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* CloningBlues: Is '''not''' happy about her origins.
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* CloningBlues: CloneAngst: Is '''not''' happy about her origins.origins as a clone of Eris.
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A list of characters from WebOriginal/{{Blackburn}}
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A list of characters from WebOriginal/{{Blackburn}}''Literature/{{Blackburn}}''.
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* SuperheroPackingHeat: Uses a rifle primarily, though one with [[StunGun a non-lethal option.]]
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* SuperheroPackingHeat: Uses a rifle primarily, though one with [[StunGun [[TheParalyzer a non-lethal option.]]
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* TheDreaded: Every single character in the book, even other villains, are terrified of her presence or at least exercise extreme caution. Considering she ends up [[spoiler:killing dozens during the riots and destroying much of the city,]] it's justified.
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* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: PlayedWith. Even though she goes through a bit of EvilGloating before [[spoiler:shooting Gilda]], she does do it. [[spoiler: Gilda survives.]]
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* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: PlayedWith. Even though she goes through a bit of EvilGloating before [[spoiler:shooting Gilda]], Gilda,]] she does do it. [[spoiler: Gilda survives.]]
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** She quickens her pace when she goes to execute [[spoiler:Shade. [[DisneyVillainDeath It doesn't work.]]
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** She quickens her pace when she goes to execute [[spoiler:Shade. [[DisneyVillainDeath It doesn't work.]]
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* EvilIsHammy: Eris takes every opportunity she has to chew the scenery and monologue.
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* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: PlayedWith. Even though she goes through a bit of EvilGloating before [[spoiler:shooting Gilda]], she does do it. [[spoiler: Gilda survives.]]
** She quickens her pace when she goes to execute [[spoiler:Shade. [[DisneyVillainDeath It doesn't work.]]
** She quickens her pace when she goes to execute [[spoiler:Shade. [[DisneyVillainDeath It doesn't work.]]
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* WhiteSheep: Is the only Stone we've met that isn't pure evil.
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* {{Chessmaster}}: [[spoiler:Expertly manipulates the Mavericks and BCPD into following false leads throughout most of the book, and her true motives to actually murder of all Blackburn aren't discovered until the very end.]]
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* {{Chessmaster}}: [[spoiler:Expertly Expertly manipulates the Mavericks and BCPD into following [[spoiler:following false leads leads]] throughout most of the book, and her true motives to actually murder [[spoiler:murder of all Blackburn Blackburn]] aren't discovered until the very end.]]
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* [[spoiler:HandicappedBadass: After losing her eye to Eris, Shade simply puts on an EyepatchOfPower and gets back to work.]]
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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: What Jay comes to follow after her HeelFaceTurn and [[spoiler:near murder at Eris' hands.]] She follows her principles religiously, there is no gray area in her mind.
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* VerbalTic: "Hmph." It's implied she gets it from her mother.
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Takes a lot of damage that would kill or maim other Mavericks.
!! Nisa "Mouse" Verion
->''"If you aren’t a part of the system, you work outside it. Fight for the things you believe in, brush aside anyone who stands in your way like so much chaff. Simple.”''
From her lowly origins as a genetic experiment escaped from Progressive Genetics’ labs, Mouse uses her intelligence and ruthlessness to claw her way up through Blackburn’s underworld.
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!! Nisa "Mouse" Verion
->''"If you aren’t a part of the system, you work outside it. Fight for the things you believe in, brush aside anyone who stands in your way like so much chaff. Simple.”''
From her lowly origins as a genetic experiment escaped from Progressive Genetics’ labs, Mouse uses her intelligence and ruthlessness to claw her way up through Blackburn’s underworld.
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Takes a lot of damage that would kill or maim other Mavericks.
!! Nisa "Mouse" Verion
->''"If you aren’t a part of the system, you work outside it. Fight for the things you believe in, brush aside anyone who stands in your way like so much chaff. Simple.”''
From her lowly origins as a genetic experiment escaped from Progressive Genetics’ labs, Mouse uses her intelligence and ruthlessness to claw her way up through Blackburn’s underworld.
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!! Nisa "Mouse" Verion
->''"If you aren’t a part of the system, you work outside it. Fight for the things you believe in, brush aside anyone who stands in your way like so much chaff. Simple.”''
From her lowly origins as a genetic experiment escaped from Progressive Genetics’ labs, Mouse uses her intelligence and ruthlessness to claw her way up through Blackburn’s underworld.
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