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* AdaptationalContextChange: The Gasman’s name. In the book it was because he had an iffy digestive tract causing him to [[{{Gasshole}} fart a lot]], here it’s because he’s good with machinery- in particular explosives.
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** Max had a minor ''Girls Rule-Boy’s Drool'' type attitude - shown when she sees a group of boys picking on a girl - Ella, which is absent from the comic.
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Iggy's hair is R E D in the books (or technically strawberry blonde but it's basically the same thing)
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* AdaptationDyeJob: In the original books both Max and Iggy were blonde ([[SeriesContinuityError or in Max’s case occasionally brunette]]) but here they are both redheads.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: In the original books both Max and Iggy were was blonde ([[SeriesContinuityError or in Max’s case occasionally brunette]]) but here they are both redheads.she is a redhead.
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A 5-part miniseries retelling of ''The Angel Experiment'', the first book in Creator/JamesPatterson’s ''Literature/MaximumRide'' series, written by Marguerite Bennett, drawn by Alex Sanchez and published by Creator/MarvelComics.
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A 5-part miniseries retelling of ''The Angel Experiment'', the first book in Creator/JamesPatterson’s ''Literature/MaximumRide'' series, written by Marguerite Bennett, Creator/MargueriteBennett, drawn by Alex Sanchez and published by Creator/MarvelComics.
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* AdaptationDistillation: The plot is greatly simplified, with many of the New York scenes (such as one where the Flock visits a fancy restaurant) excised completely.
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A 5-part miniseries retelling, retelling of ''The Angel Experiment'', the first book in Creator/JamesPatterson’s ''Literature/MaximumRide'' series, written by Marguerite Bennett, drawn by Alex Sanchez and Published published by Creator/MarvelComics.
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** Max had a minor ''Girls Rule-Boy’s Drool'' type attitude - shown when she’s she sees a group of boy’s boys picking on a girl - Ella, which is absent from the comic.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In the books whilst Gazzy was capable of building bombs and various pyrotechnics, he otherwise came of as a typical 8-year old. Here in addition to having manual computer skills, he’s also been given an affinity with machinery and had his childishness severely downplayed.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: The Erasers- genetically engineered [[WolfMan wolf-men]] sent to capture the protagonists have glowing red eyes. Notably in close up panels, their eyeballs, irises and [[ExaggeratedTrope pupils]] are shown to be entirely red.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: The Erasers- Erasers - genetically engineered [[WolfMan wolf-men]] sent to capture the protagonists have glowing red eyes. Notably in close up panels, their eyeballs, irises and [[ExaggeratedTrope pupils]] are shown to be entirely red.
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* TheNavigator: Iggy, who despite being blind, is described by Max as a human compass because he was genetically engineered with the power to know the exact location of where he is at any given time.
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* TheNavigator: Iggy, who despite being blind, is described by Max as a "a human compass compass" because he was genetically engineered with the power to know the exact location of where he is at any given time.
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* {{Cyborg}}: The Flock, unlike in the book series where their wings were the result of genetic-engineering, their wings are now entirely mechanical, built into their spines and capable of folding inside their own bodies for space.
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* BlandNameProduct: In Issue #1, amongst the pile of stuffed animals in Angel’s room is an unnamed CaptainErsatz of a Franchise/CareBears can be seen but with a symbol on its forehead instead of its stomach.
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* BlandNameProduct: In Issue #1, amongst the pile of stuffed animals in Angel’s room is an unnamed CaptainErsatz of a Franchise/CareBears Franchise/{{Care Bear|s}} can be seen but with a symbol on its forehead instead of its stomach.
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** In the novels Fang has the [[InformedAttribute informed personality]] of being a stoic loner, but is depicted here as a friendly DeadpanSnarker,
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** In the novels Fang has the [[InformedAttribute informed personality]] of being a stoic loner, but is depicted here as a friendly DeadpanSnarker,
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** Max had a minor
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* AdaptationalContextChange: The Gasman’s name. In the book it was because he had an iffy digestive tract causing him to [[{{Gasshole}} fart a lot]], here it’s because he’s good with machinery- in particular explosives.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: The Gasman’s name. In the book it was because he had an iffy digestive tract causing him to [[{{Gasshole}} fart a lot]], here it’s because he’s good with machinery- in particular explosives.of
* AdaptationalContextChange: The Gasman’s name. In the book it was because he had an iffy digestive tract causing him to [[{{Gasshole}} fart a lot]], here it’s because he’s good with machinery- in particular explosives.
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A 5-part miniseries retelling, ''The Angel Experiment'', the first book in Creator/JamesPatterson’s ''Literature/MaximumRide'' series, written by Marguerite Bennett, drawn by Alex Sanchez and Published by Creator/MarvelComics.
