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-->‘…More of it, it was my order not to cripple you. I can take it back. Do you want it? Do you want to die here naked, in blood and torment?’
-->‘Ela,’ Beren tried to chuckle. ‘I was born naked, in blood and torment. What’s there to surprise me?’
-->‘Ela,’ Beren tried to chuckle. ‘I was born naked, in blood and torment. What’s there to surprise me?’
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-->‘Ela,’
-->'Ela,' Beren tried to chuckle.
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** Morgoth suggested that Silmaril would burn Beren's hand to the bone, because all humans are marred. He was wrong.
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* Beren making comments and jokes in torture chamber.
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* Beren making comments and jokes in torture chamber.
chamber. (Translated by [[http://arashi-opera.livejournal.com/ Tauriel]])
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* Beren claims the Silmarill from Morgoth, making a bet that he could take the stone and walk ten steps with it.
** Morgoth suggested that Silmarill would burn Beren's hand to the bone, because all humans are marred. He was wrong.
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** Morgoth suggested that
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** Morgoth suggested that Silmarill would burn Beren's hand to the bone, becaue all humans are distorted. He was wrong.
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** Morgoth suggested that Silmarill would burn Beren's hand to the bone, becaue because all humans are distorted.marred. He was wrong.
