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this troper is somewhat less enthusiastic
YMMV on this one. It's not a terrible fic, but the writing style is a bit choppy and the pacing of the plot is too. It feels like it isn't quite polished and could do with a good beta-ing or two to get it up to being as brilliant as the fic the previous reviewer made it seem to be.
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