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* BadAss: In Chapter 6, she puts up a good fight against Clarice, who is a larger and stronger cat overall, even with a dislocated hind leg and various wounds sustained prior to and at the beginning of the fight.
** Her presence is enough to sway [[spoiler:Mistle]] into releasing Anemonepaw at the end of Chapter 8.
** Her presence is enough to sway [[spoiler:Mistle]] into releasing Anemonepaw at the end of Chapter 8.
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* AbsenteeActor: Does not appear in Chapter 15, instead only being mentioned. [[spoiler: This makes sense storywise, as she had run away earlier.]]
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* TheLeader: Fallenpaw naturally falls into the role of the leader after it coalesces in the wake of the flood.
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* TheLeader: Fallenpaw naturally falls into the role of the leader after it coalesces in the wake of the flood.
apprentices.
* AbsenteeActor: Does not appear in Chapter 15, instead only being mentioned. [[spoiler: This makes sense storywise, as she had run away earlier.]]
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* ThePollyanna: She is perpetually cheerful, despite all of the woes she's suffered as a result of this journey.
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* ThePollyanna: She is perpetually cheerful, despite all of the woes she's suffered as a result of this journey. [[spoiler: This begins to show signs of cracking towards the end.]]
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* ThePollyanna: Still remains cheerful and happy, despite everything that has happened since the flood.
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* ThePollyanna: Still remains cheerful and happy, despite everything that has happened since the flood.
flood. [[spoiler: It seems to be wearing off as time goes on.]]
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* [[spoiler: BackFromtheDead]]: [[spoiler: Blackshadow dies when she falls off a cliff rescuing Flarepaw, but is revived by a mysterious entity on the condition that she cannot ever interact with her sister again.]]
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* [[spoiler: BackFromtheDead]]: BackFromTheDead]]: [[spoiler: Blackshadow dies when she falls off a cliff rescuing Flarepaw, but is revived by a mysterious entity on the condition that she cannot ever interact with her sister again.]]
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* TheGhost: For much of the story, she fails to make any appearance, despite being repeatedly mentioned in reference to Flarepaw's backstory. [[spoiler: She finally makes her first appearance in Chapter 13, Confessions, Pt 1, where her backstory is finally revealed.]]
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* TheGhost: For much of the story, she fails to make any appearance, despite being repeatedly mentioned in reference to Flarepaw's backstory. [[spoiler: She finally makes her first appearance in Chapter 13, Confessions, Pt 1, where her backstory is finally revealed.]]
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: It turns out that Blackshadow had not died, as Flarepaw believed, but was rather perfectly alive and well, though forced to be separate from her sister forever.]]
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: It turns out that Blackshadow had is not died, dead, as Flarepaw believed, but was rather perfectly alive and well, though she was forced to be separate from her sister forever.]]
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*NiceGirl: Debatable, but it can't be denied that Mistle took in those in need and continues to take care of them while they can't take care of themselves. Still, [[spoiler: going as far to kidnap Anemonepaw for the sake of providing medicine to the group may have gone too far.]]
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* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: [[spoilers: Though she is not twins with Flarepaw, they are still almost identical in appearance, with enough similarity that she was confused for Flarepaw at first glance by Flarepaw's own friends.]]
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* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: [[spoilers: [[spoiler: Though she is not twins with Flarepaw, they are still almost identical in appearance, with enough similarity that she was confused for Flarepaw at first glance by Flarepaw's own friends.]]
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* [[spoiler: BigBrotherInstinct]]: [[spoiler:Though not the brother of Flarepaw, Blackshadow is still very protective of her and continues to watch over her, even after the latter thinks she is dead. Blackshadow grows extremely angry at first when the remaining five travelers tell her that they simply allowed Flarepaw to go her own way.]]
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* [[spoiler: BigBrotherInstinct]]: [[spoiler:Though not the brother of Flarepaw, Flarepaw, Blackshadow is still very protective of her and continues to watch over her, even after the latter thinks she is dead. Blackshadow grows extremely angry at first when the remaining five travelers tell her that they simply allowed Flarepaw to go her own way.]]
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* AlwaysIdenticalTwins: [[spoilers: Though she is not twins with Flarepaw, they are still almost identical in appearance, with enough similarity that she was confused for Flarepaw at first glance by Flarepaw's own friends.]]
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* [[spoiler: DealWiththeDevil]]: [[spoiler: After dying, she accepts a deal from a mysterious entity to continue living and watching over Flarepaw, though she will be unable to interact with her sister in any form.]]
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* [[spoiler: DealWiththeDevil]]: BigBrotherInstinct]]: [[spoiler:Though not the brother of Flarepaw, Blackshadow is still very protective of her and continues to watch over her, even after the latter thinks she is dead. Blackshadow grows extremely angry at first when the remaining five travelers tell her that they simply allowed Flarepaw to go her own way.]]
* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil]]: [[spoiler: After dying, she accepts a deal from a mysterious entity to continue living and watching over Flarepaw, though she will be unable to interact with her sister in any form.]]
* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil]]: [[spoiler: After dying, she accepts a deal from a mysterious entity to continue living and watching over Flarepaw, though she will be unable to interact with her sister in any form.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: On the giving side of this trope rather than the receiving side; after her death and resurrection, Blackshadow runs away from Flarepaw, though this is more of the fault of her DealWithTheDevil than personal choice.]]
