* MoralEventHorizon: A major theme of the story is regarding [=GLaDOS=]'s Moral Event Horizon. Though for many readers, she has passed it early on when she [[spoiler:puts Fluttershy in a coma]], Celestia explains in chapter 20 that [[spoiler:her true Moral Event Horizon corresponds with her DespairEventHorizon]].
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* IdiotPlot: Much of the plot revolves around the supposed heroes being colossally stupid.

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* IdiotPlot: Much of the plot revolves around the supposed heroes being colossally stupid. This is pointed out repeatedly within the story itself.
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* IdiotPlot: Much of the plot revolves around the supposed heroes being colossally stupid.


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* TrailersAlwaysLie: [[spoiler:Chell in fact does not stop [=GLaDOS=], and in fact is instrumental in her evil plan succeeding.]]
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* YouCannotThwartPhaseOne: [[spoiler:Nopony is able to stop [=GLaDOS=] from bringing the Combine to Equestria.]]

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* YouCannotThwartPhaseOne: YouCantThwartStageOne: [[spoiler:Nopony is able to stop [=GLaDOS=] from bringing the Combine to Equestria.]]

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It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc.

'''Spoilers for ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' will be unmarked.'''

After saving Equestria from [=GLaDOS=]' evil, Chell is finally able to live the life she never had... until [=GLaDOS=] sets in motion her plan to rebuild Aperture Science. It's only a matter of time before the experiments begin again, and only Chell will be able to stop her.

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It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc.

'''Spoilers
StoryArc. Picking up where the original left off, it is a longer and more in-depth tale that chronicles GLaDOS's plan to rebuild Aperture Science and the emotional turmoil it causes for Chell and her friends in Ponyville.

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for ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' will be unmarked.'''

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After saving Equestria from [=GLaDOS=]' [=GLaDOS=]'s evil, Chell is finally able to live the life she never had... until [=GLaDOS=] sets in motion her plan to rebuild Aperture Science. It's only a matter of time before the experiments begin again, and only Chell will be able to stop her.



* ArcWords: Still alive.

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** Emancipation grills are shown to also block the use of magic through them.
* ArcWords: Still alive.The phrase "still alive" is said a lot early on.



* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The G-Man]] may or may not be this.
* [[spoiler:BroughtDowntoNormal: Princess Celestia.]]

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* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The G-Man]] may or may not be this.
Combine]] is this throughout the first half of the story, as [=GLaDOS=] drives the plot by attempting to [[spoiler:bring them to Equestria.]]
* [[spoiler:BroughtDowntoNormal: [[spoiler:BroughtDownToNormal: Princess Celestia.]]



* {{Crossover}}: With ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[spoiler:and ''VideoGame/HalfLife''.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] doesn't even try to win the fight against Chell and her friends in chapter 20.]]
* {{Crossover}}: With ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'', ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', and ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[spoiler:and ''VideoGame/HalfLife''.]][[spoiler:''VideoGame/HalfLife''.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: Very much so compared to the prequel. The tone of this sequel is far darker and heavyhearted than the original.



* TheDeterminator: No points for guessing that Chell fits this bill, but she takes it to the extreme in chapter 20 [[spoiler:during her fight with [=GLaDOS=], when she refuses to give up even after she's been defeated.]]



%%* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: The [[spoiler:anti-mass spectrometer]] spins, just like in [[spoiler:''VideoGame/HalfLife'']].

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%%* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: The [[spoiler:anti-mass spectrometer]] spins, just like in [[spoiler:''VideoGame/HalfLife'']].* EnemyEatsYourLunch: [=GLaDOS=] steals a cake that Pinkie Pie made [[spoiler:and eats it]].



* ForcedToWatch: [=GLaDOS=]' goal is [[spoiler:to make Chell watch the destruction of Equestria and her friends.]]

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* ForcedToWatch: [=GLaDOS=]' goal is [[spoiler:to [=GLaDOS=]'s plans to to make Chell watch the [[spoiler:the destruction of Equestria and her friends.]]



* FreudianExcuse: This fic delves into the reason why [=GLaDOS=] changed after ''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}''

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* FreudianExcuse: This fic delves into the reason why [=GLaDOS=] changed after ''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}''''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}'', and generally attempts to cast [=GLaDOS=] in a sympathetic light, despite the terrible things she does throughout the story.



