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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a suicidally reckless and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a suicidally suicidality reckless and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a somewhat unstable and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a somewhat unstable suicidally reckless and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a somewhat suicidal and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
At the same time the fanfiction demonstrates how a dangerously Genre Savvy person can be and subverts the "Power" principle of most Shonen Manga.
At the same time the fanfiction demonstrates how a dangerously Genre Savvy person can be and subverts the "Power" principle of most Shonen Manga.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a somewhat suicidal unstable and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
At the sametime time, the fanfiction fan fiction demonstrates how a dangerously Dangerously Genre Savvy person can be and subverts the "Power" principle of most Shonen Manga.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a somewhat unstable and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a somewhat unstable suicidal and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a normal person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a normal somewhat unstable and adrenaline-addicted person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
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An interesting situation about this story is that it thoroughly demonstrates what happens when a normal person, relatively, from our world enters One Piece. Cross barely beats most of the mooks, he's one of the weakest members of the crew and it takes quite a bit of time for normally laughable injuries to stop harming him.
At the same time the fanfiction demonstrates how a dangerously Genre Savvy person can be and subverts the "Power" principle of most Shonen Manga.
At the same time the fanfiction demonstrates how a dangerously Genre Savvy person can be and subverts the "Power" principle of most Shonen Manga.
