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-->'''Voiced by:''' Creator/MistyLee (English)
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: The SDF support aggressive, expansionist warfare, mass murder, and consider Earth-born bloodlines to be inferior to their own. In case you forgot they're the bad guys, they have a white, red and black angular insignia and their combat helmets resemble Stahlhelms with glass shields.
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: The SDF support aggressive, expansionist warfare, mass murder, and consider Earth-born bloodlines to be inferior to their own. In case you forgot they're the bad guys, they have a white, red and black angular insignia and their combat helmets resemble Stahlhelms with glass shields. To really hammer the point home, at least one of the quotes from Salen Kotch displayed on the loading screen is a paraphrase of a RealLife quote attributed to UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The "Dire Battalion" mentioned on the Most Wanted board, a [[TradingBarsForStripes penal battalion]] made up of the most depraved and evil criminals of the SDF, also appears similar to the Nazi's Dirlewanger Brigade, mention is made on the loading screens and during Operation Burnwater of forced labour camps, and one vice admiral is said to be "protector of Bontrey and Morovia", referencing UsefulNotes/ReinhardHeydrich whose position was protector of Bohemia and Moravia.
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** One of the Most Wanted Targets is said to have trained his men by pushing them out into the vacuum of space with minimal oxygen and a leaking suit, seemingly taking Kotch's ethos even further by actively trying to get as many of his men killed as possible.
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* DeadpanSnarker: He makes a few humorous quips throughout the game, usually when he is nervous or insecure.
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* DeadpanSnarker: He makes a few humorous His off the cuff quips throughout the game, usually when are uncannily both frequent and good that he is nervous or insecure.may well have been specifically programmed to be more charismatic than a human ever could be.
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* MultiEthnicName: Todd Kashima - an American-European first name with a Japanese surname.
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[[TheHero The protagonist]] and primary PlayerCharacter of the game, a SCAR pilot-turned-ship commander during the war against the SDF.
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* IronicName: The name "Settlement Defense Front" means they aim at planetary defense against external threats, but it is the opposite of what they do; they launch an invasion on Earth, which contradict the "Defense" in their name.
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* IronicName: The name Despite being called the "Settlement Defense Front" means they aim at planetary defense Front," implying that they're a defensive army, they're waging a war of aggression against external threats, but it is the opposite of what they do; they launch an invasion on Earth, which contradict the "Defense" in their name.Earth.
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* IronicName: The name "Settlement Defense Front" means they aim at planetary defense against external threats, but it is the opposite of what they do; they launch an invasion on Earth, which contradict the "Defense" in their name.
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: The player has the option to do this to Kotch as he's delivering his final speech, where it's entirely possible to jam your knife in his throat and kill him as he's in the middle of talking.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The player has the option to do this to Kotch as he's delivering his final speech, where it's entirely possible to jam your knife in his throat and kill him as he's in the middle of talking.]]
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* DirtyCoward: He runs away from combat instead of fighting you directly, not firing a single shot as he hides behind his soldiers. [[spoiler: Averted somewhat however, where it turns out he was simply buying himself time to destroy the AATIS Guns. He then willingly stabs himself in the gut to remove a transponder beacon, an act that causes him to quickly succumb to blood loss and die.]]
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* DirtyCoward: He runs away from combat instead of fighting you directly, not firing a single shot as he hides behind his soldiers. [[spoiler: Averted [[spoiler:Subverted somewhat however, where it turns out he was simply buying himself time to destroy the AATIS Guns. He then willingly stabs himself in the gut to remove a transponder beacon, an act that causes him to quickly succumb to blood loss and die.]]
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A high-ranking SDF officer, Akeel Min Riah was sent to Earth as a sleeper agent to disable the UNSA defence cannons before the SDF invaded.
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* DirtyCoward: He runs away from combat instead of fighting you directly, not firing a single shot as he hides behind his soldiers.
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* ButThouMust: Trying to shoot him in the leg to stop his escape doesn't do anything. You ''must'' chase him down for the sake of the story.
* DirtyCoward: He runs away from combat instead of fighting you directly, not firing a single shot as he hides behind his soldiers. [[spoiler: Averted somewhat however, where it turns out he was simply buying himself time to destroy the AATIS Guns. He then willingly stabs himself in the gut to remove a transponder beacon, an act that causes him to quickly succumb to blood loss and die.]]
