Reviews: Serendipitous Fate

Eh

It starts off great, but then goes into an angst cycle, with someone doing something wrong then getting a big speech about why that was wrong. Also, several revelation are compressed together in one chapter so that the real impact of these revelations aren't really felt as much as they should be. But if you want to read a long ML fanfic, it's not so bad.
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