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** BlackSheep: She is the only member of the family who is not condescending or vain, and actually finds Jan attractive. Even the music in her stateroom stands out.
** ThrowingOffTheDisability: After her and Jan's first trial within the Neurographicon, Claire could only stand for a few precious seconds, but used those seconds to dance with him at the masquerade ball. After that, her polio came back in an instant, along with Jan's own ghoulish facial features, to everyone else's displeasure.
** ThrowingOffTheDisability: After her and Jan's first trial within the Neurographicon, Claire could only stand for a few precious seconds, but used those seconds to dance with him at the masquerade ball. After that, her polio came back in an instant, along with Jan's own ghoulish facial features, to everyone else's displeasure.
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** WhiteSheep: She is the only member of the family who is not condescending or vain, which is why Jan cared for her. Even the music in her stateroom stands out.
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** MurderTheHypotenuse: When Belle was having an affair with one of her later husbands, she [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink slipped arsenic into her current husband's chili]], according to a news article in her scrapbook.
** OffingTheOffSpring: After trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. Subverted with Claire; Belle kept her, but didn't treat her well.
** OffingTheOffSpring: After trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. Subverted with Claire; Belle kept her, but didn't treat her well.
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** MurderTheHypotenuse: When Belle was having an affair with one of her later husbands, she [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink slipped arsenic into her current husband's chili]], chili beans]], according to a news article in her scrapbook.
**OffingTheOffSpring: ParentalAbandonment: After trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. Subverted with Claire; Belle kept her, but didn't treat her well.
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!!Members of the ''Herculania''
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* [[spoiler: DyingAlone: Theodore set out by himself to find ''Herculania'', but had to take shelter from a blizzard in an ice cave. Then [[spoiler: [[SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere the entrance caved in, leaving him to die from hypothermia]].]]
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* [[spoiler: DyingAlone: Theodore set out by himself to find ''Herculania'', but had to take shelter from a blizzard in an ice cave. Then [[spoiler: [[SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere the entrance caved in, leaving him to die from hypothermia]].]]
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!!!'''Colonel Theodore "Teddy" Holmes'''
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* [[spoiler: DyingAlone: Theodore set out by himself to find ''Herculania'', but had to take shelter from a blizzard in an ice cave. Then [[spoiler: [[SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere the entrance caved in, leaving him to die from hypothermia]].]]
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** BabysitterFromHell: And how. Her methods were so harsh that they eventually got her fired. She was still just as strict even when on ''Herculania'', much to the annoyance of the others.
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** BabysitterFromHell: EvilOrphanageLady: And how. Her methods were so harsh that they eventually got her fired. She was still just as strict even when on ''Herculania'', much to the annoyance of the others.
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** OffingTheOffSpring: Belle was only into her various husbands for their inherited fortunes, so much that after trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. She didn't even care for Claire from her last husband when J.C. Pharris insisted both of them to come aboard his ship.
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** OffingTheOffSpring: Belle was only into her various husbands for their inherited fortunes, so much that after After trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. She Subverted with Claire; Belle kept her, but didn't even care for Claire from treat her last husband when J.C. Pharris insisted both of them to come aboard his ship.
well.
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** MurderTheHypotenuse: When Belle was having an affair with one of her later husbands, she [[TamperingWithFoodAndDrink slipped arsenic into her current husband's chili]], according to a news article in her scrapbook.
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** TheAlcoholic: Naturally, given his nationality. His dream world even involves interacting with a pub.
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** TheAlcoholic: Naturally, given his nationality.Leo sometimes swigs from a flask when on-screen. His dream world even involves interacting with a pub.
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Jan's roommate in the Goodman Home. He grew up to become a conman who scammed people out of their money and pretended to own various franchises.
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Jan's roommate in the Goodman Home. He grew up to become a conman ConMan who scammed people out of their money and pretended to own various franchises.
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** NightmareFace: Revealed to the audience when he takes off his hood; and it scared away pretty much everyone in his family. It's unclear as to how long he was like that, but his using the Neurographicon definitely made it much worse.
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** NightmareFace: Revealed to the audience when he takes off his hood; and it scared away pretty much everyone in his family. It's unclear as to how long he was like that, but his using the Neurographicon definitely made couldn't repair it much worse.
like he hoped.
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** MorallyAmbiguousDoctor: John was a very good doctor to Jan and the people on board the ship. However, he also was reluctantly willing to do whatever Jan asked him to, regardless of the ethics involved.
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** MorallyAmbiguousDoctor: MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: John was a very good doctor to Jan and the people on board the ship. However, he also was reluctantly willing to do whatever Jan asked him to, regardless of the ethics involved.
