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* The entire debut performance of "Romeo and Juliet" in its entirity, from Wabash's bombastic introduction through to Viola and Shakespeare bringing the entire house to tears with the tragic finale. After Wabash delivers the epilogue, there is at first no clapping because the entire audience is choked with tears, but when it comes the applause is a ''storm.'' The entire movie had been leading up to this, the debut of one of the pivotal pieces of English theatre and they did not disappoint.
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* The entire debut performance of "Romeo and Juliet" in its entirity, from Wabash's bombastic introduction through to Viola and Shakespeare bringing the entire house to tears with the tragic finale. After Wabash delivers the epilogue, there is at first no clapping because the entire audience is choked with tears, but when it comes the applause is a ''storm.'' The entire movie had been leading up to this, the debut of one of the pivotal pieces of English theatre and they did not disappoint.
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* Shakespeare dueling Lord Wessex and winning through acting.
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* Shakespeare dueling Lord Wessex and winning through acting.acting.
* The entire debut performance of "Romeo and Juliet" in its entirity, from Wabash's bombastic introduction through to Viola and Shakespeare bringing the entire house to tears with the tragic finale. After Wabash delivers the epilogue, there is at first no clapping because the entire audience is choked with tears, but when it comes the applause is a ''storm.'' The entire movie had been leading up to this, the debut of one of the pivotal pieces of English theatre and they did not disappoint.
* The entire debut performance of "Romeo and Juliet" in its entirity, from Wabash's bombastic introduction through to Viola and Shakespeare bringing the entire house to tears with the tragic finale. After Wabash delivers the epilogue, there is at first no clapping because the entire audience is choked with tears, but when it comes the applause is a ''storm.'' The entire movie had been leading up to this, the debut of one of the pivotal pieces of English theatre and they did not disappoint.
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* Meta-wise: all of modern English literature was at stake with this one play. With its success, Shakespeare becomes the playwright we know him to be, and ''Romeo and Juliet'' becomes a major template of romantic tragedies with the characters becoming the most beloved archetypes that actors live to play onstage.
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* Dame Judi Dench as Queen Elizabeth. "But I know something of a woman in a man's position. Yes, by God, ''I do know about that."''
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* Dame Judi Dench as Queen Elizabeth. "But I know something of a woman in a man's position. Yes, by God, ''I do know about that."''"''[[note]][[WebVideo/BrowsHeldHigh "Great job, Judi - have all the Oscars." (An air-cannon then fires a torrent of Oscars at her.)]][[/note]]
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* After Henslowe gets [[spoiler:Viola]] to go onstage as Juliet in place of Sam (and after he's spent the film trying to get Shakespeare to follow tradition):
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* After Henslowe gets [[spoiler:Viola]] Viola to go onstage as Juliet in place of Sam (and after he's spent the film trying to get Shakespeare to follow tradition):
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* Meta-wise: all of modern English literature was at stake with this one play. [[spoiler: With its success, Shakespeare becomes the playwright we know him to be, and ''Romeo and Juliet'' becomes a major template of romantic tragedies with the characters becoming the most beloved archetypes that actors live to play onstage.]]
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* The brawl between the Rose and the Curtain thanks to a misunderstanding, with both sides using swords(real and props)to fight back, with Viola even bludgeoning one of the Curtain's men with a wooden stanchion. At first, [[AllPartoftheShow Fennyman is amused]], but when he realizes that this is truly happening and the cast of the Rose are being attacked, he has his muscle step in to help, even decking Burbage with a prop skull at the end in fury. Luckily, [[DefeatMeansFriendship, things end up working out for both sides.]]
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* The brawl between the Rose and the Curtain thanks to a misunderstanding, with both sides using swords(real and props)to fight back, with Viola even bludgeoning one of the Curtain's men with a wooden stanchion. At first, [[AllPartoftheShow Fennyman is amused]], but when he realizes that this is truly happening and the cast of the Rose are being attacked, he has his muscle step in to help, even decking Burbage with a prop skull at the end in fury. Luckily, [[DefeatMeansFriendship, [[DefeatMeansFriendship things end up working out for both sides.]]