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* [[spoiler: PromotiontoParent]]: [[spoiler: Being the oldest family member after the death of her mother, Blackshadow is forced to take this role up until her death and resurrection.]]
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* TheGhost: She is only ever mentioned in reference to Flarepaw's past and has not yet made any appearance in the story so far.
* ParentalSubstitute: Implied to be this to Flarepaw, considering how the latter called for her at the beginning of the journey, though not much has been revealed about this.
* ParentalSubstitute: Implied to be this to Flarepaw, considering how the latter called for her at the beginning of the journey, though not much has been revealed about this.
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* [[spoiler: BackFromtheDead]]: [[spoiler: Blackshadow dies when she falls off a cliff rescuing Flarepaw, but is revived by a mysterious entity on the condition that she cannot ever interact with her sister again.]]
* [[spoiler: DealWiththeDevil]]: [[spoiler: After dying, she accepts a deal from a mysterious entity to continue living and watching over Flarepaw, though she will be unable to interact with her sister in any form.]]
* TheGhost:She is only ever For much of the story, she fails to make any appearance, despite being repeatedly mentioned in reference to Flarepaw's past and has not yet made any backstory. [[spoiler: She finally makes her first appearance in the story so far.
Chapter 13, Confessions, Pt 1, where her backstory is finally revealed.]]
* ParentalSubstitute: Implied to be this to Flarepaw, considering how the latter called for her at the beginning of thejourney, though not much has been journey. [[spoiler: Blackshadow is eventually revealed about to have served as this to Flarepaw and her brother Smoke since the death of their mother.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: It turns out that Blackshadow had not died, as Flarepaw believed, but was rather perfectly alive and well, though forced to be separate from her sister forever.]]
** [[spoiler: The fact that Blackshadow is Flarepaw's sister in the first place also qualifies as this.]]
* [[spoiler: DealWiththeDevil]]: [[spoiler: After dying, she accepts a deal from a mysterious entity to continue living and watching over Flarepaw, though she will be unable to interact with her sister in any form.]]
* TheGhost:
* ParentalSubstitute: Implied to be this to Flarepaw, considering how the latter called for her at the beginning of the
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: It turns out that Blackshadow had not died, as Flarepaw believed, but was rather perfectly alive and well, though forced to be separate from her sister forever.]]
** [[spoiler: The fact that Blackshadow is Flarepaw's sister in the first place also qualifies as this.]]
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* Badass: In Chapter 6, she puts up a good fight against Clarice, who is a larger and stronger cat overall, even with a dislocated hind leg and various wounds sustained prior to and at the beginning of the fight.
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* Badass: BadAss: In Chapter 6, she puts up a good fight against Clarice, who is a larger and stronger cat overall, even with a dislocated hind leg and various wounds sustained prior to and at the beginning of the fight.
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* BrattyHalfPint: Technically, though she is the oldest cat in the group.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied.
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* BrattyHalfPint: Technically, though she is the oldest cat in the group.
group. She is described has having the immaturity of a kit and often reacts violently to insults.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied. She has not been very forthcoming with her past, but she has mentioned that she was bullied for her size and implies that her parents are either dead or are not a part of her life.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied. She has not been very forthcoming with her past, but she has mentioned that she was bullied for her size and implies that her parents are either dead or are not a part of her life.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Shows signs of this.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Shows signs of this.this from time to time, as part of his jokester personality.
** Uses this against Flarepaw after her wet dream, from repeatedly calling her a kit for her extensive pouting afterwards to twisting language to trick her into opening up.
** Uses this against Flarepaw after her wet dream, from repeatedly calling her a kit for her extensive pouting afterwards to twisting language to trick her into opening up.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Implied to be this to Flarepaw.Flarepaw, considering how the latter called for her at the beginning of the journey, though not much has been revealed about this.
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* Badass: In Chapter 6, she puts up a good fight against Clarice, who is a larger and stronger cat overall, even with a dislocated hind leg and various wounds sustained prior to and at the beginning of the fight.
** Her presence is enough to sway [[spoiler:Mistle]] into releasing Anemonepaw at the end of Chapter 8.
* TheBigGuy: She is arguably the most skilled in combat, by far the most violent, and generally the most dangerous member of the group.
* BrattyHalfPint: Technically, though she is the oldest cat in the group.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied.
* TheLancer: Arguably serves as this to Fallenpaw, though this begins to blend with TheBigGuy.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: Certainly.
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* TheMedic: He serves this role in the group, having been a medicine cat apprentice prior to the flood. As a result, he treats the various wounds and injuries suffered by the group over the course of the story.
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* ThePollyanna: She is perpetually cheerful, despite all of the woes she's suffered as a result of this journey.
* GenkiGirl: Arguably this, as she is excited about nearly everything.
* GenkiGirl: Arguably this, as she is excited about nearly everything.
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* ThePollyanna: Still remains cheerful and happy, despite everything that has happened since the flood.
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* TheGhost: She is only ever mentioned in reference to Flarepaw's past and has not yet made any appearance in the story so far.
* ParentalSubstitute: Implied to be this to Flarepaw.