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** MorallyAmbiguousDoctor: John was a very good doctor to Jan and the people on board the ship. However, he also was reluctantly willing to do whatever Jan asked him to, regardless of the ethics involved.
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** ThrowingOffTheDisability: Claire could only stand for a few precious seconds, but used those seconds to dance with Jan at the masquerade ball.
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** ThrowingOffTheDisability: After her and Jan's first trial within the Neurographicon, Claire could only stand for a few precious seconds, but used those seconds to dance with Jan him at the masquerade ball.ball. After that, her polio came back in an instant, along with Jan's own ghoulish facial features, to everyone else's displeasure.
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Jan's roomate in the Goodman Home. He grew up to become a conman who scammed people out of their money and pretended to own various franchises.
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Jan's roomate roommate in the Goodman Home. He grew up to become a conman who scammed people out of their money and pretended to own various franchises.
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* OffingTheOffSpring: Belle was only into her various husbands for their inherited fortunes, so much that after trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. She didn't even care for Claire from her last husband when J.C. Pharris insisted both of them to come aboard his ship.
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* TheAlcoholic: Naturally, given his nationality. His dream world even involves interacting with a pub.
* FurAndLoathing: Leo doesn't wear furs, but his stateroom is furnished wall to wall in several kinds of animal pelts.
* FurAndLoathing: Leo doesn't wear furs, but his stateroom is furnished wall to wall in several kinds of animal pelts.
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** BlackSheep: She is the only member of the family who is not condescending or vain, and actually finds Jan attractive. Even the music in her stateroom stands out.
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** BlackSheep: She is the only member of the family who is not condescending or vain, and actually finds Jan attractive. Even the music in her stateroom stands out.out.
** ThrowingOffTheDisability: Claire could only stand for a few precious seconds, but used those seconds to dance with Jan at the masquerade ball.
** ThrowingOffTheDisability: Claire could only stand for a few precious seconds, but used those seconds to dance with Jan at the masquerade ball.
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* FurAndLoathing: Leo doesn't wear furs, but his stateroom is furnished wall to wall in several kinds of animal pelts.
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Jan's mother, whom, as a rich, self-absorbed dancer who reveled in the inheritances of her previous husbands, left him without a hint of remorse at the Goodman Home for Boys.
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Jan's mother, whom, as a rich, self-absorbed dancer who reveled in the inheritances of her previous husbands, left him without a hint of remorse at the Goodman Home for Boys. husbands.
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!!!'''Dr. John Mahlerby'''
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!!!'''Dr. John
** BrokenMasquerade: When you investigate his stateroom, which has various things from a stamp for his fake business cards, to marked playing cards.
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** PornStash: In his locker at the spa, Billy has a poster of a fat lady from a circus he apparently went to, and her weight is also the combination for his stateroom.
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* OffingTheOffSpring: Belle was only into her various husbands for their inherited fortunes, so much that after trying to give Jan back to Leo, she carted him off to the Goodman Home without a second thought. She didn't even care for Claire from her last husband when J.C. Pharris insisted both of them to come aboard his ship.
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Daughter of one of Belle Swan's former husbands, and stepsister to Jan. Diagnosed with polio, she remains confined to a wheelchair, and puts up surprisingly well with the trauma her family put her through. She was also the first test subject for the Neurographicon.
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Daughter of one of Belle Swan's former husbands, and stepsister to Jan. Diagnosed with polio, she remains confined to a wheelchair, and puts up surprisingly well with the trauma her family put her through. She was also the first test subject for the Neurographicon.Neurographicon.
** BlackSheep: She is the only member of the family who is not condescending or vain, and actually finds Jan attractive. Even the music in her stateroom stands out.
** BlackSheep: She is the only member of the family who is not condescending or vain, and actually finds Jan attractive. Even the music in her stateroom stands out.
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A heavily brutalized young man who shielded himself from torment through his inventive talents. From Ms. Thermon shutting him away in an "Isolation Box", to getting called a freak by his own mother, and even unloved by Mr. Pharris due to his looks. As a result, Jan began to scheme a RoaringRampageOfRevenge against those who shunned him, while trying to cure Claire of her polio at the same time.
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A heavily brutalized young man who shielded himself from torment through his inventive talents. From Ms. Thermon shutting him away in an "Isolation Box", to getting called a freak by his own mother, and even unloved by Mr. Pharris due to his looks. As a result, [[spoiler: Jan began to scheme a RoaringRampageOfRevenge against those who shunned him, while trying to cure Claire of her polio at the same time.]]
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Inventor of the Neurographicon
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Millionaire and designer of the ''Herculania''.
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Millionaire and designer of the ''Herculania''.
''Herculania''. Adopted Jan and also helped design the Neurographicon as the main purpose of the ship's voyage.