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* The brawl between the Rose and the Curtain thanks to a misunderstanding, with both sides using swords(real and props)to fight back, with Viola even bludgeoning one of the Curtain's men with a wooden stanchion. At first, [[AllPartoftheShow Fennyman is amused]], but when he realizes that this is truly happening and the cast of the Rose are being attacked, he has his muscle step in to help, even decking Burbage with a prop skull at the end in fury. Luckily, [[DefeatMeansFriendship, things end up working out for both sides.]]
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* Dame Judi Dench as Queen Elizabeth. "But I know something of a woman in a man's position. Yes, by God, I do know about that."
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* Dame Judi Dench as Queen Elizabeth. "But I know something of a woman in a man's position. Yes, by God, I ''I do know about that.""''
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** Every second she is on screen. She didn't win an Academy Award for nothing. For example, her agreeing to the proposed marriage. Made better by the fact that she's coolly telling him his fiance fiancé is cheating on him and ordering him to marry her anyway at the same time.
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* Shakespeare dueling Lord Wessex and winning.
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-->'''Alleyn''': [''drawing his sword''] [[IncomingHam Silence, you dog!]] I am Hieronimo. I am Tamburlaine. I am Faustus. I am Barabbas, the Jew of Malta. ...Oh yes, [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg Master Will, I am Henry. The Sixth.]] ...What is the play, and what is my part?
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-->'''Alleyn''': [''drawing his sword''] [[IncomingHam Silence, you dog!]] I am Hieronimo. I am Tamburlaine. I am Faustus. I am Barabbas, the Jew of Malta. ...Oh yes, [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg Oh yes, Master Will, I am Henry. The Sixth.]] ...What is the play, and what is my part?
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-->'''Alleyn''': [''drawing his sword''] Silence, you dog! I am Hieronimo. I am Tamburlaine. I am Faustus. I am Barabbas, the Jew of Malta. ...Oh yes, Master Will, I am Henry. The Sixth. ...What is the play, and what is my part?
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-->'''Alleyn''': [''drawing his sword''] [[IncomingHam Silence, you dog! dog!]] I am Hieronimo. I am Tamburlaine. I am Faustus. I am Barabbas, the Jew of Malta. ...Oh yes, [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg Master Will, I am Henry. The Sixth. ...]] ...What is the play, and what is my part?
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* Meta-wise: all of modern English literature was at stake with this one play. [[spoiler: With its success, Shakespeare becomes the playwright we know him to be, and ''Romeo and Juliet'' becomes a major template of romantic tragedies with the characters becoming the most beloved archetypes that actors live to play onstage.]]
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* Meta-wise: all of modern English literature was at stake with this one play. [[spoiler: With its success, Shakespeare becomes the playwright we know him to be, and ''Romeo and Juliet'' becomes a major template of romantic tragedies with the characters becoming the most beloved archetypes that actors live to play onstage.]]]]
* Shakespeare dueling Lord Wessex and winning.
* Shakespeare dueling Lord Wessex and winning.
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* Ned Alleyn’s entrance. Fennyman, who we know to be a brutal and mercenary character, has been snarling at all the actors and intimidating them with the power of his money. Then Ned swoops in with the regular company and crushes Fennyman to a fanboy with the sheer megawatt power of his ego:
-->'''Fennyman''': Who is this?
-->'''Alleyn''': [''drawing his sword''] Silence, you dog! I am Hieronimo. I am Tamburlaine. I am Faustus. I am Barabbas, the Jew of Malta. ...Oh yes, Master Will, I am Henry. The Sixth. ...What is the play, and what is my part?
-->'''Fennyman''': Um, one moment, sir?
-->'''Alleyn''': WHO ARE YOU?
-->'''Fennyman''': I’m, um...I’m the money.
-->'''Alleyn''': Then you may remain, as long as you remain ''silent''. Pay ''attention''. And you will see how ''genius'' creates a ''legend''.
-->'''Fennyman''': [''bowing humbly''] Thank you sir.
-->'''Fennyman''': Who is this?
