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* NewMediaIsEvil: The cult hates social media and the internet, and cuts all signals coming into the county to stop anyone from accessing it or help. One of Joseph's sermons even has him loudly denounce social media.
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* FoolishHusbandResponsibleWife: She definitely seems to have more common sense than her husband at least.
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* WomenAreWiser: She definitely seems to have more common sense than her husband at least.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Right after the Deputy [[spoiler:has unwittingly killed Eli in one of their brainwashed rampages]], Jacob congratulates them on having passed his final test, commends them for having accomplished something nobody else could've pulled off.. and concludes that the Deputy is obviously weak and therefore deserving of nothing but death. Cue the BossBattle.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Right after the Deputy [[spoiler:has unwittingly killed Eli in one of their brainwashed rampages]], Jacob congratulates them on having passed his final test, commends them for having accomplished something nobody else could've pulled off.. and concludes that the Deputy is obviously weak because they are alone at this point in time and therefore deserving of nothing but death. Cue the BossBattle.
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* ApocalypseMaiden: [[spoiler:According to a prophecy Joseph has heard from God (the exact details of which are never really explained), the Deputy is this, as they inadvertently bring about the end of the world by attempting to fight the cult.]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: He becomes this, courtesy of Faith's drugs.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: He becomes this, courtesy one of Faith's drugs.many mind control victims thanks to the Bliss.
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* MeaningfulName: His surname "Burke" looks like it was based on the word "berk", which is British slang for a stupid person. Considering his arrogance, his cowardice and overall behaviour in the prologue. This is warranted.
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* MeaningfulName: His surname "Burke" looks like it was based on the word "berk", which is British slang for a stupid person. Considering his arrogance, his cowardice cowardice, and overall behaviour in the prologue. This prologue, this is warranted.
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* OldFashionedRowboatDate: Subverted. During a Bliss hallucination, the Marshal takes the Deputy into a rowboat, in a scene that looks exactly like the trope. But the relationship is purely platonic.
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* OldFashionedRowboatDate: Subverted. During a Bliss hallucination, the Marshal takes the Deputy into a rowboat, in a scene that looks exactly like the trope. But trope, but the relationship is purely platonic.
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* TheWatson: Given that he's a fed sent into Hope County, he's the one who gets the exposition regarding the danger of The Cult. Too bad that he wound up being the one who underestimated them the most.
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* TheWatson: Given that he's a fed sent into Hope County, he's the one who gets the exposition regarding the danger of The Cult. Too bad that he wound winds up being the one who underestimated underestimates them the most.
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* TheWatson: Given that he's a fed sent into Hope County, he's the one who gets the exposition regarding the danger of The Cult.
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* TheWatson: Given that he's a fed sent into Hope County, he's the one who gets the exposition regarding the danger of The Cult. Too bad that he wound up being the one who underestimated them the most.
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** Faith, ironically fulfills Joseph’s orders the most, but she seems to be in it less out of belief in Joseph, and more for a sense of belonging and avoiding being hurt by the Cult for her failures. [[spoiler:During her boss fight, either out of genuine anguish or to manipulate the Deputy, she states how the cult "plied her with drugs...when [she] was only a child" and pointedly, states "Joseph ''believes'' he's our savior".]]
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** Faith, ironically fulfills Joseph’s orders the most, but she seems to be in it less out of belief in Joseph, and more for a sense of belonging and avoiding being hurt by the Cult for her failures. [[spoiler:During her boss fight, either out of genuine anguish or to manipulate the Deputy, she states how the cult "plied her with drugs...when [she] was only a child" and pointedly, states "Joseph ''believes'' he's our savior". That being said, she is the most vocal about warning the Deputy of Joseph being right in her final words.]]
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* TheFamilyThatSlaysTogether: Par the course when the cult is run by blood siblings (with the exception of Faith).
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* TheFamilyThatSlaysTogether: Par the course when the cult is run by They're blood siblings (with the exception of Faith).Faith) who run an evil cult.
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* TheFamilyThatSlaysTogether: Par the course when the cult is run by blood siblings.
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* TheFamilyThatSlaysTogether: Par the course when the cult is run by blood siblings. siblings (with the exception of Faith).
* {{Hypocrite}}: All of them continue to try to tell the Deputy to stand down, even when they continually make the situation worse and worse by sending the cultists to kill them. It would also be incredibly easy to try to point out the flaws in their philosophies, but since the Deputy is a MuteProtagonist, this is impossible.
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* SigilSpam: They use their crosses everywhere, from banners to flags to poles used to impale their victims.
