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** She insists that death is a form of failure to the cult. [[spoiler:During her last living moments, her daughter Ashi then puts '''an end''' to her life, thus causing that same cult's overall purpose to be ''failed'' in being enacted as expected.]]
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** She insists that death is a form of failure to the cult. [[spoiler:During her last living moments, her daughter Ashi then puts '''an end''' to her life, thus causing that same cult's overall purpose to be ''failed'' ''fail'' in being enacted as expected.]]
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** '''Sloth''': If she does want Jack to be assasinated, she could've at least done it by herself in the first place. But alas, [[DirtyCoward she had to rely it more on a couple of other beings besides herself]].
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** '''Sloth''': If she does ''does'' want Jack to be assasinated, she could've at least done it by herself in the first place. But alas, [[DirtyCoward she had to rely it more on a couple of other beings besides herself]].
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* MeaningfulEcho: Her ideology is that death is '''always''' a form of failure as she trains her daughters for the sole purpose of assassinating Jack for Aku. [[spoiler:Indeed, the various attempts she implemented in doing so backfired, which includes doing such insane cause of theirs ''by her own self'' (since her [[SoleSurvivor only surviving]] daughter Ashi [[{{Matricide}} finally puts an end to her mother's life]]).]]
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* MeaningfulEcho: Her ideology is that death is '''always''' a form of failure as she trains her daughters for the entire cult's sole purpose of assassinating Jack for Aku. [[spoiler:Indeed, the various attempts she implemented in doing so backfired, which includes doing such insane cause purpose of theirs ''by her own self'' (since her [[SoleSurvivor only surviving]] daughter Ashi [[{{Matricide}} finally puts an end to her mother's life]]).]]
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* MeaningfulEcho: Her ideology is that death is always a form of "failure" as she trains her daughters for the cult's sole purpose of assassinating Jack for Aku. [[spoiler:In her last attempt to kill Jack by herself, she finally '''failed''' in doing so [[{{Matricide}} after her daughter kills her]].]]
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* MeaningfulEcho: Her ideology is that death is always '''always''' a form of "failure" failure as she trains her daughters for the cult's sole purpose of assassinating Jack for Aku. [[spoiler:In her last attempt to kill Jack by herself, [[spoiler:Indeed, the various attempts she finally '''failed''' implemented in doing so backfired, which includes doing such insane cause of theirs ''by her own self'' (since her [[SoleSurvivor only surviving]] daughter Ashi [[{{Matricide}} after finally puts an end to her daughter kills her]].mother's life]]).]]
