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* The chapter title is called, “The Lemonade War” for a reason
** To elaborate Lincoln and Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne) set up lemonade stands across from each other. Hilarity ensues!
'''Chapter 4'''
* The fact that Lincoln sees Loud House fanfiction. It borderlines meta.
** To elaborate Lincoln and Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne) set up lemonade stands across from each other. Hilarity ensues!
'''Chapter 4'''
* The fact that Lincoln sees Loud House fanfiction. It borderlines meta.
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* The chapter title is called, “The Lemonade War” for a reason
** To elaborateLincoln and Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne) set up lemonade stands across from each other. Hilarity ensues!
'''Chapter 4'''
* The fact that Lincoln sees Loud House fanfiction. It borderlines meta.
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* The fact that Lincoln sees Loud House fanfiction. It borderlines meta.
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* The fact that Lincoln pulls a [[DeusExMachina Deus Ex Machina]] to win.
** Just like in the anime!
** Just like in the anime!
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* The fact that Lincoln pulls a [[DeusExMachina Deus Ex Machina]] DeusExMachina to win.
** Just like in the anime!
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* The chapter is called “Fun Times With Lynn Jr.” for a reason.
** Just a simple day, and that’s basically it actually
** Just a simple day, and that’s basically it actually
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* The chapter is called “Fun Times With Lynn Jr.” for a reason.
**reason. Just a simple day, and that’s basically it actually
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* Lincoln’s on her period… what’s awesome about that?
** Her big brother going out of his way to help make it suck as little as possible, thats what.
* The NoodleIncident that Loki (Lori), Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne), and Cristopher (Cristina) went on just sounds awesome.
** It involved determination, a flower, duct tape, a small pony. By the way, this is the second time they needed a pony.
** Her big brother going out of his way to help make it suck as little as possible, thats what.
* The NoodleIncident that Loki (Lori), Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne), and Cristopher (Cristina) went on just sounds awesome.
** It involved determination, a flower, duct tape, a small pony. By the way, this is the second time they needed a pony.
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* Lincoln’s on her period… what’s awesome about that?
**period. Her big brother going out of his way to help make it suck as little as possible, thats what.
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* The NoodleIncident that Loki (Lori), Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne), and Cristopher (Cristina) went on just soundsawesome.
**awesome. It involved determination, a flower, duct tape, a small pony. By the way, this is the second time they needed a pony.
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* The NoodleIncident that Loki (Lori), Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne), and Cristopher (Cristina) went on just sounds
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** Leif (Lana) and Levi (Lisa) have to clean the backyard. So what do they do? Create giant robots to fight!
*** It even ends with [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Raidraptor_-_Ultimate_Falcon RaidRaptor Ultimate Falcon]] fighting [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_81:_Superdreadnought_Rail_Cannon_Super_Dora A giant cannon]].
*** It even ends with [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Raidraptor_-_Ultimate_Falcon RaidRaptor Ultimate Falcon]] fighting [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_81:_Superdreadnought_Rail_Cannon_Super_Dora A giant cannon]].
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** Leif (Lana) and Levi (Lisa) have to clean the backyard. So what do they do? Create giant robots to fight!
***fight! It even ends with [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Raidraptor_-_Ultimate_Falcon RaidRaptor Ultimate Falcon]] fighting [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_81:_Superdreadnought_Rail_Cannon_Super_Dora A giant cannon]].
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* Nell, after saying goodbye to Linka easily curbstomps another hunter who disrespected her.
** In Dance Dance Revolution no less!
** In Dance Dance Revolution no less!
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** Inher in Dance Dance Revolution no less!
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* The author wrote chapter 7 even though his writing hand was bandaged up. He cites [[Videogame/{{Undertale}} DETERMINATION!]] for why he worked anyway.
** It's cited once again in chapter 19, as the author wrote it despite his computer meeting a tragic fate.
** It comes up a third time in chapter 35, as the author's glasses broke while he was writing it and was forced to use an old set.
* The author wrote chapter 7 even though his writing hand was bandaged up. He cites [[Videogame/{{Undertale}} DETERMINATION!]] for why he worked anyway.
** It's cited once again in chapter 19, as the author wrote it despite his computer meeting a tragic fate.
** It comes up a third time in chapter 35, as the author's glasses broke while he was writing it and was forced to use an old set.
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** To elaborate [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne) set up lemonade stands across from each other. Hilarity ensues!]]
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* Lincoln vs [[spoiler: Trevor]] in card games on motorcycles!
