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Magus Equus is the Alicorn god of Magic, Equality, and Potential, and one of Mana Equus' oldest sons.
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Magus Equus (first introduced [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/959719474/5122707929 here]]) is the Alicorn god of Magic, Equality, and Potential, and one of Mana Equus' oldest sons.
* TheArchmage: Not only is he a god of Magic, but he's also an exceptionally powerful spellcaster thanks to the tutoring he received from his adoptive mother, Mana Equus.
* DeityOfHumanOrigin: He was originally a mortal Mesohippus Equid who, thanks to Mana Equus, defied his former realm's misandrist beliefs and Ascended to godhood, becoming the Alicorn god of Magic, Equality, and Potential.
* DivineParentage: He is an older son of Mana Equus, who adopted him after she destroyed his homeland for its corruption and abusive misandry.
* FateWorseThanDeath: This is what Magus' fate would've been if his realm's [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen misandrist leaders]] successfully caught him -- permanently stripped of his great magical potential, reducing him to a slave lower than even the lowest mare or filly, with his only purposes in life being a BabyFactory and a laborer as stallions were barred from wielding magic or having political power. Fortunately, he was able to get to a temple in time and pray to Mana Equus for help, saving him from a torturous existence.
* HappilyAdopted: Despite not being related to Mana Equus by blood, he is quite happy with his adoption as Mana Equus was a far better parent and teacher than the misandrist mares who essentially tried to enslave him on account of his gender. When Mana Equus died, he was ''devastated'', but ultimately found the strength to keep going.
* DeityOfHumanOrigin: He was originally a mortal Mesohippus Equid who, thanks to Mana Equus, defied his former realm's misandrist beliefs and Ascended to godhood, becoming the Alicorn god of Magic, Equality, and Potential.
* DivineParentage: He is an older son of Mana Equus, who adopted him after she destroyed his homeland for its corruption and abusive misandry.
* FateWorseThanDeath: This is what Magus' fate would've been if his realm's [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen misandrist leaders]] successfully caught him -- permanently stripped of his great magical potential, reducing him to a slave lower than even the lowest mare or filly, with his only purposes in life being a BabyFactory and a laborer as stallions were barred from wielding magic or having political power. Fortunately, he was able to get to a temple in time and pray to Mana Equus for help, saving him from a torturous existence.
* HappilyAdopted: Despite not being related to Mana Equus by blood, he is quite happy with his adoption as Mana Equus was a far better parent and teacher than the misandrist mares who essentially tried to enslave him on account of his gender. When Mana Equus died, he was ''devastated'', but ultimately found the strength to keep going.
* TimeAbyss: As a Mesohippus Alicorn and an older member of the Empyreanae, he is millions of years old. This makes him incredibly eldritch and powerful and divine standards, due to deities "growing" by getting StrongerWithAge.
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--> '''King Equus''': You have companions, don't you?\\
'''Atlocard''': Oh, didn't you get the memo? [[HatesEveryoneEqually I hated everyone equally]].\\
'''King Equus''': If that is so, would you have turned your Sire and followed your master's orders, despite all the trouble you caused them out of amusement?
* BlindObedience: Subverted HARD. As Terran Prince Written Word [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/808568246/4865704536 pointed]] [[WhatTheHellHero out]] to a wayward sect worshipping him, unlike what some Second Age Magnean Religions and Fourth Age Meganian Religions preached, King Equus wanted his mortal children to think for themselves and take the effort and responsibility to learn from the world and from their own deeds and follies, and in doing so better themselves and the world. He would had been disappointed at those who preached blind, unthinking devotion to him in the name of dogma and demagoguery. As Equus himself points out, his commandments to his devoted generally amount to 'don't be an evil flankhole.'
'''Atlocard''': Oh, didn't you get the memo? [[HatesEveryoneEqually I hated everyone equally]].\\
'''King Equus''': If that is so, would you have turned your Sire and followed your master's orders, despite all the trouble you caused them out of amusement?
* BlindObedience: Subverted HARD. As Terran Prince Written Word [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/808568246/4865704536 pointed]] [[WhatTheHellHero out]] to a wayward sect worshipping him, unlike what some Second Age Magnean Religions and Fourth Age Meganian Religions preached, King Equus wanted his mortal children to think for themselves and take the effort and responsibility to learn from the world and from their own deeds and follies, and in doing so better themselves and the world. He would had been disappointed at those who preached blind, unthinking devotion to him in the name of dogma and demagoguery. As Equus himself points out, his commandments to his devoted generally amount to 'don't be an evil flankhole.'
