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Not an outcome, character reaction and too fanatical.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: The Sex Police aren't actually police. On the one hand, this means that they have no real power to arrest anyone or any kind of legal authority, but on the other hand, they're essentially vigilantes who have no reason to play nice and nobody to hold them responsible for anything.]]
** When Susie and Jon tell Ana that they're bank robbers, her response is to tell them to get out -- after all, they've just made her an accessory after the fact, why would she want anything more to do with them?
** [[spoiler: Susie and Jon's crime spree gets a lot of people with orgasm-powers very pissed off at them. Sure, their motives might be good, but they're committing crimes, potentially exposing everyone, and they have little if any sense of restraint -- they're a disaster waiting to happen.]]
** When Susie and Jon tell Ana that they're bank robbers, her response is to tell them to get out -- after all, they've just made her an accessory after the fact, why would she want anything more to do with them?
** [[spoiler: Susie and Jon's crime spree gets a lot of people with orgasm-powers very pissed off at them. Sure, their motives might be good, but they're committing crimes, potentially exposing everyone, and they have little if any sense of restraint -- they're a disaster waiting to happen.]]
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A Date With Rosie Palms is no longer a trope
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And then one night as she submerged herself, Suzie's "lower region" slid [[ADateWithRosiePalms a little too close to the running water]], if you get the meaning. Having heard the standard gossip, she understood what was going to happen, and [[TheModestOrgasm then it did.]] But as she exited the tub, she realized something ''truly'' weird had occurred: [[TimeStandsStill accompanied by swirling lights and silence, time had stopped for the world and everyone in it but her]].
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And then one night as she submerged herself, Suzie's "lower region" slid [[ADateWithRosiePalms a little too close to the running water]], water, if you get the meaning. Having heard the standard gossip, she understood what was going to happen, and [[TheModestOrgasm then it did.]] But as she exited the tub, she realized something ''truly'' weird had occurred: [[TimeStandsStill accompanied by swirling lights and silence, time had stopped for the world and everyone in it but her]].
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* GenreBusting: It's a Romantic Crime Drama with elements of Sci-Fi. It's telling when Wiki/TheOtherWiki simply lists it as "Crime" when it's really not exclusively that.
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* GenreBusting: It's a Romantic Crime Drama with elements of Sci-Fi. It's telling when Wiki/TheOtherWiki Website/TheOtherWiki simply lists it as "Crime" when it's really not exclusively that.
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* LousyLoversAreLosersMore: PlayedWith in [[spoiler: Rachelle and Robert's relationship]]; she's ''[[ReallyGetsAround much]]'' more experienced than he is (the implication being that he spent most of college actually doing schoolwork, while she was a party girl), and says he's afraid of being too "vanilla" for her. So far, he hasn't been, as she seems to like being able to take it easy. [[spoiler: His insecurities about being able to satisfy her sexually lead them to break up briefly, though they get back together in issue #18. Just in time for Rachelle to find out in issue #19 that she's pregnant.]]
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* LousyLoversAreLosersMore: LousyLoversAreLosers: PlayedWith in [[spoiler: Rachelle and Robert's relationship]]; she's ''[[ReallyGetsAround much]]'' more experienced than he is (the implication being that he spent most of college actually doing schoolwork, while she was a party girl), and says he's afraid of being too "vanilla" for her. So far, he hasn't been, as she seems to like being able to take it easy. [[spoiler: His insecurities about being able to satisfy her sexually lead them to break up briefly, though they get back together in issue #18. Just in time for Rachelle to find out in issue #19 that she's pregnant.]]
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: Averted and how. Neither Suzie nor Jon are fundamentally bad people, but they are screwed up, and that factors into their sex lives. Played with in [[spoiler: Rachelle and Robert's relationship]]; she's ''much'' more experienced than he is (the implication being that he spent most of college actually doing schoolwork, while she was a party girl), and says he's afraid of being too "vanilla" for her. So far, he hasn't been, as she seems to like being able to take it easy. [[spoiler: His insecurities about being able to satisfy her sexually lead them to break up briefly, though they get back together in issue #18. Just in time for Rachelle to find out in issue #19 that she's pregnant.]]
* LousyLoversAreLosersMore: PlayedWith in [[spoiler: Rachelle and Robert's relationship]]; she's ''[[ReallyGetsAround much]]'' more experienced than he is (the implication being that he spent most of college actually doing schoolwork, while she was a party girl), and says he's afraid of being too "vanilla" for her. So far, he hasn't been, as she seems to like being able to take it easy. [[spoiler: His insecurities about being able to satisfy her sexually lead them to break up briefly, though they get back together in issue #18. Just in time for Rachelle to find out in issue #19 that she's pregnant.]]
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* MaleFrontalNudity / ModestyBedsheet: Suzie grabs the sheet when she panics after realizing Jon wasn't affected by her power. On the other side of the bed, Jon now has nothing to cover himself with.
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* MaleFrontalNudity / ModestyBedsheet: Suzie grabs the sheet when she panics after realizing Jon wasn't affected by her power. On the other side of the bed, Jon now has [[MaleFrontalNudity nothing to cover himself with.with]].
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* SexualKarma: {{Averted|Trope}}. Neither Suzie nor Jon are fundamentally bad people, but they are screwed up, and that factors into their sex lives.
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* {{Crossover}}: with ComicBook/TheWickedAndTheDivine, and one of the more complicated examples. In issue 9, we watch a porn scene being filmed where the two actors are cosplaying characters from that comic book, which we later find out was sold under the {{pun}}tastic name of "The Licked and the Divine". For bonus references, the Wic-Div creators, [[CreatorCameo Kieron Gillen and Jamie McKelvie]], are featured in this scene, too. The real crossover happens in issue 14 of the "The Wicked and the Divine", which slightly alters these images to make it look like the character Woden is producing and directing this porn video, presumably for self-gratification purposes.