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* Lincoln vs[[spoiler: Trevor]] Trevor in card games on motorcycles!
* Lincoln vs
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* Luke and Nyla working together [[spoiler: to clear out all of the hunters attracted by the beacon]].
* Luke and Nyla working together [[spoiler: to clear out all of the hunters attracted by the beacon]].
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* [[spoiler: After getting the parts, Lincoln asks Lars how he would write the scene. Cue them doing what he would write... and succeeding.]]
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* Luke and Nyla working together[[spoiler: to clear out all of the hunters attracted by the beacon]].beacon.
* Luke and Nyla working together
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* Lyle vs Lincoln and later [[spoiler: Lincoln vs Linka]]. It's filled with pure awesome!
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* Just how nonchalant Lincoln is when he asks GLaDOS [=GLaDOS=] to filter out the ships.
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** It comes up a third time in chapter 35, as the author's glasses broke while he was writing it and was forced to use an old set.
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* The final showdown between Lincoln and William begins. The first challenge: a race over a 50 miles long track, where both of them are being chased by angry dogs and [[ItMakesSenseInContext have to collect newspapers along the way]].
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* The final showdown between Lincoln and William begins. The first challenge: a race over a 50 miles long track, where both of them are being chased by angry dogs and [[ItMakesSenseInContext have to collect newspapers along the way]].way]].
'''Chapter 35'''
* Being the GrandFinale, the chapter is one awesome moment after another, with all the Loud siblings and Lincolns friends defeating their opponents, and Lincoln himself finally beating William and getting the Macguffing back.
'''Chapter 35'''
* Being the GrandFinale, the chapter is one awesome moment after another, with all the Loud siblings and Lincolns friends defeating their opponents, and Lincoln himself finally beating William and getting the Macguffing back.
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* Finally, the truth is revealed, and everyone decides to follow Lincoln to save the world!
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* Finally, the truth is revealed, and everyone decides to follow Lincoln to save the world!world!
'''Chapter 34'''
* The final showdown between Lincoln and William begins. The first challenge: a race over a 50 miles long track, where both of them are being chased by angry dogs and [[ItMakesSenseInContext have to collect newspapers along the way]].
'''Chapter 34'''
* The final showdown between Lincoln and William begins. The first challenge: a race over a 50 miles long track, where both of them are being chased by angry dogs and [[ItMakesSenseInContext have to collect newspapers along the way]].
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* Near the end of the chapter, Lisa and Levi finish the interdimensional bridge, allowing the Loud Sisters to enter dimension 63i, where they immediately make it clear they mean business when it comes to getting Lincoln back.
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* Near the end of the chapter, Lisa and Levi finish the interdimensional bridge, allowing the Loud Sisters to enter dimension 63i, where they immediately make it clear they mean business when it comes to getting Lincoln back.back.
'''Chapter 29'''
* Everyone manages to infiltrate and disrupt the citadel with only the smallest amount of planning. Made even cooler that they're doing it to fight Lyle!
'''Chapter 30'''
* Lyle vs Lincoln and later [[spoiler: Lincoln vs Linka]]. It's filled with pure awesome!
* William's Pushment for Linka. Nuff said
'''Chapter 31'''
* Finally, the truth is revealed, and everyone decides to follow Lincoln to save the world!
'''Chapter 29'''
* Everyone manages to infiltrate and disrupt the citadel with only the smallest amount of planning. Made even cooler that they're doing it to fight Lyle!
'''Chapter 30'''
* Lyle vs Lincoln and later [[spoiler: Lincoln vs Linka]]. It's filled with pure awesome!
* William's Pushment for Linka. Nuff said
'''Chapter 31'''
* Finally, the truth is revealed, and everyone decides to follow Lincoln to save the world!
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* At the end of their act, Lane adds one more trick- ranking up his actor!
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* At the end of their act, Lane adds one more trick- ranking up his actor!actor!
'''Chapter 28'''
*Near the end of the chapter, Lisa and Levi finish the interdimensional bridge, allowing the Loud Sisters to enter dimension 63i, where they immediately make it clear they mean business when it comes to getting Lincoln back.
'''Chapter 28'''
*Near the end of the chapter, Lisa and Levi finish the interdimensional bridge, allowing the Loud Sisters to enter dimension 63i, where they immediately make it clear they mean business when it comes to getting Lincoln back.
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** Made more awesome when he takes charge.
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** Made more awesome when he takes charge.charge.
'''Chapter 25'''
* Ron Andy and Christopher fight Lyle... and don't end up carded
** She just shows how awesome she is!
* Lisa finishes a way to talk to the other universe!
