Reviews: Substitute School, First Semester


It was a pretty good story until the author's "version" of Kon showed up. Thankfully the author seems to realize this and limits his appearance. If you can get past that OC you'll find a well done story.

My opinion...

Through the fic, canon is adhered to well, everyone is in character, and we can see how Ichigo and Rukia's relationship might have developed without her living in his closet as a fugitive from Soul Society. The writing is good, there's no major grammmatical errors, and all in all, it's an excellent way of looking at Bleach from a different angle and a great fic for anyone who ever complained nobody showed any sense in Bleach. Heartily recommended.,%20First%20Semester