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In my personal opinion at least, Not A Subversion
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* HeelFaceTurn: Subverted. While he ''has'' turned his back on the Daleks' usual psychopathy, he's still a robot-alien-Nazi.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Subverted.Downplayed. While he ''has'' turned his back on the Daleks' usual psychopathy, he's still a robot-alien-Nazi.
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** Also, even ''he'', '''[[AxCrazy a]] [[OmnicidalManiac Dalek]]''', finds [[TheSociopath Kyubey]] and [[ManipulativeBastard his methods]] disgusting.
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Former Dalek Supreme of the Cult of Skaro, former Dalek Hybrid, and formerly deceased. Arrives in the ''Puella Magi'''verse with absolutely no explanation, and is now trapped in the same StableTimeLoop as Homura. Irritable, and prone to backfiring MadScience. Was once the executive officer of the Dalek Inquisitor General, and was promoted for surviving five consecutive missions under his command.
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Former Dalek Supreme of the Cult of Skaro, former Dalek Hybrid, and formerly deceased. Arrives in the ''Puella Magi'''verse Magi'' universe with absolutely no explanation, and is now trapped in the same StableTimeLoop as Homura. Irritable, and prone to backfiring MadScience. Was once the executive officer of the Dalek Inquisitor General, and was promoted for surviving five consecutive missions under his command.
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* OldSoldier: All Daleks are warriors and Sec is a very, very old Dalek. Considered a sign of prowess by their species given that they're at war with basically everything.
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* OldSoldier: All Daleks are warriors warriors, and Sec is a very, very old Dalek. Considered a sign of prowess by their species given that they're at war with basically everything.
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* BadBoss: To the point that Sec got promoted to Dalek Supreme, a position usually reserved for specially-bred Daleks, simply by surviving five missions under his command.
* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler:He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not the General himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to him. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child of Omnicidal Mania, are more scared of him than ''the Doctor''.
* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler:He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not the General himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to him. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child of Omnicidal Mania, are more scared of him than ''the Doctor''.
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* BadBoss: To the point that Sec got promoted to Dalek Supreme, a position usually reserved for specially-bred Daleks, simply by surviving five missions under his command.
* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler:He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with thenew 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not the General himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to him. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child ofOmnicidal Mania, OmnicidalManiac, are more scared of him than they are of ''the Doctor''.
* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler:He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not the General himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to him. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child of
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[[NinjaPirateZombieRobot Time-Traveling Magical Zombie/Lich]]. [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld So old she can't even remember what her father looked like]], and basically the same person as she was in Canon.
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[[NinjaPirateZombieRobot Time-Traveling Magical Zombie/Lich]]. [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld So old she can't even remember what her father looked like]], and basically the same person as she was in Canon.
canon.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Which causes a minor freakout in Sec, as a ContinuityNod to the Fourth Doctor's famous scarf.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Which Begins wearing one during the fic, which causes a minor freakout in Sec, as a ContinuityNod Sec (who proceeds to mutter something about "jellybabies", indicating that he was reminded of the Fourth Doctor's famous scarf.Doctor).
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!!Dalek Sec
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* {{Angrish}}: His fourth attempt at playing Videogame/DwarfFortress results in this.
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* {{Angrish}}: His fourth attempt at playing Videogame/DwarfFortress ''VideoGame/DwarfFortress'' results in this.
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* ForScience: His motivation for a lot of stuff. Sec likes to know how things work, but the harder something is to figure out the more rewarding he views it.
* FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General. So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was [[spoiler: [[PhysicalGod Krimehild Gretchen]]]]. And even then, his response consisted more of impotent rage.
* HeelFaceTurn: Subverted. While he ''has'' turned his back on the Daleks' usual psychopathy, he's still a robot-alien-Nazi.
* FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General. So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was [[spoiler: [[PhysicalGod Krimehild Gretchen]]]]. And even then, his response consisted more of impotent rage.
* HeelFaceTurn: Subverted. While he ''has'' turned his back on the Daleks' usual psychopathy, he's still a robot-alien-Nazi.
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* ForScience: His motivation for a lot of stuff. Sec likes to know how things work, but and the harder something is to figure out the more rewarding he views it.
* FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General. So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was[[spoiler: [[PhysicalGod [[spoiler:[[PhysicalGod Krimehild Gretchen]]]]. And even then, his response consisted more of impotent rage.
* HeelFaceTurn: Subverted. While he ''has'' turned his back on the Daleks' usual psychopathy, he's still a robot-alien-Nazi.
* FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General. So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was
* HeelFaceTurn: Subverted. While he ''has'' turned his back on the Daleks' usual psychopathy, he's still a robot-alien-Nazi.