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--> '''King Equus''': Equus:''' You have companions, don't you?\\
'''Atlocard''': '''Atlocard:''' Oh, didn't you get the memo? [[HatesEveryoneEqually I hated everyone equally]].\\
'''KingEquus''': Equus:''' If that is so, would you have turned your Sire and followed your master's orders, despite all the trouble you caused them out of amusement?
* BlindObedience: Subverted HARD. As Terran Prince Written Word [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/808568246/4865704536pointed]] [[WhatTheHellHero pointed out]] to a wayward sect worshipping him, unlike what some Second Age Magnean Religions and Fourth Age Meganian Religions preached, King Equus wanted his mortal children to think for themselves and take the effort and responsibility to learn from the world and from their own deeds and follies, and in doing so better themselves and the world. He would had been disappointed at those who preached blind, unthinking devotion to him in the name of dogma and demagoguery. As Equus himself points out, his commandments to his devoted generally amount to 'don't be an evil flankhole.'
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* BlindObedience: Subverted HARD. As Terran Prince Written Word [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/808568246/4865704536
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* AnthropmorphicPersonification: He's an Alicorn god who embodies Magic, Equality, and Potential.
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* AnthropmorphicPersonification: AnthropomorphicPersonification: He's an Alicorn god who embodies Magic, Equality, and Potential.
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[[folder:King Equus, Father of All Equines/Equinekind]]
!!!'''Classification:''' Ascendant
!!!'''Portfolio:''' Equinekind
!!!'''Rank:''' TBA
[[folder:King Equus, Father of All Equines/Equinekind]]
!!!'''Classification:''' Ascendant
!!!'''Portfolio:''' Equinekind
!!!'''Rank:''' TBA
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!!!'''Affiliation:''' Empyreanae, Grand Primevals (Tuzu), Church of the Stars
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An extremely ancient god who was responsible for birthing all of sapient Equinekind, including the Alicorns, who became the greatest of his mortal/immortal children. He has been the central focus of worship among mortals; one in particular is legendary Second-Age musician, Blue Suede Heartstrings, who remained devoutly religious even after Ascending and becoming the Alicorn god of Music and Humility.
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* AnthropmorphicPersonification: He's an Alicorn god who embodies Magic, Equality, and Potential.
* TheMagnificent: Known as "the Magician of Potential".
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!!Associated
[[folder:King Equus, Father of All Equines/Equinekind]]
!!!'''Classification:''' Ascendant
!!!'''Portfolio:''' Equinekind
!!!'''Rank:''' TBA
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An extremely ancient god who was responsible for birthing all of sapient Equinekind, including the Alicorns, who became the greatest of his mortal/immortal children. He has been the central focus of worship among mortals; one in particular is legendary Second-Age musician, Blue Suede Heartstrings, who remained devoutly religious even after Ascending and becoming the Alicorn god of Music and Humility.
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* TheMagnificent: Known as "the Magician of Potential".
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!!Associated
[[folder:King Equus, Father of All Equines/Equinekind]]
!!!'''Classification:''' Ascendant
!!!'''Portfolio:''' Equinekind
!!!'''Rank:''' TBA
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An extremely ancient god who was responsible for birthing all of sapient Equinekind, including the Alicorns, who became the greatest of his mortal/immortal children. He has been the central focus of worship among mortals; one in particular is legendary Second-Age musician, Blue Suede Heartstrings, who remained devoutly religious even after Ascending and becoming the Alicorn god of Music and Humility.
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* BondageIsBad: She admits to doing this plenty of times with various partners and will drain them of their magic if they fail to satisfy her.
* BrightIsNotGood: She has bright, purple skin and is. very much not a good person.
* BrightIsNotGood: She has bright, purple skin and is. very much not a good person.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: After being overshadowed Celestia and Luna her whole life, she seeks to undermine the two sisters and everything they worked for and surpass them and every other Alicorn, extending her feud to others like Princess Amicitia when they also overshadow or got in her way.
* EvilIsPetty: She admits she would steal the magic of her lovers if they [[LousyLoversAreLosers failed to satisfy her]].
* EvilIsPetty: She admits she would steal the magic of her lovers if they [[LousyLoversAreLosers failed to satisfy her]].
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* DisproportionateRetribution: DisproportionateRetribution:
** After being overshadowed Celestia and Luna her whole life, she seeks to undermine the two sisters and everything they worked for and surpass them and every other Alicorn, extending her feud to others like Princess Amicitia when they also overshadow or got in her way.
* EvilIsPetty: ** She admits she would steal the magic of her lovers if they [[LousyLoversAreLosers failed to satisfy her]].
