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* 'Sparrowhawk' looked pretty cool riding to the rescue on his fluffy, long-eared llama.
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* 'Sparrowhawk' looked pretty cool riding to the rescue on his Arren's fluffy, long-eared llama.
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* 'Sparrowhawk' looked pretty cool riding to the rescue on his fluffy, long-eared llama.
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* 'Sparrowhawk' looked pretty cool riding to the rescue on his fluffy, long-eared llama. llama.
** His entrance when saving Arren and the other slaves.
** His entrance when saving Arren and the other slaves.
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** Then of course the moment when Arren finally manages to unsheathe the sword. He then proceeds to slice the man villains arm off!
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** Then of course the moment when Arren finally manages to unsheathe the sword. He then proceeds to slice the man villains main villain's arm off!
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** BURN!!!
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** BURN!!!BURN!!!
* What no love for Arren? He managed to beat down several guards pretty handily while rescuing Therru with a SHEATHED sword.
** Then of course the moment when Arren finally manages to unsheathe the sword. He then proceeds to slice the man villains arm off!
* What no love for Arren? He managed to beat down several guards pretty handily while rescuing Therru with a SHEATHED sword.
** Then of course the moment when Arren finally manages to unsheathe the sword. He then proceeds to slice the man villains arm off!
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* When Therru rises after the BigBad thinks hes killed her, with the sunrise right behind her no less!
--> '''Therru''': Shadow retrun to darkness!
--> '''Therru''': Shadow retrun to darkness!
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* When Therru rises after the BigBad thinks hes he's killed her, with the sunrise right behind her no less!
--> '''Therru''':Shadow retrun Shadow, return to darkness!
--> '''Therru''':
