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* TheBusCameBack: Black Flame and Shyla Kor-Onn, two villains who had not been seen in years, having dropped off the map after ''ComicBook/AdventureComics'' #400 (1970) and ''ComicBook/StrangersAtTheHeartsCore'' (1978), respectively, make their final appearance in this story.
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** Black Flame and Shyla Kor-Onn, two villains who had not been seen in years, having dropped off the map after ''ComicBook/AdventureComics'' #400 (1970) and ''ComicBook/StrangersAtTheHeartsCore'' (1978), respectively, make their final appearance in thisstory.story.
** Kil-Gor had made a prior appearance in a "The Fabulous ComicBook/WorldOfKrypton" backup story. He is given prominence here, as several of his inventions are reused or improved upon by his descendants, and a part of his debut story is adapted in the third issue.
** Black Flame and Shyla Kor-Onn, two villains who had not been seen in years, having dropped off the map after ''ComicBook/AdventureComics'' #400 (1970) and ''ComicBook/StrangersAtTheHeartsCore'' (1978), respectively, make their final appearance in this
** Kil-Gor had made a prior appearance in a "The Fabulous ComicBook/WorldOfKrypton" backup story. He is given prominence here, as several of his inventions are reused or improved upon by his descendants, and a part of his debut story is adapted in the third issue.
* CallARabbitASmeerp: The Kryptonians named asbestos "Hatuar", after the scientist who first discovered it in their planet.
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* {{Chronoscope}}: Zor-El whips up a device which lets anybody relive someone else's memories by holding something belonging to that person. Later, Superman designs some camera-like device which displays scenes of the past.
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** Zor-El whips up a device which lets anybody relive someone else's memories by holding something belonging to that person. Later, Superman designs some camera-like device which displays scenes of thepast.past.
** Superman has a similar device in his Fortress, but it's useless for seeing the pasts of other planets.
** Zor-El whips up a device which lets anybody relive someone else's memories by holding something belonging to that person. Later, Superman designs some camera-like device which displays scenes of the
** Superman has a similar device in his Fortress, but it's useless for seeing the pasts of other planets.
* DidNotThinkThisThrough: The kryptonian slaves do not stop to consider that their blasters might have limited charge, and so break the machines the Vrangs would use to recharge them.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: A Vrang guard shoots Val-Lor for speaking against his masters. Instead of squashing any thought of rebellion out of the slaves' minds, Val-Lor's execution sparks a rebellion which leads to the end of the Vrang Dominion.
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** A Vrang guard shoots Val-Lor for speaking against his masters. Instead of squashing any thought of rebellion out of the slaves' minds, Val-Lor's execution sparks a rebellion which leads to the end of the VrangDominion.Dominion.
** Almost happens to the rebellion soon after, as they wreck the Vrang's machinery in anger, [[CassandraTruth ignoring a naysayer]] who protest that they could've been useful, as they think the blasters they've stolen will be more than enough. But the blasters soon start running out of power, and without the aforementioned machines to recharge them, they are forced to figure out an alternate solution.
** A Vrang guard shoots Val-Lor for speaking against his masters. Instead of squashing any thought of rebellion out of the slaves' minds, Val-Lor's execution sparks a rebellion which leads to the end of the Vrang
** Almost happens to the rebellion soon after, as they wreck the Vrang's machinery in anger, [[CassandraTruth ignoring a naysayer]] who protest that they could've been useful, as they think the blasters they've stolen will be more than enough. But the blasters soon start running out of power, and without the aforementioned machines to recharge them, they are forced to figure out an alternate solution.
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** A slave who refused to bow down to his masters receives the name "Val-Lor".
** A minor character named Ar-Go is praised as a great sailor. In Myth/ClassicalMythology, the Argo was the ship used by Jason and the Argonauts.
** A minor character named Ar-Go is praised as a great sailor. In Myth/ClassicalMythology, the Argo was the ship used by Jason and the Argonauts.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: The Vrangs force the Kryptonians to mine an ElephantGraveyard made up of the crystallized remains of a prehistoric bird. One Kryptonian speculates that they would come there instinctively and turned into crystal upon death.