** DangerouslyGenreSavvy: [=GLaDOS=] knows all the tropes, and uses them to her advantage.



* HeroicSacrifice: Fluttershy sacrifices herself to save some animals. (She doesn't quite die, though.)
* KillTheCutie: [[spoiler:Almost happens to Fluttershy. The fans were not taking it well.]]
* LateArrivalSpoiler: It's very hard to talk about this story without spoiling things from the previous one.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: GLaDOS offers this gem: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."

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* HeroicSacrifice: Fluttershy [[spoiler:Fluttershy sacrifices herself to save some animals. animals.]] (She doesn't quite die, though.)
* KillTheCutie: [[spoiler:Almost Almost happens to Fluttershy. [[spoiler:Fluttershy]]. The fans readers were not taking it well.]]
well.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: It's very hard to talk about this story without spoiling things from the previous one.
ending of the original, considering that [=GLaDOS=] being NotQuiteDead was a TwistEnding.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] offers this gem: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."



* LogicBomb: Pinkie Pie attempts one on [=GLaDOS=] involving OppositeDay. [[spoiler:It doesn't work.]]



* MoralEventHorizon: A major theme of the story is regarding [=GLaDOS=]'s Moral Event Horizon. Though for many readers, she has passed it early on when she [[spoiler:puts Fluttershy in a coma]], Celestia explains in chapter 20 that [[spoiler:her true Moral Event Horizon corresponds with her DespairEventHorizon]].



** She does this later with [[spoiler:Princess Celestia, except this time, [=GLaDOS=] is the puppeteer.]]
* PillarOfLight: The [[spoiler:Anti-Mass Spectrometer]] produces a spectacular one whenever it is used.



** In chapter 20, [=GLaDOS=] plays the FinalBoss theme of ''VideoGame/PortalPrelude'' and references the game.



* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: [[spoiler:This is why [=GLaDOS=] made a FaceHeelTurn in the previous story.]]

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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: [[spoiler:This is why [=GLaDOS=] made a FaceHeelTurn [[spoiler:[=GLaDOS=] was corrupted again when after she came back in her old body at the previous story.end of ''VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}''.]]



* {{Tsundere}}: [=GLaDOS=], big time. It becomes apparent during Chapter 10, as her personality becomes more erratic and switches between mean and kind.

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* {{Tsundere}}: [=GLaDOS=], big time. It becomes apparent during Chapter chapter 10, as her personality becomes more erratic and switches between mean and kind.kind.
* YouCannotThwartPhaseOne: [[spoiler:Nopony is able to stop [=GLaDOS=] from bringing the Combine to Equestria.]]
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* PrecisionFStrike: In chapter 20, courtesy of Chell.
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* AscendedFanon: As of chapter 20, ''VideoGame/PortalPrelude'' is considered canon to this story.
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* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: The [[spoiler:anti-mass spectrometer]] spins, just like in [[spoiler:''VideoGame/HalfLife'']].

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* [[spoiler:BroughtDowntoNormal: Princess Celestia.]]
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** [=GLaDOS=] sings a new version of Still Alive in the first chapter.
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** Chell has her own in chapter 13.
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* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:How [=GLaDOS=] brings the bots back.]]

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* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:How [=GLaDOS=] brings the bots Atlas and P-Body back.]]
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** [=GLaDOS=] repeats many of the insults she used on Mane 6 before.

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** [=GLaDOS=] repeats many of the insults she used on the Mane 6 before.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The title of Chapter 6 is "The Practical Purpose of Portals."

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The title of Chapter 6 3 is "The Practical Purpose of Portals."
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* GhostMemory: [=GLaDOS=] obtains Caroline's memories early on. [[spoiler: You'd better believe it's a ChekovsGun.]]

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* GhostMemory: [=GLaDOS=] obtains Caroline's memories early on. [[spoiler: You'd [[spoiler:You'd better believe it's a ChekovsGun.ChekhovsGun.]]
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* MundaneUtility: Celestia and Chell agree the portal guns could easily fall into the wrong hands, and so limit their usage to creating an Equestria-wide transit system via the portals, keeping the guns locked up after.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109545/a-trusted-friend-in-science-and-ponies A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies]]'' is a is a crossover fic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' written by Tropers/{{Rethkir}}. It is a FanSequel to ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' by Pen Stroke.