** After being overshadowed Celestia and Luna her whole life, she seeks to undermine the two sisters and everything they worked for and surpass them and every other Alicorn, extending her feud to others like Princess Amicitia when they also overshadow or got in her way.
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* BlueandOrangeMorality: While undoubtedly villainous, he operates with a writer's mindset. Despite having the power and opportunity to destroy the world with just a few written words, he chose not to do it because it'd be "anti-climatic". Instead, he set up a FinalBattle between himself and the heroes to give a satisfying conclusion even though he gave the heroes a chance to defeat him.
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* BlueandOrangeMorality: BlueAndOrangeMorality: While undoubtedly villainous, he operates with a writer's mindset. Despite having the power and opportunity to destroy the world with just a few written words, he chose not to do it because it'd be "anti-climatic". Instead, he set up a FinalBattle between himself and the heroes to give a satisfying conclusion even though he gave the heroes a chance to defeat him.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: He doesn't view things in good or evil, merely what makes for an interesting plot.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Like in canon, she ends up trapped in the Together Tree she planted in her own castle on New Equus in the Fifth Age. However, given her persistence many in-universe doubts that would hold her for long, and it's hinted this isn't the first time she found herself in such a situation either.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Like in canon, she ends up trapped in the Together Tree she planted in her own castle on New Equus in the Fifth Age. However, given her persistence many in-universe doubts that would hold her for long, and it's hinted this isn't the first time she found herself in such a situation either. In one drabble, she notes it would only take her about 2.5 years to acquire the power to free herself.
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Ascending Dawn is the Alicorn god of Redemption, Martial Arts, and Plasma, and another surviving antediluvian Alicorn, though one with a very mysterious reputation.
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Ascending Dawn (read [[https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Codex-Equestria-Deities-and-Divines-Part-8-772911153 here]]) is the Alicorn god of Redemption, Martial Arts, and Plasma, and another surviving antediluvian Alicorn, though one with a very mysterious reputation.
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* PlayingWithFire: Comes with being a Fire Alicorn.
* PowerParasite: She can steal power from others to make herself stronger.
* PowerParasite: She can steal power from others to make herself stronger.
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* GreenIsMean: Her hair is somewhat green, she has green gems in her crown and chest piece, and is conceited and petty.
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* GreenIsMean: GreenAndMean: Her hair is somewhat green, she has green gems in her crown and chest piece, and is conceited and petty.
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--> "Time to take back what's mine!"
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Like Celestia in canon, Opaline has shown no interest in romance or sex. [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/930826834/5102132858 Here]], she's a lover of Prince Nero Jewelius Blackguard, whether sincerely or merely to manipulate him.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Like Celestia in canon, Opaline has shown no interest in romance or sex. [[https://www.deviantart.com/comments/1/930826834/5102132858 Here]], she's a lover of Prince Nero Jewelius Blackguard, whether sincerely or merely to manipulate him. She's also not above using [[SexForServices sex to her advantage]].
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* ArchEnemy: Opaline Arcana is one of Celestia's and Luna's most persistent enemies throughout their time outside of Skyros, often plotting to undermine and surpass them when not pursuing her own ambitions.
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* ArchEnemy: Opaline Arcana is one of Celestia's and Luna's most persistent enemies throughout their time outside of Skyros, often plotting to undermine and surpass them when not pursuing her own ambitions. She later grows to despise their successor Twilight as much as them.
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[[caption-width-right:1000:Opaline Arcana by BrutalityInc (https://www.deviantart.com/brutalityinc/art/Opaline-Arcana-Custom-997990099)]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: She offered Celestia and Luna the opportunity to rule Equestria together, but they rejected her, not wanting a tyrant to enslave their subjects.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Opaline Arcana demonstrates herself to be more dangerous than she had been depicted in MLP G5, having persistently threatened Celestia and Luna throughout their reigns in Equestria as well as being more successful in her scheme to seize power and rule her own kingdom as a tyrannical god-queen, even if she still often gets overthrown in the end.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Opaline Arcana demonstrates herself to be more dangerous than she had been depicted in MLP G5, having persistently threatened Celestia and Luna throughout their reigns in Equestria as well as being more successful in her scheme schemes to seize power and rule her own kingdom as a tyrannical god-queen, even if she still often gets overthrown in the end.
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* TheResenter: She resented being not comparable in power and talent to other more accomplished Alicorns, resented her parents constantly comparing her unfavourably to them, and most importantly resented Celestia and Luna for constantly overshadowing her. This led to her developing ambition and envy to become the greatest Alicorn there is, as well as undermine Celestia, Luna and others who got in her way at every chance.