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* SigilSpam: They use their crosses everywhere, from banners to flags to poles used to impale their victims. [[spoiler:Somehow some of it even gets into Dutch's bunker in the ending.]]
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* BeautyIsBad: Despite being very attractive, she is still a member of Eden's Gate. Doubled with EvilIsSexy.
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* BeautyIsBad: Despite being very attractive, she is still a member of Eden's Gate. Doubled with EvilIsSexy.
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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:How canonically he is killed, as while Jacob speaks to the Deputy after Eli is shot, there is a huge hole in Eli's forehead.]]
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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:How he is canonically he is killed, as while Jacob speaks to the Deputy after Eli is shot, there is a huge hole in Eli's forehead.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: Is slightly suspicious of the deputy, who is in fact struggling with brainwashing.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Is slightly suspicious of the deputy, Deputy, who is in fact struggling with brainwashing.
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* VikingFuneral: [[spoiler:Tammy gives him one.]]
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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:how canonically he is killed, as while Jacob speaks to the Deputy after Eli is shot, there is a huge hole in Eli's forehead.]]
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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler:how [[spoiler:How canonically he is killed, as while Jacob speaks to the Deputy after Eli is shot, there is a huge hole in Eli's forehead.]]
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* SinsOfTheFather: Joseph applies this ''to himself'' [[spoiler:after Ethan dies,]] saying that [[spoiler:Ethan's]] only fault is that he was Joseph's son.
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* SinsOfTheFather: Joseph applies this ''to himself'' [[spoiler:after Ethan dies,]] dies]], saying that [[spoiler:Ethan's]] only fault is that he was Joseph's son.
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* SinsOfTheFather: [[JustForPun Yes, we get the joke]], but Joseph applies this ''to himself'' [[spoiler:after Ethan dies,]] saying that [[spoiler:Ethan's]] only fault is that he was Joseph's son.
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* SinsOfTheFather: [[JustForPun Yes, we get the joke]], but Joseph applies this ''to himself'' [[spoiler:after Ethan dies,]] saying that [[spoiler:Ethan's]] only fault is that he was Joseph's son.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:If we go by the Book of Revelations theory, then the Deputy is this, as they unwittingly cause the Collapse by trying to fight the cult. The Seeds all appear to be aware of this, as they tell the Deputy that they’=;re only making things worse by trying to fight them- complete with Joseph calling them out for refusing to stop and bringing about the end just before the final battle.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:If we go by the Book of Revelations theory, then the Deputy is this, as they unwittingly cause the Collapse by trying to fight the cult. The Seeds all appear to be aware of this, as they tell the Deputy that they’=;re they're only making things worse by trying to fight them- complete with Joseph calling them out for refusing to stop and bringing about the end just before the final battle.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:If we go by the Book of Revelations theory, then the Deputy is this, as they unwittingly cause the Collapse by trying to fight the cult. The Seeds all appear to be aware of this, as they tell the Deputy that they’re only making things worse by trying to fight them- complete with Joseph calling them out for refusing to stop and bringing about the end just before the final battle.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:If we go by the Book of Revelations theory, then the Deputy is this, as they unwittingly cause the Collapse by trying to fight the cult. The Seeds all appear to be aware of this, as they tell the Deputy that they’re they’=;re only making things worse by trying to fight them- complete with Joseph calling them out for refusing to stop and bringing about the end just before the final battle.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:If we go by the Book of Revelations theory, then the Deputy is this, as they unwittingly cause the Collapse by trying to fight the cult. The Seeds all appear to be aware of this, as they tell the Deputy that they’re only making things worse by trying to fight them- complete with Joseph calling them out for refusing to stop and bringing about the end just before the final battle.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Between the four of them, the Seeds cover most of the tropes of the American cult landscape. Joseph is an apocalyptic DarkMessiah in the vein of David Koresh and Jim Jones. John takes inspiration from televangelists and quasi-religious self-help gurus such as Joel Osteen. Jacob is in the religious militia movement similar to the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Montana_Freemen Montana Freemen]]. And Faith represents a dark version of the drug-fueled hippie movements.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Between the four of them, the Seeds cover most of the tropes of the American cult landscape. Joseph is an apocalyptic DarkMessiah in the vein of David Koresh and Jim Jones. John takes inspiration from televangelists and quasi-religious self-help gurus such as Joel Osteen. Jacob is in the religious militia movement similar to the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Montana_Freemen Montana Freemen]]. And Faith represents a dark version of the drug-fueled hippie movements.movements like the Manson family.