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109545/a-trusted-friend-in-science-and-ponies A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies]]'' is a is a crossover FanSequel to ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' written by Tropers/{{Rethkir}}. Like its predecessor, it is a {{crossover}} fic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' written by Tropers/{{Rethkir}}. It is a FanSequel to ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' by Pen Stroke.
''VideoGame/{{Portal}}''.



* EvilCounterpart: [=GLaDOS=] is this to Celestia, since they look very similar. They are also {{foil}}s to each other.

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* EvilCounterpart: [=GLaDOS=] is this to Celestia, since they look very similar.similar and love cake. They are also {{foil}}s to each other.



* FreudianExcuse: This fic delves into the reason why [=GLaDOS=] changed after ''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}]]

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* FreudianExcuse: This fic delves into the reason why [=GLaDOS=] changed after ''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}]]''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}''



* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."

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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: GLaDOS offers this gem: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."
** And of course, there's Pinkie: "Oh, Rarity, you don’t need to address me with expositional dialog explaining the characters, setting, and situation. That’s what the narration’s for.
"
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[[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/a_trusted_friend_in_science_and_ponies_5144.png]]
[[caption-width-right:350:She's still alive.]]

''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/109545/a-trusted-friend-in-science-and-ponies A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies]]'' is a is a crossover fic between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' written by Tropers/{{Rethkir}}. It is a FanSequel to ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' by Pen Stroke.

It is an ongoing fic, first written two years after the publication of the original in response to its SequelHook and lack of a sequel. The story takes place following the events of the original, continuing the StoryArc.

'''Spoilers for ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies'' will be unmarked.'''

After saving Equestria from [=GLaDOS=]' evil, Chell is finally able to live the life she never had... until [=GLaDOS=] sets in motion her plan to rebuild Aperture Science. It's only a matter of time before the experiments begin again, and only Chell will be able to stop her.

