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* In her review of "Not So Suite Life", a ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction in which Edward Cullen ''rapes'' Bella and it's not treated as a big deal, the Critic repeatedly points out how horrible the story's message is, especially when Edward gives an awful excuse for his attack.
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* In her review of "Not So Suite Life", a ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight]]'' fanfiction in which Edward Cullen ''rapes'' Bella and it's not treated as a big deal, the Critic repeatedly points out how horrible the story's message is, especially when Edward gives an awful excuse for his attack.
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming [[BlamingTheVictim blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[VictimBlaming [[UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
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-->'''Linny''': Now, [=MrPHDinEnglish=] has been telling me that I won't find anything wrong with ''her'' fanfiction. Apparently, her fanfiction is practically perfect in every way and if I were to read it I would have no choice but to give it a glowing review and heap praise upon her. Here's the thing, honey: I don't ''want'' to read your fanfiction and I certainly don't want to review it. Why, you ask? Here's the thing. You're being so obnoxious that I'm starting to ''hate'' you! And I wouldn't be able to review your fanfic objectively. I would ''try'' to find things wrong with it just so I could shoo you out! And that's not something I wanna do. That's why I don't review fanfictions written by people I know. I'm not gonna offer up a tainted review.
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-->'''Linny''': Now, [=MrPHDinEnglish=] has been telling me that I won't find anything wrong with ''her'' fanfiction. Apparently, her fanfiction is [[Film/MaryPoppins practically perfect in every way way]] and if I were to read it I would have no choice but to give it a glowing review and heap praise upon her. Here's the thing, honey: I don't ''want'' to read your fanfiction and I certainly don't want to review it. Why, you ask? Here's the thing. You're being so obnoxious that I'm starting to ''hate'' you! And I wouldn't be able to review your fanfic objectively. I would ''try'' to find things wrong with it just so I could shoo you out! And that's not something I wanna do. That's why I don't review fanfictions written by people I know. I'm not gonna offer up a tainted review.
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* {{Troll}}s leaving comments on her channel tend to get {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es from her, but the most memorable would probably be [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaBHXy7DFm8 this one]], for which she reserved an entire video--rather than just a preface of her normal videos--chewing out a young woman who had repeatedly hounded her to review her fanfic and [[{{Hypocrite}} refused to accept some criticisms she gave to her friend's fanfiction]].
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* {{Troll}}s leaving comments on her channel tend to get {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es from her, but the most memorable would probably be [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaBHXy7DFm8 this one]], for which she reserved an entire video--rather than just a preface of her normal videos--chewing out a young woman who had repeatedly hounded her to review her fanfic and [[{{Hypocrite}} refused to accept some criticisms she gave to her friend's fanfiction]].fanfiction]].
-->'''Linny''': Now, [=MrPHDinEnglish=] has been telling me that I won't find anything wrong with ''her'' fanfiction. Apparently, her fanfiction is practically perfect in every way and if I were to read it I would have no choice but to give it a glowing review and heap praise upon her. Here's the thing, honey: I don't ''want'' to read your fanfiction and I certainly don't want to review it. Why, you ask? Here's the thing. You're being so obnoxious that I'm starting to ''hate'' you! And I wouldn't be able to review your fanfic objectively. I would ''try'' to find things wrong with it just so I could shoo you out! And that's not something I wanna do. That's why I don't review fanfictions written by people I know. I'm not gonna offer up a tainted review.
-->'''Linny''': Now, [=MrPHDinEnglish=] has been telling me that I won't find anything wrong with ''her'' fanfiction. Apparently, her fanfiction is practically perfect in every way and if I were to read it I would have no choice but to give it a glowing review and heap praise upon her. Here's the thing, honey: I don't ''want'' to read your fanfiction and I certainly don't want to review it. Why, you ask? Here's the thing. You're being so obnoxious that I'm starting to ''hate'' you! And I wouldn't be able to review your fanfic objectively. I would ''try'' to find things wrong with it just so I could shoo you out! And that's not something I wanna do. That's why I don't review fanfictions written by people I know. I'm not gonna offer up a tainted review.
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* Trolls leaving comments on her channel tend to get {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es from her, but the most memorable would probably be [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaBHXy7DFm8 this one]], for which she reserved an entire video--rather than just a preface of her normal videos--chewing out a young woman who had repeatedly hounded her to review her fanfic and [[{{Hypocrite}} refused to accept some criticisms she gave to her friend's fanfiction]].
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* Trolls {{Troll}}s leaving comments on her channel tend to get {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es from her, but the most memorable would probably be [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaBHXy7DFm8 this one]], for which she reserved an entire video--rather than just a preface of her normal videos--chewing out a young woman who had repeatedly hounded her to review her fanfic and [[{{Hypocrite}} refused to accept some criticisms she gave to her friend's fanfiction]].
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
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-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]shower!]]
* Trolls leaving comments on her channel tend to get {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es from her, but the most memorable would probably be [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaBHXy7DFm8 this one]], for which she reserved an entire video--rather than just a preface of her normal videos--chewing out a young woman who had repeatedly hounded her to review her fanfic and [[{{Hypocrite}} refused to accept some criticisms she gave to her friend's fanfiction]].
* Trolls leaving comments on her channel tend to get {{The Reason You Suck Speech}}es from her, but the most memorable would probably be [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaBHXy7DFm8 this one]], for which she reserved an entire video--rather than just a preface of her normal videos--chewing out a young woman who had repeatedly hounded her to review her fanfic and [[{{Hypocrite}} refused to accept some criticisms she gave to her friend's fanfiction]].
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* The verbal smackdown she delivers to ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'' at the end of the review.
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* The verbal smackdown she delivers to ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'' at the end of the review.review.
* In her review of "Not So Suite Life", a ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction in which Edward Cullen ''rapes'' Bella and it's not treated as a big deal, the Critic repeatedly points out how horrible the story's message is, especially when Edward gives an awful excuse for his attack.
-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
* In her review of "Not So Suite Life", a ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' fanfiction in which Edward Cullen ''rapes'' Bella and it's not treated as a big deal, the Critic repeatedly points out how horrible the story's message is, especially when Edward gives an awful excuse for his attack.
-->'''Fanfiction Critic''': That's not how rape works! You don't just get uncontrollably horny and decide you need to rape the first pretty thing you see! It's just...I...[[NoJustNoReaction NO! No no no no no, I refuse to accept this!]] Listen, [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech author]]: Rape is committed by ''sick'' individuals who enjoy hurting others! Not by romantic vampires who are overcome by beauty and ''just can't control themselves!'' In a nutshell, the author is [[VictimBlaming blaming]] ''Bella'' because if she wasn't ''sooo beautiful'' [[WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou none of this would have ever happened]]. I just...[[ShowerOfAngst I need another shower!]]
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* The verbal smackdown she delivers to ''FanFic/BackToTheFrollo'' at the end of the review.
