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* BaldWomen: Bald Women are not uncommon and Shakura is bald at the beginning off the story, due to an ImportantHaircut.
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* BadassMustache: Adisa wears one very proudly, in the same style as [[Music/{{Queen}} Freddie Mercury]].
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* TrainingFromHell: Shakura and her entire tribe, train, hunt and live this way.
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The story center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. chapters[[note]]Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] 2011[[/note]] are currently written.
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''Shakura's Sunset'' is a fantasy WebSerialNovel based in a Tribal fantasy setting, and is currently being worked on by @/{{Vyctorian}}. It takes place in a ConstructedWorld, called ''Olaminal'' and center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written.
The story center's around Shakura's, her BondCreature Malwii and her quest to win the respect of her village. The story quickly grow to encompass more than this as Shakura and her family clash on ideology and whats best for her and her people. (''The Taka Tribe'')
The story is currently under going revisions and is currently in limbo with no planned release date, as other projects have the Author busy.
The story center's around Shakura's, her BondCreature Malwii and her quest to win the respect of her village. The story quickly grow to encompass more than this as Shakura and her family clash on ideology and whats best for her and her people. (''The Taka Tribe'')
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A part of the [[TheVerse Olaminaverse]], ''Shakura's Sunset'' is a fantasy WebSerialNovel by [[@/{{Vyctorian}} V.T.Byron]]. The story us based in a
The story center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written.
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* BaldWomen: Bald Women are not uncommon and Shakura is bald at the beginning off the story, due to an ImportantHaircut.
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* ImportantHaircut: Shakura has one off-screen, just minutes before the story begins and this fact is touched upon in the first chapter.
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* BarBrawl: Shakura gets into one after arriving in town, where he she manages to take on three grown men more than twice her size.
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* BarBrawl: Shakura gets into one after arriving in a town, where he she manages to take on three grown men more than twice her size.
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* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: Even without their {{BondCreature}}s, Shakura's entire tribe have this.
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* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: Even without their {{BondCreature}}s, Shakura's entire tribe have this.are the embodiment of this trope.
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* ActionGirl: Shakura has been trained as a warrior since birth as has every person in her tribe.
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* ActionGirl: Shakura has been trained as a warrior since birth as has every person female in her tribe.
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* LowFantasy: Despite the main character being a magic user, magic is very rare in the world.
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* LowFantasy: Despite the main character being a magic user, Downplayed, magic is very rare but not unheard of in the world.
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''Shakura's Sunset'' is a LowFantasy WebSerialNovel based in a Tribal fantasy setting, and is currently being worked on by @/{{Vyctorian}}. It takes place in a ConstructedWorld, called ''Olaminal'' and center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written.
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''Shakura's Sunset'' is a LowFantasy fantasy WebSerialNovel based in a Tribal fantasy setting, and is currently being worked on by @/{{Vyctorian}}. It takes place in a ConstructedWorld, called ''Olaminal'' and center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written.
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* FeministFantasy: Downplayed, but it's there. Women are equals in terms of political power and physical/magical power. Warrior women and stay at home fathers are just as common as Male warriors and stay at home moms.
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* BarBrawl: Shakura gets into one after arriving in town, where he she manages to take on three grown men more than twice her size.
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* CharlesAtlasSuperpower: Even without their {{BondCreature}}s, Shakura's entire tribe have this.
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* LightEmUp: Malwii's default and most powerful attack. Overlaps with HolyHandGrenade.
* LowFantasy: Despite the main character being a magic user, magic is very rare in theworld.world.
* {{Lunacy}}: Subverted. Shakura's tribe does get magical power from moonlight as do their bond creatures but they suffer no mental changes.
* LowFantasy: Despite the main character being a magic user, magic is very rare in the
* {{Lunacy}}: Subverted. Shakura's tribe does get magical power from moonlight as do their bond creatures but they suffer no mental changes.
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* TrainingFromHell: Shakura and her entire tribe, train, hunt and live this way.
