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* BoobsOfSteel: Along with her skills in karate and SAO, she's quite well endowed, possibly even more than her sister.
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* {{Bishonen}}
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* BuxomBeautyStandard: Her bust was one of her most appealing features, making her quite attractive to the boys and also eliciting jealousy from some girls (including Suguha, which implies that Kirita's bust is bigger than hers).
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** While Akio was not incompetent, he made several mistakes during the first month of the Death Game that nearly got him killed.
** He did not stand a chance against Kirita who was not only stronger but had far more experience playing these types of games.
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** While Akio was not incompetent, he made several mistakes during the first month of the Death Game that nearly got him killed.
** He did not stand a chance against Kirita who was not only stronger but had far more experience playing these types of games.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Unlike canon, this takes a more realistic perspective of a player who has very little experience playing games.
** While Akio was not incompetent, he made several mistakes during the first month of the Death Game that nearly got him killed.
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** [[spoiler:He does contribute to defeating Illfang, but when the boss concentrates on fighting him, he does not stand a chance due to never fighting a boss fight before and not having enough skill to take on the boss alone. He not only broke his arm but without Kirita's interference, Akio would have died.]]
** While Akio was not incompetent, he made several mistakes during the first month of the Death Game that nearly got him killed.
** He did not stand a chance against Kirita who was not only stronger but had far more experience playing these types of games.
** [[spoiler:He does contribute to defeating Illfang, but when the boss concentrates on fighting him, he does not stand a chance due to never fighting a boss fight before and not having enough skill to take on the boss alone. He not only broke his arm but without Kirita's interference, Akio would have died.]]
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* TheAce / BrokenAce: Prior to Sword Art Online, she did well in school, was good at karate, and she was good looking. However, her decisions resulted in her becoming isolated, and she has admitted she made numerous mistakes that she regrets.
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* BrokenAce: Prior to Sword Art Online, she did well in school, was good at karate, and she was good looking. However, her decisions resulted in her becoming isolated, and she has admitted she made numerous mistakes that she regrets.
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* TooDumbToLive: During the beta, he tried to get a boss' Last Attack Bonus, only to greatly miscalculate the boss reaction and nearly get killed.killed, with only Kirito's rapid reaction saving his ass. [[spoiler:Then he tries to set Kirita up to get killed by Little Nepents while he hides away, forgetting that hiding does not work against them.]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: She has arachnophobia, because once, while helping clean their home, a bunch of spiders fell on her, and she spent a week cleaning up her hair, trying to make sure they didn't have the chance to put eggs on her.
** More dramatically, she's scared of deep water, because she almost died by drowning when she was a small girl - which also feeds into her not knowing how to swin.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: She has arachnophobia, because once, while helping clean their home, a bunch of spiders fell on her, and she spent a week cleaning up her hair, trying to make sure they didn't have the chance to put eggs on her.
** More dramatically, she's scared of deep water, because she almost died by drowning when she was a small girl - which also feeds into her not knowing how to swin.
* PapaWolf: He's a strange sort of this towards Kazuta. While he does not mind that Kazuta is stuck in the Death Game, he ''does'' mind when people insult her, and affirms that, should Akio do anything untoward towards Kirita, he will be in for a world of pain.
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* {{Jerkass}}: [[spoiler:Sees no problem in trying to get Kirita killed, even thinking no one will care about her death.]]
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!!Coper
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** TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Kazuta has taken karate classes and has admitted to herself she finds it easier to beat up boys than to talk to them. Prior to the beginning of the Death Game, she preferred using a male player avatar, she enjoys fighting in virtual reality games, and she was the best Beta Tester for Sword Art Online. However, she is proud of her long hair, and she enjoys cooking.
cooking and she squeed when Akio gifted her a pair of gloves he had made himself.
* BerserkButton: Really hates it when people call Kirita "Beater".
* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Subverted. His meetings with Kirita in the real world influenced him greatly. When he saw her face in Sword Art Online, he instantly recognized her. [[spoiler:He even tells her about their previous first meetings to convince her to let him travel with her after the first boss battle.]]
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Akio's classmates in the real world were only trying to be friends with him because they could have him as a connection for their future.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Akio's classmates in the real world are only trying to be friends with him because they can have him as a connection for their future.
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Akio's classmates in the real world are only trying to be friends with him because they can have him as a connection for their future.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Quietly ships Kirita and Akio together. The way Argo sees it, he brings her out of her shell and she helps him become stronger. For example, when Akio comes to him to seek the means to get Kirita a bow, he tells him where he can get the materials - a quest in which he can easily pair up with Kirita.
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* CassandraTruth: He tried to warn the players he joined that there were things he did not know about the beta. Unfortunately, they took it for him trying to keep things secret.
* LeftForDead: A group of players he was working with decided to paralyze him and tie him to a tree so the mobs would kill him.
* LeftForDead: A group of players he was working with decided to paralyze him and tie him to a tree so the mobs would kill him.
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** TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to Argo's guidebook and advice as well as Kirita's lessons.
* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to Argo's guidebook and advice as well as Kirita's lessons.
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