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* TeenyWeenie: The reaction shots of the few women who end up in this situation are CringeComedy.
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* TeenyWeenie: The reaction shots of the few women who end up in this situation are CringeComedy. We eventually see for ourselves and it is indeed quite unimpressive.
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* BrokenBird: During the first year after the event. It made her more easily controlled by Victoria.
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* BrokenBird: During the first year after the event. It Which made her more easily controlled by Victoria.Victoria. She was molested as a child, engaged in sex while still underaged and [[IJustWantToBeLoved jumps from one affair to another as an adult]], finally ending up with a man she likes only to see him die in front of her during the Gendercide.
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* CoolBigSis: From Yorick's perspective, she believed she was TheUnfavorite.
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* CoolBigSis: From Yorick's perspective, perspective; she believed she was TheUnfavorite.
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* IJustWantToBeLoved: [[spoiler: Her CharacterArc is her learning to love herself.]]
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* PairTheSpares: It's nice that Hero found redemption and happiness but ending up with Yorick's Beth really came out of nowhere.
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* PairTheSpares: It's nice that Hero found redemption and happiness happiness, but ending up with Yorick's Beth really came out of nowhere.nowhere.
* RapeAsBackstory: She was molested by her grandfather.
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* RapeAsBackstory: Was sexually assaulted by another boy when he young, he received therapy and seems to have mostly recuperated from the trauma.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Knits as a stress reducing activity.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Knits [[TextileWorkIsFeminine Knits]] as a stress reducing activity.
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* [[spoiler:CrusadingWidow]]: It's never outright stated that she and Allison get married in the future but they were still very much together, and after Allison [[spoiler:passes away]] Rose takes up her torch, as it were, and [[spoiler:works with "Dr. Men" in finding a cure to the gendercide.]]
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* [[spoiler:CrusadingWidow]]: CrusadingWidow: It's never outright stated that she and Allison get married in the future but they were still very much together, and after Allison [[spoiler:passes away]] Rose takes up her torch, as it were, and [[spoiler:works with "Dr. Men" in finding a cure to the gendercide.]]
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* CloningBlues: By the time she [[spoiler:passes away in the future]] she had already succeeded in cloning [[spoiler:her successors]]. Yorick thought they were beautiful.
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* CloningBlues: [[spoiler:All of them are clones of Dr. Allison Mann]].
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* StarterVillain She's the first threat that Yorick must contend with. She get's 86'd five issues after her introduction.
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Subverted. She's built up as a recurring villain, and with her minor army of Amazons, she looks to be a real threat. Then some ex meth-addict puts an ax into her head.]]
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A self-proclaimed chess master and cult leader, she started the Daughters of the Amazon. While she claims to be helping women who were victimized by men, in reality she's just taking advantage of emotionally devastated women to exploit them. She dies early on, but the damage she has done, especially to Hero, lingers long afterwards.
* BigBad:[[spoiler: Subverted. She's built up as a recurring villain, and with her minor army of Amazons, she looks to be a real threat. Then some an ex meth-addict puts an ax into her head.]]
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* DroppedABridgeOnHer: [[spoiler:Is killed soon after she's introduced in a painful, but well-deserved, manner]].
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* HonorableWarriorsDeath: [[spoiler:Seeking this turns out to be her main motivation; she wants to die in combat and at the hands of a man.]]
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** Later played with when she wields a Jian as an improvised rapier. She demonstrates decent skill but is outclassed by a professional
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* EasilyForgiven: By Yorick anyway, after she accidentally reveals to Allison that she was [[spoiler: spying on them]]. 355 comes around soon after, however, but Allison understandably took it the hardest. She does forgive her, though.
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* EasilyForgiven: By Yorick anyway, after she accidentally reveals to Allison that she was [[spoiler: spying on them]]. 355 comes around soon after, however, but Allison understandably took it the hardest. She does eventually forgive her, though.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Not that she was looking but after curing Yorick of his [[spoiler:[[SuicideByCop suicidal]] tendencies]] the last thing she did before dying was thank her killers, the Setauket Ring.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Not that she was looking but after curing Yorick of his [[spoiler:[[SuicideByCop suicidal]] tendencies]] the last thing she did before dying was to thank her killers, the Setauket Ring.Ring for killing her, [[SuicideByCop implying that she wanted somebody to kill her]].
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* BrokenBird: Her college girlfriend left her rather jaded about love, to the point she denies it exists.
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* InformedAttribute: Insists that she's a genius chess prodigy who beat the legendary Bobby Fischer in a handful of moves. We never see her play chess at any point in the comic, and it's not impossible that she made the whole thing up to appeal to her brainwashed minions.
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* InformedAttribute: Insists that she's a genius chess prodigy who beat the legendary Bobby Fischer in a handful of moves. We never see her play chess at any point in the comic, and it's not impossible implied that she made the whole thing up to appeal to better manipulate her brainwashed minions.
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* GayRomanticPhase: Dated another woman in college, until it turned out that the other woman was not gay and was basically going through this. Said other woman thought that lesbians weren't real and the only reason women would date other women was to piss of their parents. Allison obviously disagreed.
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* GrowingUpSucks: His CharacterArc in a nutshell.
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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: [[spoiler: He urges one of his clones to get his heart broken as soon and completely as he can.]]
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* MixedAncestry: Half Japanese and half Chinese.