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* SingleLanguagePlanet: Everyone on Krypton spoke the same language, called Kryptonese, and used the same writing system during millennia.
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* SingleLanguagePlanet: Everyone on Krypton spoke the same language, called Kryptonese, which apparently suffered little enough change despite the ravages of time and used societal upheaval that Kara can still parse the same writing system during millennia.ancient Kryptonese dialect via lip-reading despite only knowing modern Kryptonese.
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Inspired by the success stories of ''[[Literature/AsianSaga Shogun]]'' and ''Series/{{Roots}}'', Morgan Edge gives Clark Kent a new assignment: writing a series of articles chronicling the story of Superman's family. It should be an easy job, since Clark Kent is Superman... except that Superman barely knows anything about his ancestors.
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Inspired by the success stories of ''[[Literature/AsianSaga Shogun]]'' and ''Series/{{Roots}}'', ''Series/Roots1977'', Morgan Edge gives Clark Kent a new assignment: writing a series of articles chronicling the story of Superman's family. It should be an easy job, since Clark Kent is Superman... except that Superman barely knows anything about his ancestors.
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* MemoryJar: In the vault of the House of El, most of statues carry objects -a building model, a book, a gun...- which project the memories of the bearer into the head of whoever touches said object. Also, Zor-El reveals he has built a machine which can use a deceased Kryptonian's headband to draw their memories into someone else's brain.
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* FalselyReformedVillain: Zora Vi-Lar declares she regrets her past crimes so that she is released from prison; but as soon as Supergirl and her cousin visit Kandor, Zora tries to take revenge on the Maid of Might and gets captured.
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* SingleLanguagePlanet: Everyone on Krypton spoke the same language, called Kryptonese, and used the same writing system during millennia.
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* IdenticalGrandson: The first Kal-El, who lived ten millennia ago and is Kal and Kara's distant ancestor, is all but identical to Superman.
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* IdenticalGrandson: The first Kal-El, who lived ten millennia ago and is Kal and Kara's distant ancestor, is all but identical to Superman.
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* IdenticalGrandson: The first Kal-El, who lived ten millennia ago and is Kal and Kara's distant ancestor, is all but identical to Superman.
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* IdenticalGrandson: The first Kal-El, who lived ten millennia ago and is Kal and Kara's distant ancestor, is all but identical to Superman.
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* CapeSnag: Played for laughs. When Superman is about to take off towards planet Rokyn excitedly, [[https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HdLWlDWAFmE/Wp19SyDTrjI/AAAAAAAAypQ/-fJrLWjPMMUdZrU7bWuYC8EpsKFnX2aKQCLcBGAs/s1600/Kry%2BChron%2B1-03.jpg Supergirl tugs on his cape]] before reminding him that they need a spaceship to get there, what with Rokyn orbiting a red star.
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* CapeSnag: Played for laughs. When Superman is about to take off towards planet Rokyn excitedly, [[https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-HdLWlDWAFmE/Wp19SyDTrjI/AAAAAAAAypQ/-fJrLWjPMMUdZrU7bWuYC8EpsKFnX2aKQCLcBGAs/s1600/Kry%2BChron%2B1-03.jpg Supergirl tugs on his cape]] before reminding him that they need a spaceship to get there, what with Rokyn orbiting a red star.
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* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: Ancient Kryptonians used some kind of warm-blooded, egg-laying, orange-scaled sauropod-like species called Oliphents as beasts of burden and war mounts. Their likeness to dinosaurs is noted, albeit not explained.
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: Ancient Kryptonians rode winged, four-legged, beaked mammalian beasts called Tanthuo Flez, or "the Winged Ones".
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: Ancient Kryptonians rode winged, four-legged, beaked mammalian beasts called Tanthuo Flez, or "the Winged Ones". They also use some kind of warm-blooded, egg-laying, orange-scaled sauropod-like species called Oliphents as beasts of burden and war mounts. Their likeness to dinosaurs is noted, albeit not explained.