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* SevenDeadlySins: John is obsessed with trying to find what sin everyone in the County is guilty of, though he's such a psychopath that he perceives trying to raise a family as "greed".
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* SevenDeadlySins: John is obsessed with trying to find what sin everyone in the County is guilty of, though he's such a psychopath that he perceives trying to raise a family as "greed". John first decrees that the Deputy is guilty of Wrath, and this is even the name of the mission in which you fight him, but [[spoiler:in the Resist ending, Joseph thinks the Deputy is more guilty of Pride for refusing to stand down and unknowingly fulfilling the end times.]]
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* FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon: He's regarded as the face of the cult and is highly charismatic. Out of the three brothers, however, he's the depraved and sadistic.
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* FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon: He's regarded as the face of the cult and is highly charismatic. Out of the three brothers, however, he's the most depraved and sadistic.
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* SevenDeadlySins: John is obsessed with trying to find what sin everyone in the County is guilty of, though he's such a psychopath that he perceives trying to raise a family as "greed".
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* ColorMotif: Yellow/gold, mostly exemplified by his glasses. He's introduced bathed in yellow light streaming from behind him from the Eden's Gate cross-shaped window behind him.
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* ColorMotif: Red. He's a redhead and is associated with the Horseman of War, who is supposed to come on a red horse. His Judges have red crosses painted on their foreheads and the vision the player sees during Jacob's "trials" is tinted red.
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* ColorMotif: Red. He's a redhead and is associated with the Horseman of War, who is supposed to come on a red horse. His Judges have red crosses painted on their foreheads and the vision the player sees during Jacob's "trials" is tinted red. [[spoiler: Player vision going red is also a general indicator of Jacob's [[ManchurianAgent Manchurian conditioning]] kicking in.]]
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* FamilyEyeResemblance: All Seed brothers have vividly blue eyes.
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* ColorMotif: Green and white. She's associated with Death/Pestilence, which is supposed to arrive on a "pale horse", with "pale" in Greek (khlōros) meaning "green/ish". She's wearing a white dress and is often surrounded by clouds, while her region, mired in Bliss haze, is light green. Bliss itself is produced from datura flowers,which are usually white.
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* ColorMotif: Green and white. She's associated with Death/Pestilence, which who is supposed to arrive on a "pale horse", with "pale" in Greek (khlōros) (khlōros, same word that is the root of "chlorophyll") meaning "green/ish". She's wearing a white dress and is often surrounded by clouds, while her region, mired in Bliss haze, is light green. Bliss itself is produced from datura flowers,which are usually white.
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* ColorMotif: Yellow/gold, mostly exemplified by his glasses. He's introduced bathed in yellow light streaming from behind him from the Eden's Gate cross-shaped behind him.
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* ColorMotif: Green and white. She's associated with Death/Pestilence, which is supposed to arrive on a "pale horse", with "pale" in Greek (khlōros) meaning "green/ish". She's wearing
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** Also, while the Seed brothers are associated with primary colors (yellow, blue and red), green is a secondary color, indicating Faith was a later addition to their group and isn't related to them.
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* ColorMotif: Blue. His shirt and coat are blue, his glasses have blue lenses and he's associated with sky (planes) and water (baptism).
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* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Before he dies after his dogfight with the Deputy, he calls them out for sabotaging Joseph's efforts and refusing to consider that he could be correct, and his last words of "May God have mercy on your soul" feel more like a parting shot than a pitying blessing,,]]
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* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Before he dies after his dogfight with the Deputy, he calls them out for sabotaging Joseph's efforts and refusing to consider that he could be correct, and his last words of "May God have mercy on your soul" feel more like a parting shot than a pitying blessing,,]]blessing.]]
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* PsychopathicManchild: John behaves like a psychopathic child towards Joseph, he hates it when Joseph doesn't approve of his actions and is violently jealous towards anyone who is approved by Joseph.
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* PsychopathicManchild: John behaves like a psychopathic child towards Joseph, he hates it when Joseph doesn't approve of his actions and is violently jealous towards anyone who is approved by Joseph. He downright looks like a sad, scolded boy about to cry when Joseph reprimands him for trying to drown the Deputy.
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* DoesntLikeGuns: Because she considers them noob tools. A ''real'' killer wields a bow.
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* DoesntLikeGuns: Because She dislikes guns because she considers them noob tools. A ''real'' killer wields a bow.
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* HotBlooded: When it comes to killing Peggies.
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* InTheHood: Part of her hunter outfit.
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