* DirtyCoward: He runs away from combat instead of fighting you directly, not firing a single shot as he hides behind his soldiers. [[spoiler: Averted somewhat however, where it turns out he was simply buying himself time to destroy the AATIS Guns. He then willingly stabs himself in the gut to remove a transponder beacon, an act that causes him to quickly succumb to blood loss and die.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: The player has the option to do this as he's delivering his final speech, where it's entirely possible to jam your knife in his throat and kill him as he's in the middle of talking.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: The player has the option to do this to Kotch as he's delivering his final speech, where it's entirely possible to jam your knife in his throat and kill him as he's in the middle of talking.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: The player has the option to do this as he's delivering his final speech, where it's entirely possible to jam your knife in his throat and kill him as he's in the middle of talking.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: He's killed by the ''Olympus Mons'' when it obliterates UNSA HQ, right as he's in the middle of ordering the ''Retribution'' to get Jackals in the air.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: He's [[spoiler:He's killed by the ''Olympus Mons'' when it obliterates UNSA HQ, right as he's in the middle of ordering the ''Retribution'' to get Jackals in the air.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: He stays behind with the Marines to defend the entrance to the space elevator and prevent the SDF forces from following the assault team, and is later confirmed to have been killed-in-action.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He stays behind with the Marines to defend the entrance to the space elevator and prevent the SDF forces from following the assault team, and is later confirmed to have been killed-in-action.]]
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* BaitTheDog: His first scene has him initially pretending to be a respectful, caring officer who helps the suffocating Wolf by providing him with a respirator. [[spoiler: He then reveals himself to be an utterly evil piece of shit who murders one of his own men to make a point, then takes away Wolf's oxygen again before having him and his SCAR team brutally executed.]]
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* BaitTheDog: His first scene has him initially pretending to be a respectful, caring officer who helps the suffocating Wolf by providing him with a respirator. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He then reveals himself to be an utterly evil piece of shit who murders one of his own men to make a point, then takes away Wolf's oxygen again before having him and his SCAR team brutally executed.]]
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Unsurprising for a tyrannical warmongerer who's motto is "death is no disgrace." [[spoiler: After he's fatally wounded by a hacked C6, unless the player jams a knife into his throat he will remain composed and proceed to spend his final moments verbally spitting in Reyes' face, taunting the captain for his losses and uttering his aforementioned motto one last time.]]
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Unsurprising for a tyrannical warmongerer who's motto is "death is no disgrace." [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After he's fatally wounded by a hacked C6, unless the player jams a knife into his throat he will remain composed and proceed to spend his final moments verbally spitting in Reyes' face, taunting the captain for his losses and uttering his aforementioned motto one last time.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: [[spoiler: The manic expression on his face as he viciously beats Wolf to death implies him to be this. We don't learn much about him to find out if it's actually the case.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The manic expression on his face as he viciously beats Wolf to death implies him to be this. We don't learn much about him to find out if it's actually the case.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: He stays behind with the Marines to defend the entrance to the space elevator and prevent the SDF forces from following the team. He's later confirmed to have been killed-in-action.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: He stays behind with the Marines to defend the entrance to the space elevator and prevent the SDF forces from following the team. He's assault team, and is later confirmed to have been killed-in-action.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: He's killed by the ''Olympus Mons'' when it obliterates SATO HQ, right as he's in the middle of ordering the ''Retribution'' to get Jackals in the air.]]
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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler: He's killed by the ''Olympus Mons'' when it obliterates SATO UNSA HQ, right as he's in the middle of ordering the ''Retribution'' to get Jackals in the air.]]
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* OverrankedSoldier: Going by his visual appearance, Kotch can't be older then late-20's to early 30's, yet holds the exceptionally high rank of Admiral and Commander of the SDF.
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* OverrankedSoldier: Going by his visual appearance, Kotch can't be older then late-20's than late 20s to early 30's, 30s, yet holds the exceptionally high rank of Admiral and Commander of the SDF.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Martial skill is valued above all, to the point where owning a firearm is considered mandatory in SDF-controlled territory. Fittingly, their headquarters is situated on Mars.[[note]]In Myth/ClassicalMythology, Mars is the god of war.[[/note]]
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: ProudWarriorRace: Martial skill is valued above all, to the point where owning a firearm is considered mandatory in SDF-controlled territory. Fittingly, their headquarters is situated on Mars.[[note]]In Myth/ClassicalMythology, Mars is the god of war.[[/note]]