'''Chapter 26'''
* Loni is known to be good at woodshed in this universe. What does Lincoln find him doing? Curving art into the tree in the front yard!
* Lynn and Loni's bonding moment at the end. It doubles at Heartwarming!
'''Chapter 27'''
* Lane's tricks by far!
* Lane finally comes to terms with what happened, [[spoiler:and how it wasn't his fault]].
* At the end of their act, Lane adds one more trick- ranking up his actor!
'''Chapter 25'''
* Ron Andy and Christopher fight Lyle... and don't end up carded
** She just shows how awesome she is!
* Lisa finishes a way to talk to the other universe!
'''Chapter 26'''
* Loni is known to be good at woodshed in this universe. What does Lincoln find him doing? Curving art into the tree in the front yard!
* Lynn and Loni's bonding moment at the end. It doubles at Heartwarming!
'''Chapter 27'''
* Lane's tricks by far!
* Lane finally comes to terms with what happened, [[spoiler:and how it wasn't his fault]].
* At the end of their act, Lane adds one more trick- ranking up his actor!
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* Likewise, Lincoln and Leif defeating a level three hunter in the final round.
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* Likewise, Lincoln and Leif defeating a level three hunter in the final round.round.
'''Chapter 24'''
* Loki's nonchalant dodging.
** Made more awesome when he takes charge.
'''Chapter 24'''
* Loki's nonchalant dodging.
** Made more awesome when he takes charge.
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** When Lincoln found him, Levi was standing in front of crowd, why? Because he was the Cosmic Brain!
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** When Lincoln found him, Levi was standing in front of crowd, why? Because he was the Cosmic Brain!Brain!
'''Chapter 23'''
* The duel between Lincoln/Linka and Leif vs Chandler and Jackson. Especially considering that Linka is using the only deck her dad would allow her to use, filled with rather silly monsters, but they win anyway.
*Likewise, Lincoln and Leif defeating a level three hunter in the final round.
'''Chapter 23'''
* The duel between Lincoln/Linka and Leif vs Chandler and Jackson. Especially considering that Linka is using the only deck her dad would allow her to use, filled with rather silly monsters, but they win anyway.
*Likewise, Lincoln and Leif defeating a level three hunter in the final round.
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* A subtle example, but when Lisa actually manages to bluff Linka into revealing she's not Lincoln. While Lisa ''is'' a genius, she's still going up against a person who has not only managed to convince everybody that she's actually Lincoln, but has managed to get away with it even after she was demoralized by Lincoln's speech. ''And she completely made a fool of her by asking her a simple question''.
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* A subtle example, but when Lisa actually manages to bluff Linka into revealing she's not Lincoln. While Lisa ''is'' a genius, she's still going up against a person who has not only managed to convince everybody that she's actually Lincoln, but has managed to get away with it even after she was demoralized by Lincoln's speech. ''And she completely made a fool of her by asking her a simple question''.question''.
'''Chapter 22'''
* Lincoln joining Levi at the convention without hesitating.
** When Lincoln found him, Levi was standing in front of crowd, why? Because he was the Cosmic Brain!
'''Chapter 22'''
* Lincoln joining Levi at the convention without hesitating.
** When Lincoln found him, Levi was standing in front of crowd, why? Because he was the Cosmic Brain!
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'''Chapter 21'''
* A subtle example, but when Lisa actually manages to bluff Linka into revealing she's not Lincoln. While Lisa ''is'' a genius, she's still going up against a person who has not only managed to convince everybody that she's actually Lincoln, but has managed to get away with it even after she was demoralized by Lincoln's speech. ''And she completely made a fool of her by asking her a simple question''.
'''Chapter 21'''
* A subtle example, but when Lisa actually manages to bluff Linka into revealing she's not Lincoln. While Lisa ''is'' a genius, she's still going up against a person who has not only managed to convince everybody that she's actually Lincoln, but has managed to get away with it even after she was demoralized by Lincoln's speech. ''And she completely made a fool of her by asking her a simple question''.
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'''Chapter 20'''
* Lincoln finally giving Linka the TheReasonYouSuckSpeech she deserved for screwing up his life, and never trying to change her own life when she was still in her own body.
'''Chapter 20'''
* Lincoln finally giving Linka the TheReasonYouSuckSpeech she deserved for screwing up his life, and never trying to change her own life when she was still in her own body.
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** It's cited once again in chapter 19, as the author wrote it despite his computer meeting a tragic fate.
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'''Chapter 19'''
* We find out that both couples really do like each other!
