Reviews: Second Bloom

Pretty good, improving with each chapter

It starts off clunky, but this fic is getting pretty damn good. Didn't really expect to like something based off Sakura, and it has O Cs, but both have turned out to be really interesting. Could be canon, almost. Update speed could be better, but the tension keeps everyone waiting even if the updates are a bit far apart. Nothing unoriginal about this, every new thing is completely unexpected. Highly recommend.

Highly recommend

Exceedingly good. A Peggy Sue fic that manages to totally avoid becoming a Gary Stu. Deals effectively with the decreasing accuracy of knowledge concerning future events as the butterfly effects spiral out of control, the limitations of adult skills and knowledge in a child's body, and the difficulties of hiding in plain view while trying to shape future events.