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''Shakura's Sunset'' is a LowFantasy WebSerialNovel based in a Tribal fantasy setting, and is currently being worked on by @/{{Vyctorian}}. It takes place in a ConstructedWorld, called ''Olaminal'' and center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written with plans for the first chapter to be published online in 2012, and a chapter released every month or two after the first.
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* HumansAreWhite: Averted. It takes place in an stone entering iron-age African fantasy world.
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The story center's around Shakura's, her BondCreature Malwii and her quest to win the respect of her village. The story quickly grow to encompass more than this as Shakura and her family clash on ideology and whats best for her and her people (''The Taka Tribe'')
The story center's around Shakura's, her BondCreature Malwii and her quest to win the respect of her village. The story quickly grow to encompass more than this as Shakura and her family clash on ideology and whats best for her and her people (''The Taka Tribe'')
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''Shakura's Sunset'' is a LowFantasy WebSerialNovel based in a Tribal fantasy setting, and is currently being worked on by @/{{Vyctorian}}. It takes place in a ConstructedWorld, called ''Olaminal'' and center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written with plans for the first chapter to be published online in early 2012, and a chapter released every month or two after the first.
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* ActionGirl: Shakura has been trained as a warrior since birth as has every person in her tribe.
* BadassFamily: Every single member of the Taka tribe was trained as an elite warrior until at least age 12.
* BadassMustache: Adisa wears one very proudly, in the same style as [[{{Queen}} Freddie Mercury]].
* BigDamnHeroes: this is how we meet Malwii, Shakura's [[BondCreature Familiar]].
* BondCreature: Every single member of the Taka tribe has a magical cat which acts as their guardian.
* CrapsackWorld: The world is filled with ravenous beasts the roam the bush by day and murderous spirits which rule the bush by night forcing people to band together into tight knit villages and making the concepts of adventuring and trading synonyms with madness.
* CultureChopSuey: of Nigeria and several native American tribes. As well as Japan.
* FacialMarkings: Every single member of the ''Taka'' tribe has these tattooed into their face at a young age.
* [[MedievalStasis Iron-Age Stasis]]: Expansion is near impossible, and most efforts go into day to day survival and protection.
* NatureHero: The Taka tribe is filled with these in fact the majority of the world is, though Shakura herself is a subversion.
* LowFantasy: Despite the main character being a magic user, magic is very rare in the world.
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* ActionGirl: Shakura has been trained as a warrior since birth as has every person in her tribe.
* BadassFamily: Every single member of the Taka tribe was trained as an elite warrior until at least age 12.
* BadassMustache: Adisa wears one very proudly, in the same style as [[{{Queen}} Freddie Mercury]].
* BigDamnHeroes: this is how we meet Malwii, Shakura's [[BondCreature Familiar]].
* BondCreature: Every single member of the Taka tribe has a magical cat which acts as their guardian.
* CrapsackWorld: The world is filled with ravenous beasts the roam the bush by day and murderous spirits which rule the bush by night forcing people to band together into tight knit villages and making the concepts of adventuring and trading synonyms with madness.
* CultureChopSuey: of Nigeria and several native American tribes. As well as Japan.
* FacialMarkings: Every single member of the ''Taka'' tribe has these tattooed into their face at a young age.
* [[MedievalStasis Iron-Age Stasis]]: Expansion is near impossible, and most efforts go into day to day survival and protection.
* NatureHero: The Taka tribe is filled with these in fact the majority of the world is, though Shakura herself is a subversion.
* LowFantasy: Despite the main character being a magic user, magic is very rare in the world.
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''Shakura's Sunset'' is a LowFantasy WebSerial WebSerialNovel based in a Tribal fantasy setting, and is currently being worked on by @/{{Vyctorian}}. It takes place in a ConstructedWorld, called ''Olaminal'' and center's around Shakura and starts at the time of her ''[[ComingOfAge Life-Trial]]''. The first seven chapters[[hottip:*: Apx. 72 pages written as of December 2011]] are currently written with plans for the first chapter to be published online in early 2012, and a chapter released every month after the first.
