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** The best thing about the giant wings of fire? It was completely unnecessary. She only did it to impress her partner. It worked].
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** The best thing about the giant wings of fire? It was completely unnecessary. She only did it to impress her partner. It worked].worked.
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** Actually a Martian detector. Built by Martians.
* The entire hidden the Martain fleet showing up literally on Haas' front door when Mars beleives Caprice has been killed.
* The entire hidden the Martain fleet showing up literally on Haas' front door when Mars beleives Caprice has been killed.
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** Actually a Martian detector. Built by Martians.
Martians. Because only Martian tech can detect [[{{Nanomachines}} Martian tech]]...
* The entirehidden the Martain fleet showing up literally on Haas' front door when Mars beleives believes Caprice has been killed.killed by his robots.
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* Benjamin's YouCanBarelyStand moment during the final confrontation with Virgil Haas.
* The finale: due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat -- if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.
* The comic ends with Caprice recalling what for her is, InUniverse, as much of an awesome moment as it's for the readers.
* The finale: due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat -- if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.
* The comic ends with Caprice recalling what for her is, InUniverse, as much of an awesome moment as it's for the readers.
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* Benjamin's YouCanBarelyStand moment during the final confrontation with Virgil Haas.
* The finale:Haas: due to his wounds, wound (inflicted by Haas specifically to stop our heroes), Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat -- if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.
* ** The comic ends with Caprice recalling what for her is, the above mentioned moment, which he regards, InUniverse, as much of an awesome moment as it's for the readers.readers do.
* The finale:
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* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat -- if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
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* Also, the The finale: [[spoiler:due due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat -- if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
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** Even better? It was previously established that Mars had signed a treaty preventing them from deploying military force [[ExactWords beyond the orbit of Deimos.]]
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** Even better? It was previously established that Mars had signed a treaty preventing them from deploying military force [[ExactWords beyond the orbit of Deimos.]]]] Nothing was ever said about simply ''moving'' the orbit of Deimos to another planet.
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* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat - if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
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* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat - -- if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
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** The best thing about the giant wings of fire? It was completely unnecessary. She only did it to impress her partner. [[CaptainObvious It worked]].
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** The best thing about the giant wings of fire? It was completely unnecessary. She only did it to impress her partner. [[CaptainObvious It worked]].worked].
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-->'''Caprice: ''' ''Courage''is getting up and walking across the room when you're horribly injured, so that a mad scientist can reach his denouement without more bloodshed.
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-->'''Caprice: ''' ''Courage''is ''Courage'' is getting up and walking across the room when you're horribly injured, so that a mad scientist can reach his denouement without more bloodshed.
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* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat - if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
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* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat - if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]]]
* The comic ends with Caprice recalling what for her is, InUniverse, as much of an awesome moment as it's for the readers.
-->'''Caprice: ''' ''Courage''is getting up and walking across the room when you're horribly injured, so that a mad scientist can reach his denouement without more bloodshed.
* The comic ends with Caprice recalling what for her is, InUniverse, as much of an awesome moment as it's for the readers.
-->'''Caprice: ''' ''Courage''is getting up and walking across the room when you're horribly injured, so that a mad scientist can reach his denouement without more bloodshed.
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* Benjamin and Caprice entering the Martian atmosphere on ''wings of FIRE!''
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* Benjamin and Caprice entering the Martian atmosphere on ''wings ofFIRE!''FIRE!'' (The main characters re-entering the atmosphere of Mars...without a ship. And surviving. ''While using giant wings of fire to slow their descent.'')
** The best thing about the giant wings of fire? It was completely unnecessary. She only did it to impress her partner. [[CaptainObvious It worked]].
* [[http://project-apollo.net/mos/mos235.html "That noise, gentlemen... is the sound of CONQUEST!"]] (Link contains a big spoiler.)
* Don't ever piss off Martian tech. [[http://project-apollo.net/mos/mos399.html Just don't]].
** For the record, that is basically a metal detector.
** Actually a Martian detector. Built by Martians.
* Benjamin and Caprice entering the Martian atmosphere on ''wings of
** The best thing about the giant wings of fire? It was completely unnecessary. She only did it to impress her partner. [[CaptainObvious It worked]].
* [[http://project-apollo.net/mos/mos235.html "That noise, gentlemen... is the sound of CONQUEST!"]] (Link contains a big spoiler.)
* Don't ever piss off Martian tech. [[http://project-apollo.net/mos/mos399.html Just don't]].
** For the record, that is basically a metal detector.
** Actually a Martian detector. Built by Martians.
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* Benjamin's YouCanBarelyStand moment during the final confrontation with Virgil Haas.Haas.
* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat - if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
* Also, the finale: [[spoiler:due to his wounds, Benjamin barely has the strength to stand, but gets up anyway just so he can fulfill the ChaseScene requirement of the memetic track. In other words: the BigBad's been beaten, he's surrounded, but he's at the point of his [[ScienceRelatedMemeticDisorder mad science mental illness]] where he needs a ChaseScene to properly play it out. Without one, he'll probably go permanently insane or at least be harder to treat - if he doesn't decide to go out in a blaze of glory. So Benjamin risked permanent injury or death just to save the guy who's been trying to kill him. And does so in an incredibly badass manner, natch.]]
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** Even better? It was previously established that Mars had signed a treaty preventing them from deploying military force [[ExactWords beyond the orbit of Deimos.]]
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--> "We just received a navigational hazard alert for Deimos." \\
"Ok, no problem, we can handle it. Has this ship changed the orbit of an asteroid or did it do something even dumber?" \\
"It's not a '''ship''' called Deimos, it's the '''moon''' Deimos."
"Ok, no problem, we can handle it. Has this ship changed the orbit of an asteroid or did it do something even dumber?" \\
"It's not a '''ship''' called Deimos, it's the '''moon''' Deimos."
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* Benjamin's YouCanBarelyStand moment during the final confrontation with Virgil Haas.