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Herbal therapist and Jan's personal physician. This person was the first to discover the concept that the Neurographicon was based on, and designed medicinal serums that the machine uses to heal its subjects.
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Herbal therapist and Jan's personal physician. This person He was the first to discover the concept that the Neurographicon was based on, and designed medicinal serums that the machine uses to heal its subjects.
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Jan's roomate in the Goodman Home.
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Jan's roomate in the Goodman Home. He grew up to become a conman who scammed people out of their money and pretended to own various franchises.
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Former caretaker of the Goodman Home for Boys
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** BabysitterFromHell: And how. Her "caretaking" methods were so harsh that they eventually got her fired. She was still just as strict even when on ''Herculania'', much to the annoyance of the others.
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Former caretaker headmistress of the Goodman Home for Boys
Boys, who oversaw adoption of Jan to J.C. Pharris.
** BabysitterFromHell: And how. Her"caretaking" methods were so harsh that they eventually got her fired. She was still just as strict even when on ''Herculania'', much to the annoyance of the others.
** BabysitterFromHell: And how. Her
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Jan's mother, whom, as a rich, self-absorbed actress who reveled in the inheritances of her previous husbands, left him without a hint of remorse at the Goodman Home for Boys.
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Jan's mother, whom, as a rich, self-absorbed actress dancer who reveled in the inheritances of her previous husbands, left him without a hint of remorse at the Goodman Home for Boys.
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Renowned Irish boxer who was supposedly Jan's biological father.
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Renowned Irish boxer who was supposedly Jan's biological father. He skipped a return trip to Ireland when Jan asked him to go aboard Herculania.
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The protagonist of the game
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The protagonist of the game
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Fish oil magnate and member of the Explorers Club, who made a voyage into the Arctic in an attempt cross the North Pole by hot-air balloon. His journey was derailed by discovery of [[spoiler: J.C. Pharris]] frozen in the tundra, who asked him to deliver a letter to his son.
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!!!'''John Mahlerby'''
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Herbal therapist and Jan's personal physician. This person was the first to discover the concept that the Neurographicon was based on, and designed medicinal serums that the machine uses to heal its subjects.
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Jan's roomate in the Goodman Home.
** CigarChomper: He sure loves those Cuban cigs.
** CigarChomper: He sure loves those Cuban cigs.
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Former caretaker of the Goodman Home for Boys
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---> '''Billy:''' Loosen up, Miss Grace! We're not in the home anymore!
** BabysitterFromHell: And how. Her "caretaking" methods were so harsh that they eventually got her fired. She was still just as strict even when on ''Herculania'', much to the annoyance of the others.
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* TheAlcoholic: Naturally, given his nationality. His dream world even involves interacting with a pub.
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Daughter of one of Belle Swan's former husbands, and stepsister to Jan. Diagnosed with polio, she remains confined to a wheelchair, and puts up surprisingly well with the trauma her family put her through. She was also the first test subject for the Neurographicon.
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!!!''Jonathan
!!!'''Jonathan Cleveland "J.C."
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!!!''Billy Mexler''
!!!''Grace Thermon''
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!!!'''Billy Mexler'''
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!!!'''Belle Swan'''
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!!!''Leo Galte''
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!!!''Claire Moon''
!!!'''Claire Moon'''
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!!Colonel Theodore Holmes
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!!!Jan Pharris
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!!!Claire Moon
!!!J.C. Pharris
!!!John Mahlerby
!!!Billy Mexler
!!!Grace Thermon
!!!Belle Swan
!!!Leo Galte
!!!Claire Moon
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!!!J.
!!!''Jonathan Cleveland "J.C.
Millionaire and designer of the ''Herculania''.
!!!''John Mahlerby''
!!!''Billy Mexler''
!!!''Grace Thermon''
!!!''Belle Swan''
Jan's mother, whom, as a rich, self-absorbed actress who reveled in the inheritances of her previous husbands, left him without a hint of remorse at the Goodman Home for Boys.
!!!''Leo Galte''
!!!''Claire Moon''
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!!Main Characters
!!!Matthew Holmes
The protagonist of the game
!!Colonel Theodore Holmes
!!Members of the ''Herculania''
!!!Jan Pharris
!!!J.C. Pharris
!!!John Mahlerby
!!!Billy Mexler
!!!Grace Thermon
!!!Belle Swan
!!!Leo Galte
!!!Claire Moon
!!!Matthew Holmes
The protagonist of the game
!!Colonel Theodore Holmes
!!Members of the ''Herculania''
!!!Jan Pharris
!!!J.C. Pharris
!!!John Mahlerby
!!!Billy Mexler
!!!Grace Thermon
!!!Belle Swan
!!!Leo Galte
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