'''Chapter 19'''
* We find out that both couples really do like each other!
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'''Chapter 18'''
* Loki going full [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Brother mode]] and defeating Alex and Aeif, thus saving his family from being sealed.
'''Chapter 18'''
* Loki going full [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Brother mode]] and defeating Alex and Aeif, thus saving his family from being sealed.
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'''Chapter 17'''
* Ron asking Linka to the dance.
* Everyone dancing with their partners in the end.
'''Chapter 17'''
* Ron asking Linka to the dance.
* Everyone dancing with their partners in the end.
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'''Chapter 16'''
* Linka follows Leon's teleporting without missing a beat.
* Linka putting Leon and Levi to bed.
'''Chapter 16'''
* Linka follows Leon's teleporting without missing a beat.
* Linka putting Leon and Levi to bed.
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'''Chapter 15'''
* How good Lars is at breaking into the school. (It's implied that he's done it before).
* [[spoiler: After getting the parts, Lincoln asks Lars how he would write the scene. Cue them doing what he would write... and succeeding.]]
* Luke and Nyla working together [[spoiler: to clear out all of the hunters attracted by the beacon]].
* Nell, after saying goodbye to Linka easily curbstomps another hunter who disrespected her.
** [[spoiler: In Dance Dance Revolution no less!]]
'''Chapter 15'''
* How good Lars is at breaking into the school. (It's implied that he's done it before).
* [[spoiler: After getting the parts, Lincoln asks Lars how he would write the scene. Cue them doing what he would write... and succeeding.]]
* Luke and Nyla working together [[spoiler: to clear out all of the hunters attracted by the beacon]].
* Nell, after saying goodbye to Linka easily curbstomps another hunter who disrespected her.
** [[spoiler: In Dance Dance Revolution no less!]]
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'''Chapter 14'''
* Ron Andy, Lynn, Lars, Lexx and Leif standing up for Lincoln.
'''Chapter 14'''
* Ron Andy, Lynn, Lars, Lexx and Leif standing up for Lincoln.
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* Leif blasting Lexx with an [[https://youtu.be/LGUAzv3lM2k orbital blast]]!
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'''Chapter 13'''
* Leif blasting Lexx with an [[https://youtu.be/LGUAzv3lM2k orbital blast]]!
** Doubles as heartwarming because they make up immediately after that.
'''Chapter 13'''
* Leif blasting Lexx with an [[https://youtu.be/LGUAzv3lM2k orbital blast]]!
** Doubles as heartwarming because they make up immediately after that.
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‘’’Chapter 1’’’
* The fact that Lynn and Leif chase Lincoln and Claudia (Clyde), through the entire town, and the girls don’t give up!
* During the chase Claudia [[ThrowTheBookAtThem throws a “Really Big Textbook”]] at them.
‘’’Chapter 2’’’
* The play, it’s random, but short and to the point!
‘’’Chapter 3’’’
* The chapter title is called, “The Lemonade War” for a reason
** To elaborate [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne) set up lemonade stands across from each other. Hilarity ensues!]]
‘’’Chapter 4’’’
* The fact that Lincoln sees Loud House fanfiction. It borderlines meta.
‘’’Chapter 5’’’
* This is the author’s favorite chapter for a reason. (He’s a Yugioh fan).
* [[anime/Yugioh5ds Card games on motorcycles!]]
* It’s implied that [[spoiler: Trevor]] defeated every Loud brother before confronting Lincoln.
* Lincoln vs [[spoiler: Trevor]] in card games on motorcycles!
* The fact that Lincoln pulls a DeusExMachinae to win.
** Just like in the anime!
‘’’Chapter 6’’’
* Lincoln recounting just how crazy things had been.
* Later that chapter, Lincoln countering Chandler (F) with ease.
* Levi breaking down his suspicions
‘’’Chapter 7’’’
* The chapter is called “Fun Times With Lynn Jr.” for a reason.
** Just a simple day, and that’s basically it actually
* The ShipTease
‘’’Chapter 8’’’
* Just how accepting the sisters are
* Lincoln starts the chapter by playing chess with the Guardian Of Dimensions!
‘’’Chapter 9’’’
* Lincoln’s on her period… what’s awesome about that?
* The NoodleIncident that Loki (Lori), Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne), and Cristopher (Cristina) went on just sounds awesome.
** It involved determination, a flower, duct tape, a small pony. By the way, this is the second time they needed a pony.
‘’’Chapter 10’’’
* The fact that we see what each of the brothers (Minus Loni (Leni) because he’s just decorating) do to prepare is just awesome.