!! Tropes that appear in this story:
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The title of Chapter 6 is "The Practical Purpose of Portals."
* AntiMagic: Again, the magic-restricting cones.
* ArcWords: Still alive.
* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Wheatley]]
* BadDreams: [=GLaDOS=] of all characters has one in chapter 10.
* BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The G-Man]] may or may not be this.
* [[spoiler:[[LukeIAmYourFather Chell, I Am Your Mother]]]]
* ComedicSociopathy: The way [=GLaDOS=] disregards the Diamond Dogs can be quite humorous.
* ComplexityAddiction: [=GLaDOS=]' plan is a lot more complicated than it probably needs to be.
* ContinuityNod: It's filled to the brim with them, both for ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' and, and for ''FanFic/BetterLivingThroughScienceAndPonies''.
** Ditzy calls [=GLaDOS=] a monkey wrench in chapter 9.
** Many of [=GLaDOS=] lines are references to things she said in ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' or '' VideoGame/{{Portal 2}}''.
** When [=GLaDOS=] first speaks to Chell, she mentions that it felt like she was ignoring her in the ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' games, which is, according to WordOfGod, the real reason why she [[HeroicMime never talked]].
** When [=GLaDOS=] escapes from the facility, she is described as flying like an eagle… piloting a blimp.
** When she first contacts Rarity, she describes herself as having a medical degree… in fashion… from [[AC:insert [[FantasyCounterpartCulture French counterpart nation]] here.]]
** [=GLaDOS=] repeats many of the insults she used on Mane 6 before.
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: [=GLaDOS=] punishes Rover by [[spoiler:forcing him to listen to a repeating audio recording of Rarity whining for the rest of his life.]] Her punishment of the other two Diamond Dogs is genuinely terrifying, although Rover considers his punishment to be worse.
* {{Crossover}}: With ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[spoiler:and ''VideoGame/HalfLife''.]]
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Some of [=GLaDOS=]' dialog is this way for humor.
* DramaticIrony: Used in the beginning when the ponies are unaware that [=GLaDOS=] is still alive.
* EverythingsBetterWithSpinning: The [[spoiler:anti-mass spectrometer]] spins, just like in [[spoiler:''VideoGame/HalfLife'']].
* EvilCounterpart: [=GLaDOS=] is this to Celestia, since they look very similar. They are also {{foil}}s to each other.
* FanSequel
* FireWaterJuxtaposition: [[spoiler:Fluttershy's sacrifice takes place in a forest fire, as it begins to rain.]]
* {{Foil}}: Celestia and [=GLaDOS=] are foils to each other, as they share a similar appearance and both love cake, but have very different personalities.
* ForcedToWatch: [=GLaDOS=]' goal is [[spoiler:to make Chell watch the destruction of Equestria and her friends.]]
* {{Foreshadow}}: There's a healthy amount throughout, but Chapter 6 takes the cake, no pun intended.
* FreudianExcuse: This fic delves into the reason why [=GLaDOS=] changed after ''VideoGame/{{Portal2}}]]
* FrickinLaserBeams: [=GLaDOS=]'s laser canon becomes her signature weapon.
* GenreSavvy: Applejack is savvy enough to accurately predict a conversation between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash.
* GhostMemory: [=GLaDOS=] obtains Caroline's memories early on. [[spoiler: You'd better believe it's a ChekovsGun.]]
* HeroicBSOD: Happens to Chell when she finds out that [=GLaDOS=] is still alive. Ditzy is able to pull her out of it.
* HeroicSacrifice: Fluttershy sacrifices herself to save some animals. (She doesn't quite die, though.)
* KillTheCutie: [[spoiler:Almost happens to Fluttershy. The fans were not taking it well.]]
* LateArrivalSpoiler: It's very hard to talk about this story without spoiling things from the previous one.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: "Don’t give me one of your stupid pretentious ''friendship'' lessons. I’d watch a show for little girls if I wanted to hear that. I swear, I feel like I’m in one when I’m around you stupid, happy ponies."
* MechanicalHorse: [=GLaDOS=] has adjusted very well to her new body.
* NearDeathExperience: [[spoiler:Fluttershy has one in chapter 8.]]
* PeoplePuppets: [[spoiler:How [=GLaDOS=] brings the bots back.]]
* PortalCut: Chell explains why this doesn't happen in chapter 3.
* PortalNetwork: Utilized for transportation in Equestria during the TimeSkip.
* [[PoweredByAForsakenChild Powered By A Forsaken Pony]]: Poor Twilight.
* {{Pyromaniac}}: [=GLaDOS=] loves burning things with that laser.
* RecursiveFanfiction
* SequelEscalation: It’s significantly longer than the original and has a more intricate plot, and all of Equestria is now at stake.
* ShoutOut:
** The [[spoiler:anti-mass spectrometer]] requires [[Film/BackToTheFuture 1.21 gigawatts]] of power.
** Chell and Ditzy briefly meet [[Series/DoctorWho the Doctor]]. He calls Ditzy "Derpy" and mentions that they've been on adventures before, a reference to AudioPlay/DoctorWhoovesAndAssistant. He asks if there are any [[ZeppelinsFromAnotherWorld Zeppelins]] and mentions knocking four times.
** The pegasi that Rainbow Dash selects to assist Fluttershy with the animal rescue are some of the main characters in ''FanFic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar''.
** Pinkie speculates using Chell's necklace to allow dogs to talk, a reference to ''WesternAnimation/{{Up}}''.
** [=GLaDOS=] attempts to activate Twilight's powerful magical state by saying [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender "yip-yip."]]
*** Later, Celestia quotes Uncle Iroh.
** [=GLaDOS=] places a [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask Moon's Tear]] in the [[spoiler:anti-mass spectrometer.]]
** The Space Core sings [[WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}} "Whalers on the Moon"]] and the Franchise/StarWars theme.
* SkewedPriorities: [=GLaDOS=] is relieved that the giant snake eating Spot is not poisonous because [[spoiler:she could only say IWarnedYou for giant snakes, not giant ''poisonous'' snakes.]] Her priorities in general are pretty skewed.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: [[spoiler:This is why [=GLaDOS=] made a FaceHeelTurn in the previous story.]]
* TimeSkip: A few months pass during chapter 3.
* {{Tsundere}}: [=GLaDOS=], big time. It becomes apparent during Chapter 10, as her personality becomes more erratic and switches between mean and kind.
* YouHaveFailedMe: [=GLaDOS=] is not very forgiving to her Diamond Dog minions.

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