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* NoIndoorVoice: At one point, Homura cuts the connection between her body and her soul gem. She's cut off from all senses, including hearing, yet she can ''still'' hear him.
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* NoIndoorVoice: At one point, Homura cuts the connection between her body and her soul gem.Soul Gem. She's cut off from all senses, including hearing, yet she can ''still'' hear him.
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* OldSoldier: All Daleks are warriors and Sec is a very, very old Dalek. Considered a sign of prowess by their species given that their at war with basically everything.
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* OldSoldier: All Daleks are warriors and Sec is a very, very old Dalek. Considered a sign of prowess by their species given that their they're at war with basically everything.
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!! The Dalek Inquisitor General
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[[Folder:The Dalek Inquisitor
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The most cruel, ruthless, and terrifying Dalek in the Empire. Was Sec's commander for five consecutive missions. [[TheDreaded Scares other Daleks]].
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The most cruel, ruthless, and terrifying Dalek in the Empire. Was Sec's commander for five consecutive missions. [[TheDreaded Scares other Daleks]].
Daleks.]]
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* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler: He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not the man himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to the General. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child of Omnicidal Mania, are more scared of him than ''The Doctor''.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not the man himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to the General. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child of Omnicidal Mania, are more scared of him than ''The Doctor''.
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* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Not theman General himself, but for all other Daleks in regards to the General. him. You know he's crossed a few lines when the Daleks, the poster child of Omnicidal Mania, are more scared of him than ''The ''the Doctor''.
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-->''"Madoka saved me…and one day, I'll return the favor."''
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-->''"Madoka saved
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Which causes a minor freakout in Sec, as a ContinuityNod to the Fourth Doctor's famous scarf.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Which causes a minor freakout in Sec, as a ContinuityNod to the Fourth Doctor's famous scarf.scarf.
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Added a few Tropes to Sec and cleaned up the no info tropes (by adding the info)
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* BlueAndOrangeMoralityBlueAndOrangeMorality: He's a decent guy for a Dalek, but he's still a Dalek.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards
EvenEvilHasStandards: Sec tends to view wanton destruction as wasteful.
*ForScienceForScience: His motivation for a lot of stuff. Sec likes to know how things work, but the harder something is to figure out the more rewarding he views it.
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* LargeHamLargeHam: Literally never stops screaming. Even when he whispers. Somehow.
* OldSoldier: All Daleks are warriors and Sec is a very, very old Dalek. Considered a sign of prowess by their species given that their at war with basically everything.
* TheOlderImmortal: While Homura is very old for a human, old enough to have stopped keeping track, she's a child compared to Sec.
* TheOlderImmortal: While Homura is very old for a human, old enough to have stopped keeping track, she's a child compared to Sec.
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* SociopathicHeroSociopathicHero: Not as bad as most Daleks, who tend to be outright genocidal, but he's still pretty crazy by our standards.
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Badass is an index, not a trope.
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* {{Badass}}: So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was [[spoiler: [[PhysicalGod Krimehild Gretchen]]]]. And even then, his response consisted more of impotent rage.
** FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General.
** FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General.
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* [[ForScience For Dalek Science!]]
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* [[ForScience For Dalek Science!]]ForScience
* FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General. So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was [[spoiler: [[PhysicalGod Krimehild Gretchen]]]]. And even then, his response consisted more of impotent rage.
* FourStarBadass: WordOfGod has it that the title of "Supreme" basically equates to that of a General. So far, the only thing that has managed to hurt him was [[spoiler: [[PhysicalGod Krimehild Gretchen]]]]. And even then, his response consisted more of impotent rage.
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The most cruel, ruthless, and terrifying Dalek in the Empire. Was Sec's commander for five consecutive missions. [[TheDreaded Scares]] [[UpToEleven other Daleks]].
* {{Badass}}: [[spoiler: He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
* {{Badass}}: [[spoiler: He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
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The most cruel, ruthless, and terrifying Dalek in the Empire. Was Sec's commander for five consecutive missions. [[TheDreaded Scares]] [[UpToEleven Scares other Daleks]].
* {{Badass}}: [[spoiler: He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]Daleks]].
* {{Badass}}: [[spoiler: He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
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* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General.
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* TheDreaded: Even the other Daleks are terrified of the General. [[spoiler: He was teleported onto a Dalek Battle Saucer filled with the new 2010, post-Time War Daleks. He's a ''pre-''Time War Dalek. No shields, vulnerable to physical attack, and much weaker than the new models. The General manages to destroy them all without firing a single shot. His next task? Conquering the rest of the fleets.]]
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* CosmicPlaything: [[GenreSavvy And he knows it.]]
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!!Tropes that apply to individual characters in Fanfic/AHero include:
