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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Uses the original spelling for his name prior to when the English material changing it to Jeremy.
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*** First of all, she's terrified of Odd and Ulrich; two people whom in the canon she's best friends with, and is even playfully teased by the two in regards to their personal nickname of Princess for her. Not only that, but she's rather... automatic, in terms of how she speaks, and super polite as well, and she doesn't appear to desire to escape from the facility even though in the canon it was the opposite desire. Not helping matters is that it appears to be a LogicalFallacy of her own naivety that leads to her wishing to stay, since she honestly has no idea that Franz is long dead due to [[spoiler:Aelita being convinced that it's still Christmas of 1945, and always has been ever since Franz told her to forever cherish that day, and even though she's abused verbally and physically by Megalodon, she ''still'' doesn't escape while she has the perfect chance to do so.]]
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*** First of all, she's terrified of Odd and Ulrich; two people whom in the canon she's best friends with, and is even playfully teased by the two in regards to their personal nickname of Princess for her. Not only that, but she's rather... automatic, in terms of how she speaks, and super polite as well, and she doesn't appear to desire to escape from the facility even though in the canon it was the opposite desire. Not helping matters is that it appears to be a LogicalFallacy UsefulNotes/{{Logical Fallac|ies}}y of her own naivety that leads to her wishing to stay, since she honestly has no idea that Franz is long dead due to [[spoiler:Aelita being convinced that it's still Christmas of 1945, and always has been ever since Franz told her to forever cherish that day, and even though she's abused verbally and physically by Megalodon, she ''still'' doesn't escape while she has the perfect chance to do so.]]
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Too fantastical.
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* ShownTheirWork: Not directly, but in the Author's Note of his debut, Willaim's strength has nothing to do with the Zweihänder or its real-life counterpart; an actual greatsword in real-life doesn't tend to get heavier than 10 lbs./4.5 kg, with fictional greatswords being the ones notorious for weighing a lot (such as [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Cloud's Buster Sword]] at 80 lbs./36.3 kg). What the author means by this is that, rather than using his weapon as a means of showing his strength, he had William pick up and lift Jim over his shoulder since he knew regardless of which weight you would use for his sword, [[BigFun Jim]] [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome was already going to be heavier regardless.]] A lower estimate for Jim's weight, just to give you an idea, would be 300 lbs./136.078 kg, which is more than thrice the weight of Cloud's Buster Sword, and is absolutely heavier than the real world Zweihänder by a long shot.
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* ShownTheirWork: Not directly, but in the Author's Note of his debut, Willaim's strength has nothing to do with the Zweihänder or its real-life counterpart; an actual greatsword in real-life doesn't tend to get heavier than 10 lbs./4.5 kg, with fictional greatswords being the ones notorious for weighing a lot (such as [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Cloud's Buster Sword]] at 80 lbs./36.3 kg). What the author means by this is that, rather than using his weapon as a means of showing his strength, he had William pick up and lift Jim over his shoulder since he knew regardless of which weight you would use for his sword, [[BigFun Jim]] [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome was already going to be heavier regardless.]] regardless. A lower estimate for Jim's weight, just to give you an idea, would be 300 lbs./136.078 kg, which is more than thrice the weight of Cloud's Buster Sword, and is absolutely heavier than the real world Zweihänder by a long shot.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: His physical strength and surprising agility makes it impossible for Ken to defeat him in a head on confrontation; even with Ken's revolver in mind, he can't ready it fast enough before Megalodon already has him disarmed and pinned.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: '''Very literally''' at that, beginning with the second to last major blow to the facility's integrity; the materialization of a Liquiraptor in the real world. On Lyoko, Liquiraptors are effectively TheGoomba because of them being relatively weak in life points and doing only so much damage directly even when in contact with their liquid metal forms. In the real world? Said liquid metal forms, which are already boiling hot, cause toxic gases to be emitted from it which poison the nearby atmosphere it wanders through, and its molten metal body actually does even more damage to real entities than it could've otherwise done on Lyoko by a long shot. Its kernel sphere, which is normally very weak in life points on Lyoko, is borderline MadeOfIndestructium in the real world. It ultimately takes getting frozen solid to absolute zero to finally take out this particular Liquiraptor.
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* TheHero: Takes the title from Ulrich due to a change in context as to how this story starts off. To give William some credit here, though, he's the oldest member of the canon cast who isn't already an adult from the original source material, only being beaten out by Jim, Mr. Delmas, and a few others.
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Megalodon has been disambiguated.
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* AnimalMotif: ''{{Megalodon}}''.
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* {{Megalodon}}: His namesake.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: [[{{Megalodon}} Take a guess.]] [[spoiler:Though Ken does call him "Mitch" in Chapter 7, but that's to be expected since Ken would easily already know Megalodon's full name.]]
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: [[{{Megalodon}} Take a guess.]] [[spoiler:Though Ken guess] [[spoiler:Ken does call him "Mitch" in Chapter 7, but that's to be expected since Ken would easily already know Megalodon's full name.]]
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* ShoutOut: Not intentionally, but one of the comments on [[https://www.deviantart.com/mf217/art/Freak-Phase-2-Reflection-Code-692021183 Phase 2 Freak's picture]] claims it looks straight out of ''VideoGame/SilentHill''.
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* ShoutOut: Not intentionally, but one of the comments on [[https://www.deviantart.com/mf217/art/Freak-Phase-2-Reflection-Code-692021183 Phase 2 Freak's picture]] claims it looks straight out of ''VideoGame/SilentHill''.''Franchise/SilentHill''.
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Ambiguous Disorder is not a trope anymore, but a redirect to a YMMV entry.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: He's quickly stated through a conversation between Yumi and William to be a special needs kid, [[EstablishingCharacterMoment even prior to his physical appearance in the fic proper.]]
** UsefulNotes/{{Autism}} is listed as being one of them right off of the bat.
** UsefulNotes/{{Autism}} is listed as being one of them right off of the bat.
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** Before Jérémie is even physically seen in the fic proper, he's stated to be [[AmbiguousDisorder a special needs kid.]]
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** Before Jérémie is even physically seen in the fic proper, he's stated to be [[AmbiguousDisorder a special needs kid.]]
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* RealityWarper: Hoo boy... [[spoiler:Her Creativity power from the canon is amplified UpToEleven here, with it being able to perpetually lock her and her surroundings on Christmas Day of 1945 merely due to literally interpreting Franz's parting words to her. She's effectively warped all of space and time around her to keep herself and her room from aging the almost '''''90 years''''' she's been in containment.]]
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* RealityWarper: Hoo boy... [[spoiler:Her Creativity power from the canon is amplified UpToEleven here, with it being able to perpetually lock her and her surroundings on Christmas Day of 1945 merely due to literally interpreting Franz's parting words to her. She's effectively warped all of space and time around her to keep herself and her room from aging the almost '''''90 years''''' she's been in containment.]]
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Adult Fear is now a disambig
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* AdultFear:
** Very clearly concerned about Jérémie's safety in regards to his witness of Freak on the security footage. In general he's concerned over the fact animal control had been called in numerous times over incidents relating to Freak only for nothing to get solved and Freak to be a KarmaHoudini for the most part with its kills near Kadic Academy.
** Very clearly concerned about Jérémie's safety in regards to his witness of Freak on the security footage. In general he's concerned over the fact animal control had been called in numerous times over incidents relating to Freak only for nothing to get solved and Freak to be a KarmaHoudini for the most part with its kills near Kadic Academy.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He admits that while Jérémie is still leaving out after curfew, he notes that because Jérémie is a student who works hard to keep his grades to an incredibly above average score, he notes he would really only intend to give Jérémie a slap on the wrist if even that because he feels that so far, aside from the obvious curfew issues, Jérémie to his knowledge hasn't done anything worthy of an actual punishment. [[spoiler:He does agree with the idea of trying to talk to him with William, though that's really out of concern for Jérémie's safety once William informs Jean of [[AdultFear Freak being caught on camera around the same times in which Jérémie leaves the campus at night]].]]
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He admits that while Jérémie is still leaving out after curfew, he notes that because Jérémie is a student who works hard to keep his grades to an incredibly above average score, he notes he would really only intend to give Jérémie a slap on the wrist if even that because he feels that so far, aside from the obvious curfew issues, Jérémie to his knowledge hasn't done anything worthy of an actual punishment. [[spoiler:He does agree with the idea of trying to talk to him with William, though that's really out of concern for Jérémie's safety once William informs Jean of [[AdultFear Freak being caught on camera around the same times in which Jérémie leaves the campus at night]].night.]]
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* AdultFear: [[spoiler:The fact he can manage to successfully enter Jérémie's dorm by manipulating Delmas into willingly giving him the key to the dorm in question, and doesn't even have a remote issue with being able to do so repeatedly from this point onward, it demonstrates that the 16 year old Jérémie, who is tied with Aelita for the youngest main character aside from Hiroki, that Jérémie's privacy and shelter from the outside world is now prone to being invaded very casually by a heinous man.]]