!!Provides Examples of
* AdaptationalContextChange: The Gasman’s name. In the book it was because he had an iffy digestive tract causing him to [[{{Gasshole}} fart a lot]], here it’s because he’s good with machinery- in particular explosives.
* AdaptationDyeJob: In the original books both Max and Iggy were blonde ([[SeriesContinuityError or in Max’s case occasionally brunette]]) but here they are both redheads.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange:
** In the novels Fang has the [[InformedAttribute informed personality]] of being a stoic loner, but is depicted here as a friendly DeadpanSnarker,
** Max had a minor Girls Rule-Boy’s Drool type attitude- shown when she’s sees a group of boy’s picking on a girl-Ella, which is absent from the comic.
* BlandNameProduct: In Issue #1, amongst the pile of stuffed animals in Angel’s room is an unnamed CaptainErsatz of a Franchise/CareBears can be seen but with a symbol on its forehead instead of its stomach.
%% * ComicBookAdaptation.
* {{Cyborg}}: The Flock, unlike in the book series where their wings were the result of genetic-engineering, their wings are now entirely mechanical, built into their spines and capable of folding inside their own bodies for space.
* {{Duck}}: This exchange:
--> Eraser swipes at Iggy.
--> '''Angel''': Iggy, Duck!
--> '''Iggy''': [[DeadpanSnarker Always thought I was more of a cardinal, personally]].
* GirlsLoveStuffedAnimals: In Issue #1, when Max enters Angel’s room a large pile of stuffed animals can be seen on the other side of the open door. A couple more can be seen on the floor in the next panel.
* TheNavigator: Iggy, who despite being blind, is described by Max as a human compass because he was genetically engineered with the power to know the exact location of where he is at any given time.
* PurpleIsTheNewBlack: The Erasers appear to have blue fur most of the time, but in some panels their fur is either black or grey.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: The Erasers- genetically engineered [[WolfMan wolf-men]] sent to capture the protagonists have glowing red eyes. Notably in close up panels, their eyeballs, irises and [[ExaggeratedTrope pupils]] are shown to be entirely red.
* ThirdEye: Ari is shown to have three eyes, in contrast to the rest of the Erasers who have the regular two eyes. This probably to mark his status as TheDragon to [[spoiler:Jeb]] whilst the rest of the Erasers are just nameless [[{{Mooks}} mooks]].
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A 5-part miniseries retelling, ''The Angel Experiment'', the first book in Creator/JamesPatterson’s ''Literature/MaximumRide'' series, written by Marguerite Bennett, drawn by Alex Sanchez and Published by Creator/MarvelComics.
!!Provides Examples of
* AdaptationalContextChange: The Gasman’s name. In the book it was because he had an iffy digestive tract causing him to [[{{Gasshole}} fart a lot]], here it’s because he’s good with machinery- in particular explosives.
* AdaptationDyeJob: In the original books both Max and Iggy were blonde ([[SeriesContinuityError or in Max’s case occasionally brunette]]) but here they are both redheads.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange:
** In the novels Fang has the [[InformedAttribute informed personality]] of being a stoic loner, but is depicted here as a friendly DeadpanSnarker,
** Max had a minor Girls Rule-Boy’s Drool type attitude- shown when she’s sees a group of boy’s picking on a girl-Ella, which is absent from the comic.
* BlandNameProduct: In Issue #1, amongst the pile of stuffed animals in Angel’s room is an unnamed CaptainErsatz of a Franchise/CareBears can be seen but with a symbol on its forehead instead of its stomach.
%% * ComicBookAdaptation.
* {{Cyborg}}: The Flock, unlike in the book series where their wings were the result of genetic-engineering, their wings are now entirely mechanical, built into their spines and capable of folding inside their own bodies for space.
* {{Duck}}: This exchange:
--> Eraser swipes at Iggy.
--> '''Angel''': Iggy, Duck!
--> '''Iggy''': [[DeadpanSnarker Always thought I was more of a cardinal, personally]].
* GirlsLoveStuffedAnimals: In Issue #1, when Max enters Angel’s room a large pile of stuffed animals can be seen on the other side of the open door. A couple more can be seen on the floor in the next panel.
* TheNavigator: Iggy, who despite being blind, is described by Max as a human compass because he was genetically engineered with the power to know the exact location of where he is at any given time.
* PurpleIsTheNewBlack: The Erasers appear to have blue fur most of the time, but in some panels their fur is either black or grey.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: The Erasers- genetically engineered [[WolfMan wolf-men]] sent to capture the protagonists have glowing red eyes. Notably in close up panels, their eyeballs, irises and [[ExaggeratedTrope pupils]] are shown to be entirely red.
* ThirdEye: Ari is shown to have three eyes, in contrast to the rest of the Erasers who have the regular two eyes. This probably to mark his status as TheDragon to [[spoiler:Jeb]] whilst the rest of the Erasers are just nameless [[{{Mooks}} mooks]].
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