-->'''Alleyn''': [''drawing his sword''] Silence, you dog! I am Hieronimo. I am Tamburlaine. I am Faustus. I am Barabbas, the Jew of Malta. ...Oh yes, Master Will, I am Henry. The Sixth. ...What is the play, and what is my part?
-->'''Fennyman''': Um, one moment, sir?
-->'''Alleyn''': WHO ARE YOU?
-->'''Fennyman''': I’m, um...I’m the money.
-->'''Alleyn''': Then you may remain, as long as you remain ''silent''. Pay ''attention''. And you will see how ''genius'' creates a ''legend''.
-->'''Fennyman''': [''bowing humbly''] Thank you sir.
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** And, of course, her entrance. Tilney is reading everyone on stage the riot act for allowing Viola to act, and tells them that they'll all be put in jail, but then - "Mr. Tilney!" Everyone immediately bows or curtseys as Elizabeth reveals herself in the audience.
-->'''Elizabeth:''' Have a care with my name, you'll wear it out.
-->'''Elizabeth:''' Have a care with my name, you'll wear it out.
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-->'''HENSLOWE:''' (casual shrug) See you in jail.
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-->'''HENSLOWE:''' (casual shrug) See you in jail.jail.
* Meta-wise: all of modern English literature was at stake with this one play. [[spoiler: With its success, Shakespeare becomes the playwright we know him to be, and ''Romeo and Juliet'' becomes a major template of romantic tragedies with the characters becoming the most beloved archetypes that actors live to play onstage.]]
* Meta-wise: all of modern English literature was at stake with this one play. [[spoiler: With its success, Shakespeare becomes the playwright we know him to be, and ''Romeo and Juliet'' becomes a major template of romantic tragedies with the characters becoming the most beloved archetypes that actors live to play onstage.]]
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** When she takes the stage to review the Master's complaint that Viola is breaking the law performing as a man. Viola first curtsies as a woman would in the presence of a queen, Elizabeth wordlessly conveys that Viola is doing it wrong, so Viola swiftly recovers and bows the way a man would in order to maintain her gender disguise. The way Dench ''flickers'' her eyes to get the signal across... acting!
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** Every second she is on screen. She didn't win an Academy Award for nothing.
--> "Have her then, but you're a lordly fool. She's been plucked since I saw her last and not by you. Takes a woman to know it."
--> "Have her then, but you're a lordly fool. She's been plucked since I saw her last and not by you. Takes a woman to know it."
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* Burbage's little bit of crow-eating, and subsequent awesomme, after Tilney closes the Rose:
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--->'''Burbage:''' The Master of the Revels despises us all for vagrants and peddlers of bombast. But my father, James Burbage, had the first license to make a company of players from Her Majesty, and he drew from poets the literature of the age. We must show them that we are men of parts. Will Shakespeare has a play. I have a theatre. The Curtain is yours.
* Wabash's amazing everyone by overcoming his stutter and [[StutterStop delivering the opening monologue with perfect diction]].
--->'''Burbage:''' The Master of the Revels despises us all for vagrants and peddlers of bombast. But my father, James Burbage, had the first license to make a company of players from Her Majesty, and he drew from poets the literature of the age. We must show them that we are men of parts. Will Shakespeare has a play. I have a theatre. The Curtain is yours.
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--->'''Burbage:''' -->'''Burbage:''' The Master of the Revels despises us all for vagrants and peddlers of bombast. But my father, James Burbage, had the first license to make a company of players from Her Majesty, and he drew from poets the literature of the age. We must show them that we are men of parts. Will Shakespeare has a play. I have a theatre. The Curtain is yours.
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** When Viola speaks up in defense of the theater, Wessex tries to get on Elizabeth's good side by disagreeing with her, claiming that he'd wager his entire fortune. Elizabeth coolly responds, "I thought you were here because you had none."
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* After Henslowe gets [[spoiler:Viola]] to go onstage as Juliet in place of Sam (and after he's spent the film trying to get Shakespeare to follow tradition):
-->'''BURBAGE:''' We'll all be put in the clink.
-->'''HENSLOWE:''' (casual shrug) See you in jail.
-->'''BURBAGE:''' We'll all be put in the clink.
-->'''HENSLOWE:''' (casual shrug) See you in jail.