** Loki (Lori) works a military wedding for some cash
** Luke (Luna) spends time with Leon (Lily) just writing a song
** Lane (Luan) and Lynn (M) enter an eggnog drinking contest to get Linka a special Teddy Bear… and end up challenging their dimensional counterparts.
** Lars (Lucy) and Lexx (Lola) have the most mundane, they go to get a Christmas tree and meet with their dimensional counterparts.
** Leif (Lana) and Levi (Lisa) have to clean the backyard. So what do they do? Create giant robots to fight!
*** It even ends with [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Raidraptor_-_Ultimate_Falcon RaidRaptor Ultimate Falcon]] fighting [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_81:_Superdreadnought_Rail_Cannon_Super_Dora A giant cannon]].
‘’’Chapter 11’’’
* [[https://youtu.be/vOBKxUT9Da4?t=49s The fact that this is how Lincoln challenges the second hunter!]]
* Lincoln plays Luke (Luna) in a video game… and wins!
‘’’Chapter 12’’’
* Just how nonchalant Lincoln is when he asks GLaDOS to filter out the ships.
* The author wrote chapter 7 even though his writing hand was bandaged up. He cites [[Videogame/{{Undertale}} DETERMINATION!]] for why he worked anyway.
!! Chapters
‘’’Chapter 1’’’
* The fact that Lynn and Leif chase Lincoln and Claudia (Clyde), through the entire town, and the girls don’t give up!
* During the chase Claudia [[ThrowTheBookAtThem throws a “Really Big Textbook”]] at them.
‘’’Chapter 2’’’
* The play, it’s random, but short and to the point!
‘’’Chapter 3’’’
* The chapter title is called, “The Lemonade War” for a reason
** To elaborate [[spoiler: Lincoln and Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne) set up lemonade stands across from each other. Hilarity ensues!]]
‘’’Chapter 4’’’
* The fact that Lincoln sees Loud House fanfiction. It borderlines meta.
‘’’Chapter 5’’’
* This is the author’s favorite chapter for a reason. (He’s a Yugioh fan).
* [[anime/Yugioh5ds Card games on motorcycles!]]
* It’s implied that [[spoiler: Trevor]] defeated every Loud brother before confronting Lincoln.
* Lincoln vs [[spoiler: Trevor]] in card games on motorcycles!
* The fact that Lincoln pulls a DeusExMachinae to win.
** Just like in the anime!
‘’’Chapter 6’’’
* Lincoln recounting just how crazy things had been.
* Later that chapter, Lincoln countering Chandler (F) with ease.
* Levi breaking down his suspicions
‘’’Chapter 7’’’
* The chapter is called “Fun Times With Lynn Jr.” for a reason.
** Just a simple day, and that’s basically it actually
* The ShipTease
‘’’Chapter 8’’’
* Just how accepting the sisters are
* Lincoln starts the chapter by playing chess with the Guardian Of Dimensions!
‘’’Chapter 9’’’
* Lincoln’s on her period… what’s awesome about that?
* The NoodleIncident that Loki (Lori), Ron Andy (Ronnie Anne), and Cristopher (Cristina) went on just sounds awesome.
** It involved determination, a flower, duct tape, a small pony. By the way, this is the second time they needed a pony.
‘’’Chapter 10’’’
* The fact that we see what each of the brothers (Minus Loni (Leni) because he’s just decorating) do to prepare is just awesome.
** Loki (Lori) works a military wedding for some cash
** Luke (Luna) spends time with Leon (Lily) just writing a song
** Lane (Luan) and Lynn (M) enter an eggnog drinking contest to get Linka a special Teddy Bear… and end up challenging their dimensional counterparts.
** Lars (Lucy) and Lexx (Lola) have the most mundane, they go to get a Christmas tree and meet with their dimensional counterparts.
** Leif (Lana) and Levi (Lisa) have to clean the backyard. So what do they do? Create giant robots to fight!
*** It even ends with [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Raidraptor_-_Ultimate_Falcon RaidRaptor Ultimate Falcon]] fighting [[http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_81:_Superdreadnought_Rail_Cannon_Super_Dora A giant cannon]].
‘’’Chapter 11’’’
* [[https://youtu.be/vOBKxUT9Da4?t=49s The fact that this is how Lincoln challenges the second hunter!]]
* Lincoln plays Luke (Luna) in a video game… and wins!
‘’’Chapter 12’’’
* Just how nonchalant Lincoln is when he asks GLaDOS to filter out the ships.