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* {{Crossover}}: with ComicBook/TheWickedAndTheDivine, and one of the more complicated examples. In issue 9, we watch a porn scene being filmed where the two actors are cosplaying characters from that comic book, which we later find out was sold under the {{pun}}tastic name of "The Licked and the Divine". For bonus references, the Wic-Div creators, [[CreatorCameo Kieron Gillen and Jamie McKelvie]], are featured in this scene, too. The real crossover happens in issue 14 of the "The Wicked and the Divine", which slightly alters these images to make it look like the character Woden is producing and directing this porn video, presumably for self-gratification purposes.
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** To ''ComicBook/TheWickedAndTheDivine.'' In that Fraction and Zdarksy do a porn parody of it.
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** To ''ComicBook/TheWickedAndTheDivine.'' In that Fraction and Zdarksy do a porn parody of it. The cover of issue #16 is also drawn in the same style, with the title changed to "The Sexual + the Criminal".
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* {{Asexuality}}: In the third arc of the series, we meet Alix, an asexual person. Not only is her story incredibly touching and heartbreaking, but we learn that she accesses her orgasm-power via BASE jumping. Way to introduce a great new character [[spoiler: who resolutely decides to kill our heroes.]]
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler: The Sex Police aren't actually police. On the one hand, this means that they have no real power to arrest anyone or any kind of legal authority, but on the other hand, they're essentially vigilantes who have no reason to play nice and nobody to hold them responsible for anything.]]
** When Susie and Jon tell Ana that they're bank robbers, her response is to tell them to get out -- after all, they've just made her an accessory after the fact, why would she want anything more to do with them?
** [[spoiler: Susie and Jon's crime spree gets a lot of people with orgasm-powers very pissed off at them. Sure, their motives might be good, but they're committing crimes, potentially exposing everyone, and they have little if any sense of restraint -- they're a disaster waiting to happen.]]
** When Susie and Jon tell Ana that they're bank robbers, her response is to tell them to get out -- after all, they've just made her an accessory after the fact, why would she want anything more to do with them?
** [[spoiler: Susie and Jon's crime spree gets a lot of people with orgasm-powers very pissed off at them. Sure, their motives might be good, but they're committing crimes, potentially exposing everyone, and they have little if any sense of restraint -- they're a disaster waiting to happen.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: The Sex Police aren't actually police. On the one hand, this means that they have no real power to arrest anyone or any kind of legal authority, but on the other hand, they're essentially vigilantes who have no reason to play nice and nobody to hold them responsible for anything.]]
** When Susie and Jon tell Ana that they're bank robbers, her response is to tell them to get out -- after all, they've just made her an accessory after the fact, why would she want anything more to do with them?
** [[spoiler: Susie and Jon's crime spree gets a lot of people with orgasm-powers very pissed off at them. Sure, their motives might be good, but they're committing crimes, potentially exposing everyone, and they have little if any sense of restraint -- they're a disaster waiting to happen.]]
** When Susie and Jon tell Ana that they're bank robbers, her response is to tell them to get out -- after all, they've just made her an accessory after the fact, why would she want anything more to do with them?
** [[spoiler: Susie and Jon's crime spree gets a lot of people with orgasm-powers very pissed off at them. Sure, their motives might be good, but they're committing crimes, potentially exposing everyone, and they have little if any sense of restraint -- they're a disaster waiting to happen.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: with ComicBook/TheWickedAndTheDivine, and one of the more complicated examples. In issue 9, we watch a porn scene being filmed where the two actors are cosplaying characters from that comic book, which we later find out was sold under the {{pun}}tastic name of "The Licked and the Divine". For bonus references, the Wic-Div creators, [[CreatorCameo Kieron Gillen and Jamie McKelvie]], are featured in this scene, too. The real crossover happens in issue 14 of the "The Wicked and the Divine", which slightly alters these images to make it look like the character Woden is producing and directing this porn video, presumably for self-gratification purposes.
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* CommonalityConnection: Several. Jon works for the same bank that Suzie's dad worked for; one of the bank's owners is a member of the Sex Police; Suzie's new OB/GYN is a childhood friend of Jon's who then ends up dating Rachelle, and all seven of the main characters(Suzie, Jon, Rachelle, Robert, and the Sex Police) live in the same town.
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* CommonalityConnection: Several. Jon works for the same bank that Suzie's dad worked for; one of the bank's owners is a member of the Sex Police; Suzie's new OB/GYN is a childhood friend of Jon's who then ends up dating Rachelle, and all seven of the main characters(Suzie, characters (Suzie, Jon, Rachelle, Robert, and the Sex Police) live in the same town.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Badal vanishes into the timestream permanently; Suzie does so temporarily but manages to pull herself back to reality by focusing on Jon's love for her; Rachelle & Robert end up married with kids; Bud and Dewey get married; Ana and Alex are in a relationship; Dave and Myrtle are in a relationship; but Jon and Suzie broke up -- seemingly for good -- in the time between the end of the last issue to this one.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Badal vanishes into the timestream permanently; Suzie does so temporarily but manages to pull herself back to reality by focusing on Jon's love for her; Rachelle & Robert end up married with kids; Bud and Dewey get married; Ana and Alex are in a relationship; Dave and Myrtle are in a relationship; but Jon and Suzie broke up -- seemingly for good -- in the time between the end of the last issue to this one. Though, it does end with [[MaybeEverAfter the both of them deciding to stay on the island for a little while longer]].]]
